MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148

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Hey guys

For those who don't know me '.as I am nt Rahul'so nam tu nhi suna hoga'.. I am fiza'.n all set to start a second FF'.it is not a fairy tale like my previous one'.i know its pending but "because you love me" will remain my first priority don't worry about that..

Back to Ardhangini..as the name sugest'it's a story reloving around the essence of this word..or should I saw ths bond..

Again its on Mayank n Nupur'n others will join as story proceeds '.

THANKS ARU FOR HELPING IN THE TILTLE OF THIS STORY

N ya for pms..plz add me to buddy list

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ARDHANGINI

Past in brown

Present in blue

I am standing in "Mukti"..in the children ward'.living a dream of a dreamer'life has changed..this isn't my dream but ya I am enjoying living it'sumthing which is giving me peace 'sumthng tht let me sleep in between my sleepless nights'..

God these angels'..kids are really God's the most precious gift'..no matter how you felt '.the make u live again

Doctor: Good evening Ms.Bhushan

Nupur: good evening doctor'so howz everything going

The shout and pleading of sumone took my attention a bit'..the voice is familiar'na how cum ths can happen'..haa'.i have grown old n mad'.those words n voice of HIM still echo in my ears

Patient: I AM NOT MAD'..leave me just leave'.i don't want any medicine ..leave me alone

He saw sum1 there in the corridor 'shok the hands of doctor from his..n rash twards her

Patient: See they ar not trusting me'.you trust me na'..thank GOD u came'I knew u'll safe me'tell them I am nt mad

Doctor: leave her

I am numb''tooo numb to react'even to feel that I am breathing or not'wht is this' I was right I heard him'..i really did'.but is this true'yes'it is'I cant make a mistake in recognizing his touch..HIS touch

He was being taken away from me .no not this time'..but do I have that right to stop him'I am watching him aimlessly ''I am seeing him does any other aim is required'.his pleading 'his hope 'his pain doesn't make any difference to u right'''.no its not true'words are choked in my mouth'

Nupur: wait'I said in broken voice

Pleading, pain, helplesnes??? In his eyes????........ouch'sumthing inside me pained..ohhh'.i AM breathing 'but he like ths'..at " MUKTI" in mental ward

A girl was walking inside the college'jeans n a sleeveless top'her hair tied in a bun'.a back beg''.beautiful..hot'full of attitude'doesn't seems to be her first day at college'it was technically as she took a transfer from delhi to Mumbai'

A boy was cuming from opposite direcction..gr8 body'dam cool looks..rather I should say toooo hot'complete stud'dress in black jeans n black shirt ..they colloide..n fall'hello nt on each other

Nupur: Ouch'.dont u have eyes

Mayank: han na jab hi tu tum se takaraya hoon dear

Nupur: she looked up to him straight in his eyes'..tu hath nhi thy jo pakar ker rok lo'

His eyes were wide open'shocked a girl answered him like tht'most of the girls could'nt even find courage to speak when he look in there eyes an she'flirting

Mayank: smile'oops sorry'kya hain ur so beautiful ..i get lost

Nupur: its ok..both stod up'now get lost'I need to go to class..she was leaving

Mayank: hey'as two flirts cant be a couple'.so lets say....friends..he fwd his hand

Nupur: yeah sab honay k bad'.hmm soch na paray ga

Mayank: hindi filmei mein bhi dekhta hon'so meray sath dialogue nhi chaly gay

Nupur: really ..BY god'par dosti kafi jamay gi'shok hands

Mayank: so fresher ..right

Nupur: yup 'tmharay colloge mein raging nhi hoti

Mayank: wooo..a girl DEMANDING raging

Nupur: obviously'tht makes ur seniors rember don't mess with me

Mayank: nhi aj colloge k opening day nhi 'islyan bad luck

Nupur: ufff'.tooo bad

They both laughed

Nupur: choro us ko'mein ny kaha leave him'.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow fiza great start of the story..very unique concept i must say...
and mayank mental patient...??
and past was so beautiful..
i am eagerly waiting for the nxt part...
thnx alot for the pm fiza...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yuppiee...am the second to comment.....what a starting fiza..... mayank is a mental patient????

cant believe this...and the past, mayur were cute..loved their nokh joks.........
dont know what nupur is gonna do??????
the concept seems very different...............
am so excited to read further,.........pls continue sooonnn......
Edited by achoose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

congrats for ur new ff

awesome start

Oh GOD- nups is doc. and mayank is her patient
nad they knw each other

the flashback part was cool
loved it a lot

very interesting story
wanna read the next part soon

so update asap

take care


btw- i liked ur title- thanx to aru and u too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Warmest Welcome Fiza............Superb concept n Mayur so deadly combo n with a writer as U a super cool FF it will be.................!!!
So the patient is Mayank na🤔................yaar u surely know how to hook😆...............eagerly looking forward for update..........do cont soooonnn...................thnx for pm..........!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great Fiza.. Another ff.. This one looks very intresting...

I loved Nupur's attitude... & the patient i guess is >Mayank... Looks nice do start it soon...
-Laiba
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept Fiza!

plz continue soon
nd add me to ur pm list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept please pm the next part

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