Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 94

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome update!

continue soon

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Nice update..
gud that Mayank consoled Nupur..
cont soon

Originally posted by: -Faria-

hey cascade
my sweetu- i totally loved this update..
hmmm ya at first i was angry on maaynk- but later got his point to support his mom
yup he was right- if he support then there would be chance of creating another misunderstanding b/w S.A and mayur...

he handled the situation nicely -though he hurt nups by not supporting her. par nups samjhdar ladki hai. jab maayank use samjhaya tab wo samajh gayi- veryyy cute...:D
i hope next time aisa kuch prob na ho. but it was the reality . aisa he hota hai har ghar ...and i m really very haoy that u've added such a realistic issue in ur f. hope u will add dome more issues in ur next part

hehehehehehe mayank caught sam- poor sam dating kar rahi thi wo bhi apni dad ki office i pass. koi saach kehta hai - pyar main sab buddhu ban jati hai..lol lol


i loved the whole part jana
it was fabulous update
keep it up

Note- mera OS ready kar samjhi???

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Fiza amazing update...

I am feeling bad for nupur..but what Mayank can do

he is helpless lol

but mayank's mom is just 😳

anyways cont soon

lovely update.

thnks aloot dear

Originally posted by: aancchal

nice update . mayank is right at his place and nupur at her place.

thnks aloot dear for liking it

Originally posted by: -moona-

Nupur is so understanding, i hope shilpa aunty will also show this side.

and Mayank handled this matter very well, bt still felt bad for Nupur.

yup yaar a girl needs to wht i belvie ese it her own realtion thts gonna sufer

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

A Brilliant Update Fiza...😳👏
Ahhh...mayank phas gaya...maa or biwi k beech...😆
well wo karey bhi tu kya karey...🤔
isn't it strange the parents who...make there children get married...n then life make situations like these...k a person have to choose...??
unfair...no...🤔
seriously choosing one is ...ahhh...BOTH r IMP...isn't it...!
well..leaving all that...i m feeling bad 4 both...they r Truley HELPLESS...
is case mein...parents(Shilpa aunty) Should be the one who should be made understood...

well a gr8 update...⭐️
continue soon...😳
i so want my ans...😆
i mean as how u make the situation...fine...n normal...😳
n as far as regarding the song...well...i guess ATIF ASLAM N HADIQA'S..MERAY ASS PASS😳
God bless...😳
Annu😃

Thnks aloot dear

Yup mayank phaass gaya

Yes the parent who chose the girl saying she is one in a million

Ask there son nt to like her, guard her..

Amzing stupidity it is

Yes so true

Wch situation… this…lol…I have seen many girls in my life in sasural, my sisters n all..n felt there are many othere way tht if u strt believing in them n accept it realistically tu u find thngs easy n normal to handle..rather thn being in a dream tht ur husband is gonna bring chocolates n flowers, n fill room with balloons to manofying u ..

Thnks for song

Ur vote taken

Thnku

HEY GUYS THANKS FOR UR LOVE AT PREVIOUS CHAP, UR VOTES FOR THE SONG HAS BEEN TAKEN, THNKS FOR THE HELP,

WASN'T PLANNING TO ADD A PART OF MAYANK NUPUR FIGHT DISCUION BUT DID SO, HOPE NOW U ALL FEEL A LITTLE MUCH MORE BETTER, PLUS, PLS SAJAN FANS, IM SORRY IF I HURT ANY OF U IN PROCESS OF MY STORY TELLING AS IT MOVE ON,RPLYD TO U ALL..

THKS LOV YA

Chapter: 24

Mayank: baba jani woh ek problem hai

MD: kiya ..phir se apki ami ny kuch kaha

Mayank: nhi woh actually Samrat shadi kerna chah rahy thy

MD: he chuckled..turning his face aging to his computer screen

Today mayank at his office lunch break, came to his dad's office to tell about gunjan and Samrat…

Woh tu buhat pehly se chah rahy hain …problem tu tab hoti jab woh nhi chah rhay hotay…

Mayank: problem yeah hai k unhony larki pasand kerli hai..

He looked at his surprise n question and mayank nooded his head in yes

MD: kiya…ap janty hai apki ami kasay react kerain gay…uff..larki kaun hai..un ko mana muskil hai …

Mayank: muskil hi nhi namumkin hai …

MD; matlab

Mayank: Samrat, faraz uncle ki beti Gunjun se shadi kerna chaty hai

MD: kiya….us k deemgh tu karab nhi hogya hai..un ki walida(mother) k mujaaz janty hain na woh, aur apni bhi phir bhi .

Mayank: baba mein ny un se baat ki thi per woh kafi ghussa horaha tha, ap janty hain a us k nature kasa hai, us ki marzi kk gilaaf baat hotu…aur is mamlay mein tu woh kuch zayada hi sanjeeda hai….nhi man rahy

MD: un se kahein phhir apni ami se khud baat kerain

Mayank: baba pls ap tu asay na react kerain, pls, dekhain humain aram se is baat koi handle kerna chaiy…warna asa na ho jazabaat mein Samrat koi kadam lay lay aur hum kahmaka beyizaat hoon.

MD: thik hai aj sham ko sab k samny yeah baat kertain hai…

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After dinner, Samrat was waving towards nupur to tell mayank to strt conversation, she was putting her hands in air , in she cant help, n Samrat was pressing his palm to pled her…

She sat beside shilpa, as now they were slightly talkng to each other.

Nupur: ami, apko nhi lagta ab Samrat ki shadi bhi kerni chahy…ab tu janab kahir se job per bhi hain

Mayank: wasy idea bora nhi hai…

SA: han per ko achi larki dekhtain , phir sohty hain..

MD: faraz ki beti k baray mein kiya khayal hai, achi hai, simple bhi..parhi likhi bhi…

SA: khabi nhi, faraz bhai ki beti k sath sath, woh ferdose ki beti bhi hai, aur mjhy islayn zara bhi bardasht nhi hai..

Mayank: ami wasy hai woh kafi sweet larki, ab zorri tu nhi jasi maa wasi beti…

SA: mein khabi bhi ferdose k ghar us k rishta mangny nhi jao gi…bs..aur is baray mein mjhy koi behass nhi chaahy..aur wasy bhi hum is baray mein baat hi kyun ker rahy hain

Samrat woh was listening all this was getting impatient and angry to and next wht came made him loss his control

SA: wasy bhi kuch ajeeb hi larki hai woh…asay baat kerti hai larko se chi….mjhy tu larkata k sath kafi chekar

Samrat: AMI….ap jab kisi ko janti nhi hain tu is k baray mein asa kasay kah sakti hai

SA: deemgh tu karab nhi hogay hai apk…kis tarha se baat ker rahi hain ap

Mayank: Samrat..he tried to control him but

Samrat: bhai ek min, bhabi ko koi kuch bhi kahy yeah apko bardasht hoga mjhy nhi, apko ami k izaat un ki izaat se zayada payri hogi, halaky ap k kam hai is ki hifazat kerna…but mein asa kuch nhi bardasht kero ga….

SA: yeah hokiy araha hai…

Samrat: ami…mjhy gunjan pasand hai aur mein us hi se shadi kero ga, apko acha laga ya bora, ap khud yeah rishta mang lay warna meray pass aur bhi rasty hain..

Nupur: Samrat…..saying so he left for his room…..samrat….

Ami ap arm se bahtin, woh na smahj hai islayn itna ghusa hogaya..

SA: had hoti hai kisi baat ki, aj tak mayank tu kiya apny bhi mjhy se asay baat nhi ki, aur jo larki abhi aai nhi yeah us k liyan asay baat ker raha hai…

Mayank: ami is mamaly(matter) mein ap ko buhat dandhy(cool head) deemgh se sochna paray ga, warna ap Samrat ko janti hain, woh buhat ziddi hain….

SA: tu ap kiya chatin hai, hum ferdose k gahr jay..

Mayank: aur gar Samrat khud shadi ker k ly aya tu, apkya samhj rahin hai, mein ny nupur ny us ko smahjny ki khoshish nhi ki, buhat ki hai, magar woh kuch suna nhi chata…

SA: tu hum bhi kuch suna nhi chaty….ap logo ko jana hai tu jay un k ghar, mein nhi jao gi….khabi nhi..

Nupur and mayank looked at each other disappointed….n stod up to walk in there room, reaching near door

Nupur: hum Samrat ko dekh ker atay hain

Mayank: hmm…

Knock..

Samrat…..

Samrat: aay bhabi…..mein tumhain bad mein call kerta hoon…bye..

Ji …

Nupur: behatoo….…dekho Samrat

Samrat: bhabi mein apny fasal se pechay nhi hatho ga….

Nupur: mein ny kab kaha ap hatin… han….dekho Samrat her baat k ek tareeka hota hai, ap agar yeah baat pyar se kertay tu, zayada acha nhi hota…

Samrat: ap ny dekha tha ami gunjan k baray mein kiya kaha rahin thi….yeah kaun sa tareeka hai baat kerny ka

Nupur: hum jantein hain galta hai, per acha ab ap humari baat sunay, as ami khbai gunjan k gahr nhi jay gai…ap jay ami k pass aur un se maafi mangy…aur pyar se un se kahin k yeah apki khushi hai tu kiya woh is mein shamil nhi hongi..in se pyar se request kerin, asa ap gunjan k any se pehly hi, ami k dil mein un k gilaf jazabaat baida ker dain gay….

Samrat: bhabi …humain kuch samhj nhi araha..

Nupur: relaz arm se, dekho asay baat kero ja ker abhi, baqi mein aur bhai sambhal lay gai…jao shabsh

Samrat: thnks bhabi..

Nupur: aur han abhi gunjna ko ghar mein job hi horaha hai na bato, us k dil bora hojay gay hum sab se, woh aay gi tum apni jaga bana lay gi …thik hai..

Samrat: hm..thik hai…lov ya bhabi

Nupur: jhota….pyar kisi aur se iqrar kisi aur se haan..

The both giigle….n nupur came back in her room, it was dark so she though mayank is off to sleep, she went to change cuming back she went to close terrace door, but she found mayank standing there…

Nupur: kiya hua ap yaha kyun kharay hain

Mayank: Samrat se baat hogai

Nupur: han, ami se maafi mangny k liya razi tu hogaya hai, dekho bus ab ami bhi apni zidd chor dain tu thik hai….

Mayank: hmm

Nupur: chalin so jay…she was abt to leave whn she found her hand in his grip….

Mayank: Samrat shyad sahi kaha raha tha….

Nupur: kiya…she ask questionlly

Mayank: aj agar gunjan samny hoti tu, us say yeah dekh ker acha lagata k samrat ny us ki izaaat ki hifazat ki us k ghar walo k samny , jo hum nhi ker paya , hai na….

He looked at her in full guilt, and then whn she realize tht he was in such deep thought regarding this..

Nupur: mayank…yeah ap kiya kaha rahy hain….

Mayank: aj office mein humari baba se baat hoi thi nupur, mjhy sab pata hai….per hum kiya kerain hum ami se asy baat nhi ker pata…humain sach mein buhat bora laga, aur humain yeah bhi pata hai k ap ko kitna bora laga hoga, us waqt ap ny jab humari taraf dekha tha tu apko kitni umeed hogi hum se, aur hum ny tu complete opposite kiya….

Nupur: bus mayank….hum manty hain hum buhat hurt hoay thy, per ap se nhi ami se, han hum ny umeed bhi ki thi k ap humara sath dain ga, per ap ny thik kiya, aj jo smarat ny kiya us k baad apki baat hum ab samhj aai, hum ny khud dekh unhony gunjan k baray mein kiya socha….she placed her palm on his cheek…

Mayank ap ny jo kuch kiya thik kiya, aur sach mein humain bhi acha nhi lagay ga k ap ami se is taraha se baat kerain, agar ap humari ami se asay baat kerin gay tu humain acha lagay ga kiya…..

Maa baab chay galaty ho ya sahi, un se baat kerny k yeah koi tareeqa nhi un ko pyar se bhi samhjayaja sakta hai…

Pls….ap ny jo kuch kiya thik kiya….aur ab is baat ko bhol jay…

He looked at her with all the respect and love wch evry time, increase with her evry gesture…he took her hand from his cheeked n press it aginst his lips…..n hugged her tight…

Mayank: thanks….

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SA: nupur ap aur mayank aj gunjan k ghar chaly jay….

Nupur: ami aur ap…

SA: hum nhi jay gay….abhi tu khabi nhi

Nupur: ami pls…hum ny wasy bhi rishta day ker hi ana hai…bad mein khabi tu samna kerna pary ga..dosara woh apni beti k hath bhi majboor hi hongay, tu apki ana aur izzat koi this nhi pochy gi…..pls..bad mein ap kabhi na ja ker jay gi tu zayada bora lagy ga…ap ko…..

SA: kitni be -izaati hai humari,

Nupur: yeah na sochain ap…acha sochy …larki achi ho..

SA: beta larki ko hum bachpan se janty hain….woh kisi k lihaz nhi keray gi….mera apka kisi ka nahi….

Nupur: ami apanay ghar mein sab asay hi hotay hain, sasural mein sab thik hojatain hai…..ap pls humaray liyan sath chalein, baat maat kerain us se ….

…..

The went to Gunjans house and was ascorted very respectifully, mayank at last moment was not able to accompany them as he recived an urgent call from office…

SA did'nt talk much but gunjan was preety much comfortable talking with nupur and all, and that was not so appreciaited by SA

Nupur: gunjan beta control kero..

Gunjna: kya bhabi..

Nupur: apni khushi….she chukled…thora sharamo, ghabaro, yeah khusi mein ujhalan band kero

Gunjan: kyun hitler ko bora lagy ga…

Nupur: gunjna..maar lagay gi….wasy tum Samrat se shadi per itna ujhal rahi hoo….had hai…aur kiya kya soch ker iti khush hoo

Gunjna: bhabi….ap bhi na..wasy ap kiya kya soch rahi hai..ap tu full on experienced hai…bhai buhat romantic hai kiya..wasy llagtay nhi hai

Nupur: gunjna hum khosih ker rahin k ap sharmein, liking yaha tu humain blush ker rahin hai..

Gunjan: bhabi pls batao na…bhabi kasay hain

Nupur: khyun batao

Gunjan: hay Allah kiya itna cesnore kerna paray ga…

With tht the both laughed trying to control the voice….n SA shock her head looking at gunjan ..

With request of nupur shilpa went there, n wedding was fixed ASAP, the whole arrangement was done with gunjan along and involved, even dresses were of her choice, shilpa was angry on tht, but she has no other way to.

Samrat was not listening to her, saying she needs to wear it, so she should decide, nupur do control him a lot..but yet..it was a complete contradiction to mayank nupur weding…where they followed each n evry ritual there parents decided, plus add there tinch and there ways but did nthing tht will make there elders anyoed….

i loved it...😃

so sweet. I love mayur convo