Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Faria-
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Finuuuuuuuuuuuuu
beautiful start dear
really very nice
loved nups and dia convo
it was so no natural and very close to real life.....

iya: she laughed...abhi koi dkhny araha ha kiya..kyun itna pareshan horahi hai.....dua kero k ek hi aay aur woh hi sab se acha aur tumhara ho.....
nupur: hmm ...tumhara waqt yadd kerti hoo tu ...ya allah

diya: 18 times...uff aur phir dadu ke baatein....aur tu mjhy itna support kerti thi ab khud kya hoa...aur dkho aj who sab bemani(meaningles) lagta hai ....jab khud ko in k sath dekhti hoo

hahahaha so true- i have seen it when i my big sis got married...

uski waqt bhi ladka dekhne ka aisa serial chalu thi.LOL

fizaaaaaa well done dear - beautifully written

mujhe koi taklif nehi huyi ye parne main- an i loved it very much

waiting for ur next update

do update next part soon

take care

love ya..............................

faruuuuu

thnks a loot dear

u know na how much it means to me

hay so glad its natural

i want it to be as realistic as possibe

lolzz

me to i have also seen sooo...

lov ya

n thnk god u found easier

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali
i love the starting. its so common in almost 90% muslim girls life. interested to read if it leads to a happy ending.

lolz

ur worried abt ending at first part

mera tarck record dekh ker kiya lagta hai

glad u liked it ....n find it related to reality

thks a lot

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: drmaha
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here i am............

gr8 staart.best thg was tht it was so close to reality.......

u defined muslim community very well..........

it seems really interesting...........

love ya..........ab ghussa na kerna mjh masoom pai..................
u know ths electricity pblm...............😭

allah maaf tum aur masoom.....

glad u liked it dear

n elctricity k 24 hrs nhi hoti ...her wat k lame excses......

thnks for liking it

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: mahakmev
osom it's fab

thnks n glad u liked it

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Fiza ji..Aadab. pehle to har uss khata ki muaafi maangte hai jo aapki tehrir se nazrein churane per kiye humnain. yaqeen maane hamara... na likhne ka waqt naseeb hota hai aur na parhne ka sabar baksha Khuda ne. Aaj bhi yeh jo likhne aagaye woh sirf iss liye k iss bahane aap se 2/4 baatein to ho jayengi 😊 accha likkha aap ne...bohat hi 'Urdu' style me hai 😊 kisika saath nibhane ka vaada hum nahi karte kyunki aise vaade akser toot jaaya karte hai per hamare naik tamanna aur duayen hamesha aap k saath hai. likhte jayye aur aapke alfazon ko aise hi sarahay sab...Ameen!

oh btw...kuch inspiration chura k le jaa rahe hai in panno se, shayed hum bhi phir likhna shuru kar paaye.

-Neela

For you:

hum se na poocho k khata kaise aur kab hue..
dard me doobe rehte hai akser...aankhein phir bhi nam kab hue

Edited by sharneel - 14 years ago

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

BeautiFul Part Fiza, Really Liked it..

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

nice1 dear..........

par sare mislim family itne conservative nahi hote........

love nupur's charector

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Baap re baap .............ye tune kya likha hai Fiza:(

mujhe kitna time laga parne me!!!!

bt thanks k tune english bhi likh di.............nahi to meri watt lag jati........by god!!!!bt i knw Urdu is one of d most sweetest language :-D ....bt still lil difficult for me :-P, m nt able to read fast, ok with me, bs english meaning likhte rehna, nahi to kuch words k meaning mujhe samajh me nahi ayega:-P ;-)

nice update dear :D

diya-nups convo was grt............it lovely.............diya is such a sweet sis :D

love them :D

nups-adhiraj convo was also grt............a perfect jija-sali combo :D

adhiraj loves nupur very much.........more than zeenath............bt why she shouted on her???

nw m waitinf for would be dulah................its mayank offcourse :P

update soon

thanks for the pm,

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

thnks dear

im glad u likd..evn more glad to know u enjoyd urdu

fiza... i love the language, i believe it is one of the most beautiful languages of the world, and thorugh your FF I get to be close to it... bas aur humein kuch nahi chahiye