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kavyasam thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: KMH-NASHA

great update.

i love this long updates.i know it must be hard 4 u but i feel like reading continously.
can't wait for singhannia's at the school.hope only arjun goes & we get some sweet moments. kavya loved the update.
thanks 4 the PM.waiting 4 the next. like u said reading is easier & quicker but i can understand writing is a hard job.thats why i am staying away from writing.hats off to all the FF writer's how do u all manage this.

thanks imtiaz. I started writing yday and it took lot of time to finish. this time I will start writing daily a little part and when it adds up will post the update. I completely agree , hats off to the ff writers who are taking time to write such fab updates, main to limited likh rahi hu, but they are all doing gr8 job, and I have to read like sooo many ffs still .
will try to give some sweet moments soon. right now arohi wont get into the comfy zone quickly. she will continue to deny.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
gr88888888 job...its awesome...dey both will b going to mumbai na...looking forward 4 some romantic updates..thnx 4 pm.it was awesome update...tc n post next chappy asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: justprati

gr88888888 job...its awesome...dey both will b going to mumbai na...looking forward 4 some romantic updates..thnx 4 pm.it was awesome update...tc n post next chappy asap...

thank you :). abhi romance nahi aayega but will try to give some moments though after the next part, arohi needs to break her shell first for that she needs a change in place. arjun will have to try hard to make her say yes 😆
Edited by kavyasam - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
sorry guys not able to give romantic updates, it does not fit in the story yet. but will try to give some moments in mumbai which might change arohi's decision about staying single. 😳. like they say change of place affects a person, change is what arohi needs right now. for her nature she will not say yes or get close to arjun soon, he will have to wait . hope I am not disappointing anybody, I will try to give some moments after the next update. next update will mostly be about the school day and also about arjun being clear of what he wants and the mumbai trip confirmation. will try to update soon, summer vacation here and i am not able to sit with the lappy for longer time to write. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Kavya di m sorry 4 comntng so late. Res likh ke chali gayi,n waha avi edit nehi ho raha hai.
Btw,i luv d update. I really luv dadi here,she is so intelligent to catch thngs. Arohi's state of mind is written so nicely,i really admire her persnality. The meetng of both in mumbai wl b vry interestng. arjun dnt want 2 go mumbai becz he is feelng smthng 4 arohi,bt his unwillng tour may get them closer.
I luv ur writng style,its so classy. I want a emotional bonding more than romance as they r vry unique ppl. Luv d update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

Kavya di m sorry 4 comntng so late. Res likh ke chali gayi,n waha avi edit nehi ho raha hai.
Btw,i luv d update. I really luv dadi here,she is so intelligent to catch thngs. Arohi's state of mind is written so nicely,i really admire her persnality. The meetng of both in mumbai wl b vry interestng. arjun dnt want 2 go mumbai becz he is feelng smthng 4 arohi,bt his unwillng tour may get them closer.
I luv ur writng style,its so classy. I want a emotional bonding more than romance as they r vry unique ppl. Luv d update.

thank you for the review 😳, yeah the trip will bring them emotionally closer.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Lovedeep was in deep thoughts, daadi had called her and asked she wanted to talk to her in person. Since the time she had seen Arjun , bua had a feeling that he is a right person for arohi. But convincing arohi to even think about something like that was a tough task. When arjun's daadi called her that she wanted to meet her, she was not that surprised, it has to do something with arohi definitely. She prayed to god that her wish be granted , that her promise to amrit , before she died , about making sure arohi is married and has a life of her own , comes true. There cannot be any better match than the singhania's , but is it all so easy? What if like the previous alliances they refuse to take guddi in ? she is ready to keep guddi with her, but arohi wont agree to that. She is not even completely happy about leaving guddi with her for 2 weeks. Singhania's seem to be the nicest of the people but still she has to make sure of all that before even talking to arohi about this.

Daadi finally came and after the initial round of general talks , she finally came to the main point. She wanted to know more about arohi. She came to know that arohi's paternal family had cut ties with her and that arohi had promised her parent's , who had met with an accident , that she will take care of guddi forever and will not leave her at any cost. Armit's brother and his wife , bua , were the ones that stood by her. bua continued 'I may not be bloodrelated to arohi, but I have seen the kids since they were born, I have seen them grow, when arohi promised her parents that she will take care of her sister forever, amrit made me promise her that I will convince arohi to marry and lead a life, and I tried my best but arohi is not ready to agree to anyone' 'why?' daadi asked, 'arohi was 8 when guddi was born and as time went by she became her godmother, she was a sensible kid from the beginning and now she only became more mature than her age, she became this protective shield for her sister, she confronted people who made fun of her sister, she made sure guddi is seen in public and accepted by public, took her with her everywhere, whatever guddi knows now is taught by arohi. Even then when any rishta came for arohi they would refuse upon knowing she had a mentally retarded sister, her parents once tried to hide that fact and go ahead, but arohi refused, when the boy's parents came to know about that they asked million questions they doubted if arohi had similar streaks and then arohi herself called them and said she did not want to marry their son. She was just 21 that time. Since then she is against marriage, since she fears people may accept her first but then they will not love guddi as she does and may ask her to separate from her sister, which she wont do , so her solution is not to marry at all, and not to allow a third person in their life' bua felt suddenly contented, she wanted to talk about all this to someone.

Daadi was touched at arohi's story. Bua continued 'when her parents died, the business was already running in losses and the mill was closed, arohi wanted to work but where will she leave guddi, I was ready but she said taking care daily will put a toll on me and she wanted a permanent solution for this, she did some consultation and decided to open a school, many families in the town supported her, she got the necessary degree, we appled for loan, and started a small school. Since the town is a center place , many parents found it easy to put their special kids in our school and she is still working towards its improvement' . Daadi was proud like arohi was her own daughter. She wanted to hug her and say , we are with you too, she knew Arjun. He was the right person for arohi, he will keep her happy. His cheerful nature will make the girl's life more pretty. She told bua that she thinks arjun might have taken a liking to arohi and she wanted bua to find out if arohi will consider it too. She was glad that she spoke to bua . Bua was more than glad, she was beyond happy, this is exactly what she wanted to hear, now she knew arjun is inclined towards aro . If only she can make arohi feel the same then it wont be difficult to get them married. That should happen naturally, arohi should herself feel it or else it will not work. Bua wanted to make sure arohi meets arjun few more times, maybe that will easen the things to some extent.

Arjun continued to work with his dad and jignesh on further details, managers were hired, raw material was being bought , work was progressing very fast, people who priorly worked there and were laid off, were called back. There was a busy buzz going on in the town. Arohi was busy with the practice sessions at school. It was hard to make the kids coordinate , they took forever to move from side to side in sync. Still it was all worth it. She called the institution in mumbai to find out if they have boarding arrangements made for the candidates attending the workshop, but they did not have, they did suggest some places where she can find an accommodation. She was left in dilemma .

Finally it was school day, a year was completed , the events were starting at 3.30 . and the parents and guests were arriving one by one, a fake stage was arranged and chairs put out under a big tent . All the kids were super excited to wear costumes and jewellery, they repeated words after their teachers. It was time to start with a formal round of speeches. Arjun and raashi arrived. Jay , sanchit and arjun sat in the back , bua gave company to raashi. Arjun was waiting eagerly to see arohi . It had been almost 3 days and not a sight of her still. She finally came on the stage along with couple of her collegues and the chief guest dr. dixit . he was stunned to see her , she was wearing a light orange saree with brown print. All he could see on the stage was just her . How beautiful she looked, wish he could sit in the front row and look at her closely, but it was occupied by teachers and some parents. And being so tall it is better he stays in the back. She looked nervous to him, if only he can hold her hand and assure everything will be allright. Well he can dream that she is next to him, a smile creeped up when he thought of this. Then he realized in his trail of thoughts he had missed the initial opening speeches, luckily arohi was yet to talk since dr. dixit was finishing and praising arohi and asking her to come and say a few words.

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Edited by kavyasam - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 6 :

Arohi walked to the mike , she was feeling a pit in her tummy, why is even nervous , she thought, they are the same parents and teachers she interacts almost daily, but still standing on stage in front of so many people, looking at her was making her nervous.

She took a deep breath and started talking. 'I am deeply honoured by the support everyone of you have given us, it is only because of that we have completed a year and I hope you continue to support us. The kids you will see here today performing on the stage are really special kids, they are special because they make us realize our inner strength, our capability to love unconditionally, they are god's special creation, they are beautiful and they are pure. So are the parents. Blessed are those children who have loving parents. I thank you all for chosing 'chetana' for your kids and we will make sure that your expectations are met. One of the teachers will get trained in advanced art therapy, and then we will train the parents about how they can implement it at homes too , that will be done in next few weeks.' She continued her speech and continued to thank her collegues, her bua and uncle and her parents who inspired her while saying she looked at bua and saw raashi, and immediately without her own consent , looked at the crowd to see if Arjun was also there, and when she caught him at the far end, now standing with his hands folded across, she felt a sudden rush of blood . He was there all along? So were the rest of the people she told herself and went back to her seat even when the inner voice said , it is not the same.

Arjun was still standing there taking in the sight of her, 'damn, she is going to rule my heart' he thought. He raised his thumb at her saying she was fabulous, the blood now rose to arohi's cheeks, why did she even look at him, thankfully for her the the kid's performance would start and the stage was cleared.

All the kids including guddi did their part well, there were four teachers including arohi and a couple of parents who sat in front row and guided them with their hand signs and made sure there was good coordination in the movements. They danced for a folk song, they enjoyed, and they were cheered . It went well as planned.

Arjun wanted to meet arohi before leaving. He found her standing talking to a parent and went to her. 'Arohi' he called out to her , the parent excused herself away, 'you did a great job, congrats on the occasion' he said, 'thanks' 'the kids were great too, guddi was enjoying , I saw' , 'yeah they were, glad you could come' 'I wouldn't have missed the chance to see you again' he said ,seeing her face he continued ' I mean I wouldn't have missed the event' 'thanks ' she smiled , there it is the smile he had been waiting to see, he smiled in turn , she has no idea what it did to him, wish he could tell her that , arohi felt uneasy under his stare . he wore the same bright blue polo today, it kind of looks good , before any further tension could build up between them raashi cut in. 'Oh I had tears seeing the kids on stage today, how great were they , you are mindblowing, I admire you so much, you inspire me ' she continued to praise arohi making her blush more. It is official , she is the most beautiful person he had seen, arjun's heart was now losing control, seeing arohi like this. Wish he had known her before. Finally the brother and sister took leave of her. Even thought arohi was feeling embarrassed at all the attention , she felt comfortable in their presence , she did not want to name her feelings but they were a little different than when she met others there.

Bua was a silent spectator to all this.

After reaching home arjun saw daadi sitting in the living room. Climbing the stairs he looked at her and said 'its either her , or no one else'.
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Edited by kavyasam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
ii Shut my mouth.
Whatever i say is going to be an understatement !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
awweee - its either her or no one else - great arjun - great update - 2 updates - just great - pls continue - want to read what's next

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