Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 66

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beautiful update

loved it

BBC aunty was awesome

waiting to read the next part

thanks for the pm😊

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hey fiza api🤗
finally you updated...you know what i was so lost in the part 15 that i forgot to comment on that🤣
sowwiee😳

part-15

totally drooling over it..ah! i read it 10 times😳
it was so amazing..😍 and so romantic too🤪
tashu felt very happy reading that😳
i just loved it❤️..you know its y most favourite FF😍
loved it😍

part-16

beautiful walima😳...samrat is just too much🤣
pata nahi where did you imagine such characater😆🤣
and that BBC aunty was just eww🤣..actually in every marrage ther is a BBc aunty😆
totally amazing part🤗
continue soon

hanti hoon tum aur tumahri herkatein

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i loved it.

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Justtt PERFECT...MADE 4 EACH OTHER...😍

thnks aloot

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

very nice update fiza...

i am sooo in love with mayank in this FF...

very nice...:):)

thnku so much for liking

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

lovely update dear...v v sweet one.cant wait 4 the next part..all the emotions were really beautifully put together...thanx 4 the pm😊

thnku so much for liking dear

HELLO GUYS

THNAKS FOR UR LOVE AT THE LAST PART

RPLYED TO U ALLL

HOPE U LIKE IT TO..THOUGH I FEEL ITS NOT THT GUD

FIZA

Chapter: 16

Mayank: nupur humain ap se kuch baat kern thi

The fumble of his word and hesitance in his tone, was making difficult for her to know wht actually wht he wants to talk about

Nupur: ji..

Mayank: hum soch rahy thy k do din bad office join kerlain….he looked reluctantly at her….she was looking at him , in a surprise mover in an urge of saying "tu" wch she controlled as saw him turning to her n continuing further

Dekho kahin bahar tu hum ja nhi rahy…she was feeling giggled but suppressed as he must have planned sumthing …such a disappointment in his voice….actually ami ny kaha tha koi plan na rekho….kyun dawatein hain phir ramzan aur phir

He looked at him n she gestured him to continue

Tu better k hum apni chutiyan(vacation) zaya na kerain bad k lyan safe kerlain

Nupur: she smiled…..thik hai..jasay ap thik samjhin…

He was still not satisfied with her answere…

Mayank: ap ko bora laga…

Nupur: kyun..humain kyun bora laga …

Mayank: kam se kam humain kuch dino tak tu ap k sath rehna chiay tha…

Nupur tu ap kiya office 24 ghante k lyan jay ga….

Mayank: nhi..

Nupur: phir…its ok…ap apny kam per dehan dain…bhar jana itna bhi important nhi ….aur ami thik tu kah rahin hain ..ramzan mein waqt hi kitna bacha hai…..humain bulkily bora nhi laga…..humari fikar na keray

Mayank: ap sach mein chati hain hum apki fikar na keray….he looked at her n smiled

Nupur: she lowered her head n smiled …

Mayank: lo hum tu khush horahy thy …ap ny aj hum se itni sari baat ki…aur ap phir se khamoshi….

He smiled

Nupur: hum khamosh kab hain…

Mayank: wasy magar ek baat bata doon..

Nupur: kiya…

Mayank: ap k lyan thik hoga meray liyan bulkily thik nhi hai….i planed so much yaar….

Nupur: she giggled….tu bora laga….

He leaned towards her…

Mayank: hmm..magr fikar na kerain…..i'll make up for that…

He said mischievously leaning to her lips…n captured them to thnk her for understanding, for wht he wasn't able to convey in words, tht they aren't allowed to go out and moreover she did'nt made a issue out of it

Mayank: moving away he cuped her face……..shukriaya…mjhy pata hai ap ny buhat kuch socha hoga ….aur hum shayad usay porana nhi kerpay….

Nupur: hum ny sirf ap k sath zindagi guzarnay ka socha hai…bs….

Mayank: he hugged her from side…as she rested her head on chest..he rested his head on her…ruffling her hairs….….wasy agar apko jana hota tu kaha jatay….

Nupur: the warmth of her cheek suddenly rose up…he leaned a bit to have a look to her to confirm wht he was thinking is true or not…n yes she was blushing

Mayank: ji tu nupur ji kaha jay gi ap honeymoon per….n teasing tone was too much clear in his voice

Nupur: kahi nhi….controlling her blush she for the first time collected courage…n start to play along…

Mayank: kyun bhi….hum tu jay gay..abhi nhi eid k bad…

Nupur: eid k bad nhi ja sakty

Mayank: kyun….he broke aprt n looked at her surprised

Nupur: kyun k phir kuch din tu reh jay gay…ami baba haj per ja rahy hain shayad…

Mayank: ary haan hum tu bhool hi gay….agin disappointed

Nupur: hmm..she giigled…

Mayank: tu yeah tu aur bhi acha hai……he was grinning with a win

Nupur: ji

Mayank: ji…ami baba on haj…samrat k exams hain tu zayada tar tu woh apny dosto k yaha hotay hain….tu karcha(no expenses) bhi nhi….sara intezaam tu ghar per hi hosakta hai….hain na nupur

Her all effort to pull his leg was in vain…n she turn crimson n wincing mayankk…..she hided her face in him…

Nupur: hum taiyar hony jana hai…she whispered

Mayank: tu jain

Nupur: ap jhoray gay tu jao gi na….

Mayank: hmm….sochta hoon…as he tighten his grip more…

Nupur: pls….

Mayank: acha jain….humain marny k taiyarri kerain…uff..

She giggled n went to drees up….looking at the dress she was frowning

Mayank: bechary jhoray(dress) ko ap itna goohor ker kyun dekhan rahi hain…

Nupur: itny bahri(heavy) kapary kyun bantay hain

Mayank: kuch din aur bardasht kerlain ..bad mein hum ap se nhi kahin ga…..

Nupur: uper se itna sara makeup bhi…..

Mayank: he giggled …ap ko pata hai larkyon k lyan sab se zayada khaas bat shadi k baray mein yahi hoti hai…khub sary kapray, jewllery..etc etc…

Nupur: humary liyan nhi hai….she took the dress n was entering the washroom

Mayank: tu ap k lyan kiya hai…shaking his head. N with a chukle…he turn around towards his wardrobe knowing tht she would'nt answere

Nupur: Ap..

He turned with an impulse n she was already gone…standing there he just can looked at the way, and smiled more wider….

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Today was the grand dinner at nupur's house, its called chohti….as done ,mostly on fourth day of wedding….here its tradition that the relatives, friend will call the couple on dinners after marriage, but the strt is done by chohti…it's a way of interacting with the relatives of both side…

Entering Ali Mansion all the guest were welcomed warmly…nupur was dreesed up in a shocking pink shalwar suit with silver work on it , tying her hairs in a high pony n n curling her open hairs…..to which she has received a frown from Mayank ….baal band liya ap ny……

Nupur: ab kiya roz roz shampoo keray…baal karab hojay gay…

Mayank: roz shampoo na kerny ki garnatee nhi day saktay….

Nupur: mayankkk…she winced n he chukled

Zeenat: addab…she greeted SA and all ladies…

Mayank: addab ami..

Zeenat: khush rahin beta….

Dadu Mayank adi and MF where in men's area , while ladies were busy chating in the hall….diya was in kitchen checking the last min preparation of dinner n all…n nupur joined her there

Nupur: api kiya ker rahin hain ap….

Diya: kuch nhi apni choti behan k sasural walo ko impress kernay ki taiyari…ap batein kasi hain ap

Nupur: hum tu thik hai…she said in such a juvenile tone that warmth not only diya's heart but also zeenat who was also standing near the door…

Zeenat: ap ko koi persahni tu nhi hai na ….sab ghar mei thik hai na

Nupur: ji ami sab thik hai…ap fikar nhi keray

Zeenat: beta ..buhat arms se , dekh bhal ker sab kuch sambhalna……

Nupur: ji ami jan …she said with an assuring smile…

As zeenat left….the all ask the servants to serve the dinner…..

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Nupur was attending her in laws, asking they might need sumthing when saw Mayank standing alone…

Nupur: ap kuch chaiy ..hum ladain

Myanak: he smile…mera ghar hai mein khud lay lo ga….ap itni formal kyun horahi hai…jasy mein ap k yaha pehli bar kahny per aya hoon…aur mehamn sirf mein hoon…

She chukled…

Nupur: ek min, she forward her plate , n with help of roti , took Palaak(spinach) panner from his plate to her….

He looked at her in surprise…

Nupur: Samrat ny batay ap palaak nhi kahtay….saas ko impress ker rahy thy

Mayank: he chuklled…unhony itny pyar se nikala tha , mana kasay kerta…

Nupur: wah wah..pyar se bolo aur ap zehar kehany ko taiyar

Mayank: ab bhi try kerlain hum bulkily mana nhi kerain gay….

Nupur: biwi k sath flattering…very bad….

Mayank: bulkily bhi nhi…100%allowed hai…..

Zeenat: mayank beta yeah try kero, acha lagy ga…khas tumhary liyan banwaya hai

Mayank: mayank slowed a lump looking at the dish, palak he hates palak cant stand palak, nhi ami hum ny liya hai…buhat acha hai..

Zeenat: tu thora aur try ker shabash…

Samrat: whispered , ap kay shohur muskil mein hai, shakal kitni pyari bangai un ko

Nupur: kyun kiya hua..

Samrat: samny dekhain….saas ny palak itny payr se serve k hai, mana tu nhi ker saktay

Nupur: kyun….unhain

Samrat: palak se shadeed nafrat hai..zehar se kam nhi hai un lyan…he was giigle..maza aya…pyar mein insaan kiya kiya kerta hai nhi..

Nupur: chup kero..ami tu khelti rahy gi woh un ki specialty hai….hum atay hain….

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Nupur: humain ap se poch layna chiay tha ap ko kiya pasand nhi hai….sorry

Mayank: ary is mein maafi mangny wali kiya baat hai…ap abhi na tu humari pasand janti hain na hum apki…waqt tu lagay ga na…its ok…aur ap apni ami ko maat batiya ka….

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: un ko bora feel hoga …..

Adi: kasin hai meri Sali….

Thye both looked at him…

Nupur: hum tu bulkily thik hai….yeah apki ankhon k pass kiya hua….

There was bit swelling near his eyes….diya too join them..

Nupur: api ap ny yeah kya kiya…..she teasingly ask diya ….meray bhai per itna zulim

Adi: bs nupur ap kiya kerain….nobaat..yaha tak agai( she is doing this to me)….

Nupur: yeah tu saaf pucnh k nishan hai

Mayank who was by the time figuring out wht exactly these two are referring , burst into giggle….

Adi: hasy maat….kuch dino ki baat hai

Mayank: kiya matlab ..yeah is khandan ki larkiya…yeah haal kerti hai…uff

Adi: bs..dekh lo…kuch dino mein tumhara bhi yeahi hasher hona wala hai…islayn tu jahaz mei tinay sary dry fruits or cheezay di thi ap ko…k beta …mar kahy k layn taiyaar hojao….

Diya: adi…..ap bhi na..

Mayank: wasy adhiraj k nam adi ..Api apny rekha hai….kafi sweet lagta hai

He ask teasing wch turn diya red…..

Adi: dekhy humari biwi ko tang na keray…wasy raz ki baat hai ..ji haan humari biwi humain payaaar se adi bolati hain…

Mayank: oohhh…..

Diya: mayankkk…..wasy ap kyun jealous horahy hain…thoray din rukh jay ap ko bhi koi na koi nam tu mil hi jay …haina nupur…..

It was now nupurs turned to blush…

Mayank: he encircled his arm around her shoulder….bhi ab Ap humari biwi ko tang na kerain…..

Zeenat: diya nupur…..

Ji atay hain….

She pulled out herself from mayanks arm n rashed to her mother

Adi: Mayank ji dadu k samany public display of affection ..not allowed

Mayank: kiya..

Adi: han …wasy tu mjhy meri mom k samny bhi allowed nhi hai….tumhain bhi recommend kero ga…donot do this

Mayank: kyun..she is my wife…

Adi: I know…but na kiay kero….im telling u…kamaka nupur ko data petay gi…itni nazaeba (cheap) herkat ker rahi thi ap apny bahro k samny…

Mayank: GOD..thnks….agay se kahyal rekho ga….kitni restrication

Adi: wasy ek baat batado …sab bary yeah hi kertay hain…apny ghar mein bhi thora kayal rekhna…

Mayank was feeling so strange ..wht the hell…shadi se pehly meri biwi nhi hai cant talk ab meri biwi hai tu bhi problem hai….uff

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Diya: tu Mayank ki tu chotiyan hai…kaha jany k program hai…

Nupur: api abhi kaha jay gay…2 wks tak tu dawetein hi hain..phir ramzan ..tu hum ny mana kertiay mayank ko

Diya: kyun ..ap ko asa tu nhi kahan chaiy tha un ko ….

Nupur: aray api asy nhi kaha hai baba….woh tu dawetien cancel ker k jatay tu amii aur ghar walo ko bora lagata na…abhi nhi jay gay baad mein jay ga…islayn Mayank bhi parsoo se office join ker rahy hain….

Diya: hm yeah bhi hai…acha hi kiya ap ny mana kerdiya..mayank ko bhi acha laga hoga….

Nupur: ji..

Mayank who came here to call nupur for sumting was overwhelm with the way she took it all on her, not on his mother. If she would have wanted can said to diya that her mother-in-law ask him not to go out for any trip, this can work as a big negative view builder against his mom , but she didn't. the smiled today on his face was a bit proud to see her in his life….

Moving a bit away , pretending he wasn't here..he called her name and then knocked the door

Mayank: chalein nupur….

Nupur: ji..ap chalein hum atay hain…

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Mayank: ab yeah kiya hai ami..

Zeenat: ap humary ghar pehli bar, daamad ki hasiyat se aay hai..khali hath nhi jaty ..yeha humari khushi hai

Mayank: pehli bar tak thik hai…per ainda as kuch bhi nhi plz ami…

Zeenat: ji..khush rahoo…as she spread her hand on his head….

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Mayank: thnks…

Nupur: kis lyan

On way to home as Samrat was driving the other car n mayank nupur in other…

Mayank: diya api k samny , baat sambhalny k lyan….

She was surprised n was not able to get wht he is actually saying

Mayank: woh hum ny apki aura Api ki baat sun li thi….ap ny ami k nam nhi liya…thnks…

Nupur: yeah humary ghar ki baat hai…hum samjhty hain….Api ko shayd nhi samjha pata…bs islayan ..yeah koi itni bari baat nhi hai …

Mayank: han…buhat bari baat hosakti thi….ap ny rukh li…thnks

Nupur: ab hum kahein ap itny formal kyun horahy hain….

Mayank: company a asar….

I know I know its long and extremely boring chapter….sorry for that , but after recovery, being ashu on mind, this was wht I can wrote….

yyyaaayyy🥳

Wao dear Lovely update