Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143

Walking With You

Hello guys

Those who don't know me ..im fiza'.

This a new ff tht im planning to strt ...

But

ek sawal jo hum ap sab se pochna chahty hain woh yeah hai k...kya ap log isko parh sakay gay...hum chahty thy k hum isiay urdu mein likha...POV english mein hi honagy ...magar ghuftoogo urdu mein...yeah note bhi urdu mein islayn likha hai k ..humain pata chal jay ap log parh saky gay ya nhi...

im planning to wirite it in Urdu ...just want ur opinion'.. u will able to read it or nt...if nt i'll continue it in more English n less urdu hindi...i'll make sure ...urdu will nt b difficult one...

I need ur verdict on it

Its more of a MJHT ff...but yes it will be based on mayank Nupur more

characters:

nupur, mayank: lead

diya: nupurs elder sis...adhiraj: her husband

smart: mayank younger brother...gunjan: his would b wife

zeenat: nupur's mom

n there will me more...that i havent though ...so lets c kya hota hai

Concept: its story of arrange marriage ...tht 80% time happen in our society...n too much of love love concept sumwhere r distracting us frm it...it may b sumtime b too realistic ...i'll try tht...as sumone has said '.my writng can distract people frm realities of life ..but it would nt be a too much twist n turns

it will b on mayank n nupur...belonging to a conservative ..muslim family... a pure arrange marriage ...shifting to a marriage to a journey...

Two person who are modren but will always except there elders decision but will make there life the way the want...finding solace in a relation made by the destiny

i 'll strt it after knowing ur opinion...but this will nt b a frequent update...the concept was in my mind so i just want it to share with u all...

pm list as usual i don't maintain ..pls add me to buddy list for pms...

though this concept was preivouly a sad story I named Wajood..but I shift to this 'as I don't want u all to burn in anger'but yes I'll share tht part of my mind with u ..in mid of this story as an SS mayb'..

my other works

BECAUSE U LOVED ME ( COMPLTED)

HUM TUM ( COMPLTED)

ARDHNGINI ( COmp..)

OS SS GALLERY

INDEX

yaaaay......am the 1st to comment.............

Fiza, a beautiful concept and actually close to reality ...

Welcome agn😊..................n yessss Urdu is more than welcome...........concept mindblowing as usual............loved all ur works...............dil chahta hai Aap bus likhte jaye n hum aise hi padhte jaye............ab jald se jald update karna shuru karen hame intezar hai😳...................!!!

Bohat hi khobsurat kheal hay

i dont have any problem with urdu/hindi. you can write whatever language you feel to write in.

Heyyyyy My Finuuuuuuuuu
congrats dear
oyeeeeeeee i would like to read ur new story- shak ki koi gunjaish he nehi hai.
hey the concept is very realistic and interesting
it would be very easy to relate this story with our own life.
finuuuuuuu i just loved the following--
Two person who are modern but will always except there elders decision but will make there life the way the want......finding solace in a relation made by the destiny .........

i m sure it gonna an awesome FF...
and abt urdu- no prob yaar- tu hai na ... agar samjha nehi ayegi tou puch lenge.
do update first part soon

Hi fiza. Nice concept. I am bengali so urdu will be difficult for me. But if u use simple word then i will try my best. But it wil be better if u write in english nd hindi, little urdu

plzz continue....😃