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Posted: 14 years ago

Maybe a bit low, n realistic.. but I want to show this side of sasural too…so

Chapter: 18

Nupur: ami hum ap ki help kerain….

As few weeks passed after marriage, nupur reached kitchen to help SA. She was getting bored siting idle in house, mayank too was in office, Samrat was with his friends. So she has nothing to do…

SA: abhi nhi….

Nupur: hum bore horahy hai…sach mein….pls…

SA: han mein bhi yeahi soch rahi thi…kerna tu agir ap ko hi hai yeah sab…ap k ghar hai…. chalein tu phir ek kam kertain hai…aj apki kheer bana nay ki rasam adda kerhi daytay hai….

Nupur: ji…he said hesitantly as she doesn't know how to make it…

It's a ritual tht the bride first made kheer in her new kitchen thn will strt handle the responsibility

Sa: bana ni tu ati hogi…her larki ko seekhi jati hai shadi se pehly..kam se kam yeah tu…...saman hum nikal daytay hain….ap shoro kerain thik hai….

The way she said , she lost hope of any help so Nupur dial diya's number for rescue

Diya: tini jaldi…abhi apki shaid ko 3 weeks hi tu haoy hain…..aur ghar k kam ap per….

Nupur: api hum bore horahy thy ..tu islayan ami se kaha..acha ab ap humain jadli se baatyin kheer kasay banti hai

Diya: acha chalo dood tu charaho….

She narrated her whole recipe n she cuted the phone, with all the fears, n duwa she remembered she was making kheer….

Shilpa was out for sumwork….and nupur was in kitchen doing the last bit of it….

Samrat: yeah kitchen mein se itni achi khusbo kyun arahi hai

He reached there n saw nupur in kitchen

Samrat: yeah kiya ap kitchen mein, aray ap k abhi arm kerny ka din hai..he said dramtically…

Nupur: Samrat pls idhar aao

Samrat: at ur service

Nupur: aur sach sach yeah taste kero aur baato kasi hai

Samrat: ji..she took a bit in spoon

Nupur: arm se garm hai…

He smile..n took in a spoon

Samrat: thori aur milay gi pls…its yumi….uper se its so balnced in sweet….

Nupur: sach na..ap humara dil rekhny ko tu nhi kaha rahy

Samrat: nhi bhabi..bulkil perfect hai….

Nupur: shukar hai…hum se ko dhanda(cool) hony ko rekh daytay hain…

Samrat: aur hum bhai ko bata tay hain un ki favorite kheer bani hai

Nupur: nhi…jb woh aay gay tu ….un ko khud taste kerny do pls…

He smiled. Oki per mjhy extra milay gi ….woh bhi abhi…pls na bhabi thori se..warna ap k surprise …hehe….evil laugh

Nupur: she chukled ..kahany se pehaly metha …

Samrat: bhabi pls naa

Nupur: she smiled acha yeah lo…khamoshi se..kyun k pehly baray kahatay hain

Samrat: he sat on the kitchen slab, n was enjoying the kheer with childish expression….

Nupur: Samrat….kasay kaha rahy hoo..she ruffled his hairs…

Samrat: kiya yaar bhabi..enjoy kerk kaha raha hoon….yumi….thnku…

Nupur: thnkuuu….

Samrat: itni tension kyun lay rahin hain ap…sab ko achi lagay gi …sachi

….

Mayank: addab…he entered his room n greeted her

Nupur: aray agay ap…

Mayank: nhi mera bhoot hai..he chuckled saying so while removing his shoes….n jacket

Nupur: very funny…mazak ura rahy hain humara

Myanak: nhi baba…humain aj tak yeah sawal nhi samjhy aya…agay ap…aray baba hoon yaha tu ahi gaya hoon …haina..

Nupur: she smiled…kasa rehaa din….she forward a glass of water..

Mayank: thnks….thik tha….tiring ..7 din chute kiya kerlo, lagata hai 7 moth k kam jama hojata hai…

Taking a sip….ap k kasa reha …

Nupur: acha…she smiled..n he frowned

Mayank: very bad…hubby k bhagair acha raha woh bhi itni bari smile k sath….hmm…kisis ny mjhy miss ny kiya…so sad…he pouted…n she giggled…

Nupur: ap fresh hojay…sab khanay per wait ker rahy hain….

He was about to go talking his cloths form her,

Nupur: wasy sab k bata nhi…apki biwi ny ap ko miss kiya..she shyly said tht facing her back to him…

He griped her hand n pulled her to him, she was shocked as thought she is out of reach of him, but to her surprise she was caught right in his grip…

Grinningly he looked at her shocked expression..n she smiled n lowered her eyes

Mayank: acha…kisi ny humain miss kiya..he said leaning a bit to her…..

Nupur: she noded in yes….n he closed her more….

Mayank: kitna….

Hum batain….saying so he leaned towards her, she knew whts cuming next closing her eyes, she let herself felt him after a long lonely day….

Capturing her lips….he made her lost her scnce, moving her to sumother world…yet he experience how truly she missed him , as was shown in her response….

He broking apart he looked at her, n found the same , beautiful smile, with flashing cheeks, he smiled more n kissed her forehead…

Nupur: sab …….wait …..ker ….rahy….hon..gay….

Mayank: thik hai abhi k lyan …ap jasakti hai….kyun k humain sach mein buhat bhook lagi hai…..

Dopahr mein bhi kahan sahi se nhi kahaya

With this the blush went away

Nupur: kyun….kyun nhi kahaya…mayank subha bhi ap itna sa nashta kertay hain , phir kahan bhi nhi kaya …aur 9 baj rahy hain raat k….had hai apki bhi

Mayank: he looked at her in utmost surprise….meri biwi ny mjhy dhata….

Nupur: she looked at him with fear…nhi..hum .dhaat nhi rahy thy….woh bs….sorry humara woh matlab nhi tha

Mayank: nupur….kiya hua…he gripe her form shoulder…idhar dekhin ….ap k haq banata hai …lo..aj tu huamin itna acha laga ap ny pehli bar humain haq se kuch kaha…tu sorry kyun

Nupur: apko bora tu nhi laga….

Mayank: humain acha laga….

Nupur: thik hai…per agar kal bhi asa hoa na tu achi baat nhi hai…she pointed her finger..to him..n he giggled

Mayank: ok biwi..he kissed her finger….ap chalein hum atay hain….

….

The dinner was served n was almost in silent, but with samrats n nupurs chiarr kahni, with mayanks smile n Ahmed's glares was part of dinner…

It was time to serve the sweet dish, n nupur swalloed a lump….

Mayank got a call so he excuse himself, she served the sweet n was watching evry1s expression..

SA: acha yeah kheer apki bahu nay bani hai…

MF: aray wah…sach beta…she nodded smilingly…jab hi hum kahy itni alag aur mazaidar (tasty) kyun hai….

Nupur: sach mein

MF: bulkily buaht achi hai..

SA: han bs meetha kafi kam hai….

Nupur: ohh…sorry….she was a bit disappointed…but the scream made evry1 looked up

Mayank: KHEER….

She looked up at him, he was so happy to see it,

Mayank: kiya baat hai ami….aj ap ny hum per yeah karam kasay kiya…kheer…gr8..pehly batati na hum khana kam kahty..

Nupur chukled n SA was about to say tht she hasn't made it, but Samrat let her to keep quite, lets see wht he says….MF shock his head at there plan…as knew his son to that he will not publicly praise his wife…he too is a bit shy …

Mayank: he took a spoon full n his expression changed to frown n nupurs to disappointment, he agin took it …..

Kya baat hai ami…aj ap ny hum sab per itna reham kasay kerdiya…yeah tu waqi cawal(rice) ki kheer lag rahi ahi…sakar(sugar) ki kheer ki jaga…so perfect sweetened

Her heart n face was warmth by the true praise she heard….she was so happy

Samrat: kyun k aj yeah kheer ami ny nhi…bulkay bhabi ny bani hai

He was about to take a spoon but stoped n looked at nupur who shyly lowered her head….

Mayank: ohh…he smiled n continue eating

Samrat: oh kiya..kiya OH…yeah kiya baat hoi…wht OH…khul k tareef kero pehly…he took away the bowl

Mayank: Samrat idhar do…

Sammart: ji nhi pehly kahao….itnay mazai ki hai k ungliya chat ta rh jao(finger licking) …hai k nhi

Mayank: han hai….idhar do ..he was pouted like child

She was laughing at these two brothers

Samrat: aur kahao dil chah reha hai banawali k hath….

As soon as he complete his sentence mayank grip Samrat….

Mayank: han kiya dil chah raha hai…

Samrat: mera nhi apka kay banawali k hath

SA: Samrat…..she glared….n mayank nupur took breath, would have been hell embarrassing for them…..

Wasy metha metahy ki traha acha lag ta hai..she frowned

Nupur: ji ami,,pehli baar bani hai na…..,agli baar baano gi tu apk samny tu ap humain batatijay ga….

SA: han yeah thik hai…..yeah layin

Nupur: yeah kiya

SA: yeah jhora hai aj ap ny pehli bara ghar mein kuch banaya hai…..

MF: aur yeah humari traf se….she bowed her head khush rehain …..aur han apni ami ko nhi chakay gi apny aj kiya banay hai…

She smiled widely at the name of going her home

Mayank: is waqt….raat kafi hogai hai kal jalein gay…thik hai

She nooded in yes smilingly

As mayank proceed to his room after chating with his father, nupur was busy with her mother in law to clean the kitchen n utensil…after that she made tea for him, as she saw him biting good night n proceeding to his room….

Samrat: bhabi ap ki sir taj( husaband) ny kaha hai k un ko aur kheer kahni hain…aur mjhy bhi thori se khamoshi se day to pls,.ami na dekahin

Nupur: kyun

Samrat: itni raat ko meetha…..samrat ap k demmagh karab hogay hai…..pls

She shocked her head n pored out sum for him n sum for mayank…

N went to her room…

He was siting on bed doing work on his laptop…..

Nupur: apki chay…she putted on side table n climbed up the bed…

Mayank: thanks….puting away his thing …n pulled her close…

Wasy Samrat thik kah rahy thy

Nupur: kiya…she rested her head in his chest….n he was playing with her fingers…

Mayank: yeahi k humara dil chah rah hai kay…saying so he took her hand n kissed them soflty rubbing his lips on them for sumtime…..she gasped at his tactics

Collecting herself form the moment

Nupur: ap sab mera dil rekhny k lyan kah rahy hain….she looked at up to him, a bit sad

Mayank: bulkily nhi….aur humain tu pata bhi nit ha k apny bani hai phir…..kyun….he said making her hairs strand away from her face…

Nupur: ami ko achi nhi lagi na…..

Mayank: aray nhi baba…ami ki kheer kabhi kahay ga tu pata chaly ga…diabetes hojay gi itni sugar hoti hai….yeah bulkily perfect hai…

He took the bowl n feeded her a spoonful

Kasi hai…perfect na….

Nupur: hmm…yeah tu sahi hai…

Mayank: dkeha…..itni choti se baat ko dil per nhi laytay…aur sochiya ga nhi hum ap k sath ek spoon se zayada share ker rahy hai…

She laughed a bit…n took her old position in his arms, while he was enjoying his favt…

Ring …..

She raised her head a bit wch was agin pulled back…

Mayank: phone per baat kerny k layn hilana zaroori hai….he glared…

Nupur: she smiled….salam api…

Diya: walikum aslam…..kheer kasi bani

Nupur: buhat achi…sab ko buhat achi lagi

Mayank: siway saas k

Nupur: she glared at him

Diya: yeah mayank kiya kah raha hai…itni clear awaz..kitny kareeb bhata hai..hm

Nupur: apiii…woh…woh asa hi kah rahy hain

Diya: mayank ko kasai lagi …hmmm….

Nupur: achi lagi unko….she shyly smiled…

N he snatched phone from her,,n snuggled her more close to him…

Mayank: ji bari saali hum se pochy na….

Diya: oho…ji tu kasi lagi kheer

Mayank: buhat mazay gi…humari biwi ko jeez banay achai na hoo….asa tu ho nahi sakta

Diya: wah wah….humain bhi kahni hai…akelay akelay mazay ker rahy hain ap

Mayank: bs aj hum kafi thak gay tha….kal paka apki behan ko lay ker ghar aay gay….ap bhi ajaein…

Diya: thik hai hum khoshish kerain gay……khush rahin….khuda hafiz

Mayank: allah ahfiza…..

Nupur: hum se phone kyun liya..she pouted …

Mayank: islayn k ap dono..behany agar baatein kerna shoor kerti..tu mera aur adi k kiya hota..he said mischievously…..abhi tu humain is ki mithas aur bahrany k irada hai…..

She snuggled more in him to hide herself , but he make his way, to her showering her with his love….

………………..

Next day

Mayank: hello nupur

Nupur: ji..

Mayank: ap tiayr rahein hum atay hian tu foran ami k yaha chalty hain

Nupur: abhi …she was hocked

Mayank: han …hum ny kaha tu tha kal chalien ga…thik hai

Nupur: ji

She thought he was saying just like tht, n this 2morw might not cum , as in with Diya's case, it always does happen…

She got ready, n packed sum for her mother….took permission for her mother in law, n heard mayank's car horn

Nupur: ap fresh tu holay tay…thak gay hongy hai na….she felt a but guilty looking at him who was pressing his neck….

Mayank: no no…its oki…ghar ja ker tu bulkily dil nhi chata bhar jany ga...Api ko batya apny ap arhin hain

Nupur: ji…

Reaching her home she was welcomed warmly it was always such a gr8 pleasure to see evry ones such big smiling face whn she came here….

Her mother was tasting it n she was now feeling really tense….

Zeenat: wah yeah tu kamal hai…buhat achi hai nupur…ap aur khana …kitna ajeeb hai na..

Mayank: kyun….

Dadi: kyun k yeah aj tak kitchen mein bhi nhi gain….chukled….

Nupur: ami diya api

Zeenat: un k phone aya tha…woh nhi aaa ay gi…

Nupur: ohh..

The disappointment n a bit of sadness was clear in bth ladies eyes..

Mayank: ami ab hum chalein….

Mayank: api kyun nhi aai…

Nupur: un ko ijazaat nhi mili hogi

Mayank: adi kyun mana keray ga

Nupur: bhiaya nhi…un ki saas ny mana kiya hoga…abhi shadi k dino mein buhat rukhi hain woh…tu…bs…

Mayank: tu shdi thi…aur us ko tu kitna time hogay

Nupur: un k kayal se larki ko itna apny ghar nhi jana chaiy,,…warna sasural mein dil kasay lagy ga…aur phir ghar kaun dekhy ga…etc…etc….jab un ki shadi hoi thi tu strt mein tu 2 wks se pehly ghar any ki ijazaat nhi thi un ko…woh tu ab bhaiya ny sambhal hai…..

In k itna dill tha anay k….she sigh,..n was prtty said…he knew wht her sister means to her, n so as for diya nupur is just like her child…..

Mayank: hello adi…yaar hum 5 in teray ghar aray hain….ghar per ho

Nupur looked at him surprise n he smile at her in assurance….

Thik hai jab tak tum pocho gay hum bhi aay gay…..

Nupur: thnku so much mayank…thnku…she said with teary eyes….

Mayank: anything for my wife…n not for tears for smile….

He side hugged her sqeening a bit…

Nupur: per api is waqt kaha gai hai

Mayank: kyun ….

Nupur: itni raat ko ghar se bhar niklana allowed nhi …

Mayank: yaar yeha ghar hai k jail..uff….

……

The smile at both the sister, n frowns , n teasing passed by her mother –in-law was well enough to show him, how much right he did, n how much diffcult its for Diya…

Adi: thnks mayank….warna yeah smile meri wife k chehray per nhi ati….

Mayank: common adi….apki wife k lyan thori kiya hai….its of mutaual benfit..

The laughed..bidin goodbye..thy went to there home….

She was continusly talking abt diya..how happy she was, wht she said abt all this..it was the first time she actually talked tht much n was looking so cute…not able to hold himself…he kissed her with all the passion, n love wch was warming his heart, she was numb frst but thn responded back with same affection…

Mayank: cant help it..u were looking so cute….caressing her cheeks, n taking in her fragrance he whispered this near her ear….

She shiver a bit at sudden intimacy….

Mayank: where is my thnku …hmm….saying so he kissed her ear…n she clutch his colloar…..no problem I'll take it myself…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
edittt


Fizaaa

it was superb update hun
extremely beautiful
mayur scene was very cute and romatic
and dining hall scene was just best
heheheheh sam is a sweet bro and naughty too
awww i just loved dis maynk - he knew nups very well
i loved d whole update janu
fabulous update
muahhh

keep it up
Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
so romantic . I love it. plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nupur is a damn lucky girl. a husband like mayank is one in a million.
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Posted: 14 years ago
APIII...
m so happy...😃😃
pata hain apko i think mera dil puri tarha se iss ff se jura hua hain...sachi😊
u wont blv bt main bilkul sach bol rahi hoon...
u know thori der pehle hi main sirf issi ke bare mein soch rahi thi...
unki e-mail ki batein n d VM of dis ff main aj sara din wahi sun rahi thi...
n abhi jab log in kiya to apka PM a gaya...😃
m telling u mera iss ff se sach mein DIL KA RISHTA hain...😉
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗
ek aur baat batau apko apka update ane se pehle humne Iftaar mein kheer khaya tha...isnt it another co-incident cum connection...🤣
pata hain... apko lag raha hoga na ke arey ye ladki to puri pagal ho gayi hain...hain na
per kya karu ab tak to u shud know dat m obsessed wid MAYUR...😍
n i love dis ff a looottt...😃

ok so nw abt d update...😊
i sooo loved it...😃😃
Samrat is such a darling brother in law i tell u...😉
bt shilpa aunty is typical saas in dis ff...
bt i guess sare saas to hamesha ek jese nehi hote na so i will adjust...😛
waise i loved MayUr romance...☺️☺️
aaawww Mayank is so sweet...☺️😳☺️
he is so concern abt Nupur's happiness...😳
n even i loved it wen he said to dia api ke kheer sab ne like liya sibay saas ke...🤣
he is so adorable...😆
i dont like dia api's in-laws...😕

i loved it lodsss...👏👏
awesome update...👍🏼


ps: lolzzz so u actually put ur brother in law's situation in d last update...
hehehe bichare bhaia...😆😆

do continue soon...
love u API lodsss🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely... Mayank is really understanding...
Thank you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
asusual loved da update

tc
loads of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeh mayank jaise log sach mein kyun nahi hote fizu...!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: valliyah

yeh mayank jaise log sach mein kyun nahi hote fizu...!

hmm hotay hain per zara kam..
aur agr zayada hotay ti kahinya kaun parhta
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved the way mayank was taking care of nupur..she is so lucky.having a husband like mayank is a bliss

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