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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 11

Oki now the things r very random days …as im jumping to wedding after this update…pardon erros

Mayank: Nupur ap ko kamray mein kuch chiay

The thought of sharing the same room made her go red like tomato

Nupur; nhi

Mayank: tu sirf deewar chalein gi..said naughtily

Nupur: nhi khirkyaan(windows) bhi honi chaiyan…

Mayank: acha mein samhja darwaza(door) sab se zarrori hai…we was smiling misheviouly

She looked at this a droped her jaw …n looked away to hide the blush..n laughed….buhat badmash ho Mayank….

Mayank: he knew she got wht he said..ahh ..i want to see tht on her face….

Bhi kamray k andar kasay aay gay hum ..darwaza tu hoan chaiy na….ap ko kya laga

Nupur: kuch nhi

Mayank: acha hum ap ko kuch pictures send ker rahy hain…un mein se furniture select kerlayin…obviously sath tu ja nahi saktay…..

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Mayank: ami aur kitna time lagay ga…yeah shopping hai k kiya…

SA: sekho..ahmed khandaan ki sab se bari bahu k chora hai perfect hona chiay

Mayank: uff….pata nhi kiya perfect hona chiay …ek aur red jhora….uff….sab bekar jayain ga bata rahy hain hum ap ko….

SA: us k jo dil chay ga pehany gi samhjy…cards ko printing me do…aur yeah jhory tu mein bazaar se pack keralo gi ..

Mayank: acha ek min bhai..yeah red k sath koi colour mix nhi hosakta , like green or suthing aur pls is golden kaam(embellishment) ki jaga silver hoo….kuch acha lagay ga

SA: Mayank..yeah kiya baat hoi…green aur silver ach anhi lagta….

Mayank: kyun …yeah acha hai…green aur red…is per golden chaly ga

SA: thik hai

Mayank: thnk GOD(he smiled inside, ap apni pasand hi pehny gi Nupur ji)

SA: jewelry bhi layni hai….sunaar(jewllery)ny taiyar kerli hogi

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Mayank: acha yeah batao k room k colour dark k light….pls sharmy baghir

Nupur: ab hum itna bhi nhi sharmaty

Mayank: koi humaray dil se pochay …ja thora sa, thora sa bhi out of track jata hoon ..ap k khuda hafiz a jata hai

Nupur: ya Allah ..asa hai kiya

Mayank: ab abhi hi dekh layin…is waqt hona chaiy tha MAyyyannkkk….per humara nam ap ny in 6 mth mein aj tak nhi liya

Nupur: yeah ap se kis ny kaha ….1000 baar lay chukay hain

Mayank: achaa

Ya khuda hum phir pehas gay…ab Mayank ny humari pehar tang khechay gain

Mayank: tu akelay mein ap humara naam bhi layti hai….hmm ...woh bhi 1000 bar….jabhi aj kal humain itni hichukiya(hiccups) a rahin hain….uff….

Nupur: ab nhi sudhoray gay…

Mayank: nhi ..ab tu humary begarny k din hai….

kash abhi hum ap ko dekh sakty

Hum dekhna chaty hain her woh muskurahat (smile), her woh nazar, her woh bahuu(expression) jo yaad kahin na kahin humari baatoo se ab k cheray per ata hai…..jasy shayd is waqt ap k chehary per muskurahat….hai na

Nupur: hmm…..

Mayank: hum ny kabhi nhi socha tha hum is rishty mein is waqt ap se yeah kahy gay…..per ab humain yeah 2 moths buht door lag rahy hain

Nupur: ap rang poch rahy thy tu light

Mayank: dekha…dekha….she was chukling ….hum kya kah rahy thy aur ap kya …

Thik hai saafad dewary

Nupur: na baba…thora kuch colour daal day warna room black white flim lagay ga….

Mayank: lol..han yeah bhi hi….kyun furniture tu black hai….aur curtains per kcuh ajeeb hi lagay gay….humari ami k bs chalta tu woh bhi laal hotay….

Nupur: anty red buhat pasand hai….hum ny aj thak nhi ehna

Mayank: mar gay yanhi humaray sari mehannat ki kami gai pani mein..ami ny ap k lyan do red dresse layn hain….hum ny buaht rokh tha per woh nhi mani

Nupur: koi baat nhi …yeah un ki khushi hai…woh shayd humain as hi dekhna chati hoon

Mayank: hum se koi nhi pochta hum kasa dekhn chaty hain

Phir gayab hogi….chalein ab k khuda hafiz meri taraf se….list bana lo…warna ami humain qataal kerday gi….

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Zeenat : arya larkyon jhora pack kerny mein kitan time lagti ho

Diya : maa sab hogaya hai…ab kyun itni fikar ker rhai hain..cards agay

Zeenat: han yeah lo…wasy pehly tu humain lag raha ha tha kis angraz (british) ki shadi k card hai…per ab ach alaga raha hai…nupur kaha hai ..us ki pasand thi us ko dekha do…bs ab tu akhir yeah hi kam reha gaya hai….din kitni jadli kareeb agay ..

Diya: ji ami. Abhi lag rah tha buhat waqt hai.. per ab tu sirf kuch din aur em mahina hai..tu Nupur bhi chali jay gi..

Zeenat: han aur hum akelay rah jay gay….

Adi: uff nhi ami pls…apki beti wasy hi buaht roti hai aj pata chala k ap per gai hai

Zeeanat: adhiraj..ap ki beti vida hogi tu hum ap se pochy gay..acha diya hum atay hain

Adi: suno ami ny kuch kaha …

Diya: kiya

Adi: mein soch raha tha ap humain apni behan ki shadi per kiya gift day gi…he said encircling his arms around her wasit..enclosing her

Diya: adi…pls yeah ap k ghar nhi hai…

Adi: apny ghar per hum room k beahr wasy bhi yeah nhi kersaktay ..meri maa ny sab kuch sir per utha layna hain….han tu kiya dayn gi ap humain

Diya: kiya chaiy ap ko..

Adi: soch lo

Diya: soch liya

Adi: beti…he said grinning ..n she look at him in surprise n turned beetroot…but thn become serious

Diya: per ap tu..

Adi: diya hum ulaad(child's blessing) ki nimaat k khilaf khabi nhi thy per bs itna chahty thy k jab hum is kaqbil(able) hojay k apni beti ko sari khushi day sakay tab yeah sab plan keray….ap janti hain ghar mein aur sab kuch kerny k bad hum apki bhi buhat se khawsiat pori nhi ker patay tu

Diya: adi…pls…

Adi: its ture diya….ap ny apny ghar walo k samany bhi khabi camplain nhi k…aur humari izzaat rekh li

Diya: ap us izaat k qabail hai adi…ap hain huamry sath is se zayad aur kuch ehimiayat nhi rekhta humary liyan..

Adi: tum mera gift

Diya: she shrugged his hand sochy gay…

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Mayank: kiya…yeah kasay hoga…nupur yeah galat baat hai

Nupur: dekhy shadi se itny kareeb baat kerna acha nhi hai..

Mayank: acha hum bulkily bhi double meaning baatein nhi keray ga..per asa tu na keray

Nupur: dekhin sab ajay gay…buaht muskil hojay gi

Mayank: Nupur pls…..ab hum ap se baat nhi keray gay tu rahy gay kasay ….pla nupur acha 2 wks pehly band per ek moth nhi…aur is ki zarrorat kiya hai

Nupur: waqt kareb aay ga tu us ki zaroorat k andaza ap ko hojay ga

Mayank: hum ny kaha na hum koi asi baat nhi keray ga…sach….

Nupur: acha thik hai..per is se zayada nhi….pls…yeah humary liyan muskil hojay ga

He looked at the chat n ap ko hum per bahroosa nhi hai kiya….ksi uljhan mein ulhaj rahi hain ap..

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Nupur yeah baat hum ap se chat per nhi kerna chaty …aur na hi is tarha ki koi bhi betakulafi(frankness) hum ny is safar k dooran ap se ki ho….wajahy sirf yeah thi k yeah jo rishta dosti se shoro hoker aj itny khubsoorat ehass per aay hai shayd na aaa pata…..ap hum se itna betaqulf nhi ho pati….

(I never talked with u on such frank topics, just because I don't want to maek u uncomfortable.)

Nupur hum sirf ap ki izzat nhi kertay hum her woh jazab ap k lyan dil mein rakhty hain jo ek biwi k haq hai…aur us jazab k iqrar tu ap k samny keray gay….humain woh shramli se muskhuraht dekhni hai….

(I have ever such feeling for u that I wife desereve from her husband, but I'll admit it in front of u . I want to see ur expressions)

Shadi se jhori jo ek fikaar her larki ko hoti hai woh hum ap ki door kerna chaty hain…Nupur is sab k lyan zindagi hai…hum ko kisi bhi soorat uncomfortable nhi kerna chaty….

Yeah cha k ap humary sab se kareeb aur hum ap k sab se kareeb hoon yeah humary dil mein hai ….aur khain na kahin ap k dil mein bhi hai..nhi tu ajay gi i hope so….per is baat k koi jaldi nhi hai humain….

Jab tak ap comfortable nhi…hum asa koi bhi kadam nhi uthy gay…itna bahrosa ap pls hum per rakhain….humari pori khsohish hai k hum is bahroosy ko qayam rekhy per vadda islyan nhi kertay k hum bhi insaan hain aur galtiyan(wrong) buaht zayada hain hum mein bhi……

Kyun k yeah humari ap ko akhir email hai…is k bad tu shadi waly din hi ap ko dekhy gay….

Humari Nupur k kayal rakhiy ga…..

Khuda hafiz

Mayank

Reading this email was giving her Goosebumps butterflies n wht not, making her red in blush, adoring him more n more with evry word he said, its seems like life is truning in heaven , she wished she can write she trust him morethn herself. But stil this cant lessen her anxiety , of entering the new world, meeting him, hearing his voice, feeling him with her…everything is just making her more n more restless…..

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Samrat: card tu dekhiy…kaha gaya hai bhabi ki pasand hai

SA: is ko tu buhat hi halkay rang pasand hai

Samrat: whispered…wasy yeah ap ko kasy pata tha k un ki pasand itni classy hai…room ko dekh ker bhi asa hi lag rah ahi….kuch garbar hai

Mayanak: mein tum se bara hoon samhjy…

Samrat: training layni paray gi

Mayank: anythime

Bth chuckled

Per ap ny bhabi k liyan moo dekhiy k liyan kiya loya

Mayank: aur yeah mein ap ko kyun batoo

Smart: ap ny lay bhi liya

He smile in yes

Samrat: bhai pplss na

Mayank: no way…..

SA: ap dono ki baatein khatam hogai hoo tu sherwani try k lyan jay gay ap loog…aur Mayank ap chutiya kab se lay rah hain….

Mayank: shadi k din se

Samrat: kyun …shadi tu khatam hojay gi phir chotiyoo(holidays) k kiya faida

MD: smile….per beta ek din pehly se tu laytay…mehndi k din ap kiya office mein honagy

Mayank: baba hum half day per ajay gay

SA: loo…sary kam kahtam hongy tab ap aay gay

MD: acha kiya ap ny…bad mein chotyoon ki zayad zaroorat pary gi …

Mayank: ji..he smile try hiding himself sumwhere ….

SA; aur han ..shadi k char din bad apki johoti(grand dinner) hai aur us k ek week tak tu dawatein (dinner) fix hogai hain tu bhar jany k program mat rekh li jay ga…smajhy ap

Mayank: ji ami….

Samrat: bhai …tu tab nhi jao gay tu holidays kahtam,,.yeah kiya baat hoi….yeah hi tu waqt hai ..ap dodno ny tu baat bhi nhi ki hai….kam se kam thora time tu

Mayank: its ok…I'll mange

Smart: bhai u 'll …cause u know ami….but bhabi k kiya

Mayank: I said I'll handle ….dont worry ….

Scorl down to read my note..n don't u dare nt answere my question, warna 4 tragedy OS ..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heeloo guys

The questions are simple yet will decide how I am goona write further

  1. do u guys want elabroted weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated ….defined..
  2. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it…I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai
  3. anything u want me to add…except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🥳yaaa m so happy😛😛😛

thanksss APIII 🤗🤗🤗
dis is all my genuine feelingsss

well i wud love to read abt dos functions though ritualsss bt i wud also love more to read wht happen after der marriage😍...so whtevr u decide i wll be ok wid it...🥳

n abt pics i wud love to see dem plzzz add pics 4 sure...👍🏼

i wish song seq. bhi hota bt yet i know dat ke DADU will really kill some1...😉

loved it lodss thanks again...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wao superb update yar
Aisa lag raha tha ka mera apna ghar ma shadi ho rahi ha
wasa hi hangama hulchul or tension
Great and perfect piece of writing
Now Your Questions
  1. do u guys want elabroted weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated ….defined..
Ans Bhai sedhi si abt ha mujha to shadi ki bohat jaldi ha is lia jaldi sa shadi plz
  1. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it…I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai
Ans this is great yar Do it
  1. anything u want me to add…except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me
Ans Thori Poetry chala gi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update
mayur r totally adorable
mayu such sweetheart his msg 4 nupur was so sweet
the whole update Fiza worth a waiting ur a⭐️
n ur quetsions here is my answe 😊

  1. do u guys want elabroted weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated ….defined..

i would love to read about functions all of it

2. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it…I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai

i'll olso love to see the pic showing about the rituals 😛
3. anything u want me to add…except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me
i wish we could have song seq but if can't it's ok hun do anything alse that will be easy for u
thanks sis for the pm
can't wait to read next


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Fiza jee
kamal ka update tha
Mayank and Nupur dono he apni ghar kaise paint akregi, konsa color se paint karegi ye discuss karegi ye baatei kar rahe thi- it was so cute...
hehehehehe poor mayank- jab nups use kaha ki ab shaadi tak un logo ko baat nehi karna chaiye -bechare ki hosh he ud gayi..lol lol
mayank kikhaat bhaut he payaara tha - spcially last line - "Humari nupurki khayal rakhiyega.".. it sounds so nice...and cute..
beautiful update now waiting for mayur marriage...


  1. do u guys want elaborated weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated ….defined..

yesssi want it in details...wanaa c mayur reaction in each and every function...

2. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it…I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai

wow its a very nice idea... its absolutely fine fiza- go for it...
3. anything u want me to add…except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me

u can add song seq- like in mayur imagination... i mean they can imagine themselves in a very cute and melodious song.. aur agar possible nehi hua tou bhi koi baat nehi..

waiting for ur grand weeding update...


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Posted: 14 years ago
  1. do u guys want elabroted weeding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated '.defined..

mujhe tu shadi dekhni hain is liye jald shadi

  1. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it'I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai

vo ap ki marzi

  1. anything u want me to add'except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me

a little bit masti

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Posted: 14 years ago
  1. do u guys want elabroted wedding , liked mehndi shadi n valima separated '.

thats ur wish did..love to read everything from u

  1. I am thinking of adding pictures to define sumthing like rituals , are u guys ok with it'I have never used so ..tu mjhy kuch ajeeb lag rah hai

dont feel awkward didi...if u r giving the pictures, then it wil be easy to understand, bcz i am unknown to all these

  1. anything u want me to add'except song sequence cause tht I cant dadu will kill me

no didi...

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..it was more beautiful...
now answers of ur questions...
u do whatever u want...i know it'll be beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cute update..
Luved the chat betwenn Mayur..
and yeah i want an elaborate wedding with pics..😳

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