Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago

chp on pg 49:

ah mazing
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...
pls add me 2 ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello guys

Thnku so much for the love…as promised it's a longer one…n quicker too

As two updates in a wk ….so the next may or may not b delayed…I cant promise

I hope u enjoy….

Am nt turning lazy ..but kind of I am tht I am not rplying…but will do it now…as apparently things here seems to be now movng smooth….

Lov ya all…

N ya remember me in ur prayers, Shab-e-braat Mubarak…may Allah bless u all n showers his all rehamts n protect us from all eveil….Ameen

Fiza
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 10

She didn't find any way out of this problem its better to talk to him…opening the email ..she followed the link n download messenger n accepted his request…he was already online…

Mayank: Nupur …kasi hain ap

The thing she was finding very easy was now sumhow seems to b very difficult..seems like he is sitting in front of him n talking n now its so difficult to talk with him openly the way she use to do in email….her hands were shivering ..n she can't be spontaneous …she need to be clam…

Mayank: Nupur r u there

Nupur: ji

Mayank: ab kahein….kya kahna chati thi ap

Oki now my reveling the mystery..though almost evry one got it

Flashback

SA: furniture tu waha se aay ga

Mayank: ami nhi…waha se kuch nhi aay ga….yeah hum ap se pehly bhi kah jukay hain aur is baray mein aur koi behas(argument) humain nhi suni….aur hum dadu se khud baat kerly ga…..

SA: rasam hai Mayank

Mayank: asi rasamein(rituals) hum nhi mantay ….furniture change hojay ga aur agar interior kerna hai tu woh hum soch ker ap ko bata dain ga….baqi aur tu kuch nhi hai na

SA: ek wardrobe bhi bana ni hai…Nupur k kampray(things) kaha rukho gay..us k ghar se ata tu woh waha rukh ti….

Mayank: acha sab ban jay ga

Saving so he left to his room with a bit anger at his mom….he hates this concept of jAHAIZ n he said way before whn his wedding talks were going on tht he is not gonna take anything…..

Taking his phone he dail nupur's house no. as he knew her mother wil never say tht to them…..after logo k samany izaat k sawal hai …sab dekhty hai k kya mila…kya diya….

Flashbac end

Mayank: kya ap ko bhi humara asa kerna galat lagta hai

Nupur: baat woh nhi hai per dekhy

Mayank: han ya na nupur

Nupur: dekhian yeah rasm hai ..aur zaroori(necessary) bhi

Mayank: kya yeah rasma ap ko thik lagti hai …..

Nupur: kuch cheezay kerni hoti hai

Mayank: Nupur han ya na…..ap ko sahi lagta hai humara fasla ya nhi

U agree with my decision or nt

Nupur: ap samhj

Mayank: han ya na

Nupur: han per…yeah sahi nhi hai

Mayank: he chuckled ….ap ko humara fasal sahi bhi lagata hai aur galat bhi

Nupur: dekhain ..ghar walo ki kuch khawaishat (dreams, willingness, ejahain) hoti hai….woh apni beti ki buaht kuch dayna chaty hain

(thy wnt to give tht to there daughter)

Mayank: galat…yeah sirf dekhawa(show off) hai aur kuch nhi…hum yeah dekhtay hain k hum kitnay ameer hain aur kiya kiya day saktay hain …is lyan hum woh sab kuch daytay hain….

Nupur: per asa kerna perta hai loog baatein kertay hain

Mayank: ap tu kahti thi ap ko logo ki parwa nhi…aur agr ap ko humari ami ki fikar hai …tu bad mein yeah sab hum khud sambhalein(handle) gay…bs ap yeah bata dain k ap ko mera fasal sahi laga k nhi…..hum sirf ap ki ray jan chaty hain…

(u said u don't care abt wht people say ..n if ur worries abt my mom thn handling her after wedding is my work…I just want to know how u felt)

Taking a deep breath ..she just looked at the conversation…she so knew tht what he has done made her respect n fall for him once again….this sumthng she hates abt marriage n he removed it even without being asked by her..

Mayank: aj khamsoshi se kam nhi chaly ga…..humain ap k alfaz chaiy

(today I want to know ur words…ur silence will nt work)

Nupur: humain buhat acha laga…..thnku…humain itni ehimiayat(importance) dayny k lyan jo shayd hum deserve bhi nhi kertay….

Mayank;he grinned widely at first n thn a frown appears….nupur…aj kah diya hai ainda nhi kahaiy ga…hum buhat possessive insaan hain…aur hum se jhoray kisi insaan ko apko naliyaaq kahny k haq nhi ..

(im a very possivessive person so u don't dare to say anything against the person tht belongs to me)

She laughed …

Nupur: mein ny khud ko nalayaaq(useless) nhi kaha

Mayank: acha…tu hum se jhora hua tu kaha…(thn u accept u belong to me)….he was smirking

She couldn't help but smiled n bited her lip…she was blushing …..n couldn't know wht to say

Nupur: ap thak gay hon gay rest kerlay

Mayank: lo…ab tu hum ny asaal mein baat kerna shooro ki thi aur ap bhag gai….acha nhi kerta ap ko tang….nupur kya hum asay baat ker sakty hain

Nupur: bulkil nhi (absolutely no)

Mayank: Nupur pls…woh kuch cheesy set kerni hai na..tu asan rahy ga

Nupur: no…no way…she was misheaviouly nodding her head

Mayank: Nupur….plsss

Nupur: socho gi…

Mayank: thik hai ..tu kal baat kertay hain….jab hum office se aay gay tu ap ko bata day gay…jab ap free hoon tu huamin email kerday na ..hum online aay gay….

Nupur: mein ny kaha socho gi

Mayank: ha tu mein ny kaha saochy ..jawab bs han hona chaiy…

Allah hafiz…

Gud night

Nupur: allah hafiz..takecare

Mayank: aur han ..fikar nhi kerna …hum sab ko smbhal lay ga…shoro mein sab ki kuch ajeeb lagy ga….naya naya hai sab islayn ..per sab settle hojay gay…mein adi se baat kerlo ga tu woh diya se aur woh anty ko smahja day ga….thik hai..n have a very Good night 😊

(don't worry it will be fine …strt mein ..evry1 will feel odd but thn it wills settle)

Nupur: thik hai….

Mayank: she as typing…. thnks nhi pls

She chuckled n hit backspace to remove thnks…..bye….

Bye

Sunay..u there

Mayank: sunay…he was smiling at tht …suany…ji bolain..hum tu yahin hain

Nupur: ap ny dadu se yeah kyun kaha k shadi hogi tu asay hi warna ….she didn't wan to complete

Mayank: Nupur….kya ap ko lagta hai hum ny asa kuch kahao hoga…yaah ker saktay hain

Nupur: nhi..per

Mayank: smiled….khuda gawa hai hum ny asa kuch nhi kaha….bs yeah kaha tha k hum chaty hain shadi asay hi hoo bs….

Nupur: oh…soory

Mayank: wasy ap is kayal mein bhi nhi rahy k ap k pass hum se faraar(escape) k koi rassta hai(way )

Nupur: hum asa koi rassata talash bhi nhi ker rahy( im nt finding such wa)

Mayank: tu phir kaun sa raasta talash ker rahin hain ap….

Nupur: good night….

Ahhh haa…nupurr…

Mayank: bhag layin jitna bhag na hai bhag lay….ek din pakray gay ap ko..phir bhag ker dekhaiy ga….goood night

Run how long u will..one day I'll catch u …thn tht day ..i'll see how u will run away

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Adi: had hai ap logo ki…..yeah tu hum ny pehly hi bata diya tha k woh asa hi hai…..phir kyun behas

Diya: khaty tu sab adi per amal(implement) kaun kerta hai….dekho Nupur se kiya khata hai woh…….

Lo Nupur k phone

Adi: khamsohi se speaker per dalin…mayank ke tang kechay gay hum phir….

Diya: ji Nupur kiya hua

Nupur: api woh nhi many….aur woh galat bhi tu nhi hain….

Diya: aur un ki ami

Nupur: woh kah rahy thy woh khud sambhal lay gay…….

Diya: thik hai……aur kiya bool rahy thy…

Nupur: kuch nhi..she said abruptly

Diya: na bato…asi baatein bhi kertay hain

Nupur: apiii………

Diya: acha kal hum arahy hain….ami ap aur hum bazaar chalein gay…jewllwery aur ap k sasural walo k liyan pehnaniya( they r gifts given to in laws individuallly) layny…thik hai…chahy tu UN se pooch lay kiya kiya pasand hai un k gahr waloo ko…..

Aur han Mayank k lyan bhi kuch kapray layna hain….un ki pasand tu ap ko pata hi hogi

Nupur: ji humain pata hai…allah hafiz ap ab chay …adi bhai intezar ker rahy hongay haina

Diya: nupurrr…..ap k waqt bhi kareeb hi hai soch lo…

She put the phone n was going away ….

Adi: ap kaha ja rahi hain…humari saali ko pata hai k hum ap k intezar ker rahy hain…..aur ap hain k ….

Diya: adii…..

Adi: maafi chaty hain…is ghusatki k lyan….saying so he pulled her to himself…….

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SA: aj laga raha hai ek beti honi chaiy thi…ap logo koi feikar bhi hai…..koi taiyari (preparation)ho hi nhi rahi hai

Mayank: ami itny tu kapray thy us din jab hum ghar mein aay tu…aur ap kaha rahi hain tayari (preparation) nhi hoi…

MD: beta sahi kah rahi hai ami……venue book kerana zaroori hai…phir apny matlab k nhi milay ga….aur ap k room mein kam shoro keradain 1 mth tu us mein lag jay ga…..

SA; aur sab se bhar ker shadi aur vilma k jhora abhi tak nhi book hua….designer ko time lagay ga…..ap kab chal rahy hain humary sath

Mayank: hum shoping per

Smarat: shadi k side effect no1 ….shoping woh bhi larkiyoon ki…addat dalin bhia…ap life time yeah hi kerna hai….

Mayank: mai samrat ko lay jay

Samrat: no way

SA: Mayank ap ki shadi hai

Mayank: tu mein ny thori behnana hai …mein kiya kero ga

SA: jis ny pehana hai us k ghar waly nhi jany day gay akelay humary sath

Mayank: kyun

Samrat: un ko shaq hai ap chori chupay un se mil lay gay….

Mayank: mazarat(sorry) ka sath per yeah dadu na…

Samrat: poray hitler hai ……

SA: tu ap chal rahy hain ya nhi…..warna hum akelay hi chaly jay…Nupur se pocha kasa chaiy tu bolti hai jasa p thik samhjay….

Mayank: thik hai hum chaly gay….per Saturday ko not in weekdays pls…

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Addab

Nupur maaffi chaty hain last email mein humain shayad kuch zayda hi khusa agaya tha. Hum asay hi hain. Bs ek request hai. Jab bhi hum ghusay mein hoon pls thori dair k lyan hum ya tu akela chor dayin ya kcuh na bolain….muskil hai hum jantay hai…per samny se jab sab behass ker rahy hotay hain tu humain aur ghusaa ata hai…..mein dara nhi rah hoon…wasy aasa buuhat kam hota hai…

Aj muday ( reson of talk) ke baat…soch ker arm se …search ker k beshak design keray..humin 2 din mein batay ab ko humari shadi per kiya pehna hai…..ap ko apni shadi mein shayad humari ami ki pasand qabool (accept) hoo per hum apni shadi per chaty hain …humari biwi ap ki pasand k jhora pehnay…tu bina kis taqalfu k(hestitaion) …humain batain…colours..aur jo kuch hota hai…kyun smahjny mein humain bhi waqt lagay ga..lol

Aj email ker raha hoon is k hargiz(doent mean) yeah matlab nhi k chat k chat wal idea humny jany diya hai…

Good night

Mayank..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awww I loved ad respect myank

He is a nice guy.. he doesn't want any dowry from nupur…. Wah wah mayank- great…

I loved Mayur convo …….. hehehehe I was laughing when nupur called him suniye…. And mayank replied ji boliye………… so cute na……. they r very cute, nice nad adorable couple………

Loved the whole update

Beautifully written fiza

Ab hum mayur shadi k liye bechain hai. Jaldi shaadi karwa do…

Do cont. it-

take care

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love how slowly they are understanding each other
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mayank is not like others, love him and their chat was awesome. bht acha or dil ko cho jane wala part tha Fiza ji and Shab e barat mubarak to u too..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
ya ALLAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plzzz API maat jao plzzz
apko nehi pata mein har roz wait karti hoon apke update ka
agar aap chali gayi to kya hoga plzzz mat jao...
u know na dat i loved all ur ff os
plzzz u know dat na ke hw much i love " Walking wid you"

plzzz mat jao agar ye ff adhori reh gayi to mujhe sabse jyada dukh hoga plzzz

mein sach bol rahi hoon apko plzzz isse adhura na choriye plzzz
hamari ye 1 req rakh lijiye plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update Fiza
wonderful how they understand each other
n mayu one in a million
in this story u created verry sweet person as mayu
Fiza take ur time n thanks for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful. Mayank is the best

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