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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys

This chapter has cum early within 4 days so next can be delayed, this because of suja, who wants an update before going back home

N bst of luck faru..missing ya too much

A VER HAPPY NAVRATARI TO ALL OF U N BST WISHES FOR DURGA POJA AS WEE
im loving the fact tht first time in this ff evry one is mad at mayank , loving it…

Rplyd to u all

Thnks for loving chapt n nt loving mayank lol

Tc

Fiza

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 23

Nupur: ami pls….she said sternly a bit raised of tone to

Mayank: nupur…..he shouted as he entered the house..n his eyes depicting too much of anger….

Yeah kaun sa tareeka hai ami se baat kernay ka…..

The tears whch she was holding finally made there way out as she looked at him shocked, when she found him entering she thought he will support her but thngs are not always the way u expected…

Nupur: mayank mein

SA: han han bolo…aur yeah tu sab se acha hai rooh , apny shoor se kaho mein hi galat hoon, buhat bora bhala kaha mein ny

Mayank: ami ap asa kyun kah rahi hain hoa kiya hai…

SA: pocho apni biwi se abhi tu buhat zaban chal rahi thi , mjhy tu chup keradiya ….ab bolay na…

Nupur: soory ami ap se is tarha baat kerny k lyan ..humain kuch nhi kahna….she rashed from there wiping her tears off…

He tried to stop her ….

SA: wah mjhy tu buhat masoom larki lagti thi, per nhi buhat hi jalak hai, shoor(hubby) k samny seedha ban gai ….jasy sara qasoor( fault) mera hoo…

Mayank: ami ap tu arm se rahin

SA: han mein hi aram se rahoon bhi…

Mayank: us ny maafi mangi na….ap kyun apni tabiyaat karab ker rahin hai…ghusay mein us ny boldiya….maafi bhi mang li ab baat yahin khatam kerain….pls…ap bari hain …ap sambhal layn…us ko mein dekhta hoon….

SA:koi ehassan nhi kiya maafi mang ker….achi bani woh ap k samnay…. us se kah do aianda mjh se asay baat kerny ki zuraat na keray samhji….ghar walo ny pata nhi kiya seekhya hai…gaz bhar ki zaban hai…aur umeed bhi nhi rekhna k mein us se baat kero gi

(tell her don't she dare talk to me like tht agin, god knows wht has been taught by her family, donot even think im gonna talk to her)

Saying so she left to her room..

MF: mayank zara idhar aay study mein….

Mayank: ji baba

MF: nupur ki galti nhi thi beta..apki ma any kuch zayada hi bol diya…..

Mayank: sigh he set beside him ….tu kiya kero aagr is waqt nupur k sath dayta tu hungma hojta….ami k kiya kero….aur agr nupur se pochta k kiya hua hai, tu ami aur naraz hoti , ami se pochta tu woh nupur ki hi borai kertin

MF: hmm…ap apni biwi ko sumbhalin mein apni….jay..

Moving inside his room, he heard her weak sobs, in balcony…he felt guilty …feeling his presence around she turn n went near him..

Nupur: ap change kerlain hum chay la tay hain…..she said plainly without looking at him….

She was moving away when he grip her hand….

Mayank: nupur…pls…

Nupur: mayank pls huamin jany dain…

Eh grip her from shoulder n make her sat on sofa…n set beside her on carpet….holding her hand in his…

Mayank: I am sorry…

Nupur: mayank pls…galti meri thi tu ap kyun sorry mang rahy hain, ap kahin tu mein dobara ja ker mang loo….her voice was showing to much of hurt, n it was getting more n more difult for him

Mayank: humain pata hai k ap ki galti nhi thi nupur…per ap khud dekhain …mjhy nhi pata k kay hua tha…he was cut inbetween…

Nupur: jab kuch nhi pata tha tu phir humain kasoor war kyun dhairaya …

(y u blamed me for all tht , whn u knew nthing)

Mayank: hum apko kasur war nhi dhaira rahy hain….nupur..ap is tarha se ami se baat kerain gi hum ny nhi socha tha bus tu

Nupur: aur ami bhi humarai ami k baray mein asa kuch kahin gi hum ny nhi socha tha…mayank ap ami ya yaha koi bhi humain chhay jo kuch kahay but meri ami ko …hum se bardasht nhi hoga..na aj na khabi, chahy woh ap hi kyun na hoo

Mayank:hum khabi asa kernay ki soch bhi nhi sakhtay… hum jantay hain ami ny ..aur us k liyan hum ap se maafi mangaty hai..…us waqt agar hum ami k sath nhi daytay tu baat buhat agy nikal jati …hum ami ko chup kerny k lyan tu nhi kahtay ..kya kah saktay thy…

She nooded in no…

Acha rooh tu maat plss…he tried to wipe off her tear but she moved a bit back…n he looked at her helplessly ...i know mjhy ap k sath dayna chaiy tha, per mjhy us waqt baat samhal ny k lyan yahi sahi laga….kyun k kahin na kahin humain yeah pata tha k hum ap ko tu samhja lay gay per agar ami k jaga apki baat k favour kiya tu ami k dil mein apki hi borai bhary gi….hum betay hain chay kuch bhi kaha layn kuch nhi hota …..per ap bahu hain….betay k uper jado kerdiya…yeah bolti na ami…..

She was sumhow getting his point but still

I m really sorry humain ap se aasy bat nhi kerni chaiy thi…I know…I m sorry pls…maat rooh….

Nupur: its ok….

Mayank: pakka..ap asay hi tu nhi kah rahi na…

Nupur: nhi,….

Mayank: thnks.thnkuu…he kissed her hand in his hold…abhi ami se baat nhi kerna …baba khud kerain gay….

Nupur: baba kyun…

Mayank: kyun baba apni biwi ko chup kera saktain hain…he said smilingly…

Nupur: hmm….ap fresh hojain hum atay hain…aur ap nechay se tu uthain…

She was abt to stand up when he pulled her down

Mayank: nupur sach mein na….humain pata hai ap k dil dhuka hai in sab mein

Nupur: she smiled…han….

He moved forward n hugged her..moving away he kissed her forhead..thnku…

She went down n made tea, turning to stove she closed her eyes to relax n calm her nerves, wch were still to angry though sumhow she was convinced with his words but still, mayank righly said it hurted a loot….. and thn smarat entered the kitchen

Samrat: yeah kaun sa tareeqa hi bhabi apko bolo na chiay tha, aur bhai ko bhi jawab dayna chiay tha…koi kuch bhi bolay ga kiya

Nupur: Samrat….galat baat hai…asay nhi kahaty …ap se bahrain hain woh log…..bhai sirf baat smbhal rahy thy…aur ap nhi bolain gay is baat mein…

Samrat: kyun

Nupur; Samrat ghar hai…asa hota hai…per baat bharaty nhi hai….

Mayank: mr samrat ahmed…ap tu zara mjhy se baat kerain

Mayank came down just to check whether she is alright or not, not crying cause still he dint knew wht was actually the matter….plus so easily she acceptance his sorry…he knew she was hurt and plus the way baba told him tht it wasn't her fault , n his mom said sumthng abt her parents, he knew he need to do much more thtn a sorry to truly form her heart get back things

They both turned around in a surprise whn thy saw him with his arms cross around his chest

Samrat: bhai…mein ny sahi kiya tha…agar bhabi aur ami ny nhi rukha hota tu mein bata ta

Nupur: Samrat…hum ny kaha na stay out of it…..

Mayank: ap aj dobhar mein kaha thy

With this samrat's face went pale…n he gulp down…

Samrat: kaha thy matlab woh

Mayank: kaha thy matlab kaha thy….

Samrat: bhai woh…hum …lunch per

Nupur was with surprise watching both of brother

Mayank: lunch per ksi k sath thy…

With th he stod with his head bowed down….

Sir jhuka ny se kuch nhi hoga….kaun hai woh…time pass

Samrat: nhi bhai we r dam serious….he said in ago n thn abite his lip…

Nupur: yeah ho kiya raha hai..mjhy koi batay ga

Mayank: ap ko kiya lagta hai….he said looking intently at him…

Nupur: Samrat are u seeing sum1..she almost shouted in surprise…

Mayank: yes…

Samrat: bhai hum ap k kamray mein baat ker sakty hain pls….ami mjhy qatal kerdain gi….

Nupur: no way mein qatal hojao gi

Samrat: tu bahr jaltay hain…

Mayank: tu mein mar jao ga…biwi ko many k lyan bahr lay ker gay…

Nupur: yahin baat kero ….

MF: Samrat…

Samrat/nupur: mar gay

Mayank: buhat acha hua…baba k office k samny waly restaurant mein date per thy janab

Nupur: KYA….pagal ho kiya…thori aqal hai

Ab jao…maar kaho

MF: Samrat..mein aur apki ami zara khala k yaha ja rahy hain..

With th mayank suppress his smile

Samrat: oki…hum k dinner per wait nhi kerain ga..Allah hafiz

Kya yaar bhabi ..baba ko ami ko many k layn bahar jan para…uff….

Mayank: becahry shoor….huh…he took deep breth throwing himself on sofa in lounge

Nupur: rahny dain koi shoor bechara nhi hota…aur ap ..mjhy nhi abtay…samrat ap ny mjhy nhi batay…mein ny us din pocha bhi tha..mjhy tu sahdi se hi shak tha

Mayank: matlab woh shadi mein bhi aai thi…he was in shock

Nupur: han gunjan tu mehndi mein bhi aii thi….

Samara smile sheepishly ….

Mayank: apko nam bhi pata hai…samrat…kaun hai woh…sharafat se batein aur yeah kiya tareqa hai resturnet mein milny ka…yeah koi achi baat hai….

Samrat: I know bhaiya… mein aj tak nhi mila aur yeah bhi completely by chnce tha, us ki car karab hogai thi aur mein wahin tha tu hum waha car thik hony k wait ker rahy thy…

Nupur: uffu hero…

Samrat: bhabiii

Mayank: phir bhi restaurant t ki choice tu kam se kam thik rekhty ….

Aur hai kaun woh

Samrat: faraz uncle ki beti hai, gunjan..meray sath cologe mein parhti thi..n bs woh

Nupur: hay hay kitna shram ati hai…wah wah….

Mayank: faraz uncle…faraz uncle..samrat tum pagal hogay ho

Nupur: kyun…

Mayank: faraz uncle ki wife mama ki frnd hoti thi..ami jan k sath un k kafi bara kalash hoa tha….aur ap ko un ki beti pasand agai …

Nupur: KYA….samrat…

Samrat: ab yeah tu nhi socha tha na …bhai aur woh baat buhat porani hogai…ab tu baba bhi un k sath kam kertain hai…woh humary client bhi hain….tu kiya

Mayank: tu kiya….

Nupur: aur ami se kiya kahy gay

Mayank: ap achy se janty hain ami ko kitni mohababt hai na love marriage se…..maray ga tu

Samrat: bhai…zindagi meri hai tu faisal(decision) bhi mera hoga…ap pls baba se baat kero na…hum try kertay hain k yeah arrange marriage hojay warna ami se mein khud baat kero ga..

Nupur: Samrat but ami many gi

Samrat: man na pary ga

Nupur: Samrat yeah attitude galalt hai….

Mayank: thik hai hum baba se baat kerain ga..per ap ko bata dain ami khabi nhi many gi….

Nupur: wasy I really like her….hai woh buhat pyar…aur smiple bhi

Samrat: thnks bhabi ur the grtest…

…………

OKI WHT ABT VITAL SIGNS' YEAH SHAM PHIR NHI AAY GI….

YA PHIR

ATIF ASLAM N HADIQA'S..MERAY ASS PASS.

PLS TELL ME

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ME FIRST lol kind of shocking to me😆.
amazing update😛
mayank's mom behaviour was really bad😡
can understand mayank's pov...it will be difficult for him to handle all this...
lol it's his first time 😉😆
nupur ko manana was really nice .he felt really helpless but hamari nupur shukar man gayi😳
beautifully written and realastic too 😊
about songs... mein ne pehla gana suna hain ya nahin pta nahin per han dusra suna hain aur vo b acha hain 😊
ap zada behter jan sakti ho jo jumle match karein aur zada ache tareekey se situation ko bta sake vo use kare.
and yes do update soon
tc 😃
Edited by crazymayurian - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nic update
may god bless u always
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Felt bad for Nupur but Mayank was helpless... uff... Life is so complicated 😳
Anyways loved today's episode hope things will go smooth with Samrat and Gunjan...
Thank you!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow fiza wht a beautiful update...
uff kitni ladaka hai saas...Allah bachyei aisei saas se...
aur mayank bechara ..no doubt he was trying to handle the situation and pretty mch suceeded but bechari nupur...
ek tu samjh ni aata jab kahi kch hota hai tu foran yeh saas jaisey cheezai parents pai q ajati hai...
but mayank said sory to nupur shooo swweettt...😊
samrat chas been caught by mayank ...😆😆.but i must say he is so brave...he definetely beat his bro in marriage life... 😆😆
i loved mayank . nupur and samrat convo...
really u have done a justice to this ff...every moment , part is just so real...
i loved it...
thanks suja coz of u we got this update so early...😉
love ya dear...
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Api...😛
thank u sooo much for d update...❤️
beautifully written...👏👍🏼👏
total realistic part...⭐️⭐️⭐️
i love ur writing...⭐️👏⭐️
awesome update...😳
bt i dont like Mayank to behave like dis...😒
though m also convinced wid wht he said to Nupur...😳
bt still i dont like it at all...😔
hw cud he do dis...🥺
Nupur ko baad mein samjha sakta hain issiliye unhe guilty bana dena...😲
yeh kaha ki logic hain???????!!!!!!!🥺
n Nupur ase maan kyun gayi...🤔
sach mein woh kuch jyada hi acchi hain...😳
main hoti toh kabhi nhi manti woh bhi itni asani se nvr...😡
in dis part i really like Samrat😳 rather dan Mayank...😡
i know Samrat ke behaviour se matter aur bigar jata bt still jo galat hain so galat hain...😒
n Nupur ki saas...arhhh😡
i jst hate her to d core now...😡😡😡
wah...beta nazar aya nhi pehle hi sare dosh bahu par dal diya...Dayan...😡😡😡
kese behave karne lagi woh jese sach mein unhone kuch nhi kaha Nupur ko...😡
n Baba😲...i nvr expect dis from him...😭😭
mujhe laga woh ghar par nhi hain...😳
bt woh toh hain n hote huye unhone apni biwi ko kuch nhi kaha!!!!!!!!!😒😲😒
ase acche sasur ki koi jaroorat nhi😡...kyun kaha Mayank se woh sab jab woh khud apne biwi ko kuch nhi keh sakte...😡😡
dis is d 1st time jab purey sasural mein mujhe aj sirf Samrat accha laga😳...jo galat ka birodh karte hain naki baba ki tarha chup rehte hain n nahi Mayank ki tarha bina kuch suney hi sirf mamla shant karne ke liye apni biwi par iss tarha chillate hain...😡😡
Nupur kyun maan gayi itni jadli😒...n usne chay ke liye bhi pucha...😲
main hoti toh baat hi nhi karti😡...By God...😛
i think i will b a dangerous bahu...hehehehe🤣😆🤣
n den Mayank ne asli reason bhi nhi pucha Nupur se ke unki Ammi ne kya kaha tha!!!!!!😡😲😡
woh toh koi aur nayi kahani le kar baith gaye...😒
unhe pehle asli reasons to pata karna chahiye tha na!!!😔
wahhh...ab ayega maza...😈
srsly m hell angry wid sasu ma...😡😈😡
accha hua jo Samrat ne Gunjan ko pasand kiya...n woh bhi love marriage!!!???!!!😈😈
good...mujhe pata hain woh khadus aurat ase nhi manegi!!!!!!😡😈😡
bht drama jo karegi...hmph😡😡😡
wow...dis ff is turning into Spicy from sweet n romantic now!!!!!!
bt API...u know na hw much i love dis Mayank...😒😔😒
plzzz i want him as d same Ideal hubby like b4 piiillliiizzz😔😭😔
n han asli baat jankar usse apni ami se baat karni hi paregi!!!!!!!😡
mujhe aur kuch nhi sunna...baas😔😳😔
love U lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: waise API ap end mein woh song ke bare mein puch rahi thi na...
den mere liye ATIF ASLAM ka song coz i love him...so plzzz wahi hoga mera choice ok!!!!

pps: sryyy bhttt jyada lamba comment ho gaya...😛
bt apko toh pata hain dis is my most fav ff n woh bhi mere dil ke sabse karib so i alwaysss poured my heart out here...😳

love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
this was a good update...very nice...loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice. but mayank should do more for nupur. she is really hurt
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update
nupur is soo much understanding
awww...sajan...lol
cnt wait to c deir marriage
awesum update

umm...song selection i guess atif n hadeeqa's song cz i really dnt remember vital band ka song...:P

tc

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