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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Fiza, it was awesome update.

OMG!! kya shadi tha yaar
just loved it.
thorugh many rituals wr new for me...i ve enjoyd d most.
this ws d most beautiful shadi update i ever read.
awesome.
i ve read it countless time...n still in influence.
brilliant update dear.
kya baat hai.
ur description ws so gud, u presented evrything beautifully...n also in detail.
aaj tak kitne shadi kar chuki hai tu???
baata na!! dont blush!!
awesome update.
it seems so real.
n urdu ws eary...sirf kuch words ko chor k
waiting for mayur meeting...ahem ahem...aka suhag raat
continue soon.
dont worry, pm k liye thanks nhi kahungi.

@ Fari : awesome sig.


thks a loot suja jani
glad u like it
yaar tum loog buhat hi mahoss hoo
meri kitni shadi keraoo gay..
yaha ek hi kerloo buhat hai
had hai
thnku soo much
glad u like it n found so beautifull thnkkuuu
tum logo k kcuh nhi hosakta...ek hi cheez k intezar hai...
thnks for nt saying thnks
lov ya tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww waiting 4 d update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY GUYS

BACK AGAIN

Hopefully u all will like it'

Sigi credit goes to FARIA '.

Thnku sooo much for ur love , have rplyd to u all'.

I hope u all will like it

Love

Fiza

PS: does any1 know where is auroni and jaee'so long haven't seen bth

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Samrat: bhai asay nhi jasaktay ap

Mayank: ap kiya hai

Samrat: mera naik

Mayank: Samrat tum mjhy kitna loutooo gay

Samrat: zindagi mein ek hi baar hath aay ho..dil khol ker looto ga

nikalo mera naik…

He smiled and placed an handsum amount in his hand

Mayank: khush

Samrat: buhat….bye……..reaching his room door….bhai

Mayank: hmm

Samrat: GOOOD night..n shuted…

He smiled n closed his eyes , n entered his room…and now there room….

She who was siting clutching her hands n lowered more her eyes as she heard the door opened and then closed…

As the footsteps echo strted to increase, her heart beats were giving a fair competition to it, but this was not alone her condition…

Before proceeding standing near the door he looked infornt of him, a dream a fairytale was just waiting for him..with his gaze fixed and his eyes trying to look at her face, removing his sherwani( don't blush n over imagine, sherwani k neechy kurta bhi hota acha….desperate people) he advance towards her slowly to control his pondering heart to….

Taking the place infront of her, whn she hugged her legs more near, he smiled as he knew how she is and right now wht she must b feeling…looking at her clutch hands he thought of placing his on her but wht was more important for him was to have a glimpse of her, it's a wait of 9 moths….

Mayank: addab….

His voice was so new yet so familiar, such a soft tone yet such a hard voice…it was typical manly …she was fearing next either she will faint or her heart is gonna pop out

Mayank: moving close his face turned to be a complete picture of pleasant, he was actually looking at her…a moment whn he can t define wht actually he was feeling, it was blissd, beautiful, mesmerizing , captivating, his list of adjectivs was too short to define wht actually he was looking at ….

He was tracing each n evry feature with his eyes, forgoting evrythng around….he couldn't hold himself to advnce towards her, put her snuggling inside herself, made a sound tht ask him to cum back to his scnce,

Without delaying more

Mayank: tu hum kiya itny boray hain ek ap humari taraf dekhy gi bhi nhi

She smiled shyly and lowered her head more…

Maaynk: lo ab tu apn ny ankhein bhi band kerli…uff …ab kya hoga is cherahy k sath tu sari zindagi guzarni paray gi…..

She smiled more widely with a slight giigle…..which was more n more making him go crazy for her….she was so much in fear of her own reaction whn she will see him that she was not daring to do so, still his gaze wch she can clearly feel was making her scncneless

He put his hand on her , with which she gasp, and her hand shivered….his first touch was as electrifying as she never thought…n he hold this effect on her was it self a pleasure for him , he grap her hand n pulled it forward….to slip a ring

Mayank: umeed hai ap ko achi lagay gi…paused…..nupur…pls….ek bar humari taraf dekh layin …plss….

He almost pleaded tht melted her heart so deeply, she closed her eyes to collect sum courage and than slightly raised her head n slowly her eyes ….just meet his so much deep, deep with full of undefinable emotions eyes….

For few sec she looked n than shyly lowered it again….

Mayank: kya ap hum se naraz hain

Nupur: nhi

He chukled

Mayank: finally…meri biwi boli tu sahi….mein soch rahoon ek laptop ap ko lay day ta hoon aur ek khud rekh lay ta hoon

Nupur: kyun…

Her voice was mere whispers but the were surly beautiful melodies , moreover her shyness, her blushes were making it more n more captivating….

Mayank: kyun k hum chat per zayada achy se baat kerlay gay…asay tu lagta hai ap hum se baat nhi kerna chati

Nupur: nhi …asa…bs …woh….

Placing his one hand on her, n moving a bit forward…he slided his one hand on her cheek, to flash a tornado in her…she closed her fist tight to hold herself, forgetting tht wht she is holding so strongly is his hand….that made him so much at peace , some how his hold was making her feel protected and comfortable.

Mayank: apko pata hai yeah sirf ek jumla nhi hai, aj hum haqeeqat(realiy) mein yeah mehsoos ker rahy hain, ur presence is making me feel blissd Nupur..

She smiled a bit n tried to lower her head, wch was still in his hold n thts y she cant, he entwine his hands with her, slightly caressing her cheeks with his thumb, making her skin warmth with his touch….he has forgotten evrythng and the only thing that was he was following was his heart, slowly he move forward……

He placed his lips on her forehead, to wch she hold her breath, n his hand so tightly….he let himself feeling her for more than enough, n she took breath whn he moved a bit away….but than he moved and placed them on her cheek..

He looked at her closed eyes, n can hear her breaths, he was looking at her reluctantly, as maybe he broked his promised, mayb he made it so early

but next what camed his way was not just a surprised but a gift form GOD to his side….

He felt sumthing warm raped around his body, gaining his scnce he found her hugging him, but maybe in fear….he slightly rubed her back to clam her done

As soon as his lips moved away, she was feeling sumthing incomplete in her presence, sumthing she has just strt missing, sumhting tht she was fearing she may loss, just as her heart dragged her to, she encireled her arms around him, caressing her cheeks with his skin….

Mayank: Nupur sorry hum apko nervous nhi kerna chaty thy….

He said with so much guilt in his voice, she was cursing herself that she cant help her voice to say it his right and she is willingly giving her, but she just can…but maybe he can judge her gesture….

But to the opposite he thought she snuggled more closed to him and holded his kurts tighly in her hand…almost pulling him closed...he smiled in relief and not delaying to for sec, he enclosed her in his arms tighly not to let her go, ensuring her evr security care, n affection her right is, moreover his heart wants to give in…..

He nazzle in her neck..n unknowginly placed his lips on her neck, she holded him more tight …he can fel her nails digged on his neck….

Broke apart from a just a blissd moment, he can see her crimson face, with hyper blinking eyes, just finding a place to hide

Mayank: mjhy per behroos kerny k lyan shukriya

Nupur: she want to answere that he deserve the parise not only for toady but for past evry moment in 9 mths …I need to and moreover I want to say this to him

…ap ny yeah behroos khud jeeta hai Mayank…for the first time she looked in his eyes, n he can see what he was craving to …HIM..right ther in her eyes….so clearly

Aao tumhe chand pe je laye
Pyaar bhare sapne sajaye
Chota sa bangala banaye
Ek nai duniya basaye

Cuping her face both his hand, he looked at her deeply, moving forward he kissed corner of her lips, she took a hold of his shirt in her fist tighly to hold her self, he move forward to softly place his lips on her softly, not knowing how to reciprocate the feeling..she was still but thn she slowly responded the way her heart was guiding towards his shower of love n passion, broking apart he took a look at her again, this was one thing he cant get enough of…he captured her lip agind n this time a little deeper .he move down to her neck, tracing the line with his lips , he was busy exploring her and her hands were holding his neck in fist…almost

Soon they were lost in each other with each other, as the heart took over evry feeling , that was appreantly there, awkwardnees, fear, anxiety….all just disappear in thin air, as love took over evry thing….

She can feel sunlight hiting her eyes asking to open it, but the warmth of his skin she is feeling under her cheeks, and the grip so protective at her waist, was not giving her courage to open, wht if he is awake….the whole night event was flashing agin agin infornt of her eys, making her blush more n more….

She slowly opend her one eyes, n found Mayank's face extremely closed to her, but he seems to be in deep n peacefull sleep…

Taking the advantage she has sum time to look at him closely….she was smiling an looking at him, lost in him…it was so strange feeling, some one who was once an stranger now hold her the way no one has ever n no one will ever, being his possession was itself a wonderful feeling ….

She slowly touched his face, spreading her hand lovingly and thn after sumtime slightly moving tried to get off his grip, moving away she composed her self n rashed in the dressing room

As he felt the weight on the bed less, n few step taking by her away from him….he opened his eyes to see her rashing in side….he was smiling at her cuteness….yes she was one in a million, pure innocent,…he knew he can caught her red handed gazing him, but he doesn't want to make her more awkward…..but it was lovliy feeling , feeling her expressing her love to him so slienlty…

Supporting his head with one hand, he was looking at the path were she was a moment before rashing from…

Mayank: ap tu asay bhag gai jasay bhar tu ana hi nhi hai…smirking he too got up…thnking GOD..for giving him this happiness and feeling…

Dressing up she was standing on the door of washroom..

Nupur: ap tak tu Mayank uth gay hongay….ab hum un k samany kasay jay…ya khuda yeah itna muskil kyun hain..nupur woh Mayank hain pls…asa kcuh na keray jis se woh naraz hoon…bahar nikly wasy hi dair hogai hai….

Slowly she came out lowering her head, standing infront of mirror , she was combing her hairs ,he was standing leaning to the door of dressing room smiling, wch was changed looking at her, she looks more pretty without all fakeness….

Mayank: ap ko pata hai ap smiple zayada achi lagti hain….

She looked up at shocked n finding him smilingly looking at him, n lowered her eyes again n smile

Mayank: is muskhurahat k kiya matlab…..he advance to her….subha subha tareef apko pasand hai….hmm…he bow done a bit to look at in her eyes….

Nupur plss…asay chup tu maat rahoo…he said seriously, having a bit tint of sadness in his voice,…

Nupur: tu kiya bolon…

Mayank: he chukled….subha baghir….

Nupur: good moring …

Placing his hand on her chin he raised her face up…but her eyes were still lower

Mayank: uff ab yeah ankhein kasay uper kero…

Nupur: she looked up to him…..n smiled

Mayank: thnkuuu…chlo ab jadli se tiyar hojao…sab humara intezar ker rahy hain

Nupur: ji…

He paated his cheek n left, n she smiled more looking at him

Nupur was ready to leave but now another problem , she looked her self nthed time, n thn was looking at door…

Nupur: ab sab k samny jao gi….mein aj pakk behosh hojao gi…she thought…n her thought was making her red..

Mayank: looked at her n cant hold his giigle….holding her from shoulder he turned to made her face him, cuping her face with one hand made her look up….raising his eyebrow he asked kiya

To which she said kya same way…..

Mayank: ab kyun pareshan hoo..hmm…

Nupur: woh nhi kuch nhi..

Mayank: Nupurrr…sach sach baato…

Nupur: woh ab hum sab k samny…she said n

Mayank: tu..us mein kiya hai…ohh..he encircled his hand around her waist …pulled her close….apko kiya yahi rahna hai..pora din asay hi…..he said gringly

Nupur: mayankk…woh

Mayank: woh kiya….nupur….sab k samny jany mein …..ek min …ek min ek min…..uff khuda….apko Sharma arhi hai kiya…

She hided her face in his chest n he hold her tight….nupur…apko kya kisi bhi baat per shrimanda hai…she nooded in no..tu..phir…yaha sab ap k apny hi hain …aur apko koi kuch nhi kahy ga,…I promise…chalo…

she was still standing in same position

Mayank: wasy humain asay rehna mein koi problem nhi hai

She left him with a jerk n he smiled more at her innocence….

She lowered her head n moved right n he to, than left n they collide

Mayank: uff….nazar utha ker na chalny k yeahi nksaan hai…

She giggled, chlaein..looked upto him

Plsss…..

As they were cuming down he cant just help but smile at her expressions, n nervousness..

She looked around now she took a look at her new home, it was big, cozy, and very vibrantly decorated.

Samrat: Aslamu alikum…he almost scremed…to make Nupur scared she looked at him…

Mayank chukled…

Kya yaar bhabi ap bhi itna kyun darti hoo, mana apk bara bar mein ek thora sa, he whispred in ear khados …hain but ….nt to worry hum hain na

She smiled and sumhow her nervousness was reducing, he grip her hand and took her to dinning room,

Where she went to mayank's father n bowed her head

Nupur: Asalmulikium papa…

MF: walkium aslam beta, khush rayhain…n welcum home….

Nupur: salam ami

SA: jeeti raho beta…aoo jaloo nashta kero…diya aati hi hogi…

She took her seat and Mayank accompany her next…finishing the breakfast she heard the doorbell, knowing who thy will b a smiled appear on her face….

Diya: aaddab anty

Sa: jeeti rahoo …aao beta nashta keroo

Diya: nhi hum ghar se ker k aay hain shukriya, wasy anty ap ny humain kyun mana kiya nashta lany ko

As per ruital nashta bride k ghar se ata hai….

SA: beta raat ko ap loog itna thak ker ghar gay aur phir subha subha in sab tiayroon mein lag jay …yeah bhi koi baat hoi…

Samrat: bulkily sahi…wasy tu humhin yah aglay din a valima bhi nhi pasand ek din k tu rest do yaar arm se uthy

Mayank: correct..

SA: koi correct nhi her cheez k koi maqsad (reason) hota hai samhjy….

Samrat: whispered …wasy ap ko rest kis baat k lyan chaiy tha….kal tu apny apparently kuch nhi kiya…..hmm…

Mayank: tumhain pata hai tum kitny achy lago gay api, Nupur aur sab k samny marr kahtay hooay

Nupur went to diya n hugged her tightly finding so much relifed…

Diya: ap thik hain na…she cuped her face n she smiled n nooded ….

SA: aay drawing room mein bahtay hain

Adi came n meet Mayank , hugging him

Adi: congrats…..

Mayank: tum mjhy kitni baar Mubarak bad do gay

Adi: yeah kisi aur cheez ki hai…he said teasingly n he cant help but smile….

They sat n chated for sometime

Diya: anty ab ijazat dain hum Nupur k sath lay jarahy hain

Samrat: yeah kiya baat hoi abhi tu hum ny baat bhi nhi ki bhabi se….

Diya: koi baat nhi ap ki hi bhabi hai dil khol ker kerlayna …abhi tu humaray sath jay gi

SA: Nupur ap apni chezy nikal ker rekh ker jao, takay hum ap ko pick kertay hi direct phir wahin se sham k lyan parlour chalein jay…..

Nupur: ji ami…hum atay hain api…

Biding evry one bye n to that to mayank silently she went with diya and adi to her home back..

Reaching there she was welcomed like a princes evry1 was gathered around her, she took blessings of evry1 hugged her mother tightly, n settle down where evry 1 was busy asking what she get on her MOO dekhai( n I soo hate it…women I tell u)…..

In her room, she reached n some missed everythng but than not really..she smiled at her thought n turn to find diya so near her

Nupur: kya api….kal se samrat aura b ap humain daary ja rahy hain

Diya: kyun Samrat tang ker rah tha

Nupur: nhiii….bs kal woh pathakay jala raha that u hum daar gay aur aj subha itni zoor se cheeka k bs..she chukled…buhat sharrarti hai

Diya: aur Mayank

She loked at diya surprisingly n thn smiled shyly

Nupur: Mayank kiya

Diya: Mayank kasa hai….hmmm..teasingly

Nupur: thik hain..

Diya: yeah muskhurahat kis baat ki haii…

She just smiled n didn't looked at her….

Diya: tu kiya hum apko Mubarak bad day hi dain…ap ki nai zindagi ki shoraat ki….she said so Nupur huged her …to which she chukled ..n spread her hand on her head….ap thik hain na…

Nupur: ji apii….

Diya: good..bs humain yeah jana na tha…dekha itna muskil nhi hota kuch bhi

Nupur: asy koi baat nhi hai pls apii….she said getting so surprised at diya's words..

Diya: chukled …chalo khana kha loo..phir 4-5 bajay tak tu Mayank bhi ajay ga laynay …

Nupur: jii…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG it was so romantic
awww...love Mayur first night☺️☺️
acha hua u told that sherwani ke neeche kurta hota hai
verna I was about to imagine something☺️😆

wonderful update
do cont soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it lodsss😃
ya ALLAH...☺️☺️☺️

humne sherwani ke liye bilkul bhi blush nehi kiya...sachi..😳
bt han iss ke alawa baki sabke liye jaroor blush kiya...😳
hay ALLAH aap to aj humey sharam se pani pani kar denge...By God...😳
i think aj tak humne jitne bhi ff parhe hain sab se jyada sharam humey issi mein hi aya hain...
so hum ab iss bare mein kuch nehi kahenge...☺️

nice update...👏
beautifully written everything...👍🏼

iss update ke liye baas itna hi...😳
baki ki batein WALIMA ke liye rakh diya hain...😉
jaldi update karna APIII😊
love u lodsss🤗



...ONU
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG FIZA - ihaveno word to describe this upate
i was just speechless- how could u write whole thing brilliantly..
i m proud of u -dil se..
u r d best no- u r bestest my jaan- hats of to u

i wont say anything - just a standing ovation for u...

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza ji aap kya ho..
Brilliant Part, this is not just a story, its a msg and its a Reality and loved the update, loved Mayank Nupur Relation, They are Brilliant, Samrat was so good shraarti, Beautifully Written and Explained..again Hate off To You, i am Fan of ur Writing u know..😳
and Sherwani k nechy kurta hota hai muje aaj pta lga...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!!! ☺️
loved it❤️
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

thks a loot suja jani

glad u like it
yaar tum loog buhat hi mahoss hoo
meri kitni shadi keraoo gay..
yaha ek hi kerloo buhat hai
had hai
thnku soo much
glad u like it n found so beautifull thnkkuuu
tum logo k kcuh nhi hosakta...ek hi cheez k intezar hai...
thnks for nt saying thnks
lov ya tc


hum manhoss hai???😲
tune ye soch bhi kaise liya???😲
tu to sirf ek shadi karna chahti hai...or hum tere kitne shadi karwa rahen hai😆
to hum manhoss kaise hue😉
hum to tere life me khuda ka gift hai😉 😆

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