FF-'Trust me, I am with you'- Promo pg 149

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Hello my fellow kmhians . Wanted to write a small ff on arjuhi about 2-3 parts .
Arohi Ahluwalia - a responsible girl who took up life's challenge with strength and determination . she is reserved and an introvert.
Arjun Singhania - a cheerful naughty and jolly guy, with a golden heart. he is an extrovert.
First part :

Arohi was sitting with her sister guddi , teaching her how to weave the yarn on the loom to make a criss cross pattern, a kit she got home that evening so they can have something to do together. Guddi was visibly excited and seeing her happy always satisfied arohi . She has had a very long day today, she had to meet with a lawyer and Rudra Pratap Singhania , to sign off the deal. She had sold her family property, the spinning mill, to which only she was the legal heir and it had been closed for years now even before the death of her parents, it was running under loss anyways. And it had become a liability for her. As if god answered her prayers, the singhania's decided to come back to their ancesteral town and settle there and through her uncle they had finalized this deal and she was happy that a huge burden was lifted off her shoulders. Now she can repay the loan and can provide funds for the new school she had opened.

Her aunt lovedeep came by from across the street, they lived opposite to arohi's house 'Arohi , don't make any dinner , I got some for you two' she said placing the dish on the table. Arohi smiled at her aunt , what would I do if she wasn't there, was a thought that always corssed her mind whenever she saw lovedeep. 'So what are you two sisters upto today' , their aunt asked . After arohi , lovedeep was the only person to whom guddi warmed upto and she was pampered by both of them. Lovedeep tried to take the loom from guddi's hands , but she held it so tight indicating she wldnt share it evenwith her loving bua. Arohi brought coffee for herself and bua and milk to guddi . 'where is sanchit' aro asked of her cousin brother, 'oh he has gone to his friend's place, important thing is now your property is sold and you can repay the loan taken for the new school I am so happy for you beta, and that too the family who bought this are good people and will make the town proud' arohi was happy to hear that.

'so what's new at the school , how was Your day'
arohi nodded 'it was good, we had a pto and parents were really happy about the kids' progress'
'who wouldn't be , when you are putting so much effort , why wouldn't they be happy , and you got a good team of teachers too'
'that is true bua, they are all so committed' .
'arohi I know what your answer will be, but it is my duty to ask you , my friend was telling me about an alliance suitable for you, think again beta, aise akele aur kitne din rahoge ? ' .
'bua what is there to think, I have decided , guddi and this school are my life, I don't want anything more' ,
'don't you want to get married and have a family'
'I already have a family, I have you , guddi and so many kids at school, and you all love me don't you, what more do I need'
'there is more than all this arohi, you need a companion, a lifepartner who is there for you all your life not only for the sake of companionship but a husband's love is different different than what all of us can give you , I don't want you to miss out on that. I want to see my little arohi complete with a family' 'bua' arohi had tears in her eyes 'I am complete and don't want anyone to come between me and guddi' by then arohi's uncle called out for his wife and bua kissed both the girls on their foreheads and left.

Arohi composed herself and went back to her sister. She looked at guddi, how precious she was to her. She prayed god to give her strength and guddi happiness. She slept thinking of all the things she was supposed to do at school the next day.

'Arjun' raashi called out to her brother who was playing his video game. 'ARJUN' she called again shouting, 'uffo , reduce the volume , you want the whole town to go deaf? And that too so early in the morning who plays games ' ' what is the fun otherwise and it is ppl like me who play so early in the morning' he winked at her and took the glass of juice , drank it and made a face , 'please don't give me these kind of concoctions, if you don't know how to make something, google it' rashi was annoyed 'noone can satisfy you , are you going with dad to check out the new mill' ' you mean the old spinning mill that dad bought out of some sort of gratitude to the town and where we are supposed to rot , in this big bhoot bangla ' ' hey , you know dad and there is a strong reason for him to come back, he wants to strengthn the roots for next generation and this is our ancesteral house not a bhoot bangla' 'so why should we stay here, I miss mumbai life, I want to go back' 'that you and dad decide later, right now go with him' 'why are you bugging me instead of your dear husband , go eat his head' rashi gave him another angry look and left from there. He increased the volume two more notches just to bug her and was satisfied when he saw it did irritate her.

As soon as Rudra came down the scene in the house changed , arjun immediately turned off the system and joined his dad, 'you upto your usual masi already eh ' asked rudra, 'you know me dad, I cant sit quiet ' ' I know , that is why I want you to come with us today , you can decide what you want to do later, heard you went to jay's house yesterday' , 'yeah lucky me he is here atleast, some more guys were there, we are meeting up for a game of cricket this afternoon' ' oh good, lets go' 'why did we buy this old mill again? ' arjun asked on their way , jignesh rashi's husband was busy over phone, rudra smiled 'this was a bread winner for most of the town and got closed when it ran into losses, the family who owned this and other properties, conveniently left this one to a young girl when it was divided and now she sold it to us' 'well good riddance for her' arjun said, rudra replied ' actually it is good for her and us , I wanted to start something here and what better can it be for a business man to aquire another new one' 'and good for her because she don't have to deal with the headache anymore plus she got enough money to spend lavishly eh?' arjun said with the experience of what he has seen mostly around him in the city . 'no, she is a responsible girl, strong and talented , I met her yesterday, you will be surprised to know that she is running a school here in the town and she wanted to raise money for that , I am impressed' arjun was truly surprised , if dad is impressed then she must be someone interesting he thought 'school ? that is interesting ' he said , ' yeah , it is called 'chetana' a school for mentally challenged and Special kids'

Part 16 - Arjun's Confession (drunk and sane)
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.vrshn. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!! congo on your new ff!!

review:

first of all...you have a mature thinking!

you have strong characters which i really like!

i like stories where girls are,strong and independent!

usually, when guys are shown as extroverts,they are shown as the dumb ones! but then here again arjun's character was not dumb,although a little playful,his character was sensible!

so i loved your plot!!

nd yea...is guddi a special kid??

please do continue your story!

and don't forget to pm me!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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kavya diii...HUGSSS...
i loved d frst part..so s guddi so small ??
n yeah arohi being intovert n arjun d opp looks interesting...
well i loved d concept n i thnk i dnt need to say it much..
continue soon as i knw u r a FABULUS WRITER mwahh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow kavy rely interesting concept
love it
pls cont soon
n add me 2 ur pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kavya,i luv ur writng style,its unique n matured. I luv d characters n also d plot u hv taken.
Plz do pm me also.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome :D

I actually dint want it tuh end :P
IT was amazing story.

Add me to yo pm list :]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow,sounds really interesting! Want to know more straightaway!😃
Arohi seems so mature and dedicated to her sister and school,nice to see a different type of character than usual😊

Am I right in thinking that guddi has some sort of disability?

Please continue,update soon and add me to your pm list!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..kavya..the first part was awesome..loved it...u wrote it very well!!
Continue soon nd add me to ur pm list!!!
Edited by arjuhi4eva - 14 years ago
...vibha... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
loved it
continue soon and pm me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kavya its suprb...
plz add me to ur pm list...:)

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