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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Very nice chap

It's quite realistic. As many youngsters are victim of drug and I like the way u put this issue into the ff ... Really like it
Kalpi is such a good sister
And I have a feeling that adi's drug story will be involved with john's traffic isn't it ?
Can't wait for RagNa I mean Kalpi and romi's first meeting
Let me tell u I really love this ff one of my favourite
Plz update the next part soon plz


Thank u dear.. This drug idea came from episodes of crime patrol and gumraah. It hurts to see youngsters spoiling their life coz of drugs.

Yep.. Adi got drugs from her school.. Rachana opt to become a reporter just to get info about this drug racket. That's why john is behind her.


Thanks a lot dear for liking it, it means a lot to me. I will try to update soon. And RagNa will surely meet in next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Rachana FB was very emotional
I hope Adi recover soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update..
emotional one...
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Wonderful update
Rachana FB was very emotional
I hope Adi recover soon


Thank u dear.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wonderful update..

emotional one...
plz continue soon..


Thank u.. sorry for delay... updating now.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys... Sorry for delay.. u may dislike this update as I am not satisfied with it... I thought to give one qualitative update but than it was taking much time so updating the one I wrote.. Sorry there is no time to proof read it so plz ignore the mistakes. I am extremely sorry guys for not getting time to update frequently but I was out on this long weekend and than gym and badminton took the time I dedicated to the FFs. i will try to update soon now. Sorry not promising.

Hope u like it.. Once again sorry for the mistakes.

Rachana enters the compound while watching her watch and praying to god to keep granny cool today as she is again late... A cute kitten catches her attraction who is playing in the garden.. She runs to her and picks it in the arm..Kitten tries to move out of her hold...It's soft furry skin giggle Rach and she finds it difficult to hold her more.. Kitty grabs the opportunity and jumps.. Rachana runs after her like a kid.. They play for few more minutes.. when Rach realizes that she should go to the home.. She enters the home and sees Granny sitting grumpy on the sofa.. her son Ganesh's photo kept on the table.. Rach remembers the day when Nanny turned into Granny. Ganesh was driver at Rach's house and died with her parents in the same accident. Granny was supposed to go at her home and sulk for her son but she came back after the rituals just to support Rach and Adi.. Where all their relatives were eying her money, Granny was just there to just to stand besides them so that they don't feel alone. Rach comes back to the present and sees herself from top to toe... dirty footwear, muddy clothes, disheveled hair and sweaty face... "Rach beta.. u r gone now... Granny is not going to leave u today." She thought while wiping her hands with shirt. Bruno comes running to her but she shushes him with his finger... Like a good boy Bruno sits there without making noise.She tries to pass Granny slowly so that she can clean herself and than cheers up Granny.. Slowly she moves one step.. making sure that Granny doesn't hear any footstep..


"Don't u think u r not as smart as u think u r.." Granny said while turning back... She gets shocked on seeing her situation.. Rach lowers her eyes and holds her ears while mumbling sorry. Bruno stands by her side lowering his head too. "Louder" Granny demanded. Rach looks into her eyes and said.. "Sorry my cutie pie.. u know there was a cute kitten in the garden and I played with her... It was so cute... I have even kept her name as kitty... Do u want to meet her..". While speaking she sits on the sofa and Granny yells "Get up right now.. u r spoiling sofa sheets... Just go and change..". Rach tends to leave but than come back and hugs Granny spoiling her saree... She kisses Granny and before Granny can scold her runs back to her room... Granny smiles and says, "There is something in this girl.. Her presence cheers up the atmosphere.. The man who will marry her will be the luckiest person as she will never let any sorrow come to him."


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Romi who has returned to his home wonders why Rach dint come Rehab today and where she had gone after office as she reached home late... He picks upt the bundle of pages and looks at it.. He remembers how he took Photostat of Rach's diary before returning it. He himself is confused why he did this.. "Just to understand her more so that I do not fail in my mission", He justified his action.. He keeps it back on the table and inserts her palm in the pocket to take out the photo which he always carry with him... He panics on not finding it in the pocket... Restlessly he searches all the pockets but dint find it.. he searches on the road and looks at all places where he has gone but doesn't find it.. Helplessly he returns home and sits on bed with sad face.


"This is sign to tell u that forget her.. U won't find her again.."

"No.. I will.. "

"How.. u lost the last memory u had with her.."

"I do not know.. But it's my belief that someday I will find her.."


His mind argued with his heart.. The heart which was lost the day he lost his only friend but it still sometimes beat for the same friend. He remembers the day when Rani was taken away by her foster parents.. He too climbed the door and ran after their car but his little steps were not fast enough to catch the speed of car.. Soon she goes out his sight.. That day he decided not to return back to the place who snatched away his only friend from him.. He roamed on streets for 2 days before meeting Sammy.


The mobile beep breaks his thoughts, "Tomorrow I will come to pick u.. Be ready on time." Maya messaged. He throws cell in anger and sleeps on the bed.. No need to say that his mind was only on the photo and Rani.


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Rach has changed into cream night suit with some cartoon print on it and now she is playing with Bruno in the bed.. "How r u my sweetheart.. Granny took u to the hospital.. Why were u so sleepy in the morning.. Ohh my honey.." She was having her sweet conversation with Bruno when Granny calls her for the dinner. They have so many servants to work for them but Granny makes sure that food is prepared under her observation as Rach likes the secret ingredient Granny uses. Rach tried to sneak in kitchen to know about the secret ingredient but never found something unique.. Granny always laugher on her antics as the secret ingredient is her love and nothing else. They had dinner together and everyone goes to sleep at their usual places... Rach goes to her room and finds her diary on the table.. She happily picks it and keeps it close to her heart.. She flips the pages when one photo drop on the floor.. She picks it up and sees two kids.. She recognizes herself but fails to recognize the boy in the photo.. "He must be someone special for me.. Look how lovingly m holding his hand... but who is he... If I know him than why I dnt remember him.. But if I dnt remember him than y this tears are falling from my eyes..". She wipes the tears and runs to Granny asking her about the photo. "Ohh this guy.. I dnt know his name but he was ur best friend in orphanage... The day u left him.. he cried like crazy. U too cried for him. Ur dad went to the hostel next day just to make u meet him but he had ran away from there... He was really crazy for u". Rach looks at the photo for a long time when Granny interrupts her asking, "Where did u find this photo". "In my diary, Thank u Granny for searching it for me.. u know how dearer it is to me, neways u sleep.. " She replied while leaving the room. Granny wanted to say that she dint search this diary but someone gave it to the watchman but Rach dint give her chance to speak..


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Romi is in pain coz of losing the photograph while Rach is happy to find an old memory of her life.. Romi cries in his heart for her Rani..his childhood friend while Rach is trying hard to remember the name of her old friend... She doesn't know till when she was looking at the photo as if it has spell-bounded her. Romi closes his eyes and tries to sleep thinking he will find some alternative way to search Rani. Rach finally keeps the photo in her closet thinking tomorrow she will go to orphanage to find about him. She takes out her diary and write down


"Ateet mein kuch apana sa laga

Jo chhut gaya piche wo sapana sa laga

Na jane kyu hui meri dil me halchal

Ek bhula hua rishta aj yaad aane laga

Nahi yad mujhe kon hai wo..

Nahi janti hu kya naam hai uska

Par un ankho mein likha naam mujhe apna sa laga

Dhadakon ne meri kaha mujhse

shayad ye dost koi purana hai

jo shayad ab hai ajnabee anjana

par fir b wo mujhe jana pehchana sa laga."


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Next Day


Rach has left early to reach rehab today as she dint get time yesterday. As always she took time to search her dress and Granny turned deaf ear to her. After usual banter of the day with Granny and Bruno. She reached hospital.. Talked with Adi and left for the Rahab. Romi's man has already informed him about Rach reaching Rehab in a while.. he with Maya reaches there. Maya informs Romi that there is slight change in plan as John informed her and he just has to follow her instructions.. Romi nods disinterestedly as he is still lost in the photo and Rani. Maya does all the formalities and admits Romi there. Romi looks around the room and finds it big enough for him. He wonders what's the use of such room when we can live in smaller room but Maya shuts him up saying john is paying for this room and not him. He gives a weird expression to her and stands at window looking outside.. He sees Rach entering the premise wearing a cotton kurta and jeans.. She greets an old watchman and keeps chatting with him for a while... Rags notices the smile on her face and keeps staring at her unaware of his surroundings.. Maya speaking something to her but he is lost in Rach. In a while he forgets everything about the photo and Rani and feels as if someone caressing his heart and taking away all the pain.. Mere a look at her has eased his pain... Rach talks to an old lady who stands in front of her and blocks Romi's view... Unknowingly with his hands, he gestures the lady to move..Maya looks at him shockingly and follows his gaze.. By the time she looked down Kalpi has already entered the building.. She looks outside the premise where two people were fighting and says, "I thought u are lost in some girl but my goodness... how can I expect a person to think beyond fights." Romi just looks at her calmly and doesn't respond. "What happened to u.. u r not giving any rude reply to me..".

"I do not know why but all of a sudden I am in a good mood and it's better to see Rachana than replying u" He said in his mind. "I am just trying to be a gentleman so that I can please that girl... Whatever her name is." he says Loudly. Maya fumes on him, "u can't remember one name.. It's Rachana, I don't know why John uncle chose u for this work..". Romi dint reply just smirk thinking, "I wish I could forget her name but I too don't know why she is not going out of my mind."

Maya gets a call and she informs Romi that Rachana has entered the premise and she is going to execute their plan.

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Romi sits on the bed and pciks the pen and paper kept on the side table.. He closes his eyes and remembers the night he saw the girl with angel tattoo.. He again remembers how he saw that tattoo again and it calmed him down.. He starts drawing on the paper... On completing it he realizes that he has drawn the exactly same tattoo on the paper... He sees Maya coming towards the room with doctor and hides the paper. He doesn't want anyone to know that he can draw and paint.. he has never learned it but he is good at it.. May be one of his parent was painter and he inherited the art.


Maya sees Rachana passing by and starts talking to the doctor, "Sir.. This is Romi.. A drug addict. We want u to help her in solving his case as he may inform us about the drug racket... It is very important for us to know the people involved in it. So plz doctor take care of him. " Rach who heard everything thinks that she should meet this man as he can help her in her reports. "No Rach it can be dangerous..." said her mind but she replied "i have promised Adi that I will find the culprits who are selling this drugs to the kids and hence I have to do it for him." Maya who was looking at her pings her and asks, "Do u work here??" Doctor introduces Rach as the best volunteer and Maya as an officer from narcotics department... Maya requests Rach to take care of Romi as he is really important for their department. Rach accepts happily as she too wants an opportunity to interact with her.


Romi who was listening to them carefully wonders why Maya introduced him as drug addict as they have planned something different but than remembers her telling him that plan has been change.. He just kept mum and keeps looking at Rach.


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Rach enters the room.. She looks at Romi and feels something strange.. She looks around but doesn't find anything and asks, "R u feeling strange??" Romi looks at her shockingly. He has felt strange from the moment he saw her but wonders why she is asking this.. Rach embarrasses on her question and stammers, "i.. I mean are u feeling strange in this rehab.. No one likes this place at 1st day." Romi nods in yes but thinks, "I think I am the first person who is feeling good at this place." Rachana introduces herself as "Rachana yadav, volunteer." Romi replies, "Romi.. just Romi." Kalpi extends her hands to shake.. Hesitantly Rags too extends his hand but before their hands can touch she gets a call and she excuses herself saying this is an imp call.


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P.S. : Please hit like and comment if u like the update as it motivates me to write more.

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeyyy I'm back to my frsttt place heheheh..
at last updated thnx fr dat dear..
so they knew each other since childhood itself dat sounds good..
im sure wantedly they changed it into a drug addict knowng kalpi's past so dat she would be intrestd in it..
I'm lovnggg kalpi in ur ff a lottt.. her cute cute antics n her bonding with everyone.. so goood
and nw ragna ll get know each other more.. waiting fr dat..
Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh no I had just begun to enjoy their interaction and that stupid call had to come!!!! And then you just wrapped up the update????

Uhuhhh want more Puhleeezzz!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey, I commented before I got your pm. 😉 Rachna is so naughty. Poor granny , she can't say anything as she loves Rach a lot. Rachna playing with kitten was cute. Romi wondering where the photo is. He doesn't remember keeping in the diary. Rach at the same time not recognised her childhood friend. Nice poem, explaining her thoughts well. Romi in the rehab. Obviously they are going to spend more time with each other. He will know she's the tattoo girl. Will they recognise each other? Hope Maya doesn't know about all this or else John will come to know of Romi's feelings towards his target.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Oh no I had just begun to enjoy their interaction and that stupid call had to come!!!! And then you just wrapped up the update????

Uhuhhh want more Puhleeezzz!!!!!!!


Sorry Priya.. But I assure u that there is more to their meeting... It was just introduction and day dint end. I will try my best to give a good scene... I had to wrap it up there as I want to write a full fledged scene between them and that i can't do in such hurry. Hope u understand.

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