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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragnabw

Wonderful update soon


Thank u dear.. Will try to update today.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Thank you for such a sweet reply. Glad to know I'm encouraging you somehow. Feeling proud though I know your ff s are great because you are an amazing writer. Thank god you didn't put Pookhi in this . Fed up of her name being dragged everywhere. No suspense, great!!!! Did you think I will not notice that you didn't answer my question about they being childhood friends? Chalo, koi baat nahi. Sach toh ek din samne aayega. 😉



u r an amazing reader re!! Thanks for the compliments.. Sorry dear but I am going to introduce Pakhi here as well but not as Romi's partner. She will be in other role.

No dear that was purely unintentional.. I told u m goof up queen n has weak memory so I forgot to reply that question.. Romi-Rani are best frnz n Rani is Rach only. N yeh sach next update m hi saamne aa jyga.. As I said no suspense.. Bas won't let them meet soon.

N one more thing I skipped... Rachana never wrote anything clearly in the diary but as poems and our heartless Romi will take lots of time to decipher.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover



u r an amazing reader re!! Thanks for the compliments.. Sorry dear but I am going to introduce Pakhi here as well but not as Romi's partner. She will be in other role.

No dear that was purely unintentional.. I told u m goof up queen n has weak memory so I forgot to reply that question.. Romi-Rani are best frnz n Rani is Rach only. N yeh sach next update m hi saamne aa jyga.. As I said no suspense.. Bas won't let them meet soon.

N one more thing I skipped... Rachana never wrote anything clearly in the diary but as poems and our heartless Romi will take lots of time to decipher.😆

😛 🤗 ok, mein jaanti thi ki tu itni buri nahi hoon! Won't let ragna meet soon. Why dear? Tere andar Pakhi ki aatma aayi kya? Villain banke kyu khadi hai unke beech ... ... Pakhi ko laana zaroori hai kya? Chalo, teek hai, teri marzi.😉
Edited by ragna_luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

😛 ok, mein jaanti thi ki tu itni buri nahi hoon! Won't let ragna meet soon. Why dear? Tere andar Pakhi ki aatma aayi kya? Villain banke kyu khadi hai unke beech ...


Yep... Mai Pakhi ki atma hu... Raghav sirf mera hai.. sif mera!! Kalpi main tujhe usey chhinane ni dugi!! Lolz!! Unfortunately I can act a bit so I can't be Pakhi. What I meant is RagNa will meet soon but Romi and Rani won't meet soon.. Pata ni m b kya kya likhti hu..😆 I was just saying that they won't recognize each other as childhood friends but will meet as stranger. Hope es bar sahi likha ho.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Yep... Mai Pakhi ki atma hu... Raghav sirf mera hai.. sif mera!! Kalpi main tujhe usey chhinane ni dugi!! Lolz!! Unfortunately I can act a bit so I can't be Pakhi. What I meant is RagNa will meet soon but Romi and Rani won't meet soon.. Pata ni m b kya kya likhti hu..😆 I was just saying that they won't recognize each other as childhood friends but will meet as stranger. Hope es bar sahi likha ho.😆



N yes Pakhi ko lana jaruri h!! I want to bajaofy her band here😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover



N yes Pakhi ko lana jaruri h!! I want to bajaofy her band here😆

Pakhi ki band bajne wali hai! Awesome, BRING IT ON! I have always wanted to do it. Loved the line- I can act, so can't be Pakhi. 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Pakhi ki band bajne wali hai! Awesome, BRING IT ON! I have always wanted to do it. Loved the line- I can act, so can't be Pakhi. 🤣


Thnk u Thank u... But that's the fact.. Pakhi can't act. Neways sorry for late rply.. was busy in update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys... Updating chapter 3.

I know u guys demanded longer update but will try to give double.. Actually I was quite emotional while writing it.. i.e. writing about Bruno n Kalpi.. I was missing my dog "Dela". It died last year. 😭 Neways will try to give longer update next time

The first ray of rising sun caresses her face as if her mother is telling her to get up. She opens her eyes with a smile and stretches her hands to remove the laziness of the body.. First thing that came to her mind is her daily alarm Bruno who cherishes her soft cheeks with his tongue.. Worriedly she gets up and runs towards the hall to check Bruno.. Her granny who watches her going out screams.. "What happened why r u so worried..". While running she replies, "Where is Bruno.. he dint come to my room in the morning". Her voice fades as the distance increases.. Her home is big enough for 3 people.. Rachana, her granny and her sweetest buddy Bruno.. The word like "dog" and "it" is strictly prohibited in her home... When it come to Bruno she can forget her sweetness and manners. She sees Bruno sleeping peacefully in the hall and wonders whats wrong with her.. Till than Granny has arrived and tells her not to worry.. Bruno is getting older and will be sick and she will take him to the doctor. Rach nods in yes and caresses Bruno's head lovingly.. Bruno opens his eyes but sue to pills not able to get up.. He slowly keeps pushes Rach's palm with his feet and keeps his head on it.. Rach sits there for another 10 minutes.. Bruno sleeps again. Rach's granny shouts at her.. "Don't u want to go office today.. u and ur Bruno.. I will give this Bruno is ur dowry!! Than I will see whom u love more... ur hubby or Bruno..". Rach gets up and keeps her arms around Granny's shoulder and sways while saying.. "I will always love Bruno most and not only Bruno but I will take u as well.. Than u and my hubby can enjoy and I will play with my Bruno." Granny lifts her hand to slap her but instead keeps it lovingly on her cheeks and make her sit beside her.


G : "Ur massi(mother's sis) called yesterday.. She wants u to meet some boy.. She was telling that the guy is from a rich family.. I think u should meet him."


R : "Uffo Granny not again.. how many times I have to tell u that I do not want to meet any boy.. Plz tell massi not to call here again and again."


G : "Right... Why will u listen to me.. I am not ur real Granny but ur Nanny. Why will u listen to me.. Ur father appointed me to take ur care.. I do not have any right on u.."


R (angrily) : "Stop it Granny... Don't u dare to say that u r my nanny.. u know I love u... N by going to ur logic.. I am not this house's daughter as well as I am adopted. Even this name Rachana doesn't belong to me.. Dad gave it to me... "


G : "No... I dint mean that... I just want u to meet that guy once.."


R : "Granny.. if u want than I will meet him but u know I do not want to get involve in this arrange marriage.. I want to have love marriage.. First I want to feel the beautiful feeling called love.. "


G : "Do u like some guy..."


R : "Not yet but I do not know why I feel someone somewhere is waiting for me.. He will come one day and tell me that I am his life.. He won't look at my face but will look through me.. directly into my eyes... And he will take away pain of my heart.. and will fill it with love.."


Granny smile on this.. She has always seen a hope in Rach's eyes.. She silently pray to God to not give any pain to Rach as she has already seen lot of pain..


G : "Ohh my princess... Come back to the earth and get ready.. U told me u have to go early today.."


R : "Yaa... I simply forgot.. Let me run now..."


Rach goes to her room.. She looks at her watch.. It's already 7 am.. She curses Granny and Bruno for taking all her time and now she has to rush for everything.. She goes through her closet and gets confused about the dress.. She calls her Granny to help her... Granny who is in kitchen hears her screaming but switches on the blender to pretend as if she is not able to hear her..


G(Grins, in her mind) : "Sorry Rach beta but I can't help u in selecting outfits.. I am ready to pick and fold the clothes u will throw on floor but can't hear ur tantrums about the dresses.."


R(fumes, in her mind) : "I know u very well Granny... u r doing it intentionally.. U know I choosy I am about my clothes so avoiding me... No issues.. My day will come soon..."


She finally picks out a pink short shirt with cream trousers and feel this will be the best for today's job.. She turns around to go to washroom and falls on the pile of clothes she threw on the floor.. She slaps herself slowly and says..


R(to herself) : "Not again Rach.. Granny will kill u today.. Why u have to be so clumsy.. Now pick it up before Granny sees it.. "


She picks all the clothes and binds it in the bedsheet and keeps it inside the closet. She praises herself saying awesome.. Finally she get ready in the outfit she selected after lots of trouble and looks at her hair style.. She finds her hair frizzy and applies some hair shines and ties it in a pony.. Finally she takes out her glasses and gets ready in a perfect office girl look... Granny by now has prepared her breakfast.. She enters with sandwich and orange juice in her hand and wonders about the bedsheet missing from the mattress... She bends down to pick the clothes and gets shocked on not finding any.. She looks at Rach who was giving her a mischievous smile.. Granny to smiles silently and gives Rach her breakfast.. She sits on the bed and take a big bite of sandwich.. Granny tells her to eat slowly but she says she is running late.. Finally she takes a sip and while keeping it back it falls on the bed.. She takes out her tongue and holds her ears in front of Granny.. Granny smiles and tells her to finish her breakfast.


Rach(while eating) : "Arey Granny...I am not finding my diary.. So please search it for me.. N I have to cover an important interview today so I won't be able to meet Adi so will u plz tell him that I will come late today.. N tell him not to get angry on me and I love him very much.


While saying so.. She finishes her breakfast, kisses Granny and leaves the room..


Granny(mumbles) : "When this girl will understand that Aditya is in coma and he can't hear us.. He won't get angry ever.. When will she accept this fact that her brother is in this position from last 2 years"


Rachana who was saying Goodbye to Bruno has heard it but pretends as if she dint.. She smiles and leaves. Granny starts searching Rach's diary and opens her closet.. The bundle of clothes falls on her.. Granny fumes on Rach but than smiles in a while saying this vivacious Rachana is only reason for her living.


Romi who was waiting for Rach to go out goes to the gatekeeper and asks for Rachana Yadav.. Gatekeeper tells that She has left a minute ago.. Romi gives the diary to gatekeeper saying he found it on the road and thought to return it on reading her address on the first page. Gatekeepers take it and says that he will give it.. Romi leaves after thanking him unaware of the fact that he has by mistake kept his and Rani's photo in the diary.


While going back he accidentally bumps into a man who angrily pushes him..


Man : Don't u have eyes.. U moron.. Is this road ur dad's??

Romi : Look.. mind ur tongue else it won't be better for u..


Man starts abusing him and his parents.. Romi who can't take it more starts beating him.. He has beat that man black and blue.. Sammy who was passing by looks at fight and stops to enjoy it but than realizes it's Romi who is beating the man and goes to stop him. Sammy is well aware of Romi's anger issues and fears that he will kill the man.. Suddenly Romi feels something around.. Something which cools him down.. He stops beating the man and turns around to search something.. Sammy wonders what happened to Romi suddenly but stays mum as something has calmed down the Romi's beast. Romi sees the girl wearing pink shirt sitting in auto.. Her shirt moves up and he sees that tattoo again.. He runs towards her but she leaves in the auto. Romi wonders whats happening with him. A heartless person like him is not attracted to one girl but two. He scolds himself for behaving like this and tells him to concentrate on his mission. Sammy too comes near him and asks what happened but Romi avoids the question and tells him that he has some work and he will meet them in 2 hours. Sammy nods in yes.

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Those who think why Romi cooled down on feeling Rach around.. I just want to show their soul connection.

P.S. : Sorry for all the grammatical/spelling mistakes and typos. But I tries to reduce them.
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Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww u making me emotional now 😭
Kalpi and Bruno love reminds me of my Rexy who die a few years ago 😭

I love the way Rachana was describing love and what she want to feel
Rachu and Raghav are mend to be. Oh my he left his and her pic in her diary 😛
The beast Romi calm down after feeling rachu present was amazing
Beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it... Granny and Rach's convo was cute... So is Racha and bruno's bond... Aww Raghav can feel her presence.. So romantic😳
Continue soon..
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago

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