Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 21

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update

jst luved the way, u portrayed everything

cont soon

Originally posted by: princez_94

Reserved... 😳

Edited

Haan, aur shauhar say pehle aap ka rishta deewar say banta hai. Biwi aur shauhar ke rishtey ko waqt lagta hai, aur ahista ahista ek mazboot rishta banta hai. Lekin iss say pehle ek larki ki zindagi main kahin aur rishtey abnte hai, deewar-bhabhi ka aur aapke in-laws aur aise kahin aur... aur akhr main shauhar-biwi ka yeh risha waq leta hai lekin bohat mazboot hota hai..

As that is said, coming to the update...

As ususal bohat achcha likha aapne... Humein ek baat bohat achchi lagi, Nupur kuch bhi karne say pehle apni behn say ijazart manngi. Yeh bohat achcha laga humien, kyunke agar baad main koi bhi musibat ho iss baat par toh Nupur ka saath dene wali Dia hai...

Yeh e-mail ka silsila bohat achcha hai, koi is say ghalat samjh sakta hai lekin humein aisa nahi lagta. E-mail ke wajah say woh Mayank ko jaan sakti hai, samjh sakti hai. Aur jaise Dia ne kaha apne nazariye say unko dekh sakti hai aur apne baare main khud bata sakti hain.. Lekin yeh jaan kar achcha laga ke Nupur Mayank say khul kar baat kar rahi hai... Jitni ehmiyat Mayank ko is rishtey say hain, woh shayad ab Nupur bhi karti hain, pehle bhi karto hogi lekin ab woh us shaks ko janti hai jis say ussne puri zindagi guzarni hai...

Akhrri line humein chu gaiy...Mayank kitna achhca insaan hai shayad Nupur ab samjh paye ghi, sab kuch hone ke baad bhi woh Nupur ko abhi bhi yeh faisla karne ka haq deta hai... Yeh baat humein Mayank ki bohat achchi lagi, aisa insaa kaun nahi chhahe gha Nupur bohat khush kismat hai...

Bohat achcha likhti hai aap, aur aapk shukr ada karna chahte haim Urdu main likhe ka... I know demand shayad thora ziada ho, lekin aap nahi janti parh kar humein bohat khushi milti hai... issliye shukriya...🤗

-Laiba

Ps- Just wanted to clear twat I said, You and Neela have completly different style of writing, their both unique and the concepts are both very different. The onlu similarity I can see is thay you both write in urdu and that too quite different. I wasn't comparing and If you thought so then I'm very sorry...its not what I meant... 😊

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Awesum awesum

loved it

cont soon

Thnkuu soo much dear

Hello guys

Asslamulikum

Mazarat..i mean to say im really sorry 'I haven't forget abt this ff..but ya I was nt able to write 'moreover too many things are going on in head'..

I have tried to write in more simile word'so lets see '..

Lov ya all ..n ya finally rplyed to all of

This one is for my janu bacha KOMAL'on her belated birthday n for my bemar tasuu..

Faru tujhy bst of luck bolo kya

Fiza😳

CHAPTER:6

"AP SE BAAD MEIN BAAT KERTA HOO…AMI BOLA RAHI HAI….

TAKE CARE…

SHABA KHAIR….

ALLAH HAFIZ

NUPUR…HUMAIN ASA KYUN LAGA K…..KYA IS FASALY MEIN AP KE RAZAMANDI(AGREE) SHAMIL HAI.YEAH TU HUMNY AP SE POCHA HI NHI…AUR SHORO HOGAY…...YEAH HAQ ABHI BHI AP K PASS HAI…"

Nupur: lo bina jawab diya farar( run away)…hmm…is k matlab unhony humain dekha hai…per kaha….

.kitni ajeeb baat hai yeah haq humain humaray apno ny nhi diya…ek bahar wala hum se humari razamandi (approval) poch raha hai….humary alfaz se unhony yeah kasay parh liya …..sorry mayank is baat k sach sach jawab nhi day sakty hum..hum ap ko kisi bhi shak ya pershani mein nhi dalna chayty …per ha ab is rishty mein humari razamandi(will) shamil hai….she smiled to her self n closed the pc….

………..

SA: tu shadi k baray mein kya soch hai ap logo ny….aj nupur k ghar se phone aya tha…woh log poch rahy thy

MD: han…baat tu sahi hai…kam as kam tareek tut ah hojay…

Samrat ws cheepishly smiling at maynak n was hiting him with elbow…..mayank turned around n raise hie eyebrows…."kya…kya hai…problem kiya hai"…with his glares he get back to his food….true he was afraid of his brothers this look….shoking his head in disbelieve mayank proceed to his food

MD: maynak ap ny kiya socha hai

Mayank: kis baray mein

SA: chalo….samrat k shadi k baray mein

Mayank: kya…ami pls….is k pehlay bara tu haony do

Samrat: ha ha..kitna bora sense of humour hai na ap k bhaiya….had hai…ap ki shadi ki baat k waqt mein ny ap k aramnoo( desires) k gala dabaya tha …jo tum meray daba rahy hooo

Mayank: yeah armano(desires) ap logo k hi thay meray nhi…samjhy

SA: uff…yaha hum ap ki aur nupur ki shdi ke baat kerahy hain..aur ap pata nahi kaha hai…..

Samrat: bhabhi k kayalo mein

Mayank: samrat…

Smarat: showing tht he is zipping his mouth ….

Mayank: thnku

Ami…abhi kam as kam 6 mth tak tu nhi…kyun k next week hum 1 mth k liyan ja rahy hain…phir humain bhi thora waqt chaiy

MD: 6 mth ..sahi bhi hai…is se zayda agay bahranhi(delay) bhi nhi chaiya ….unhny kisi din dawat (dinner) per bolao aur yeah baat ker lyatay hai

SA" tareek(date) layany hum jatay hain…..

MD: acha bhi asay kerlo……mayank ap ko choti mil jay gi

Mayank: pata nhi papa…..abhi ya tu ap log rukh jay …hum zara ap na schedule chk kerlayin

SA: per 6 mth se zayda agay nhi

Mayank: ami us se agay hoskta hai….pls samjhy

MD: ap apni availability dekhay….per zayda dair nhi ..islyan k larki k gahr walo k fikar hojati hai phir…thik hai

Mayank: ji…..

……..

Allah hafiz…per ap ny humary sawal k jawab nhi diya…apny humain kaha dekha…..

he chukled at her email tht day…

is ka jawab hum ko tafseels(deatail) se daygay…wasy tu ap ny bhi humary sawal k jawab nhi diya….abhi hum do din tak kafi busy hain…shayad ap se baat na ho saky ….kal hum traing k lyan out of country ja rahy hain….wah cheezain settle hojay tu ab se baat keray ga..

sorry for the…

mayank

tc

aur han, shadi ki date fix hojay tu pls mjhy email kerdiay ga….kyun phone attend kerny k time nhi meray pass..tu mjhy pata kasay chaly ga…kitny din bachy hain meray bachelorship k…europe mein thora tu enjoy kerlo…..mazak ker raha hoon…ap ko aagaha(inform) kerna tha…ami aba date fiz kerny arahy hai….bst of luck …😉

koi baat nhi ….ab apni traing per daahan(conc) dain,,,,hum janty hain kafi tiring hoti hain……apna kayal rekhiyay ga..aur han dil khol ker enjoy keray , yaha acha hai mein bhi azadi se enjoy kero..bst of luck have fun …

feeamanILLAH( in Allah's protection)

alah hafiz

have a safe journey

reading her this email sumwher it gave him immense pleasure he was just stiring the page n was thnking where he life has just took a turn. He thanked god for giving Nupur as alife partner who is so smile yet is vey strong headed sumwhere if it would have been other girl she would have questioned or thought other way but the way she played along with him told him the trust n respect she had. N sumwhere this all make him more reposnisble n careful towards his deed. She is nt at all chessy n filmi yet mature with a balnced touch of humour n life. Smiling he closed his laptop so tht he can put it in to his language….

Mayank: smarat ap se kuch kahna tha

Samrat: ji bhai..bhabi ko koi pagaham(letter) pochan hai…date plan kero pa ki…

He looked up to seek god help

Mayank: nhi…ami baba jarahy hai date fix kerny …tu ap nupur k pass rahy gay…humari taraf se unhny taseely ( relax) dayny k lyan…..k woh kisi cheez ki lyan pareshan na hoo

Samrat: he looked at him mishaviously …..wasy ap KIS CHEEX ki baat ker rahy hain….bhai tum wah tak pochach gay

Mayank: kya..kaha tak

Samrat: lo mein samhjy ap US baray mein baat ker rahy ho…shadi mein aur kis cheez ki tension….oki..mein handle ker lo ga….halaky yeah baat ap un se kahty tu kitna acha lagta unhony….but yeah daduu

Mayank: samrat tumhain zara bhi sharm ati hai k tum apny bhai se baat ker rahy hoo

Samrat: nhi.sari sharm ap ko jo ajati hai…

……

After offering prayers she paryed for herself n famly n thn for his safe journey n arrival n there procporous life….

Sumwhere it was to strange for her too. Life changed , yes thts true she still cant say she loves him or not but the repect he has made in her heart in just a month is aboving anyother emotion. She looked at her laptop n sumwhere hse knew she is gonna miss his msihevous yet highly decnt talks tht made her go in waoo of him …how he just keep the perfect balance…..

Diya: kiya baat hai..itna kyun muskara rahin hain ap

Nupur: nupur turned around n find ..api ap…ap kasay again

ADI: darwaz se

Nupur: hay Allah really ..hum samhjy khiriki se(window)….

Adi: kyun kis k irada hai kiya kriki se any ka…

Nupur: ji nhi asy non decent herkatin nhi kertay woh

Adi: kaun woh

Nupur: jis ki ap baat ker rahy hain

Adi: hum tu mayank ki baat ker rahy hain

Nupur: hum bhi mayank ki baat ker rahy hain

Diya: tum ny phir us ko naam liya…maar way gi larki…..

Adi: wasy on serious note….are u happy

Nupur: bhia khushi se zayda humain ab shayd kahin na kahin befakari se hai….yaqeen hai(satisfaction)

He smiled n placed his hand on her head

Adi: tu taiyar hojao aj woh loog kahny per arhy hain…maynk nhi aay ga..sorry

Nupur: pata hai woh tu gay hao hain

Diya: nupurr…pls….arm se ….wasy tu yeah nhi batya ap ko UNHony k woh loog kyun arahy hain

Nupur: nhi…she smiled

Diya: she smiled n kissed her forehead …humaesha asy hi khush rehna…..

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SA: hum sooch rahy hain ab tareeq(date) lay layn ap logo se

Dadu: bulkily …2 mnths bad kasa rahy ga..tab tak mayank bhi ajay gaain

Nupur was hock to death …she is trying to except marige but itni jaldi…..

Samrat was standing there with nupur as mayank instructed him to b with her n make her relaz from his side..\

samart: aray bhabi fikar not…..bahi ko 6 mth tak chute nhi milay gi..aur wasy bhi unhony kaha tha k ap un ki taraf se ksi bhi chez ki fikar na lay…ab woh kis cheez ki baat ker rahy thy …samhj nhi aaya..shadi mein kis kisam ki tension hoti hai

nupur face was red like a tomate..she just cant belive mayank ask smart to say so…it was hell embarrassing but yet made her a bit relax…after hearing wht next Is cuming up for dadu

MD: darasaal(actually) mayank ko 6 moth tak choti nhi milay gai..kuch nay project ke wajah se woh kuch zayada hi busy hogaya hai…..tu islyan hum soch rahy thy k….shawal (Islamic mth) yahin decmeber mein rekh layn..masoom bhi acha hota hai

Samrat: how romatic….

Nupur: samrat mar kaho gay

Samrat: plss…he fwd his cheek

N bth chukled….

Dadu: thik hai..jasy ap ki marzi….tu 25 decmeber( its my parent weding day so….dnt chek calendar it isn't fridy ths year..but its fiction I can d o anything) thik …din bhi jumay (Friday) ka

SA: bukil thik hai….

Zeenat: diya beta moo tu meetha keraoo….

Thy all eat the sweet n thn SA came to nupr n gave her blessings n sweet….after evrythng comolted she went to her room n rushed to email him just like an obedient wife n moreover she wants to b first to tell him…(.sab se pehly jeo ny kabar di)

Assal ulikim

Umeed hai ap karaiyat se honay…..aj ucncle aur anty aay thy..shadi ki tareek 25 decmber tah hoi hai…

Allah hafiz

More thn tht she didn't know wht to say …she was now feeling a bit of anxiety in her self…

Nupur beta the count down has just began

Mayank: so mr mayank ahmed khan….feeww count down began…..

Pardon errors if any

Mayank: kis baray mein

SA: chalo….samrat k shadi k baray mein

Mayank: kya…ami pls….is k pehlay bara tu haony do

Samrat: ha ha..kitna bora sense of humour hai na ap k bhaiya….had hai…ap ki shadi ki baat k waqt mein ny ap k aramnoo( desires) k gala dabaya tha …jo tum meray daba rahy hooo

Mayank: yeah armano(desires) ap logo k hi thay meray nhi…samjhy

yeh buhat mazey ka tha dialogue...😆😆

wht a decent realtionship mayank and nupur developd...i really liked it...😊😊 and the way they cares abt eachother so sweet of them...😍😍

so dearest update soon...coz i love to read it...😉

cont soon...aab tu yeh soutaila nai raha...🤣

love ya...