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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 8

FLAASH

Manyata instantly shielded her eyes

" get up sleeping beauty" said a voice

M: eh where am i?

Manyata looked around her brightened bed room. Her jiji had opened the curtain and it was sunlight that produced that flash

Oh sh*T I am home, but that dream. It was so real

Does that mean after the party she came directly home. oh this is so confusing. Oh my head is aching

But uday ehh, that idiot was loving me, how could I even think about him. I just hate yet in dream about his especially in this way. Oh I hate him more. He is spoiling even her dreams

Oh, she was wet, real wet. How was it possible, she had dated many hot and handsome guys and never even once did she feel the way her body was reacting. Even a simple dream about him made her this wet. This has to stop. He is getting on her nerves

Seeing her confused face jai asked

J: what is it manyata ?

M: nothing jiji. I just had a dream

J: who is uday?

M: what?

J: as I came to the room I heard you say uday with great passion

Manyata was embarrassed

M: its nothing jiji, I just had some sort of wild dream

J: is uday your classmate from college, your dearest enemy

M: the very same, now he is working as my pa .

J: so now any change in that relationship between you two? Any good sign

M: no jiji never. I still never miss a chance to taunt him. Now he is bonded to my company for the rest of his life, he will rot in there

J: I feel that we dream our innermost desires. Our wanting. The hidden feeling in your hearts

Jai said it purposely, so that if at all manyata falls inn love with that uday she would be put out of the palace. She woulds lose her yuvaraniship just like her mother, then only she ie jai will remain to as the heir to the throne. She should encourage this relationship for her own gain

J: manyata do you like him

M: no, how can I like him, I loathe him for heavens sake.

J; maybe you never knew what your heart said about him, deeo somewhere you must be loving him

M: no jiji never , just stop all these talks I don't want to talk about it

J: ok, but do think about what I said

Manyata was walking to her office. She saw uday sitting in his desk as usual. Did he look hot today?

Oh I hate myself . he is affected me in all ways. I will make him suffer

Uday stood up to wish her, but she made a big face and went to her cabin ignoring her

U: to himself, dude, she is real mad. One day she pour hot tea on me , then nurse me with kindness and the next day ignore him. She is indeed a unique specimen

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It was Sunday. Today was uday's day off. He was shopping in a nearby mall. As he was going through the shirt section he saw some boys were troubling a girl. The girl looked familiar. Where did he see her?

Ah yes she was unnathi, he had met her in the office. She was a sweet girl, not like manyata.. she was like sister to him

He decided to intervene in the matter.

There were 4 boys around unnathi. They were teasing her.

Boy1; come dear lets go to the beach

Boy2: or to the cinema

Boy 3: or to some place were we can enjoy and he moves forward to touch her

Unnathi closed her eyes. Tears escaped from her eyes. A hand blocked the boy from touching her

Uday: what do you think you are doing ?

Boy2: whon are you to ask?

Uday: iam her brother. And don't try to tease my sister in future. Or the bones in your body will all be broken, it it clear. Are you ok chotti? He said looking at unnathi

The boys got shocked and left the place

Udaylooked at her and asked

Ud: are you ok

Un: ya yes

Ud: can I call you chotti? I feel like you are my younger sister

Un: ok. Then can I call you dada

Ud: oh yes

Un: thanks so much from saving me from those bas***s. will you join me for a coffee? Let it be my treat

Ud: ok, chotti

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Promo

Manyata saw unnathi and uday enjoying a cup of coffee. She had come to do some shopping over there. She saw them from far

.

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She burned with jealousy as uday kissed unnathi

She wanted to kill him😡

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So the update is over

How was it ? I know it was short update

Do hit the like buttons and dont forget to comment please

Your comments motivate me a lot

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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣😆 manyata was dreaming... lol.
I knew it was 2 good 2 be true.
She wants him she knows she does, just ignoring her heart
And feigning arrogance. bechara uday has 2 put up with her
Mood swings... lol. brilliant,
so sweet of him saving unnathi. his choti. hero 2 the rescue.
promo sounds interesting. manyata jealous... lol.
and andy it was very SHORT but AWESOME.
Do continue sooo. muuaahh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
ohh so everything was a dream ...
Seems like UV and Unnati r going to share a sweet
bro sis relationship
do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update 👏

Your writing is so good 😊 I can visualize every single thing ...

Seems like JAI is going to be her own self 😆

And i can see the cute bonding coming up between Uday and Unnati 😉

Uday has started haunting Manyata's dreams 🤣

Continue soon ...

... Do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahaha...bhaiya ne to rakshabandhan nibha liya!!!! :D :::nd nyc promo...bechaari manyata...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum chapter andy. but it was a small chapter.

uday saving unnati from the boys and their convo was really nice.

cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Andy 😊.

Fabulous update. Manyata was dreaming ... shame man - luckily you told me it was a dream sequence , otherwise i would really be angry with u right now. And to top it all - IT WAS A WET-DREAM😳.
Jai is right - YOUR INNERMOST DESIRES OFTEN COME OUT IN YOUR DREAMS!!! I know that Jai is pushing Manyata towards Uday for her own selfish needs - but i support her in her efforts 100%😉.
The Uday /Unnati scene was great. The siblings are already bonding. I enjoyed that😳.
It was short ... but it was sweet. I loved it.
Can't wait for the next part. Do update soon. Even for me - NO PM😕😭😔😒!!! I'M HEART-BROKEN 💔 🥺 !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
pls do pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
Killer promo
Cmnt coming soon🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved ur update but now I'm in love with ur precap

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