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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: killerashish

Awesum story sketch andy cont soon thnxxx for the PM


thank you so much. Will update on friday
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Andy your ff seems awesome and character sketch is superb...👍🏼

Continue soon and pm me when will you update next🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ITS very interesting
pls cont soon and PM me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Story sketch was nice.👍🏼 I'm really excited to read the first chapter.😉 Great job.👏
Pls update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Uday came to his senses when he felt a terrible pain on his right side .he opened his eyes and found himself in an unfamiliar surroundings. He first felt scared, but then he was a rajwada and was thought not to be afraid.he pushed the man on top of him and he saw the iron rod kept on the fire he took the iron rod and hit his attacker .the beggar hurt his hand and stumbled down . uday then kicked him hard .the beggar was in pain .uday ran as far as he could through the jungle. The right side of his face was bruised and his eye was swollen .he felt exhausted and felt lier he would faint. He saw the jungle road and ran towards it .a jeep was coming in full speed .uday showed his hand to stop the jeep but the jeep didn't stop and then

BAMM

and all became dark

A FTER TWO MONTHS

Manyatha continued to stare out of the window. Every day she hoped uday would come back. Komal and ds where worried about her. She would always look out of the window lost in some other world. She wouldn't talk to anyone or play with her things

Maharani avantika had not recovered till now. She was still in that life less state . giriraj is looking after baby unnathi

Docter uncle felt that manyatha needed some company and told abt this to ds

Ds: do you have somebody in mind

Dr: yes, jainandini.

Ds: what! How could you even think about it?

Dr: forgive me raj mata after all she's your grand daughter and manekas daughter

Ds: I don't have any daughter nor will I accept her child. The day maneka left the house to marry that creep khanna I cut all my relations with her.now I here sheleft that ellow and is working in some company as a secretary .let her daughter and her rot in hell.

Dr: you know a lot but you forgot to find out something . she's dying .she is suffering from blood cancer.fourth stage. She has about two months to live .after that would you like to see your grandchild roaming in the streets begging for her daily food?

Some thing broke inside her .her daughter is deing and she didn't know about it .what sought o mother was she? Tears started flowing out of her eyes

Ds: dr saab I want to see her

Maneka tried to get up but her whole body was in pain she groaned and hearing this jai got up

Jai: ma are you alright

M: iam ok beta

Jai: ma why is that we live in this shabby house while uncle brig lives in a palace why are we poor ma? Why is that nani saab hates us ma?

M: my child I made a mistake of loving ur dad .so I was stripped of my yuvaraniship and my brothr was made the yuvarj. otherwise my daughter would have being the princess with all the comforts of life

J: can I be a princess ma with all nice dress ,toys, chocolates and many other things

M: no dear ur nani wont allow it

But I wish like ant other mother that you become the heir of devgarh .

You could be the heir if your cousin is shown to be unfit of the crown

J: what does that mean ma?

M: if she becomes a bad girl then maybe'.

Suddenly there was w knock on the door .jai answered it . it was nani maneka tried to get up to greet her mother

Ds: don't exert yourself maneka. I came to take you and jai to the palace

Maneka was so happy but her happiness was short lived

Ds: manyata beta is lonely and needs a playmate .so I decided to call jai .shewill be treated in a way fit for a princess, but never will she be called one as you know the reason. Let us not discuss old matters . I send the driver in half an hour .pack your things and be ready by then

Saying this ds left

Maneka sat down shocked .she thought her mom had finally forgiven her but no, she just wanted her daughter to be the playmate of her brother's child .maybe this was just the opportunity if manyatha was shown unworthy to be the heir than jai would become if and only if manyatha was unworthy

M: jai beta .you want to be a princess no so you have to follow what ma tells you carefully

And she spills poison into the 5 year old child heart

Jai smiled wickedly hearing her mother's plan

together they packed and waited for the car to pick them
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Hari lal sinha looked at the boy playing around his house that face itself was enough to bring happiness to anybody watching him .he still had the scars of that fateful day but doctors told him that it would fade and go after sometime

Boy :baba come and play with me please

Baba: no uday betar you go and play am a bit busy

Uday:(making a puppy face)ok

Harilal leaned back and remembered that day

It was the third death anniversary of his wife and son who had died in a car accident .he dearly loved them and was missing them

He had drunk nicely to forget his sadness and was on his way to duty. As a forest officer he knew all the ways of the jungle

As he drove his jeep in a drunk way he suddenly saw a boy showing his hand .before he could hit the brakes his jeep hit the boy

He remembered his own son's accident and took the bleeding boy in his hands and drove the jeep to the tribal area of the forest .the headman was a good friend of his and immediately asked the physician to attend to the boy .hari lal sat down exhausted

After a few hours the boy became conscious harilal asked about his whereabouts

The boy only remembered his name uday . he couldn't remember anything else

Harilal decided to inform the local police and informed about the boy to them

The police showed him uday photo but he could'nt make out as the boy whom he had seen had his right side of his face bruised and his eye swollen .he asked what he should do

The police jokingly said adopt him as your son

The words hit his heart. god had taken away his only son and now has given him one in exchange .from that moment he became uday's baba and uday loved him so

Sorry for the delay in update

I know this whole chapter is just history but it is needed for the story

Pls if you liked the story hit the like button and do leave your comments as it encourages me to write more

pls ignore grammatical and spelling error
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Nice update
well written
it was interesting to know of their past
Menaka spoiling Jay 's mind
hmm
is Jay younger than Manyata or older than her ??
Wonder who kidnapped UV
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushruthi

Nice update

well written
it was interesting to know of their past
Menaka spoiling Jay 's mind
hmm
is Jay younger than Manyata or older than her ??
Wonder who kidnapped UV
thanks 4 de PM


thank you dear
jai is elder to manyatha
and uday was kidnapped by a begger
it was given in the starting part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Andy honey...its awsome love the update...
Menaka is sooo...mean split poision in her daughter's mind how ridiculas...i m waiting for actuall action manveer's action...i thought J is manyata's sister... update soon and thanx forr PM.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Andy honey...its awsome love the update...
Menaka is sooo...mean split poision in her daughter's mind how ridiculas...i m waiting for actuall action manveer's action...i thought J is manyata's sister... update soon and thanx forr PM.


thank you dear
jai is manyatas cousin in this ff she is so evil she is the one who is corrupting manyata uday has a character totally different from dek
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Andy ... I had forgotten that you had an ff 😲 . Next time ; don't take so long to update😆. Anyway , coming back to the chapter - IT WAS GREAT 👍🏼. Happy that Uday got away from that horrible beggar 😡 and where-ever he has ended up - he is content there😃 . The man that has adopted him ... is taking good care of him . Meneka is a vindictive b****😡 ... can't believe how she poisoning her young daughter's mind .

Continue soon 😊 (PLEASE 😉 )

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