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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Cute update Fiza😛
Mayur started their life so beautifully and I'm in awe of the respect and love with wich they treat each other
Update soon

thnks a loot
phew so glad u felt respect in there gestures..thnku soo much
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Beautiful dear

U explained all the rituals and emotions beautiful
thanks for Pm
cont soon

thnks aloot dear for liking it
glad u liked the expalnation
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Posted: 14 years ago
very cute update didi...
sorry didi 4 d short comment..
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thnks dear
nah its oki dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Fiza
sorry yaar for late comment🤗🤗but i was busy or quite unwell so could not comment properly...
but yaar..it was the bestest update of this FF..u know i read it almost 6 time abhi bhi dil nahi barha😍
u described their beautiful,pure yet strong relation amazingly n their first night it was beautiful
keep it yaar🤗
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@Fiza

sorry yaar for late comment🤗🤗but i was busy or quite unwell so could not comment properly...
but yaar..it was the bestest update of this FF..u know i read it almost 6 time abhi bhi dil nahi barha😍
u described their beautiful,pure yet strong relation amazingly n their first night it was beautiful
keep it yaar🤗
continue soon

its oki dear...
atleast tum coment tu ker rhi hoo mein tu rozay mein sirf like press ker rahi hoon so lazy
OMG thnks so much ...so nice to see ur such lovly coments
thnku
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks aloot dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'll request people to pls edit ur post those who have res
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Posted: 14 years ago

Addab,

Thnks a lot for all the love and appreciation. Thnku

So finally we reached the End….

Yes it the last update of walking with u…

I mean the walking with u shadi special…..not the FF…..

Have rply to u all..the bst is the sherwani wala part…I did knew most of u didn't knew k sherwani k neechy kurta bhi hota hai…mein ny tu joke mara tha…yeah tu reality nikla…ROFL

After this update, im not gonna update very soon, due to Ramdan.

So enjoy hopefully u like it…

And this sigi again by faria…..but this is my favt I cant stop droling on it….

Lov fiza

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Posted: 14 years ago

Mayank came there meeting everyone n chating for some time, he took Nupur n than they were off too drop Nupur to parlour…

Mayank: tu kasa laga ghar ja ker

Nupur: kuch alag….

He was feeling so good finally she spoked

Mayank: alag matlab

Nupur: aj tu humain sab asay treat ker rahy thy jasa ya tu hum barsoo(after years) bad ghar aay hain..ya phir hum koi marka sir kiya hoo…..(either I have return after ages or have done sum real miracle)

Mayank: wasy markay se kuch kam sir nhi kiya hai….matlab jis ko subha sab k samny jana muskil horaha hoo…us k liyan marka hai…he was holding his laugh n she pouted…

Nupur: ap ko mazak laga rah hai..ap k sath hota na tu….

She stoped at her words…realizing..how stupid she is …he was the one

Mayank: dekhain…islyan khabi khabi ank khol lyani chaiy…ma'am mein hi tha woh..n if ur doubting me, tu let me clear… thts new experience for me also…

She was red in embarrassed, red with blush agin remembering everything….grining with blush she looked out hiting her head, n laughed a bit…nt able to look at him she fixed her gaze outside window, smiling throughout….

When he lovingly spread his hand on her face, to wch she look at him smiled , n than away….

……………………

Valima is basically an occasion when the union of two souls, two person is celebrated with family. Its basically n completely done for celebrating two person becoming one…its highly important…as it is Sunah ( a deed of prophet, wch is being followed) its similar to reception, as no rituals are done its just the dinner but its organized by the groom himself, as he is celebrating his strt of life…

Nupur reached from the parlor n went to her room, as was asked tht she n Mayank will cum by there own, n as per samrats plan…ALONE…

Reaching there she find Mayank trying hard to button up his top most, she looked at him he was looking hot n handsome, smiled at her though n him…she was broken from her admiring session

Mayank: hum kiya itny achy lag rahy hain k ap…..

His words were left incomplete as he turn to look at her, his gaze made her a bit confused, he took steps towards her n reached close…looked at her how mesmerizing she was looking, today there was a beautiful glow, a little shyness but vey less anxiety…

Nupur: hum thik lag rahy hain

Mayank: thik….bukil nhi…yeah kis ny makeup kiya hai

Nupur: haina mjhy pata tha itna dark eyes…ajeeb lagra hin hai…ab kiya hoga

Mayank: kuch nhi mera kiya hai phir se bardasht kero ga…kal se ap koi 4 5 martaba maar chuki hain mjhy….he said as matter of fact

(nthing will happen…wht abt me, I'll tolerate …from yesterday u have atleast killed me 4 5 time0

Firstly she didn't got it but thn seeing he smirking face she glared…

Nupur: ap humin dara rahy hain…

Mayank: Idher aay app

He took her infornt of mirror n stod behind her

Mayank: kasi lag rahi hain ap…khud dekh lay

She looked at her self and than to him, he looked surprised..

Nupur: ab achi lag rahi hoon…she said with a smile looking at the picture perfect view infornt of her…he smiled reading her confession…

Mayank: ek min…taking camera in his hand he placed it properly n put it on auto…reaching beside her he ask her too look infront, as soon as the camer was time to click….he hugged her from back to wch as a impulse her head was abit lowered n wide smiled appered on her face, so as on his….click…

Perfect…hain na..she nodded ….chalein ab…dair horahi hai

Nupur: sunay…

Mayank: ji bolin…he said leaning to her crossing his arms on back…

Nupur: yeah ….woh …apkay lyan….

She forward a small box to him, he looked a bit surprised n thn smiled widely

Mayank: ohh tum mera wedding gift..really …wah…he opend it n smiled wider….tu yeah kam tu apko khud kerna paray ga…he fowd the box in one hand n the other hand to slip the platinum band in his finger…

She smiled n took it form box, n slowly n shyly placed it in his finger…moving forward he pecked her cheek lighly, n whispered thnks in her ear..

Reaching venue evry1 was admiring the couple, the reached near stage n thy meet nupurs family as thy have reached before and was escorted my HIS family, he holded her n hand n supported her to get on stage, they sat n meet many of people there, to whom Mayank was introducing her n she was meeting warmly…

Mayank: bs kero yaar, mein thak gaya….chalo Nupur bhag ker chalein

Nupur: Mayank….ap bhi ..she chukled

Mayank: ary nhi…yeah nhi

Nupur: kiya hua..

Mayank: he leaned to her a bit n whispered….yeah jo ab stage per arhi hain na…yeah BBC London hai

Nupur: kiya ….

Myanak: han…abhi aay gi aur tumahin uper se necahy tak dekhy gi…phir ur jewelery ..aur pochy gi kis k taraf ki hai…aur tumhain ek news free day ker jay gi..

Nupur: she suppress he giggle ..ab bhi Mayank..

Mayank: yaqeen nhi hota …abhi dekhain app…

Anty: mubark ho Mayank beta…bhi larki tu achi khasi khubsoorat pasand kerli….suna hai kafi bary ghar ki hai….

Samrat: anty ap bhi bhai ki smahjdari (intelligence) per shak kertay hai…..dekh ker hath mara hai hum ny…

Nupur looked at bth of brothers in surpise…..in dono k kuch nhi hosakta..

Anty: kya faida…diya tu kuch bhi nhi…she said mockingly …

He holded her hand …

Mayank: unhony beti day di yeahi un ko sab se bara ehasaan hai hum per…

Anty: nupur…yeah ap ny yaha kay traf ki jewllery behnai hai..

Nupur: suppressing her laugh she noded n in yes ..

Anty: thik hai..ary beta ap ko pata hai…faraz hai na…syed sehab k beta

Nupur: nhi anty hum nhi janti..

Anty: jan jao gi ap ..woh suna hai ….apni pasand ki larki laya hai….bhi bari hi ajeeb se larki hai…kafi magroor…she continue her news bulletin n left..

Whn finally Mayank and nupur burst in to laugh n smart to join them….

Smart: she is one in a million…me cumin ap loog enjoy keray…

Mayank: dekha hum ny kaha tha na

Nupur: she laughed more ..had hai…….pause…thnks…

Mayank: yeah formalities shadi se pehly tu hum ny bardasht kerli..ab nhi keray ga..samjhi ap…

Nupur: she smiled …ji bulkily..

Mayank: good……bs yaar ab mein ek min stage per nhi reh sakta…uff..

Adi: ap kyun muskara rahi hain

Diya: Nupur khush hai …haina

He moved more closed to her

Adi: han…lagta tu hai…aur aj woh dil se khush lag rahi hai..is ki smile tu dekhoo..he chukled a bit..

Smarat: yeah kiya horah hai…

Both parted away in fear

Adi: janab ap ko kabab mein her jaga hadi bana zaroori hai…

Samrat: ap logo ko kyun dekhai nhi dayta k is kabab ko ab bany ke zaroorat hai

Adi n diya laughed…beta tumhar kuch nhi hoskta …

Having dinner with everyone, they left to home, n evry one went to ther rooms as was tied now..

Nupur cam out after changing while Mayank was reading newspaper siting on sofa, she went and sat beside him…

He closed the paper..

Mayank wasy hum ap se nazara hain

Nupur: kyun..

Mayank: itni mehanat se hum ny yeah karma sajaya aur ap hain k dekh hi nhi rahin is ko…he pouted n she realize he is right…

She stod up nn looked around , a smile appear on her face, it was just as thy decided n thy way she imagine after thing were finalize, she was smiling with satisfaction whn she feeled his arms snaked around her waist n he rested his chin on her shoulder

Mayank: kasa laga..

Nupur: acha hai…she whispered…

Mayank: sirf acha hai…

Nupur: nhi bukil wasa hi hai jasa hum ny socha tha….she smiled….n he softly pressed his lips on her shoulder lingering thm there…

Mayank: chalo so jao ….buhat thak gai hoo…...

She slowly walked to the bed, it was still difficult, he closed the light to make it a bit simpler…n she lied down on her side, whn he accompanied him on the other face her side…..

She was lying quietly whn he mischievously went near her n spooked not whispered in her ear

Mayank: good night…

She gasp in scarred…n he was laughing

Mayank: Nupur kitna darti hoo

Nupur: Mayank had hai ap bhi na….she pouted n thn smile a bit yes she was acting silly…y she was scared so yet conserve…..but she needs time

Mayank: yeah ap k room, ap k ghar hai…aur hum sab ap k apny hain…tu daar kyun …relax…hum sab hain ….mein bhi ….

He smiled n opened his arm n to wch she smilgly wraped herself in it, n to doze of in the warmth hold

Nupur: good night…sleepy

Mayank: good night…kissing her hairs…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

me first for the first time yipee🥳

wow i love the siggi😳 😍amazing
aw mayur sooo luvly and adorable😛
u expressed each feeling sooo beautifully👏
the best part was auntie wala😆 lol she was indeed a BBC news😆😆😆
on the whole amazing and fabulous update❤️
Edited by crazymayurian - 14 years ago

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