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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

Beautful Update Fizaaa...😳😍
the sehri ...the iftari...there fighting...the eid shopping...n chand dekhna...n finally the eid n eid wishes...😳😍
it was just perfect...i luvd it...when he says...:


Mayank" welcum to married life'ab biwi ko kasy mano'🤣


lolzzz...it was actually cute...😳😆

ab they can go to honeymoon na...😉😆
o naiii..abhi tu abba amma ne Haj pr jana hai...😆
but i m sure mayank is tu waiting for it...😆
n for the first time in my life i actually liked Samrat 😲
woaaahhh...me surprised at myself...😆
i luv when he teases them...😆
luvly part...Continue soon😳
Annu😃


P.S A Very Happy Eid To All...❤️🤗

thnku so much for liking
so gr8 to know u liked it on whole n enjoyed it
lol
honeymoon doesnt is really neccesary for thm to go...thy can have there moments here to...
i know i havent put any romance from so long
but i promise very soon
personly at my ffs samrat has been liked my people...mayb i liked him thts why i
thnks for ur wishes
glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Fiza..
u have beautifully interwoven the married life of Mayank Nupur with the customs and festivals.Its so colourful😳

thnku so much for higlighting an deliberte aspect of this ff
this is actully abt the realtiy of married life thought have loads of tinch of fantase
thnku so much
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update

Loved mayur first fight and samrat teasing part.Loved the way they were understanding each other.
Cont soon and Eid Mubarak

thnks aloot for liking it
glad u liked it on whole ..thnks for liking there relationship
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

thats such a nice update...loved every bit of it...but which change r u talking about?i hope its a good one...continue soon..

thnks aloot
no no dont worry it just another aspect of life...just will be a bit realistic or like a page from diary...im turing my wheels towards routine life...
thnks a loot for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Ohhh wow

this is something really nice...
Eid special update...loved the way you
described customs and how a married couple
njoy fests...
Loved it❤️

thnsk ruchi
for liking it
glad ur liking my way of handling the updates
thnkuu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome update!!!
really loved the way u wrote this part...

continue soon
and eid mubarak to u😊

thnks aloot for liking it
glad u liked my way of taking the story
thnku
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very nice update Fiza.👏
a totally Eid special update.⭐️
waise hum jaise k liye ye update ek bht special tha😃...maine kitna kuch jana iss update se.😃
yaar mujhe to shehri bhi malum nhi tha...aur tu & fari ne mera kitna mazak udaya tha...u both r very bad😕.
but i love u both.🤗
very nice update.😃
like mayur a lot.😃
love their sweet talk...awesome.😃
love their first firght.😃
lolz...they want to celebrate theri fight...lolz😆
awesome udpate.😃
fab😃
cotninue soon.😃

EID MUBARAK 🤗

u dont know how much i was laughing defining sehri just rembering u...frst thought of puting ur definaiton but thn stoped ...
thnks a loot jani for liking this part
i know the festive n customs are nt knwo to u thts y i have tried n define them
lov ay too
lol i always celebrate fight i love too...lol
thnks for lking n reading this ff wch i enough is hard job for u
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 20

Nothing is permanent , a little contradiction for me this statement is. People nevr chnges its we who has just discover new side of a person

Nupur found herself as a full on house wife , an area she never was willing to have, but did her best to successes on it.

From household to her hubby's need, she was full filling evrthing…

It was another day in her home. Morning was hustle bustle, as both of them woke up late, inspite of endless snooze of alarm, courtesy mayanks hectic routine ….

Mayank: nupurr…he almost no..no… he scremd..

Nupur: ji….

Mayank: its 8: 15..already…OMG…he rushed to get ready , n she looked at the clock in shokcd, its 8 n mayank has to reach office 9 sharp he has a meeting.

She rashed down to prepare breakfast as he never leaves without it, she needs to be quick…

SA: aray tum uth gai ..mjhy tu laga mayank aj pehli bar breakfast k baghir jay ga…..tumahin pata hai na aj Samrat k bhi jaldi jana hai…

Samrat: tu aj hum ap kay hath k breakfast kahtay….good morning bhabi…

SA: kyun…shohar ki zeemadari sirf biwi ki hoti hai ( it wife responsibility to take care husband)

Nupur: ji ami mein banti hoon, mayank ko day do pehly …Samrat tumhain just 2 min ..

Samara: chill bhabi…meray pass abhi buhat time hai

…she did the last bit n placed n dining table…n rashed to prepare for the other family members…

She listen mayank's car left…he was in hurry she knew n thts why left such…

She prayed tht he drive safely…..finishing everyone's required she set on table to have breath of relief, plus to have her breakfast too….

Soon the maid arrive n with a cup of tea in her hand she took the charge of that duty…n after tht went to kitchen to strt preparing for lunch…she thought in between to call mayank but the work didn't gave her time , so she text him, plus he must be busy , she didn't want to disturb him..

Reached safely?

Ji janab…

His simple text put an smile on her face…n gave peace to her mind ..how much he must be busy but he didn't took a sec to reply back plus the tone in wch he did was always sweet, she thnked GOD …

Doing the work n eating lunch with family she went to her room, n smile spread at her face…looking around she found evrythng in mess, she even asked maid not to clean her room , as she preety much knew its displaying a diffretn story…though it was nthing but the panic tht occurred in morning

Blushing at her thought..n moments tht do had made such picture in past…. she strt correcting it, the disheveled bed sheet, putting the pillows at there place…spreading her hand on each n evrythng n thn she went to there wardrobe ..to place her n his cloths…in….trying to get sum nap in afternoon she was switching the chhaanels….

Her cell runged n she looked at it

Nupur: salam api

Diya: walikum asalam…kya baat hai aj kal tu ap k phone hi nhi ata

Nupur: bs api k ghar k kam se fursat(didn't get time) hi nhi milti…abhi tu room mein aai thi….ami se baat ker k aai thi..

Ap sunaau kasi hain ap..

Diya: hum tu thik hai…bs asay hi ap ki yaad arhi thi…kam sab ap per hai …..chalo yeah tu part of married life hai

Nupur: ji api…bs sab mange hota rahy …

Diya: don't worry hojay ga….acha suno mera cell baj raha hai ..mein ap se bad mein baat kerti hoon…khuda hafiz..

She hunged up the phone , n went down the memory lane, strting from no..why to this relation…so much fear … to his first attempt to impress ..she chukled at the thought of his first email…thn till now .wht a long way they have came and seems sucha smooth n peacfull ride….thought the adjustment here seems to be very simple….but it wasn't simple….but he always stod up her side..the whole days hectic, n tiring routine just vanished with the smile n care she gets from him….

The alarm runged as it was 5 pm….there loads of thing mean to be done in eveing to…she went down n prepared tea n snack ..

MF: aay idhar humary pass bhaitay…

Nupur: she smiled …n went ..ji baba..hum gaya

MF: thak jati hai na app…buhat sara kam hota hai…he spread his hand on her head…n kept pating her back till she was sting on the garden near him placing her hand on his lap…

Nupur: lo tu kiya hoa…hum apny ghar mein hi tu ker rahy hain na….is mein kiya hai…ami ny bhi tu sari zindagi kiya hai …ab woh arm keray

MF: kismet wali hain apki saas jo un k asi bahu mili …warna rooz nakiray kerti..koi kam na kerti..aur betay ko bhi lay jati tu kiya hota..(she is blessd to have u in this house, if a girl would have came , through tantrums, doing nthing, n even took her son away…tht n wht she had done)

Nupur: hay Allah asa kyun hota..

MF: kyun k apki ami tu bulkily saas ki traha bartaoo(behave) kerti hain…

Nupur: asi baat nhi hai baba…sab k apna tareka hai….aur ami tu mjhy kisi cheez se nhi rukti…ha thora perfect kam chati hain…but hum thoray din mein woh bhi seekh jay gay…tu woh bhi thik hojay ga….

MF: khush rahy hamesaha….aur woh humary baray sehab k kya haal hai…do din se un ki shakl nhi dekhi..subha andhi ki tarha jatay hai aur raat mein bhi late….

Samrat: han bhabi nazar rekho …yeah raat ko dair tak office mein rehna achi baat nhi ….

Nupur: samratt…..baba woh closing chal rahi hai na tu apko pata hai kafi kam hota hai…

MF: us naliaq(good for nthing) ko bolo humari beti ko bhi waqt diay keray…ap chahy tu apny ghar ho aay…kafi dino se ap gai nhi ..kyun shilpa…as she also came in garden for the tea time….

SA: han humain koi iteraz nhi…hum ny kisi cheez k lyan rukh hai…

Nupur: dekha..ami humain khabi nhi mana kerti hai… she smiled at her n she return it back….

Shilpa was strick, but caring to, gave her space but kitchen n household she will nevr takcare of now …she was not bad, no perfect , she was liking a woman who was grey plus still she has in her mind tht her son is now shared a larger amount with this woman…..

Samrat: per ap k sir taj…un se permission lay tu jany..

She smiled abit knowing he is right..asman sir per utha lay gay woh…

Cuming back in room after preparing dinner..she went to shower..n dressed up a bit to welcum her hubby from office…but to her disappointment she received a text..

Will b late, have dinner…

It was 10 still she was in a hope he might cum was waitng for him on dinner…cleaning the kitchen, making a cup of tea for her father in law…she went to her room, after a long an hectic day…it was 11 when she heard his car horn..n went down to welcum him

Nupur: asalamulikum….

Mayank: walikium aslam…

His face has huge lines of tiredness…body showing high fatigue…taking his jacket and bag from him…to wch he said I'll handle…but she took it n asked him to fresh up…

Placing his things on its place, she went down to prepare sum tea for him…reaching up she opened the door n found…sigh…she shock her head n went inside…

He was sound sleep on his bed…sound doesn't seem to but tired he was…changing herself, she took the place next on the bed….

The past three four days are going like this…he is hell busy ..n came back tired…but still they share a bit of talk…but true not time actually together…but he has his reason n she knew…first she thought of going to her moms house, but than no one will be here to takecare him n his necessities….

Form making him awake to his breakfast , to may or may not be his dinner, plus a cup of tea need always before sleep…all will not be given to him, plus he need to arrnge his thing by himself and tht she doesn't want in such hectic schedule of his…..

She was pasing her fingers in his hairs, he move close to her griping her hand in his hold…she smiled how cum she can miss this, the sight tht her presence make him feel relived….she closed her eyes…n with sudden jerk she opened them….

Moving away from his grip she went to his wardrobe…office k kapray kaun iron keray ga….previously he use to mange all by himself but soon she take over it….saying itna thak ker yeah kam bhi yeah keary gay …

N than it was almost 1 am when she went n doze of to sleep immeditiely as now she was too hell tired….

………

Mayank: ap ny kal raat khana kahya tha..he ask with a frown watching her expression…as she was tying his tie….

Nupur: ji….she didn't looked up him knowing wht is cuming next…

He place his hand on chin..n rised her head….

Mayank: hmm…dekhy mein acha khasa kamata(earn) hu…islayn bhook hartal(strike) kerkay ap meray pasay bacha ny ki khosish(try) na keray….kyun k us ko bad jo doctor k kahracha(expense) hoga woh alag…aur mein bechara jo suffer kero ga woh alag….he pouted

Nupur: yaad hi nhi raha…..sorry….

Mayank: he kissed her forehead….sorry…mein kuch zayda busy hogay hoo haiana

Nupur: hmm…but its ok….sunay woh mein ….

Mayank: woh mein…..kiya mangny wali hain ap..itni hichkchatat..(trouble in saying)

Nupur: woh hum ami k yaha ek din k layan

Mayank: kiya matab ek din k layan….ap ko stay kerny jana hai??? In ask in uter surprise n almost scremed

Nupur: ji woh….api bhi arahin hain..

Mayank: hmm…ok…..acha…chalo…hum sham mein jab aay gay ap ready rehna hum apko chor day ga…but just a night..hum kal lay lay ga…warna hum yaha kiya keray ga….

Nupur: thnku….she smiled widely…

Mayank: anytime sweetheart…no no not anytime….

She giigled n he to join…

Uff biwi ur such a distraction …

Huuuhhh…

Yaar I need to go to office na…but don't worry 3 days to go to end this closing period…phir..he leaned to her n gave her a quick peck….bye…allah hafiz….

Allah hafiz….

Sham mein pls be ready…bahr se jao ga oki….

Ji

…………

Evening..

She was full ready n informed diya n zeenat too tht she will be cuming..too excitedly she got ready as it was frst time after marriage she was going to stay ….

She received a text from mayank tht he has left office, so be ready

SA: nupur kahna(dinner) ready hai kiya….tu ap ek kam keray jatay jatay baba k lyan roti daal( prepare") dain…un k kahany k waqt hogaya hai…..

Nupur: ami woh mayank atay hi hongay

SA: han tu 5 min tu lagay gay

Nupur: ji….

She looked at the lock n rushed to kitchen to do it…

She very well know one thing , he hates people to be late, plus he has been highly tired this week, n his temper will be obviously high, n thn if she will be late tu , plus just for her he is cuming early home n will do all his work from here …

She was half to the roti making when heard his horn…n her breath got stuck…

She text him 2 mins, n went out completing the work but took 10 mins

Mayank: nupur jab hum ny kaha that u should be ready tu phir kiya hoa…

Nupur: woh actually….woh hum baba k lyan roti dalna bhool gay thay ..tu bs woh

Mayank: tu woh tu ami bhi ker sakti thi na…apko pata hai na k is waqt time nhi hai humray pass..had hai…he was angry too much

Nupur: soory bs ….

The drive was now in silent, she cursed herself tht she should have done tht before whn she knew her mother in law hates any unfinished work in short she doent do anything on her own, tu she shud be carful at tht…

Plus mayank with so much on his head of work will be higly angry…..she looked at him now n than , his head has a frown, or he was taking on blue tooth….

Though she was bit sad about his attitude but than she very well knew tht just a moment of anger she just cant over look all the affection , love n care ..n above all understanding he has always shown so this was her moment to do so, understanding tht his nerves are in high pressure….

Moving out of the car…she bit bye to him , he smiled n waved bye, as he was still talking on phone, n left in a rash…..

Sigh she went inside to found a joyfull environment welcoming her after so long…..

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Posted: 14 years ago

So I know u all must feeling a bit strnge reading this, but I nevr wanted to be this story to be away from realistic lovestory, a married life tht has many shades…..

I hope im going fine..

Oki the questions I want to ask…..

Except from romance tht I'll surly give u in next n upcoming….

This story has completed 20 chapters,

1 wht is the thing u want me to show

2 at wht note u want me to end the story…

Any suggestion plsss

As after 3 chapters I am off to the closing chapters

Lov u all

Fiza

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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it lodsss...😊😃😊
awesome update...👏👍🏼👏
as usual beautifully written...👏👏
so now Nupur has became an IDEAL BAHU...😊😉😊
awww she is so sweet...😊😊
i love my MayUr...😊☺️😊
Nupur is so understanding...😊😊
she does all d work n her saas bapre...😲😉😲
she is an ACTUAL SAAS...by god...😲😲
bahu ke ane ke baad no work at all...😲😲
i love Mayank's DAD he is such a wonderful person...😃😃
i loved Nupur n BABA's conversation...😊😊
Samrat is also a cute Brother-in-law...😆😉😆
i loved MayUr understanding nature...😳😉😳
ok so Nupur apne ami ke ghar gayi hain...wah 😃😃
i wud love to see der missing each other session plzzz...☺️😉☺️
i love d line ""anytime sweetheart...no no not anytime""🤣🤣🤣
hayyy mera Mayank...☺️☺️☺️
kitna sweet hain.i love him...☺️☺️☺️

so now my ans...
😭😭agar mere baas mein hota to ye ff main kabhi end na hone deti...😭😭
API ap jo bhi karengi accha hi hoga...n i will surely gonna love dat...
bt itni jaldi kya hain end kar ne ki 😛...waise mujhe aur thora MayUr romance dekhna hain n han unke Babies bhi to chahiye mujhe...😳😆😉
n han want a situation whr Mayank will support Nupur to make her feel dat he is alwayss der for her...😉😉
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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