Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 40

Thank u Charu... M glad u liked it. Romi's jealousy always brings him closer to Rachu.. I don't know what it will do in this case,😆

Thank u dear.. M glad u liked it.

Sho...Thank u for unressing it.

Glad u liked it... u know how stupid I am while writing the romantic updates.. while writing update i was trying to take cid n crime patrol out of my mind.. m glad i succeeded as I was scared that u might call sony to stop their telecasts.😆

Adi is discharging permanently.. He will get discharged after 2 days on his birthday..

I hope i will be able to give a nice update about Romi's jealousy. Thank u once again sweethear.. Love u a lot.

m I promise.. it will be a maha update... The special one specially for u.. but it will take some time.

See i am super late in replyin.. m glad u liked it.

Thanks for liking the poem.. that was written very quickly so i was doubtful about it.

I gues everyone likes Romi's jealousy so thought to include it.. God knows whether I will be able to justify it or not.

Thank u dear.. M glad u liked it. Romi will take some time to turn romantic.. right now he has to face trouble in handling hsi heart.

Thank u Natasha... That jealousy part is just to pull back Romi to his real self i.e. heartless person. I felt I dint justify his character by showing him fully attracted towards Rachu so it is to bring him back to track but it will surely bring them together after some issues.

Thanks Rani... M glad u liked it.

I will try to show RagNa romance though i am really poor at it.

M happy that u liked the poem as well.

Thanks for ur comments... I want to thank u once again coz u never fail to comment on my FFs and encourage writers like me.

Rach happily enters the rehab building.. she is excited to meet Romi.. She remembers the short msg convo and winders why he dint msg after that.. "U too dint msg him Rachu.. N stop behaving like a teenager.. stop blushing and meet him like a babe... Impress him... Ssshhh!! What M I saying.. it looks like I m having hangover now. " he starts singing the song hangover while entering the room... She is already lost in her own world and dint realize that she is singing loud enough that Romi can hear it.. his anger raises on seeing her so happy..He feels she is singing the song for Prem as she is not able forget the moments she spent with him. Rachu notices him staring at her and stop singing.. Embarrassed she looks at him and smiles.. She was expecting a smile in return but his eyes were emitting the angry waves which are hot enough to burn her body.. Their eyes meet and without fail they start their eye conversation which has become almost routine for that.

"What happened why r u so angry?? U dint reply to my smile.."

"Do u really expect me to smile after seeing all that??"

"What? What u saw? I am not able to understand this redness of ur eyes... U r looking like a devil.."

"That's what I am.. A devil.. a heartless monster.. stay away from me else I won't spare u.."

"Devil?? Monster?? My heart is not ready to accept this.. Ur eyes is filled with sadness.. It's like that of innocent child who is always busy in searching something precious to him."

He turned around to avoid any further conversation.. Though it was tough for him to break the eyelock but he has to do to save her from his anger.. She holds her hand and turns him to her side..

"Is everything fine Romi??" She asked.

"how does it matter to u... U go n enjoy ur life with whom so ever u want.. No need to saw this fake concern to me." He replied angrily.

She looks at him shockingly, unable to understand the reason of his anger she said.. "Did something happened?? Why r u so angry?? why r u talking to me in this tone??"

He remembers the giggle she heard on the call and the hug she shared with Prem.. He clenches his fist in anger and tries to calm himself. She holds his hand once again.. his anger flared with her touch.. He holds her from the upper arms and roared.. "Coz u deserve this... coz u r like those of typical girls who don't mind spending night with guys.. Look at the dress u wore.. So revealing. It's like u have wore it for exposing ur body n not hiding it. U r not even similar to the girl whom I saw on the road.. She was trying hr best to bring smile on children's face.. n u .. U doesn't mind hugging a guy..." He stopped in the mid as he doesn't want her to know the real reason of his anger. Rach got too angry on hearing it.. No one has even dared to talk with her in the loud voice and here this guy whom she felt attracted to is insulting her without any reason.. Her eyes turned red in anger... She takes out her jacket and wears it.. Stretches the sheet lying on the bed and covers her whole body with it... "See... I am fully covered now... but does this change my mentality?? My character?? I was wrong in thinking that a criminal like u can have a good mentality.. but u r a true MCP.. n why u stopped in mid.. u saw me hugging Prem and judged me right?? U thought I am the type of girl who can sleep with anyone coz my clothes are short... Shame on u Romi n shame on myself for..." She too dint complete the sentence as she doesn't want him to know that she is ashamed to develop feelings for such MCP.

"Sorry Raghav that I came to meet u instead of going to my family... Our friendship ends here." She said while handing over the sheet to him... She takes out her jacket back.. holds it in her hand and gives him "I do not care" look and turns around to leave.. Romi looks at her going and notices the same tattoo on her waist... he remembers the night when he saw her... He realizes she is the same girl whom he felt connected with.. Whose presence was enough to calm his anger... he takes out the picture of tattoo he drew on the paper, he felt like running after her and give her a tight hug.. tell her how desperately he wanted to meet her but then he hears the giggles once and tears the paper in anger... "I am not MCP but she is...She is ... I do not know what but she is not as innocent as she looks. She had the boy friend still she dint mind spending time with me... She played with my feelings n I am not going to think about her again. She is just my target and I will remember that only."

"She is just the target than y r u still thinking about her??" he heard a voice similar to his... He looks and finds himself standing in front of him wearing a white dress..

"Who r u??" He asked

"Ur reflection.. the angelic side of u"

"But I am devil"

"U think so.."

"Why u came here??"

"Just to tell u that what u did was wrong... u hurted her."

"But she.. she hugged that guy on the road"

"So how does it matter to u.. it her own life."

"I just do not care... I was just angry"

"N u were angry coz u like her...Whether u agree or not.. she has some strong connection to u."

"No.. nothing like that."

"She is the same tattoo girl Romi.. till when u will try to hide ur feelings..the girl whom u wanted to meet from the day u saw her tattoo was standing in front of u n u.. u just insulted her that too just coz she doesn't love u back..."

"I know I lost the temper n what do u mean by she doesn't love me back.. I do not like her or love her... She is just a target and I have to ki.."

"What happened... complete ur sentence... u can't say that u will kill her... U forgot that she was ur target and got angry on her. Whether u agree or not but u have.."

Romi picks the glass kept by his side and throws it on his angelic reflection.. It disappears... He yells.. "I do not care about her n I will prove that to u.."

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Rach who was deeply hurt by Romi enters the home and wears her plastic smile..Though her mind was abuzz with his harsh words and she is on the verge of breaking down but she controls herself for Granny n Adi... Bruno jumps in happiness and licks her feet while she kneels down and hugs him.. Granny who was feeding Prem looks at Rachu and hugs her in happiness.

"This house was so empty without u.. but now u have come back and that too with Prem so our house will feel with happiness n now Adi will come back too..."

Rach smiles in reply and looks at Prem who was eating Paratha in hurry... "Chill paratha won't go anywhere... Granny is going to leave with u only.. u can have as many parathas as u want."

Prem doesn't reply to her and keeps eating...Granny notices the sadness in her tone but doesn't say anything to her... Granny knows that Rach won't share her feelings with anyone and hence never forces her to do so.

"Rachu.. Prem told me that u r not coming to stay at his place... Why??" Granny asked

"Granny u know about my job... I can't stay in SP's house as it will alert my enemies and they might harm us."

"Ok... as u wish but we will have dinner together n that's an order." Granny said in authoritative tone. Prem too agrees with her and leaves to join the duty.

Rach nods in yes and leaves to her room.. She sits on the bed... remembers Romi's words.. and feels hurt.. With heavy heart she takes out her clothes and start getting ready.. she doesn't care about her clothes today and wears what came first in her hand... Granny who was peeping in her room wonders on this but decides to give her some time. She calls Rach... "Rachu.. come fast ur breakfast is ready." Rach looks in the mirror and tries to smile... After getting the perfect fake smile she steps out of the room and hugs granny saying.. "I will miss u a lot... n u know m getting late so u should pack the food so that I can have the breakfast in the car.. n to ur surprise I have promised Prem that I will use car from now onwards so u need not worry about my safety." She said while giving a quick peck on Granny's cheek and leaves the house.

Granny looks at her going out and says, "Who is the guy who can hurt u so much... if I m not it's the same rehab guy.. I need to meet her. I can't see u hurt.. I know u r hiding ur sadness behind that smile but I am ur Granny Rachu... I am not related to u by blood but our relation is strong enough to see through u.. I will meet that guy soon."

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Prem is in hurry to reach office when he sees some people gathered on the road.. A girl is yelling on someone... "Who the hell do u think u r... how dare u... don't u know who I am... " Prem listens to her voice and gets down to solve the issues... He makes way among the ground and reach at the centre.. he looks at a tall girl wearing red floral knee length dress with red matching boots.. She was pinting finger at some man.. he notices the diamond bracelet in her hand and big nails perfectly painted in red color... Her wavy hair were falling on her face and Prem is not able to see her face.. She takes out her glares and pins it on the head.. and turns around to yell again... "Don't u dare to repeat this again else I won't spare u." Prem goes to solve the problem..

"What's the issue??" He asked

"Who called u for help." She said while turning around to face Prem.. he recognizes her as Pakhi.. Daughter of John.

"I am the SP of the city.. so will u mind telling me what's the issue is.. U have jammed the traffic." Prem said calmly.

"Ohh I am sorry.. Actually this little boy sells balloons at signal.. He was trying to sell balloon to him as well.. As he inserted his hand inside the window to give balloon to him.. he closed the window which injured this boy's hand... I just asked him to say sorry but he offered money instead of it." Pakhi said while showing the little boy's hand to Prem.

"I am sorry sir... I dint mean to show money's power.. I just offered the price for treatment."The man said while folding his hands... Prem points towards the kid and he apologized to him as well. Prem tells him to leave and gives some money to the boy for treatment.. But he refuses saying Pakhi has given him sufficient money. Prem smiles on seeing her care towards the kid.. he disperses the crowd and tells Pakhi to go as well. Pakhi thanks him for the help and tells the driver to start but to their bad luck it dint start... Prem looks at her and offers her lift.. She agrees and sits beside him.

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Oh no... mu n jhagda... Hope it clears up soon...

Will their be Pakhi-Prem love story?

W8ing for the update...

LOL Prem n Paakhi...PaaPre!!!!! Ha Ha Ha LOL

Anyways loved the update! Loved Romi's feelings which were well written and poor Rachu was so hurt!!!