Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 72

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

awww...that was cute...i m just luving mayu more n more...😳
GOD these family restrictions...
u r moving the story...brilliantly...n i so want u to continue like this...😳
luvlyyy part...👏
continue soon...😳
Annu😃

hey Annu

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Wao amazing update dear

wasa yar ye sassay na asi hi hoti pata hi nahi ku bhol jati ha ka saas bhi kabhi bahu thi

He He He

thanks for pm

Sorry for late replay

cont soon

lol

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Lovely update Fiza
cont soon

thnks a loot dear

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Congrats for completing 100 pages. :)

thnks a loot laiba

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu

hey fiza when will u update?

no not yet...may be around monday

simply beautiful update...the conservative mentality is beautifully depicted...continue soon..cant wait 4 the progress

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Awesome update

Cont soon

thnks a lot dear

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

simply beautiful update...the conservative mentality is beautifully depicted...continue soon..cant wait 4 the progress

thnks alot dear for liking

Helo guys ..

This is an Eid and ramzan special part, nthing to special in it…but I want to write it, so u people sorry need to read it…pls….pls…

Pardon errors as im hell tired..n was cleaning house, n making thngs…didn't got time 😕…so tolerate this too… I know to much I ask from u all…

A VERY HAPPY EID…EID MUBARAK TO ALL OF U…MAY U HAVE LOADS OF FUN..with loads of mehndi , n loads of eidi….

LOV YA ALL

FIZA 😊

Chapter: 19

The noise of drums made nupur move a bit, but her moved was restricted as she found his head on her shoulder..she first thought she is dreaming but as the sound of drum increased, with a voice….

Sehri k waqt hogaya…

She opened her eyes wide…

Nupur: mayank..uthain sehri k waqt hoa gaya

Mayank: he pushed her back…hm mhh…yeah sheri wal 3 bajy ajata hai…soo jao abhi alarm nhi baja..

Nupur: mayank acha humain tu chorain…

Mayank: kyun choro….humain sona hai…snuggled more to her

Nupur: mayank…humain shower bhi layan hai….she said shyly..pls…roza rekhn hai ya nhi…..pls

Mayank: nupurr….

Nupur: Aur ap bhi uth jain…pls…

With high irritation he left her……

She rashe to take bath, n came out…founding him still a sleep..

Nupur: mayank…utahin pls….sehri k waqt jaraha hai..pls..she said slightly caressing his hairs…..

Mayank: hmm…abhi tu soya thay…..utha tha hoon….he sleepily stood up

Nupur went n offer her mid of night prayers, and went down to strt preparing sehri ..she tied her hairs, n covered her head with dupata to hide the wetness….to undo any awkwardness

Nupur: salam ami

SA: walkilum asalam….she smiled looking at her…

Mayank utahy

Nupur: ji utha ker tu aai hoon….

SA: acha ap jab tak roti banein hum Samrat ko utha ker atay hain

Sehri: is a time, before fajar prayers, the (early morning prayers before dawning) till when u can eat n drink, after that the fasting strt wch is broken on the magrib prayers( sunset prayers)….

Shilpa came in and both the ladies were doing the preparation while mayank's father was reciting Quran….

Moving out to dining area to place the food nupur stop in between n laughed…

Nupur: ami…yeah

SA: in dono k yahi hai….pori sehri asay hi kahay gay….

She chukled more….

Both of the brothers , head down n were sleeping peacefully on dining table…..

SA: utho tum dono…..

Samrat: ami aj ap khela do….

SA: mar kheloo ap ko…utho jaldi

Nupur: baba…ajain sehri khalin…

MF: ap chalein hum atay hain beta……

Finishing there food, offering prayers, the went back to catch sum sleep, as it was still sum time for office…

Yes the ramazan has began with all its blessings, enjoyments and celebrations…..

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SA: mayank nupur ki pehli eid hai..ap khain shoping per lay ja rahy hain ya nhi

Samrat: kyun bhabi is se pehly eid nhi bani..ap bachpan se bhai k intezar ker rahi thi…

Nupur: Samrat …she hited him slightly …..

Mayank: ami….waqt kaha mil raha hai….aftar, phir taravi…us k bad kaha himat hoti hai…

Taravi: is a special prayers offerd only in ramzan….n is of atleast 2 hrs…strts at 9 o clock ….

Nupur: tu phir hum shoping kab keray gay….she pouted…

Mayank: Samrat ghar mein faltoo hai us k sath chali jay….taking no interest

Samrat: nhi no way…..

Mayank: ap aur ami chaly jay na…subha mein, driver tu hai…

SA: han ab tu hum yeahi keray gay…..

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Reaching her room she saw mayank already on bed, changing dress, she lied down on the other corner…he opened his eyes, n saw her back…it's the first time she did tht….

She was too disappointed she wanted to go on shopping with him, buying things he liked on her, it is her first eid after wedding , n she was super excited abt it ….as in frst step he made her hopes down….

He moved near her n hugged her from back….resting his cheeks on her…

She closed her eyes to collect herself n tolerate this proximity..

Mayank: ap hum se naraz hain

Nupur: nhi….

Mayank: hain…bulkily hain …

Nupur: kaha na nhi…ap so jaein

Mayank: dekha ap naraz hain……asay khabi baat nhi kertein…...acha idhar tu dekhain…..he raised his head , n placed his palm on her cheek turing her face to him….

Dekhain hum shoping se shadeed nafraat(hated ) hai..poray bazaar mein ghoomna aur phir kuch bhi na liyan baghir ana…aur dosray din wohi pehli dukhan se cheez karid kerlayna…uff…humain buhat ghusa ata hai….

Nupur: she turned her self completely to ly straight …….ap humary sath kitni taafa shoping per gay hain….apko kiya pata hum kitna waqt laytay hain….ap ny humain ek moqa bhi nhi diya aur khudi decide kerliya…..

She was now anger ….

Mayank: nhi asi baat nhi hai…bs…

Nupur: its oki…ap ko nhi jana thik hai…hum ami k sath chalein jay gay….

Mayank: nupur kiya hogaya hai apko…itni se baat hain…ap asay kyun react ker rahin hain…

Nupur: itni se baat hai..mayank hum apki zeeadari (responsibilities) hain, ami ki, smarat ki ya baba ki nhi…..tu hum un k sath kyun jain…..

Mayank: he moved away…..tu apko matalb hai hum apni zeemdariya achy se pori nhi keratay

Nupur: hum ny asa kab kaha..

Mayank: matlab tu wohi hoa na apka…..k hum apni zeemdari dosro per daltay hain…asa kab kiya hum ny

Nupur: asa nhi kiya ap ny ….

Mayank: tu phir bhi ap ny bolo tu na……

The things were heading to complete diffrnt direction….

She sigh…

Nupur: hum sirf itna chaty thy k is baar ap hoon humary sath …yeah pehli bar thi jab hum dono kahin jatay …kuch laynay..pasand kerny…

Shadi k waqt ke shopping per ap jitna excited thy humian laga ap ko yeah sab pasand hai …bs…islyan shayad bora laga….bs….per apko yeah pasand nhi its ok…hum apko force nnhi keray gay…..

Ab ap so jay raat buhat hogai hai…don't think abt it too much..its ok

Rplying coldly she turned her side yet agin n closed her eyes, switching off the lights….

He kept lying on his back watching the celing at times her….

He still cant get why going on shoping with her was so important….thnking so much, n were this little matter headed….its the first time there like this in ther 1 n half moth of marriage….

The actually fought…the frown sumhow turned into smile…n he shocked his head..

Mayank" welcum to married life…ab biwi ko kasy mano…

Obviously shoping per lay ja ker….per hum keray gay kiya shoping per….

He just cant get sleep like this….he moved to her she was sound asleep..

Mayank: nupur…sunay

Nupur: kya hua mayank..in full sleep

Mayank: humari baat tu sunay na….

Nupur: subh ..

Mayank: nhi na abhi….

Nupur: ji bolaein ….she turned to him in full irritation

Mayank: sorry….ap ko uthaya..per hum asya nhi soo saktay….

Acha thik hai hum ap k sath chalein k …..per hum keray gay kiya waha…..

Nupur: uffu mayank ,hum apko force nhi ker rahy…n hi kern a chaty hain kisi bhi asi cheez k lyan jo apko pasand na ho….. hum sirf chaty thy k ap ki pasand bhi shamil ho…aur phir ap ny nhi layan apny liyan kuch ..she said tht all in ago

His frown change in to smile…

Mayank: lo tu itni se baat ap bool nhi sakti thi..k apko humari pasand se shoping kerni hai ….itni dair se lar rahin hain hum se…

Nupur: itni se baat nhi hai yeah mayank..humain nhi pasand hum apk elewa kis peer bhi depend keray…humari needs pori kerna apka kam hai bs….humain nhi acha laga jab apny Samrat ya baba k nam liya…woh kyun humari necessities pori kerain…aj kerain gay kal sab ki apni life hai…phir….yeah ap k kam hai ….

Mayank: he chukled at her cute anger…..oki wife…ainda se apko shikayat k moqa nhi milay ga…..

Nupur: she smiled…

Mayank: per hum jay gay kab..he was still hoping sumthing save him

Nupur: ap k office ramzan ki wajha se jaldi band horah hai na….tu hum taiyar rahy gay office k baad chalein ga…

Mayank: ma'am aftar mein sirf 2 ghante hongay…..itni jaldi shoping

Nupur: hojay gi….promise…acha ab so jay

Mayank: are u sure itni jaldi hojay gi

Nupur: ji hojay gi….thnks..ap meri baat hamesha suntay hain…..good night

Mayank:good night ??... mein tu celebrate kerny k soch raha tha

Nupur: mayank raat ka 1 baj rah hai..abhi alarm baj jay ga ..aur apko kiya celebrate kerna hai

Mayank: lo bhi….aj hum ny pehli bar lari ki….tu ek celebration tu banta hai

Nupur: chukled…mayank ap bhi…lari celebrate keray gay….

Mayank: yes..fights n argument let us understand each other more…..so this cause for celebration

He moved forward n placed his lip on her….pulling her close n making it deep n passionate…..moving away …he kissed her forehead

Mayank: sorry….abhi tu hum apko chor rhay hain …bad mein detail men celebrate keray gay….

She blushed n hided herself in him….

Mayank: thnk GOD ur back her…now I can sleep…broking apart…pointing his finger emphasize… .dekho ghusaa ho per don't show me ur back…pls….

She looked at him smiled more widely…collecting sum of herslf n placing back all the shyness….she placed her hand on his cheek n slightly pecked it .sorry….

Mayank: her bar shoping per lay jany per yeah bhi hoga…..ab tu double celebration banta hai

Nupur: mayankkk

Mayank: my wife actually kissed me…..my god….im dreaming

She hited him playfully n hugged him …he giigled n embrace her tooo

Pecking her head he closed his eyes…

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Cuming back from office, he rested his head on the back of sofa…

Mayank: ap logo ko abhi chalna hai bazaar tu chalein…

SA: is waqt ….wah wah..kitna acha hai…ap seedha boldain ap ko shoping nhi jana…yeah koi waqt hai..

Mayank: aray ek tu hum aplogo ko offer ker rahy hain….nupurr…he called as she wasn't here…

Nupur: ji…she came out of kitchen…she has strt taking over it, with help of shilpa….n was buzy preparing for aftar n dinner..

Mayank: shoping chal rahin hain…abhi …10 mins mein…

Though the plan was already sat but acting came as part of life….in morning

Mayank: sham mein ready rahin …hum chalien gay

Nupur: per mayank ..hum ny tu ami se kaha tha…wasy ami bhi tu sath cahl sakti hai

Mayank: no she cant…woh 2 ghante mein khabi shoping k lyan ready nhi hogi…wasy tu humain abhi bhi yaqeen nhi hai…..

Nupur: acha ..dekh liana… per ami nhi many gi tu hum kasy jay gay

Mayank: I'll handle….ap ready rehna…oki…Allah hafiz…he pecked her head n left….

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Nupur: abhi…ji chalein …hum 5 min mein ready hojaty hain…ami chalein

SA: hum tu nhi jay ga…aftar mein waqt hi kitna hai…ap ko jana hai tu jay…

Nupur: thik …hum aftar akar ban laying a…wasay sab ready hai….

They left to shoping, n mayank was amazed at her rapid ways of shoping, chosing quickly n selecting the best….to the contrast he was left with a glare….tht he takes much time thn her…n it was true….buying cloths for them , n sum for family they were on there way too home…

Nupur: ab yeah traffic kyun jam hai

Mayank: tension kyun lay rahin hai aftar se pehly pochach chain gay

Nupur: aftar bhi tu bana ni hai

Mayank: wasy aj ap ny humain heran(surprise) kerdiya….itni jaldi shoping…na tu apny ek shop per kuch pasand ker kay kaha ..agay ki bhi shops check kerlo..phir 15 shops k bad yahin se aaker layna…tht irritates me…but I love ur way of shoping

Nupur: thnku…islayn pehly check kerlay na chaiy….no bolny se pehly…..she said proudly

Mayank: maray mary khub tany maray….galti hogi yaar….

They giigled

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Reaching home she puted the shoping bags aside, she rushed to kitchen to prepare aftar….

After the aftar the were siting n showing shoping…

She gave everyone there gifts….

Samrat: kiya baat hai..bhai tum ny tu aj tak kabhi kuch nhi dalaya mjhy eid per…

Mayank: kitnay na shukray hain ap….her saal pasay lay ker jatay hain ap….

SA: kal apki ami aay gi eidi lay ker

Mayank: eidi…woh tu shadi se pehly nhi ati

SA: pehli eid per bhi ati hai…rasam hai yeah..ab ap ko is mein bhi koi problem hai

He remained silent as his hand was pressed to ask him to be silent….

Sumhow he hates the way brides family needs to give so much n his mother nevr left a chance to get them…

The next day they cam n gave nupur mayank dresses, jewllwery n accessories

After aloads of argument he took it n more argument he convince them not to repeat it evry year….

Mayank: ami..ainda ap asa nhi keray gi…pehli bar tak thik tha ainda kabhi nhi pls…..he said softly but strictly

Zeenat: ji beta ….

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Samrat: aj hum ghar per namaz parhy gay….

Mayank: kyun….

Samrat: chand dekhy gay….

Mayank: sharfat se chalein….

Samrat: rukh jao na…soch lo pehli eid per asa chand nhi dekh ny ko milay ga….he said looking at nupur

Mayank: point hai….

Finishing aftar half way, they rashed to roof to sight the moon, it's the last day of ramzan if moon is sighted , n if yes next day will be eid…sumhow in evry muslim family sighting of ramzan chnad and above it sighting of eid chand is the most awaited moment….i love it

All of them looked so curiously but nupur and Samrat were much more curious…

Nupur: lo yeah badal ay gy tu chand kasay dekhy ga

Mayank: dkeh jay ga….itny uper hai badal…he was smiling at his cute wife, n thnking Samrat for asking him to stay …else he would have missed the sight

Samrat: woh raha….

They all looked towards the direction…

Samrat: samny wali anty…n he laughed out loud…

Nupur: apki tu na….

Samrat: hum tu bhai ko yaad dila rahy thy k chand asman per hota hai..nechay nhi….he said smilingly raising his eyebrows in wht why u were so intently looking at ur wife…..

Mayank was bit embaressed n thn smiled…..

she smiled widely seeing at the back of sami

Samrat: chand????..he turned around and the witness it….praying to God for peacefully beginning of moth thy prayed for happiness n solace…..

Samrat after praying looked at nupur n than to moon.

Samara: bhai ap ko is waqt yeah kerna chaiy tha….

Mayank: kya….

Samrat: chand k dekho phir bhabi ko…thy bth were listening to him in uter confusion…phir dekho…aur bhabi ko dekho aur chand ko…aur kaho…na not more beautifull thn u….nupur turn red, mayank hited his head with hand…

Mayank: yeah dagdaar chand…..koi achi cheez la comparison k layan…..saying so he turned around to see, nupur in such big shock n winked to her she lowered her eyes …samrat was still with hs mouth hanged ….

Samrat: yeah …yeah apkay shoor ny abhi abhi yeah kaha k ap chand se bhi zayada khubsorat hain actually chand is not even near u…..

She nooded in yes smilingly…

Ohhh…I cant take it….he pretended to faint….

Nupur: Samrat ..kal tumhari eid minus….

Samrat: yeah zulim hai ….cuming down from stirs…yeah sara sar zulim hai…ap bhai ki eidi ko cut kero meri kyun…mein thori kaha tha k ap chand…

Nupur: Samrat…chup warna bulkily nhi milay gai…as now the were in center of family…

Reaching down the offered salam to everyone….nupur called her home to say salam n wish them

Nupur: chand Mubarak ami

Zeenat: apko bhi…..

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She called diya, adi and evr1..wishing them strt of a new month n successful, n that ramzan fasting were completed suceesfuly

Nupur: mjhy mehndhi lagni hai..she said looking to mayank

Mayank: mjhy nhi ati is lyan hum ap ki koi madaat nhi kersatay

Nupur: kersakty hai na…humain parlor lay ker jay….

He was about to thought for sumting to save him …cause going out at this time of evening means hell traffic, everybody on roads, n mendhi parlours….hell crowded…

But soon her cel ranged

Nupur: salam bhaiya

Adi: Sali sehba taiyar hain hum arahy hain…saas se permission lay lo per mjhy batao…mehndi lagwany aur churiya behny nhi chalna hai

It has always been him who take her out to do so…she wasn't expected this yr he will offer or nt

Nupur: thik hum pochtay hai…

Ami …woh bhiaya her saal humain mehndi lagwany jaty hain tu …

SA: han bulkily jay..

Samrat: hum bhi chalty hain maza aay ga….chalo bhai…

Mayank: thik hai chaloo….

Enjoying chnad raat is the most amzing part of eid, mehndi, churiya…n loads of work though at home to prepare for guest …but the most fun night

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Nupur: eid Mubarak….

Mayank: he smiled …eid Mubarak….wasy namaz k bad wish keray gay arms se..he hugeed her …but han moqa kaha milay ga…..

He kissed her wishing her all with his ways…..thnks for being apart of this eid…

She smiled n he bid bye

Mayank , samrat and Ahmed shab went to offer eid prayers, tht are offered in a big masjid, out side ur immediate area….offering prayer they hugged each other n wished eid ..n also meet evry1 in masjid….

After helping shilpa in kitchen, to make breakfast, tht contain for sure Sheer Qorma…thts a sweet containing vermicelli… loads of dry fruits, n milk…..cooked together…this one thing evry1 for sure make in there home at eid…(.n sum people put bagara of ghees on top ..yuck….)

Putting breakfast on table she rashed to get ready so as shilpa…she dressed her self in a light embroidery lemon shirt ( A- line fork) with churdiar….( lol thts my eid dress )….

First thought of tiing her hairs but thn left them open, bangles , n light earing ..were her hand were fully coloured with his love…she looked at them , n take in the fragrance n kissed it…they way he did it at night…..feeling his wramth

Cuming down she saw all men cuming out of car..she went to shipla anty hugged her three times, n wished each other eid , she kissed her forehead…

Samrat: EID MUBARAK…he shouted at top , n received a smile slap from mayank….n laugh form his father…

Nupur: eid Mubarak…she smiled , n avoided her husband eyes, who were tracing her from top to bottom, with a smile of praise….

She went near her father in law n he side hugged her , eid Mubarak, putting out sum money from his pocket, n gave nupur her eidi

Samrat: meri eidi bhi baba….

He chukled n gave him and mayank there eidi..

Samrat: eid Mubarak bhabi…he huged her . n he fowrd his hand…eidi…she placed n envolp in his hand…

Bhai….ap bhi

Mayank: hain bhabi ny day tu diya…

Samrat; tu woh bhabhi ny diya ap bhi…..

He gave him , mayank proced to his mother n than to nupur ….

Mayank: eid Mubarak…he side hugged her n squeeze her a bit….baqi ki wishe bad mein..

She shyly wished him back…n samrat put is hand on his eyes….as the there parents has already left the place

Samrat: mein ny kuch nhi dekha

Mayank: as if I care….

Nupur: chaleinnn…

n all of them proceed to dining room to have breakfast together…

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Oki one thng I missed in the note is as we have almost reach 20 chp so thngs will strt to chng frm next….plus I'll be questioning u guys too