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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Kalpi is madly and wholeheartedly in love ;)
I like how she was singing hangover lol
Stupid jealous Raghav hurt her for no good reason at all
Raghav biggest enemy is with himself
Good vs evil... I like that his good side came and tried to put some sense into him
But as usual the devil side took over
Now he no that the tattoo girl and Rachu is the same person;)
Hope he put his big fat ego aside and apologize to Rachu
prem and Pakhi together it's nice :)
Wonderful update
All the best for your exams. I'm sure you will rock it


Thank u Natasha... Kalpi is a lively girl and hence she wholeheartedly accepted her love.

@Bold : Bingo!! M glad m successful in showing that. Raghav's evil side n his anger is making things tough fro him.

Raghav will try to patao Rachu but not coz he will realize his mistake... he will take some time to know the truth.

Thank u for ur best wishes... I just hope it works n some miracle happens as I seriously had too less time to prepare.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Beautiful update😊


Thank u.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164


hayla me to bhul gayi mene yaha resh dala he 😆
wl unres today darling


Miss Bhulakkar.😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

resh 😳
unresh
wow again eye convo is amazing.
hayla romi ka gussa, jealously cz of premna superb yar. Bt he hurt rach in his anger dats nt gud. Bt i like 1 thing atleast rach undstnd he angry n touch him to knw wats wrong wid him. Finaly he knw dat tatoo girl is rach itself. Rach cover herself n ask him dat que bt mentality change, just love her atititude.
Romi's talk with his reflaction is amazing. Just love. Showing him truth to wich he is running.
Rach wearing plastic smile, doesnt think abt her dress cz she deeply hurt cz of romi.
Bt lvly thing granny undrstood evrything n she is going to talk to romi abt it, wow wat an amazing bonding.
Pakhi meet to prem, n he help her, gv lift to her as well. M scaring, vishu r u planing to make pair of dem😲
if yes i wl faint.😆 unko pair dekhne ki mentality ni bnayi like rakhi.🤣
superb update.


Finally the much awaited unres.

M happy u liked it... n dekh mne ab tk koi crime scene ya twist add ni kia.😆

As u know I hate the doormat girls and can't take it when girls become weak for their love so my Rachu is not going to do that... She has the attitude but won't show it to him coz she needs him for his drug racket case.

Yep.. Granny will meet him but will it lead to some solution or more problems??

Then start visualizing them together... PreKhi is a pair for sure,😊

Thank u darling. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover



Finally the much awaited unres.

M happy u liked it... n dekh mne ab tk koi crime scene ya twist add ni kia.😆

As u know I hate the doormat girls and can't take it when girls become weak for their love so my Rachu is not going to do that... She has the attitude but won't show it to him coz she needs him for his drug racket case.

Yep.. Granny will meet him but will it lead to some solution or more problems??

Then start visualizing them together... PreKhi is a pair for sure,😊

Thank u darling. 🤗


omg u r waiting 4my cment m overwhelmed dear. Bt pakka promis frm nxt tym m nt going to make my vishu so much waiting. I wl cment asap aftr pm.😳
U knw m get attached to character very sn dats y i take ltl much tym to read update n cment.😉
Oh i need sm heavy dose to digest prekhi😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
NO PMs... will send it in night.

Hello guys... sorry for the long delay. But now onwards u will get frequent updates. No proof reading today as well. i am really not satisfied with what I have wrote but instead of keep u waiting i am updating whatever i have written. Guys.. please tell ur honest opinions as i am highly disappointed with this update. I felt the last part of Rachu n Romi is clumsy and hence is stopped in the mid.

"Undoubtedly the crime in the city has increased to such a level that not only the officials but the public need to take some measures... n the reason for increase in this crime is the mentality of our society.. The male dominant society still thinks that women are to be judged by their clothes... n no one can explain them that what we wear is our clothes and not our character... The length of the clothes doesn't give us the character certificate... The way we behave our friends depends on our comfort level and not their gender... if we hug someone on the road than we are not characterless... If we have spent a night outside our house with male friend doesn't ensure that we are ready to sleep with that guy. I do not understand why girl always has to prove it's purity.. we girls are human and not some gold who can come with any purity mark.. It's the time that we girl take a step and prove that we are human and we have self respect... This is 21st century and now no sita will give agni pariksha... This man are not Ram than why do they expect us to be like Sita?? It's time to show the real women empowerment." Rachu said while remembering the incident took place in the morning.. Her eyes were moist by Romi's accusations... The noise of claps brings her back to the reality. She realizes she is sitting in the conference hall and they are discussing about the next edition of the magazine. Being a crime reporter Rachu too was involved in the discussion but she deviated from the real topic...

"I think Rachana has a valid point... n we can write an article on it... Though it's not related to crime but it can be surely used below the article of that politician who said that women invite Rape by wearing revealing clothes." Said one of the member present in the conference hall.

The discussion went on and on but Rachu was visibly distracted.. She somehow managed to keep her calm as the whole day in the office was messed up.. She has not even completed one of her task properly. She was supposed to submit the report on drug racket on which she was working but she failed to extract much useful information in past few days.

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The clock strokes 7 and she thanks god for ending the most messed up day of office. She takes out her car keys and leaves the place... She switches on music to divert her mind... The music plays..

Aankhen bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan Aankhen bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan Bin bole kardeti hai hsalat yeh pal mein bayan Aankhen bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan Bin bole kardeti hai halat yeh pal mein bayan Aankhen bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan Khamoshi bhi to pyaar hai Rakhti bahut yeh asar hai Kab ishq hojaye yaha dil ko kahan yeh khabar hai Do din bhi yeh silsile chup sake hai kahan Aankhen bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan Aankhen bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan

She remembers Romi and the silent conversation which takes place between them.. how she read the pain in his eyes and how she experienced the loneliness in he is facin.She bangs her fist on the steering wheel... switches off the music and stops the car ..

"Concentrate Rachu... he is not the type of man whom u should think about... It was just an attraction n it's over...Move on!!" She tried explaining herself but all her efforts were going into vein. Her ego and self respect was hurt but deep inside she wants to go and see Romi once.. wants to slap him for what he did and hug him for comforting herself.. Somewhere she knew that the person who hurt her so badly is the only one who can soothe the pain.

"beep beep" a message popped on her mobile.. It's the reminder message of Prem that she needs to be at his home for the dinner. She starts driving again fully concentrating on road and trying not to think about Romi.. In no time her car was outside Prem's bunglow.

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Romi was pacing restlessly in his room... The events of the day were too hard for him to sit peacefully. The way he hurt Rachana was hurting him more than her. Numerous time he tried to justify his action but all the time the guilt overpowered him. Once again he tries his luck to justify himself.. "She betrayed me... She had the boyfriend. N what I said to her was right... Though I should not have commented on her clothes but she should have told me about her boyfriend in first meet."

The frustration on Romi's face was visible... Somewhere he knew that he was wrong but his fat ego was not letting him accept it. Someone knocks on the door.. He lifts his face and looks at Monu who was standing there smiling. He gestures Monu to come inside.

Monu offers him the chocolate he was eating.. Romi takes a bite from it and thanks Monu.. for the first time he was not angry on kid and do not want to shoo him away.

"Do u have some exam??" Monu asked innocently.

"No.. why??" Romi replied in confusion.

"I make such faces when I have exams and u know Rachu didi gives me the chocolate to eat.. It brings smile on my face but y don't u smile ever??"

Romi remembers Rani and the reason his smile was lost when he was the kid.

"Will u be able to smile after losing ur precious thing?? I lost something which was so precious to me that I forgot smiling." Romi replied to Monu's question for the first time in so many days.

"Precious thing.. u mean as precious as my parents were?? U know I loved them so much but I still smile as Rachu did told me that my parents are with God... God needs them more than I do. I asked him why he dint took me with them but Rachu di told that God left me here so that I can bring smile on the face of people who comes in the rehab. But I failed to bring smile on ur face... Will God take away me with him now??" Monu said smilingly.. Romi hugs monu on hearing it. He tries to give a fake smile to make him happy and says, "No.. God will never take u with him."

"Please... leave it!! U don't know even how to smile... Anyways why r u sad?? U can share ur problem with me. U know m a big boy now and can solve everyone's problem." Monu said proudly while looking at his fake smile.

"I have hurt someone... I feel the mistake was hers but I was too harsh on her and I do not know what to do."

"Simple... apologize. Rachu di says we should always apologize after making mistake. And bring a gift for ur friend."

Romi nods. Monu gives him a quick peck on the cheek and runs from there. Romi gets surprise on this behavior but decides to apologize Rachu as Monu is a kid and his advice can't be wrong.

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Rachu is having dinner with Granny and Prem.. She was quite than usual and now Granny is really worried for her. Prem gives Granny an assuring look. After dinner Rachu decides to leave.. Prem tells her to meet on video chat as he needs to share lots of things to her... Rachu tries to deny but reluctantly agrees on Prem's pressure. She grabs her car keys and leaves the place without saying proper good bye to Granny n Prem... She dint even hugged Bruno today.

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Romi who was googling the ways to pacify a girl was getting frustrated.. He reads out few points and note them in a paper. When he hears another knock on the door.. Frustrated he opens the door and looks at one of his side kick standing on the door in dress of rehab staff.. He is shocked to see him and asks the reason for his coming... The boy hands him a letter, tells him to read and runs away from there before anyone can notice him. Romi reads the letter which was by John. John has reminded him that his 10 days of rehab are about to over and he should complete his work as soon as possible. Romi remembers the mission he was here for and decides to be friend with Rachana at any cost as he can't disappoint his baba.

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Rachu reaches her home... With heavy heart she opens the door and throws her bag on the bed... She takes out her baby pink night suit and ties her hair upside... She takes out her diary and starts jotting down her feelings in the form of poem.

Is dil ko kese samjhaye q hai hum unse khafa

Jo na sochi thi kabhi ki hai unhone aisi khata

Hum toh khush the unke deedar k liye

Par dil tod unhone na jaane kis bat ki di hai hume saza

Maaf unhe shayad ab hum kar na payege

Par unse due rehna hai ye dil ko kese samjhayege

Frustrated she throws her diary... she doesn't want to complete her poem as well. She remembers how Prem wanted to chat with her n opens the laptop. She straightly asks him what he wants to share about..

"I met Pakhi today... u know she is a sweetheart. In the short drive we shared to his home.. we became good friends. We even exchanged our number s."

"Hmm... that's great." Rachu tried to sound excited but failed.

"Spill the bean". Prem asked.

"What bean?? What r u talking about??"

" Do u want me to explain... u know what I am talking about.. So tell me why ur Romi hurt u. u r sounding low after u returned from Rehab n I know it's coz of him only. So just temme. I know u do not share ur probs with anyone but Rachu this time Granny is worried as well so u need t tell me the reasons."

Rach nods her head and tells him the complete incident in detail... She tells him how badly she is hurt coz of him and don't want to see his face again. Prem laughs loudly on seeing it. Rach looks at him in shock.

"I am sad and u r laughing... what's wrong with u??"

"Rachu... do u remember Juhi??"

"Off course I do... She was my best friend in 3rd standard n I still remember how she fell on the stairs coz of u... Ohh God!! Poor girl was not able to play garba with me. Her leg got fractured and she was not able to get up from her bed for 3 months. That was really a bad accident."

"And what if I confess that it wasn't an accident??"

"What do u mean?? U did that deliberately?? Common.. u too were in 5th standard only."

"Yep.. I did it coz I was jealous of her. That day on roof she was boasting that she is ur garba partner and ur best friend as well... I was the kid and insecure that she might take my place in ur life... I was ur best friend and we used to play garba together but u selected her as ur partner which hurt me very much and I pushed her from the stairs. That time I dint knew that it will hurt her so much. N poor girl thought it as an accident."

"Ohh God Prem!! R u serious?? How could u think that someone else can take ur place in my life??"

"I was insecure Rachu... Ur closeness with Juhi was threatening me. I dint understood what was right and wrong and in fit of anger I just pushed her. Today I know that no one can take my place in ur life coz we have developed a strong bond over a period of time.. But that time our friendship was new and the bond wasn't strong. I was jealous... just the way Romi is."

Astonishingly Rachu looks at Prem.. He gives her a knowing smile and tells her to think on this. Prem's words were affecting her... He was talking sense and she recalls how he accidently blurted that he saw her hugging Prem. With confused expression she disconnects the call saying she needs to sleep. But sleep was away from her eyes...She is still thinking about Prem's word and Romi's jealousy. A smile appeared on her face on realizing that Romi was jealous and that means he has some feelings for him. She wears her baby pink night suit and switches on the tv... After a hour or two She feels hungry as she has not eaten properly at Prem's house due to her anger. She takes out the big bowl of icecream from the freeze and start eating it with the smile... When she hears a sound from the drawing room... It was the sound of breaking of vase.. She thinks it's the thief and picks the baseball bat which Granny have kept beside her bed.. She sees a silhouette and slowly reaches towards it.. was about to hit the man when he turns around and they fall on the sofa... Rachana screams in fear when he keeps his palm on her mouth... she bites him.. "Ouch" he said in pain.. Rachana recognizes the voice as Romi.. She pushes him away and switches on the light.

"What r u doing here??" screamed Rachana.

He holds his ears and apologizes for his mistake. Rachana fakes anger and turns her face... He offers the flower which he has bought for her... She takes them and keeps on the side.. trying to hide her smile and keeping the stern face.. he offers her the chocolate.. She takes them and tells him that she is still angry. Finally he gifts her a sheet which was rolled and tied... She opens it and surprised on seeing her portrait..

"It's beautiful. U sketched it??" She asked.

Romi nods in yes and remembers how he read that girls like the efforts of boys and how he made her portrait. Rachu hugs him in excitement... Romi doesn't know how to react.. Her touch was igniting the spark inside him.. Finally he lifts his hand to hug her back but she leaves him by then.

"So how u managed to come out of Rehab... m sure no one knows about it as it is against the rule."

"When there is a will there is a way. I think I should go now... before anyone notices my absence."

"Stay for some more time...Being the volunteer I can take u outside."

Romi nods in affirmative.. He too dint want to go.

"What a girl she is.. she has a bf still she doesn't mind stopping a stranger in her house. " Romi thought.

"Why the hell I stopped him?? He is a stranger and it can be dangerous for me than y do I trust him so much??" Rachu thought.


P.S. : Sorry for the typos/Grammatical/Spelling mistakes. Can't read it again else i will delete it. Once again please give ur honest feedbacks.

Regards
Vish

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow!!!! Romi actually broke into her house how romantic is that??? Flowers choclates sketch!!! Rachu ki toh chaandi hai bhai!!!!
Awesome update Vish as always Loved it loved it loved it!!

Loved how Prem helped her understand Romi's POV!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome n love the jealous rag
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Posted: 10 years ago
no resh today direct cment as promiss😳
superb update vishu🤗
at first wen i start reading m like wats wrong with vishu😲 y she is gving kamala type bhashan😆 bt later undstnd n i love it. Its true no persn is ram in dis century for whom sita wl gv any agni pariksha.
my rachu is too hurt cz of romi dat she evn didnt hd her dnr properly n evn didnt bid gud bye to prem, granny n bruno.😭
monu, a child tought so much to romi. No matr its fake bt atleast romi try to smile. Evn he hug monu n start taking effort as per monu's advice to apologies. Superb convo😊
premna convo on video cal is superb. Prem undstnd rachu very well widout teling anything he recognise y she is upset. Ha ha prem also got jeolous thinking dat rachu is going away frm him, n he jeolous with grl only😆
i love d way he make rachu undstnd y romi behave like dis and romi is jealous.
Aftr knwing reasn of romi's behaviour rach smile finaly n best thing is she feel hungry as in upset mood she doesnt eat properly.😃
wow romi came to rachu's home to apologies her. Evn he say sory by holding his ear, late gave her chocolate, rose n portrait so sweet. Last rachu hug him n stop him is so touching. Both r thinking in same way, thats start of love😳
fabulous update.

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