Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 3

it seems really interesting n i would love to read in urdu

congrats Fiza.

nice concept dear....i prefer arranged marriages over love marriages so i am loving concept
Urdu might be a bit difficult for me ,but if you would use simpler words then it's okay ...cont soon
thanks for the pm

Fizaaaaa

another story wow

loved d concept n cs

n abt Urdu....I understood wht Eva u wrote in d note

n even in future if I won't understand I will ask u

cont soooonnn

Salam n Hello Guys

CHAPTER:1

Lying on the bed ..a girl in his mid 20s was figuring out her fate changes...nervous. feared...fear of the up coming future....nervousness of stepping into unknown.....n a bit disappointed too.....doing so much in life she find herself completely worthless .....whn her love ones say tht she hasn't find the real place of her in her life.....

She has turn 25 ...bs ab is ki shadi hojani chaiy .....

kya baat hai....kya rishty nhi atay

itna parh jo liya hai...demagh hogya...

bs kya keray jo Allah k manzoor....

sumwhere compelled to believe tht a girl has no value of her credentials....her only credentials are her husband ..n happy saural n children.....

she laughed pitifully ...but never in life she has taken all this to her mind ....never get influenced by all this ....she has achieved wht she want to ....despite of living in higly conservative muslim family.....a joint family ....where all decision are taken my her grand father ...dadu.....

but today the reality has struck her hard......her snap has been send to the matrimony woman...again a process she hates ...if they think ths it is fate to have sum1 as life partner…..thn why to make a girl mere thing ......

diya: kya hua apko...kya soch rahin hai ap

Nupur: api humain yeah sab kuch acha nhi lagta

diya: humain pata hai ....dkho nupur yeah zindagi k hissa hai ......aur is mein galat kya hai

nupur: kyun is mein sahi kiya hai......hum kasy

diya: she laughed...abhi koi dkhny araha ha kiya..kyun itna pareshan horahi hai.....dua kero k ek hi aay aur woh hi sab se acha aur tumhara ho.....

nupur: hmm ...tumhara waqt yadd kerti hoo tu ...ya allah

diya: 18 times...uff aur phir dadu ke baatein....aur tu mjhy itna support kerti thi ab khud kya hoa...aur dkho aj who sab bemani(meaningles) lagta hai ....jab khud ko in k sath dekhti hoo

nupur: uff api yeah tumhara in aur un.....naam na lya na ...sahi khaty hain bhaiya....hotoh (lips) per khabi in k mera nam tu aay ...she laughed

diya: tum aur tumhary bhiya....meray smany baray shair ban tay hoo....dadu k samny ban ker dekho na.....

nupur: batmez larki apny dada k bary mein kasi baatein kerti hoo

the bth share a true laughter

kya baat hei humari betiyan tu bari khush hain

nupur: ayy ami ap k saure k nakal uatar rahii thy

zeenat: (nupur's mom): nupur ...buhat bori baat hai ...bary hain woh ap se, acha hi sochty hai woh ap k lyan ....was hi aj woh buhat khush hian

nupur: kyun

zeenat: kal ap ko koi dkh ny arha hai

nupur: kya she stood up...ami pr

zeenat: par kya...achay llog hain. ....larka parha likha hai...khandan bhi acha hai....

diya: ami kaun kaun a rah hai...

zenat: un k waaldaa(mther) aur shayd ko anty ....

nupur: hum koi tray nhi lay ker jay ga..pls....

thy bth laughed

diya: acha baba mein practice mein hoon ...mein lay jao gi bs

nupur: aur larka

zeenat: nupur ap ko pata hai na....baba jani ko yeah sab nhi pasand ....khoshish kero gi ...agr taseveer mil jay tu ...per vaada nhi kerti....ab taiyar hojaiy ha ...kal magrib k bad( evening) mein woh loog aay gay

nupur: jee

she left

kya pehano gi tum

nupur tension na looo

nupur: khud k waqt nikal gaya tu bol rahi hooo....pata nnhi kasa hoga....aur kya sochy gay....kuch parha likha bhi hai ya nhi....atleast master hon chaiay ..pehlay hi bata rahin hoon...

diya: uff....yeah larki....

zeenat: diya adihraj agay hain

diya : ji...she covered her head n so as nupur

nupur: salam bhai

adiraj: walikum aslam....kasi hain ap

nupur" zinda

zeenat: nupur

ahiraj: hooo ohhh..bechar woh us ko tu pata bhi nhi k woh zinda bachy ga k nhi

nupur: matlab ap ko bhi pata hai

adhiraj: bilkul...us ka interview nhi looga kiya kal....meri itni pyari saali k life k sawal hai

nupur:i so love u bhiya

zeenat: nupur...she shouted

adhiraj: ami behan hai meri ....kya nhi kah sakti

she came close to adhiraj

nupur: bhai...pls us ke date of brth pocha takay…. age per jhot na bolo....he smiled. Dadu tu 35 yrs k bandy se bi kerday ga…...aur pls us ko zara acha se dkh layna...mein bs ap per is baat per bharossa ker sakti hoo

he put his hand on her head.....dont worry ..hum sab dekh lay ga....wasy jaha tak hum ny mallom kiya hai...acha larka hai...

nupur: insaan hon chiay ...parha likha ho....taleem yafta nhi....aur sahi insaan maslihatan na hoon...

meaning

he shud be a human nt a social animal.....educated nt just a degree holder....n a gud human nt becuse he nevr get a chnce to do sumthing xyz,.,.but he believe its wrong thst why

adhiraj: ji hazoor...chaly diya

diya: jee...

adhiraj: khuda hafiz....

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adhiraj: ap kyun pareshan ...

diya: larki k kya hoga...asay rahy gi sausral mein

ahdiraj: hmm..hojay gi thik.....jab zeemdari parhy gi tu kerlay gi handle....tum ny bhi tu ki

diya: humari baat alag hai..ap k supprt tha

adhiraj: hay allah....aj meri biwi ny meri trareff....kya baat hai

diya adii...ap aur ap ki saali ...khbi nhi sudhar saktay ...bs khuda keray us k koi khauf sach na hooo ( khauf= fear)

adiraj: inshaALLAh asa hi hoaga....

Chapter :2

rs



here i am............

gr8 staart.best thg was tht it was so close to reality.......

u defined muslim community very well..........

it seems really interesting...........

love ya..........ab ghussa na kerna mjh masoom pai..................

awesome start dear.....eventhough i have not seen a very conservative muslim family.................but i do have muslim friends......it was lil difficult me to understand the convo.....but smehow understud it...

very nice chapter fiza....