Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Fabulous start... Raghav is an assassin... wow... guess so his heart is already melting after seeing kalpi...😳

Continue soon...

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Raghav/Romi is an assassin. He was mesmerised by Rachna's beauty even though he couldn't see her face clearly. Little did he knew then that she's going to be his next target. Still he wished her to go to heaven. He's falling for her even before getting to know her. Wonderful, a nice theme. 😃

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

nice update...
looking forward to read more

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I like Rachana tattoo
Aww Raghav is already falling for a unknown beautiful girl
Hmm... This Sammy and his dad are two jerks
I like the way Raghav was thinking about Rachana while looking at her pic
Beautiful update

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b.baheti

@b.baheti

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Its really good. N what i liked a lot is u named d heroine as Rachana. Great start. 😊
Waiting for next update

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donwannaone

@donwannaone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

as usual vish amazing am on trending mission
superb vish
u r AWSUM love u mwahhh

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wow awesome start! Continue soon

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

awsm start vishu.
Widout seen dat grl face he feel sumthing for her.
Later he saw dat pic n widout knwing he start praising her n think peaceful heaven for dat grl to whom he hv to kill. Superb emotions.
Lv it