Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 43

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Heeloo guys Helloo...!!

The questions are simple yet will decide how I am goona write further :) :D

1. do u guys want elabroted weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated '.defined.. Yaaa... Would love to read... Pls do describe all the functions even if not elaborated then atleast a small description... Would love to read and know about the functions...!
2. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it'I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai Yaaa... Completely fine...! Dont feel ajeeb pls .. Go ahead with your idea...!! :)
3. anything u want me to add'except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me Hahaha... Not really... I'm liking your ideas and your way of describing and writing a lot so I think I will just go with your flow of writing...!!!

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Heeloo guys

The questions are simple yet will decide how I am goona write further

1. do u guys want elabroted weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated '.defined.. i dnt mind to see each n every function...bt do whatever u want.
2. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it'I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai...dont worry...just go for it. sab kuch zindagi me phli baar hi hota hai...to ye bhi phli baar try karle.😉
3. anything u want me to add'except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me...had hai yaar!!! without song koi shadi hoti hai kya??? phir shadi me or shradh me farak kya reh jayega🤣 or dadu kuch nhi kahega...mujhe to song chiye...bus!!!

Hey guys,

So the most awaited series of chapters are starting form today…yes the wedding. Wedding is start I thought just in winding up in one chapter, but than they way u all were waiting, I elaborated it to four chapter, each for each day of celebration.

I hope u all will like it, plus they will b quick updates, as I want shadi to end before ramazan.

All sigi is credit goes to my sweet heart FARIA….

Thnks to her that helped me in decoring these chapters….

Pls, pls, pls…I really need ur comments, elaborated one….plsss….plus if u feel that its getting boring or too long , pls let me know I'll short it in next part….

Phew enough of my speech…..

Lov ya

Fiza…

I hope its happy reading …..

So finally the days of celebration arrived and ceremonies to escort there daughter towards her home started now. Almost seven days are left before the wedding ceremony, so today the ceremony of Mayoon is to be celebrated.

The house was fully decorated with yellow flowers, shiffon curtains. A choki, for rasam( rituals performance) was placed in center which was decorated with yellow rose, tulips, n geenda'

Nupur's room

Diya: yeah layan ap k sausral se aay hai '.jadli se fesh hojay aur behan layin'.

Mayo dress mostly cums from groom house but at times its from brides khala (masi) or mamo'.

The dress as soon as touched her hand she knew she is now pacing towards being his, the dress was beautiful yet very simple, completely as per tradition. A full yellow dress, with gota n kiran on dupata. With simple embellishment on shirt. She knew this the last dress she is gonna wear as a single girl after this, the dress tht will grace her body will her bridal dress'.

Nupur: ji api'she was so nervous, tht her voice was shaking..meeting everyone , n thn wht life is holding next for her'.

Diya: kuch nhi hoga sab acha hoga 'relax Nupur'.jay jaldi se taiyar hojay'yeah tu pehla kadam hai ap ki nai zindagi ki taraf.

Cuming out of dressing room she was wearing a full yellow dress, with red n green embellishment on it, her hairs were tied in a chotiya, place infront, n her head covered with dupata. No makeup, not at all allowed. But the glow of a slight happiness, was perfectly making the face neat n beautiful, the blush and anxiety n getting to enter his life was coloring the cheeks perfectly. The shy smile decorating her lips, giving her a perfect bridal look anyone can ask for

Zeenat: mashAlllah dekho tu meri beti per kiya roop(beauit) charha hai'.

Diya: kya baat hai Nupur..

She was smiling shyly lowering her head

Her cousins, friend n evry one was teasing her '.here she was just finding place to hide'.

Cousin: shukar hai aj bhai nhi hain warna tu woh gay'.

Diya: acha ab tang maat ker zayada usay 'warna yahin behosh hojay gi'

Nupur: api'..she pouted innocently..

But true the way her heart is racing she surly was feeling like it..

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But the only thng that was different he was highly irritated

Mayank: ami yeah larkiyoon wali rasm(rituals) hum kyun keray

SA: itna maary gay na hum ap ko'..yeah larky k bhi hoti hai samhjy ap'.ab taiyar ho kr aay samhjay

Samrat: wah bhai tum tu bora behassy'abhi tumhar ubtan bhi lagay ga

Mayank: kiya zarroorat hai'

Samraaat: kyun ..zara sacho saweroo, itni tension mein kyun hai boss..han

Common bro, enhance ur beauty 'why r u so tense'he said putting his hand on his shoulder

Mayank: bata ta hoon mein tujhy abi'

Samrat: mjhy kyun mar rahy hoo'ajao nechay ..all anties are waiting for u'sab k sab ko aj kurbani k bekra mila hai '.chukled

Mayank: aj pata chaly loog shadi se itna bhagtay(run) kyun ho hain'.uff..mjhy nhi kerna

Dressed in a kurta with very light tint of yellow , he made his hairs ..n cam out of his room'

Mayoon starts with reciting Allah's name , reciting Quran , and then a millad ceremony was done, after which evry one prayed for the bliss start of nupurs new life

(Millad is a seesion in wch our Prophets name is taken , n reciting different poetics line praising n thanking him'.just like bhajan)

Zeenat asked the girls to take out Nupur to the choki'for the rasms to b performed

Choki

With a dupata, spread like a protecting shield on top of her head , each girl holding one corner of wch making it appear in the rectangular roof on nupurs head'..diya in middle brought Nupur down to the hall'.

Her eys were lowered n head was done, she was holding her hands tighly ..in nervousness n anxiety'

It was strange tht she was the being eyed by evry one..n adoring her , smiling mischievously at her . together all of this was making her blush more n more.. and the shy smile was not for a sec leaving its place

sHe was placed on the choki'n than her nani was siting beside her , on the other side zeenat was siting..

She spread her hands on Nupur head to take all the evils eyes from her, n thn kissed her forehead'.string the rituals, she took the flower jewelry n grace her with a garland ..feeding her sweet, she puted sum ubtan on her face n hands, n the stod up to gave place to her mother'

She incircle a floweral chotila(it's a strip of flowers tide around hairs like gajra)'n thn kissed her , circle sum money around her head to be given to poors, and than giving her sum sweet , she put sum ubtan..n a thread called kalawa'..on her wrist

Kalawa is a red thread tht is tied on girls hand by 7 married ladies , as bless suhagan prayers'zayda explanation mjhy nhi pata..tu rasam enjoy keray'.

Thn all the elder is seniority came to her n wished her the strt of a good new life'

Diya cam in , after her anties where done n tighten a IMAM ZAMIN on her hand, n make her were floweral earings n gajra in hands'..huging her n thn spreading ubton more on her..cheeks face n evry where'whn Nupur put sum back on her hand ' mischievously the bth smile n she kissed her'.

IMAM ZAMIN: is like a bangle made of cloth , having sum money in it, tied with the name of Allah so that she is protected from evil and than this will be opend n money will be give to poors'

As soon as evry one was done, nupur was asked to proceed to her room with the help of her friends to take sum rest, n the dinner is served to guest..as this occasion is only for ladies..

After the outsider guest are gone a session of celebration starts, whn all cousins, anties, n friend sit with dhool'n sing the songs of wedding'.n celebrate the her happiness'as she can now also join n sit with her friends, and can feel the celebrations..this is sumthing that will go whole night and full on masti was done, as diya zeenat were also singing, nani was suggesting songs while diya was full on singing n teasing Nupur'..

N if a girl belongs to my family 'woh khud ganay suggest ker rhi hoti hai aur gaa bhi rahi hoti hai'aur phir dance 'sorry cant be here dadu will kill me..else ek item no tu hota .by god'.

'..

GROOMS

As Mayank came down in the same way with his friend n brother n sat with an irritating expression as he look at the amount of women grinning at him,,

Mayank: Mayank ahmed aj ap gay,, agr yeah sab rasm kerny wali hain tu mein bhag raha hoon yaha se,

Samrat: bhi agar ap dil mein bhag ny k soch rahy hoo tu too late

Mayank: mjhy tumhain aj ek suggestion dayta hoon, tu bhag ker shadi kerna I m with u

Samrat: he looked at him n laughed n put his hand on his shoulder 'saying im with u

Mayank mom came to him n kissed his forehead, making him wear a grandland 'she "var" sum money , tighed an IMAM ZAMIN on his arm'nt wrist'.n fed him sum sweets'.n thn the best part'.as he closed his one eye'.she put ubton on his face'she chukled at his expression'

Dadi was also there n she spread sum more on his face

Mayank: dadi

Dadi: kya dadi'bacho aj tu hum mein se koi tumhian nhi choray ga'yeahi tu din hota hai jis din betay hath mein aatay hain

When anties where finished doing so..it was boys turned to play n celebrate there way'..

Samrat place a whole lot of ubton in his hand n spread on whole of his face..

Maaynk: samrat k bachy ab tu nhi bachy gay'removing sum from his eyes

He rashes towards Samrat n placed o loot on his face 'whn he was held by cousin from bth hands, n put a lots on him '

The whole fight of ubton strts wch covered not only Mayank smart, but there father n mother too'

MF: aray bhi yeah kiya hai

Mayank: common baba ap k betay ki shadi hai'jab mera yeah hal hai tu ap k kcuh tu hona chiay'.

He chukled..

MF: idhar aay ap'hum tu apny betay k laga ker shagun bora kerlya'..he lovingly applied it on his face'.khush rahy aur Nupur ko bhi khush rekhy'yeah buhat zaroori hai'.

Mayank: he smiled'n nodded in assurance

The same was going on in nupurs house where girls were playing ubtan'

It's a shagun 'n I just loved it'

Diya: chalein mamao naik nikaly

N the best part the elders in the house are gonna gave money to the youngers as shagun'

The day ended with aloads of mast n fun, but higly tiring too for evry1'..as diya rested in nupurs room wch was highly decorated , Nupur couldn't find her eyes to drench in sleep . she was standing near in front of window ..playing with flowers in her hands, shyly smiling looking at her image in glass'.

Where he spread hand on the window as if he is touching her image..n smiled at himself taking a deep breath'.three days more Ms Nupur'his smile changes wider ..n she lowered her head in shyness as if she heard his voice

Diya: Nupur so jay'kal parlour bhi jana hai ap ko grooming k lyan, aur phir mehndi hai kal apki'.arm kerlaoo'thak jao gi abhi 4 din hain fnction k '.jis mein se ek din tu sonay k no chance

Nupur: apiii

Diya: ajao shabash ''as she set with her ''tum khush tu hona

Nupur: hmm'she nooded shyly

Diya: wasy yeah khushi hai kis baat ki, Mayank se milny ki, us se baat kerny gi, ya phirrr

Nupur: apiii

Nupur hugged her sister lovingly n rested her head in her shoulder, trying to catch sleep with her sister, from some last days of her presence in the house'.

(I hope I am cuming up with ur expectations as im very bad at describing occasions n ruitals, kyun k reality mein mera koi layna dayna nhi hota in sab se , mein sirf enjoy kerti hoon, pls leave ur coments'

As on theses four chapters im extremely nervous n hesitant'how to describe all this)