Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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Hello guys.. Vish here!! Today our RagNa died and EMA ended for us but I do not want to leave this forum and our fabulous friends. So I have planned to write one FF on RagNa.. One of our frn Swati aka RagNa_VS requested me to write the story in which Kalpi turns goon Rags into human so this story is based on it only and dedicated to her and all RagNa/AshNa fans.

U all know tht in my other two FFs I have separated RagNa but this is hardcore RagNa story so u don't have to worry about it. I am not going to give any faces to the characters.. Use ur imagination for it... My leads will be Raghav and Rachana. As Asha will be entering soo so don't want to use Kalpana as my lead character. so my RagNa = Raghav + Rachana

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Entwined to Eternity

Prologue :

A man is sitting on the rock at the bay engulfed in tears and gazing at picture of the lady.. His subconscious mind claims that he is in love with this girl but he denies and yells, "No I can't fall in love with anyone.. I do not have heart than how can it start beating for someone else..". While he was fighting with his inner turmoil a girl appears and laughs on him.. He twirls around and gazes her.. She laughs loudly and says, "Yes you are right.. u can't love me.. How can u love a girl whom u wanted to kill... U have taken money to kill me.. Than kill me.. why are u looking at my photograph.. Kill me Raghav.. kill me". He closes his ears with his palms and yells back.. "I am not Raghav but Romi.. I hate u and this name which u gave me.. Yes I am an assassin and I have came to kill u.. Now leave from here." The girl disappears in the wind.. He realizes that it was his imagination.. He again glances the snap and keeps it back in his pocket saying "I can't kill her.. She deserves to be alive and I won't let anyone touch her."

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So guys.. How is it?? Should I write it?? My updates will be based on ur response..

Neways those who want pm than please like the next post as I do not want all my buddies to get disturb by unnecessary pms.

Regards
Vish
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Like for PM of updates!!
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Interesting prologue👍🏼
plz continue soon..
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Nice prologue
Please continue, pm me pls😉
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res
unres😆

Fabulous prologue... ab first part jaldi update kar... waiting
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yeeyyy yipppeee... heheuahaaa..🤣 I'm firsttt dat too in ur new ff dat too fr d first one haha..🥳
and yeahhh from tmrw no EMA fr us.. 😭bt u know wen dey played tum hi ho dat raghav will rush towards kalpi awww it was so goood u know.❤️.. bt these cvs r making it totally crap.. 😡
anyways dis new story of urs seems intrestnggg n it was a gud strt I knw as mentioned u won't separate our ragna.. rock on girl..👍🏼
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Originally posted by: sharanya0011

Interesting prologue👍🏼

plz continue soon..


Thank u dear.. Will try to continue asap.😊
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awesome and do pm me


Thank u... Will pm u.😊

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