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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

Manyatha couldn't understand why everybody was crying. Her dad and giriraj uncle were shouting at the guards. She was not allowed to go and search uday .it was their game then why were these adults so interested in joining their game .she had to find him .she saw her mom and avantika aunty (uday's mom) sitting in a corner and crying. She went over there and asked "aunty where is uday he is hiding somewhere can I go and seek him please".

Maharani Avantika on hearing these words burst out crying and hugging manyata and aid said "my child he's not here oh my, where are you uday UDAY UDAY".

Mean while brigraj and a fuming and heartbroken giriraj were discussing with the ACP about the possible kidnap of the prince

G: I want my son back now .what where this guards doing over here .day dreaming or what. If anything happens to my son I won't leave a single one alive.

B: calm down giri .our guards and the police are sweeping through this entire city .he will be found soon .now have you sent someone over to the hotel .unnati beta and nanny is alone over there.

G: yes

Acp: sir we are doing our best the police are searching every entry and exit of this city .not a single fly will enter or leave the city without our permission.

Suddenly there was a scream .maharani avantika had lost her consciousness and she was not answering even when she was shook

The guards rushed her to the hospital it was another blow to giriraj .his wife was paralyzed her whole body was like a dead log

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The beggar ran as fast as his legs could carry him .the boy was plump and heavy. He became more tired as he continued to run .his hut by the side of the river was a perfect place to hide the boy.

He lit a fire and put his iron stick on the fire .the rod left everlasting scars when it was heated red hot. Even he had one on his face and legs .where was that piece of rock he needed break the legs of his captive. His friend (another beggar) got more money than he got from begging as he was a cripple. He could even pierce the chocolate brown eyes of this boy. but first would disfigure the boy's face .it would bring trouble if the boys face was left intact .he decided to rub his face on the ground and other beautification works should do the job .the rod was becoming red hot.he turned the boy around so that his face was facing the hard ground and just rubbed it scrapping the rosy cheeks of the boy.

Finally I had the courage to write something 😊

Thanks to everyone who liked and commented on this story

If this story is boring ignore it

Otherwise please leave your precious comments it really inspires me😛

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy ... That was a very interesting start...I can't wait to read further. Please (in future) don't call your own work "a pathetic try" . It was a good attempt and from the comments u received... ...I can tell u that it's already a success!

I just have 1 request:
That person that kidnapped Uday was planning to do some really cruel things to him,😡
...MAKE HIM CHANGE HIS MIND!!!
I don't think a crippled, blind and disfigured Uday will go down well with our forum-members.

navina udays a prince .. even i dont like a disfigured uday but what to do wait and watch
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Niceee...intresting...update...awww...my poor uday...i hope that man chnage his mind...update soon and thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetsurati

Intresting...ye utla ho gaya manyata ki jagah uday kidnep ho gaya...
Oui...maa...ab manyaat ki jagah uday halakt yedi vedi...aisa sab bolega...haila i m supe excited...update soon and do PM.

🤣 🤣 Haan nahi toh n oh teri also.😆 me also wanted to write ulta FF but thank god kisi ne toh likha.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy ... That was a very interesting start...I can't wait to read further. Please (in future) don't call your own work "a pathetic try" . It was a good attempt and from the comments u received... ...I can tell u that it's already a success!

I just have 1 request:
That person that kidnapped Uday was planning to do some really cruel things to him,😡
...MAKE HIM CHANGE HIS MIND!!!
I don't think a crippled, blind and disfigured Uday will go down well with our forum-members.

Exiciting update.😊 I agree on these red lines.😊
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hailaa uday kidnapp ho gaya achi baat ha har FF may manyata hi kidnapp hote ha great update andy lakin bohut short tha next time lamba sa update cahiay haan nai tou cont soon dear and Plz PM me if u can
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Hi everybody thanks for your comments and likes .I finally named my ff ,

LOVE TO HATE EACH OTHER

This is my story sketch

''Destiny brings two people together

Every time they meet their enemity increases. They take pleasure defeating each other . One who lived a life full of luxury and happiness the other knew the way of life was full of thorns and hard work brings success in life. One who feel money can make u master over others and the otherone who feels life is not only money it is love- love for yourself and others

The epic battle between them – the world of hate and love , lust and competition and more . how would they become one or will it ever happen

Will love come to their lives????"

Some extracts of the chapters to come

"do u know who iam ? iam a princess no one has over spoken to me like this"

"even if you r a princess or not I believe in first come first served

"you'l regret this you come and beg at my feet"

"in your dreams"

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"mam these are my qualifications"

(m turns back and sees the fellow in front of him)

"who is this ? oh finally u came to me for a job .catch my leg and beg then I'll think"

(uv keeps mum)

"you are not saying anything eh .even u and ur father would do so this is the power of money "

"I don't need your bl**dy job.even if I have to beg on the streets I don't need this job"

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"my god why do I have to marry you .its so dis gusting

"you talk as if iam forcing u to marry me.if I had any other options I would'nt have to marry u ,a characterless girl"

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"why did u kill our baby manyata u are a heartless creature ihate you
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So this my story sketch😊

Pls comment and press the like buttin😛

Waiting for ur feedback😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i i have no word how to explain on how nice this was lovely work
great job
please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

i i have no word how to explain on how nice this was lovely work

great job
please update
soon


thank you so much. I feel so happy as a great writer like u commented on this work. I ll update this friday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum story sketch andy cont soon thnxxx for the PM

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