Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
awesome start dear
thanks for the pm
Faria. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
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Finuuuuuuuuuuuuu
beautiful start dear
really very nice
loved nups and dia convo
it was so no natural and very close to real life.....

iya: she laughed...abhi koi dkhny araha ha kiya..kyun itna pareshan horahi hai.....dua kero k ek hi aay aur woh hi sab se acha aur tumhara ho.....

nupur: hmm ...tumhara waqt yadd kerti hoo tu ...ya allah

diya: 18 times...uff aur phir dadu ke baatein....aur tu mjhy itna support kerti thi ab khud kya hoa...aur dkho aj who sab bemani(meaningles) lagta hai ....jab khud ko in k sath dekhti hoo


hahahaha so true- i have seen it when i my big sis got married...

uski waqt bhi ladka dekhne ka aisa serial chalu thi.LOL

fizaaaaaa well done dear - beautifully written

mujhe koi taklif nehi huyi ye parne main- an i loved it very much

waiting for ur next update

do update next part soon

take care

love ya..............................






Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Kya baat hai fiza ji...Aapne to pehle parao mein hi bazi maar li...(Hope i said right)😊
Well done sis...Starting ws superb...And i loved the jeeja-saali bonding...They wr so lovey dovey.😳😳..Means jeej-saali wala love...😆
Seems her family is lil more conservative...Atlest more than my family...So now im waiting for Mayur meeting...😳😳
Cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
i love the starting. its so common in almost 90% muslim girls life. interested to read if it leads to a happy ending.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
agar ap k yaad dilna parah tum ko tu saray k sary daat thor doo gi


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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Kya baat hai fiza ji...Aapne to pehle parao mein hi bazi maar li...(Hope i said right)😊
Well done sis...Starting ws superb...And i loved the jeeja-saali bonding...They wr so lovey dovey.😳😳..Means jeej-saali wala love...😆
Seems her family is lil more conservative...Atlest more than my family...So now im waiting for Mayur meeting...😳😳
Cont soon...

janab ap ny bulkul sahi farmaya..shukariya is izzat afzai ki....thnks aloot
glad u loved there bond
n yaar its too conservative family
even mine is nt tht soo
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
hayyeee allah..!!😳
kya update hai
it was really nice part api...😛
loved the relation between adhi and nups..
it was really amazing bond😊

haan sach kaha nupur ne
aise kaisi kisi ke saath bhi shadi hosakti hai😔

waise ek baat kahun..y do i feel ki yea story me thodi thodi truth hai😉
mujhe sachai...nazar arahi hai😳😆
itna chota update mat diya karo
aur jaldi update karna😳

love
tasfia



Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: achoose

awesome start dear.....eventhough i have not seen a very conservative muslim family.................but i do have muslim friends......it was lil difficult me to understand the convo.....but smehow understud it...

anyways..great start dear...loved it...tc..hf

thnks dear
i knew..i was so woried abt u specilly...im so sorry for tht ..next time i'll write more esier ..try tooo
i know im showing way to conservative.....but its needed
glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

very nice chapter fiza....

waiting for more

loved the use of urdu

thnx for the pm

thnks dear
im glad u likd..evn more glad to know u enjoyd urdu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome start dear
thanks for the pm

thnks dear
im so glad u liked it

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