Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 82

Originally posted by: shafyyy

amazing update...
lovely...

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

this is not at all fair dear...i was getting so engrossed with the story n the characters of this FF.n now all of a sudden u r planning to end it???plzzz stretch it a bit more yaar...its been always a problem 4 mayank to keep a balance between his professional n personal life..he never has been able to give nupur quality time...so i would like to see mayank realizing his mistakes n therefore amends them...at the same time there should hv been some intimate n quality moments between them...so plzz show all of these slowly...dont end it so soon hun.. 😳

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

Awesomeee Update Fiza...👏
i m really Sorry if u felt bad about my last Comment on ur last Update...its not that i only want there romance...Cumonnn yaar...i m luving the way u r proceeding the story...i would love it the way it is...jusy carry on with this...Dear...n as far as about ur question:

1 wht is the thing u want me to show

i m just luving it the way it is...i mean u r moving the story brilliantly dear...n would love to read more abt this...😳

2 at wht note u want me to end the story'

well the ans to this que is ..."On a Happy Note"😆

Annu😊

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

nice part...

sorry for te late reply...

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

awesome update...👏

as usual beautifully written...👏

so now Nupur has became an Adarsh Bahu..😎

awww she is so sweet... par wo itna sara kaam akele kaise karleti hai !!!!!😲

i appreciate her ... she has grt stamina ... by god!!!!😲😕

love mayur a lot...😃

mayank was so busy ... nupur felt alone, but she was so understanding ... love her.😃

woah ... why shilpa that much strict that she cant see anything beyon perfection!!

that is ridiculous ... n that is pure saas ...😡

like nups n mayank's father convo .😃

it was so sweet ... his father was so sweet ... even he can see how much pressure nupur handing ths days, bt shilpa dint ...wah!!!😡

nupur is really a sasuma's pet ... sasuma jo bolegi wohi hoga ... typical bahu by god!!!😔

like samrat.😊

he was so understanding...n sweet.😃

so, nupurs going to her maika ... very gud ...😃

want some dia-nups scene ... their scenes wr worth watching.😃

wating for next update.😊

continue soon.😊

why do u want to end this ff so soon????

ye necessary hai kya k shadi ho gyi to end kardo??? 😳

nhi na??!!! to end math karna ... kuch aur melodrama dikha ... aur shilpa to thori soft bana ... wo ekdum bamboo k mafic stiff hai😉

update soon.😊

so sorry for late reply ... u knw d reason.

Yes nupur is now a bahuu

Yaar pata nhi but hoi jata hai ange sumhow I have seen my sister doing so too

With children

Beta its not abt sasu ma pet…u cant husbands donot like arguments with there beloved mother no matter how wrong she is ..n thts truth

Glad u liked her father in law converstion

Yes diay talks with a surprise will be cuming soon

Yaar its not like tht u know wht im feeling right now abt this story ..plus from 24 chpts I have chnge my mind to more..n u know wht I am adding too

So hopefull people will like tht phase too

Thnks for ur coment dear

Gladu liked it

Hi Guys

I know I am terrible late but was planning to update 2 days back but light n rain both didn't allowed

Enjoy a filler in this story…long n boring …..will try n update next part really soon

Rplyd to u all pls do chk it..

Thnks for ur so nice words on last part

Pardon error haven't check

Lov ya…

Anila, keya..i hope u will enjoy…

For all those who wants romance

Fiza

Chapter: 21

Meeting everyone it was late in night almost 11 when she n her sister was now left alone to chit chat , the girls talk u know

Diya: yeah chehray(face) per 12 kyun baj rahy hain

Nupur: woh bs asy hi…aj mayank ko hum ny ghusa dila diya…

Diya: kyun unhony mana kiya tha any ko kiya

Nupur: nhi api….woh tu meri saas bhi nhi mana kerti khabi…wasy mana woh kahbi kis cheez k lyan nhi kerti…bs thori sadu hai..she giggle

Diya: agar sadu nhi hogi tu saas kasy kehlay( will be called) gi…..acha mayank ko kiya ho yeah batao

She narrated the whole n diya chukled..

Uffo nupur ap bhi na…hum apko ek baat bata dain yeah mard(men) asay hi hotay hai, abhi ap un se baat keray gi na tu un ko yaad bhi nhi hoga k unhony asa kuch kaha hoga….un k harghiz yeah matalb nhi tha…itna hectic schedule hai…. ap k sath apni pershani nhi share keray gay tu phir kis k sath, pyar se handle kero..itna chira chira hona tu lazmi hai na(to be in such irritated mood is possible)

Nupur: ji api hum jantay hai…aj bhi woh sirf humain yaha chor ny k lyan jadli aay thy, aur ab ghar per bhi koi nhi hoga , un ko is waqt chay chiay hoti hai…she pouted

Diya: uff…tu abhi se miya ji ki yaad arhi hai….un k kyal kaun rekhy ga…aur kya kay yaad arah hai ..detail mein bataoo

Nupur: apiii…ap bhi na….

There teasing session was stoped as nupur phone rung…to her surprise it was mayank….

Mayank: ap thik hain….he was feeling guilty about his attitude, n this was his way of knowing she minded or not..

Nupur: ji hum thik hai….ap soay nhi…

Mayank: bs kam ker rahy thy…

Nupur: samany desk per electric kettle mein pani hai, tea bags bhi side per hi rekhy hain , or whitener bhi , ap chai bana lay…acha lagy ga…

Mayank: hmm…chalo ap enjoy kero…hum khosish kertay hai… allah hafiz…

Nupur: mayank….

Mayank: ji

Nupur: nhi kuch nhi

He smiled…

Mayank: miss ya too..takecare…

She smiled shyly…bye…

Diya: uffuuu…smile tu dekhooo…kiya baat ke humain bhi baatein na …

Nupur: kiya api…ap apni sunay sab kasa chal raha hai…aur apko hum se kcuh important baat kerni thin a

Diya: woh ap k lyan k news hai abhi confirm nhi hai….test ke report ajay tu….per woh

She was blushing to much n nupur was frowning tht turn in to surprise..

Nupur:report..test….. API>>>KYA HUM KHALA BAN NAY WALY HAIN…she almost shouted n jumped on bed to get near to her sister

Diya: diya noded in yes….

Nupur: omg….api hum itny khush hain k bss…..she hugged her tight…OMG OMG

Adi bahiya ny kiya kaha

Diya: unhony tu per jahan(world) sir per utha rekh hai….abhi hum ny kisi ko batay nhi hai….

Nupur: acha hai confirm tu hony do…api mjhy tu soch soch ker bhi kuch horaha hai….OMG

Diya: tu soch n kiya …tum bhi lag jao line mein,,,she touched her shoulder teasingly

Nupue: itni jadli…nhi abhi nhi…..

Diya: kyun mayank nhi chahty….

Nupur: humari kabhi is baray mein baat hi nhi hoi….she though a bit surprise..n blushed

Diya: ab dono shrmana tu band keray….ap tu ap, mayank bhi bhi asa hi hai…..

Nupur" per yeah tu kamal news hai…oh God kitna maza aay ga na……

Diya: han I hope sab k reaction asa hi hoo…..

…………………..

After hell of 10 days he took a day off from office to surprise her, but he was banging his head not to tell her before, as if he has done tht , tu kam se kam aj k kam mein pehly kerlay ti na….

He was playing with her fingers, lying in her lap….

Mayank: tu yeah kiya baat hoi…hum ny ap k lyan tu chuti li…aur ap aba arahin hain room mein….had hai

Nupur: aray tu kam khatam ker k hi aao gi na…warna agr kisi ny awaz di tu phir ap k shakal per yaha ….she pointed out at his forhead to wch he raised his eyebrows…ek lambi se line ajay gi…..phir ek aur …aur ek aur…she chukled

N he turned…

Mayank: acha …tu ap hum raha mazak ura rahi hai …huh…buhat maza arah hai …he strt leaning towards her…

Mayankk…

Kya mayank…abhi tu buhat masti soch rahi thi…ab kiya hua…he was cuming dangerously close, n that her was no way out….she was lyng now, he was lying beside almost half on her….placing his one hand on his neck supporting his head…..n other was griping her near him….

Mayank: ab bhago….wasy ap us waqt kuch bata rahi thi humain…he said plying with her hairs, un tying them n removing her clip….making his fingers way in to her hairs…

Nupur: woh…kab..

Mayank: kiya hua..he leaned close with a smirk on his face….n kissed her check…n whispered near her ear…bhool gai…hmm…he rubed his nose on her skin….n she moved her hands up to get grip of him…

Kissing her neck deeply, he moved a bit back..n kissed her forehead and than proceed to forward n captured her lips n deep passionate kiss…n continue to complete a blissd night

….

He woke up n slided his hand to the other side, n open his eyes with a frown, it was just 8: 30…n the slept late …he even didn't need to goo office thn where she went….it was 15 mins later tht he found him cuming back to her room, courtesy the maid as she informed her tht she will cum late….else she wouldn't have

She went back to her bed , n in no time was pulled back in his arms….

Nupur: ap kyun tuh gay

Mayank: ap kyun uthin(woke up)…humain bhi office nhi jan phir….

Nupur: smarat aur baba ko nashta bi tu dayna hota hai….phir masi ajati hai tu ghar k kam kaun dekhy ga miya ji….

Mayank: sharafat se yahin rahin ap…aur humain sony dain…he placed his head on her shoulder, n snuggled more….

She was pating his head lovingly..when he raised his head to look tht she was wide awake…

N he kissed her neck

Mayank: kya baat hai suny k mood nhi hai ap ka kiya…..

Nupur: ankh lagi tu phir late hojao gi na…..

Mayank: he moved back n looked at her smiling face…..tu late hojay gi tu, ap se pehly bhi tu yeah sab handle hota tha na….

Nupur: per jab hum ny yeah zemadari li hai tu humain pora bhi kerna hai na..

He smiled n kissed her forhead….

Nupur: acha ab humain choray hum fresh hotay hai, phir neechy jay…

Mayank: chorny per humain kiya milay ga…….

Nupur: kuch nhi

Mayank: tu hum khud lay ly gay….ap kyun takleef kerti hain…

Saying so he leaned towards her to fullful his desire n welcuiming her morning beautifully ….

Broking apart , he was playing with her hairs, when sumthing struck his mind

Mayank: ap kal humain kuch batnay wali thi….

Nupur: kab….

Mayank: raat ko….jab hum ny apki bolti band kerdi thi….he giggled n she turned red….

Nupur: ji woh…

N there attention was diverted to the ring of phone…he moved away n picked it up..

Mayank: hello…

ADi: asalamulikum…ap janab ghar per kiya ker rahy hain……

Mayank: walkiumaslam…..bs asay hi….

Adi: aray yaar hum detail thori poch rahy hai k kya ker rahy hoo..mein tu yeah kaha aj office nhi gay …

Mayank: adi tum bhi na….bs hum 10 din se almost ghar sirf sony arahy thy …buhat tiring hogya that u socha ek din k off lay lo…ap suny kasa chla raha hai….

Adi: bs yaar sab kuch set…aura gay sab kuch buhat zayada set hony wala hai…

Mayank: kyun ..promotion horaha hai kiya janb….

Adi: asay hi kuch hai ..

Mayank: aray wah congrats ….so now u will be what ….

Adi: need to wait for sum months , than I'll be promote to father…he said just a matter of fact….

Mayank: oh…..KYA….API IS …

Adi: ya diya is expecting ….

Mayank: had hai adi…asi news kasay day rahy hoo…congrats …so good to know tht

Adi: thnks yaar…ya it is….

Mayank: rukho nupur se baat kerlo ..

Nupur: congrats bhaiya…..

Mayank looked at her n raised his eyebrows….

She hunged up the phone….

Mayank: ek sec ek sec……ap ko pata tha haina…

Nupur: she nooded in yes…

Mayank: tu humain kyun nhi bataya hum samny se wish kertya na …..

Nupur: woh hum kal se batany ki khosish tu ker rahy thy …..

Mayank: ufff..kitna bara kam tha n yeah

Nupur: dekhy ap k kasoor hai ap hum humin bolny hi nhi daytay….

He giggled n pulled her cheek…..

Nupur: acha ab uthy aur humain jany dain pls……

Rashing to freshen up she got involved in her full on busy schedule, it was frist time mayank was watching her doing all that , doing evrythng ….

From breakfast to handling the servent, to guards, to his father n mother's little things…to getting phone…

He was just watching her rashing her n there throughout the house, n plus making out sumtime to spend with him to….

It was late in night when she entered her room, tighing her hairs up taking her night dress she went to change..cuming out she asked him tht if needs sumting ..to wch he said no..he was just observing her still she was busy in work, placing thing at there place..he turn around to look at the time piece it was 11:30…he sigh, n placed his laptop aside…..n removing his glasses

Nupur: ap k kam hogaya…ap soo nhi ab tak….so jay subha office bhi hai apk..phir wohi hectic schedule….

She was saying all tht n didn't notice tht he is cuming near her…with an impulse he swept her off her fed n carried her in his arms….her mouth was droped…he looked at her n she lowered her eyes…

Placing her on to bed he made her ly down, n covered her with a sheet..

Nupur: mayank woh….

He placed his finger on lips asking her to keep quite….n moved to the other side of bed she turn around..n was about to sit

Mayank: nupur….chup bulkily…he pulled her near, n caress her forehead….so jao bs…subha 8 bajay se dekh raha ha hoon ek lamhay ko nhi bhati hain ap…itna kam kero gi tu ap ki sehat k kiya hoga…kam se kam ab tu rest kero…so jao…thak gai hoo

She smiled…n hugged him…

Nupur: thnku….

Mayank: soory us din hum per ghussa hoa…aj pata chala jaty jaty bhi ap per kitni zeemadari hogi…humain samhjna chaiy tha..

Nupur: its ok…humain bulkily bora nhi laga..ap bhi tu kitna stress mein thy…warna khbi asay baat nhi kertay hum se humain pata hai…

Mayank: ach abs ab soo jaoo…

Nupur: apk office k kapray iron kerny hai…

Mayank: hum khud kerlain gay…he kissed her eyes to make them close….good night..n she snuggled close to him to slept in the warmth of her husband….