Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 86

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Originally posted by: arjun-forever

wow fantastic part...so romantic...and sweet...

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Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Awwwieee

Such a sweet part

Loved it

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Here is the next chpter..

Rplyd to u all

Thnks for ur love n appreciation

Pardon errors

Sorry for this chapt..

Chapter : 22

Diya's home:

Nupur: congrtas anty…buhat buhat Mubarak hoo

ADi' mother: shukriaya apka….aray ap tu agai apki ami nhi aai Mubarak bad dayny…maa se pheli hi

Nupur: woh ami ..actually dadu ki tabiyat ki wajha se nhi aski tu unhony kaha k mein hi kam se kam ja ker apko Mubarak bad day do….

Mayank: whispered..hitler

Adi: pori k pori..

He looked embarrassed towards him..

Adi: relax mjhy blkil bora nhi laga

Mayank: congrats….he hugged him …kasa lag rah hai

Adi: yaar honestly pehly tu buaht excitement thi, ab thori anxiety horahi hai……mayank giigled…but subha subha kafi tension hogai

Mayanak: kyun…api tu thik hain na…

Adi: han bs us ko morning sickness horahi hai…aur woh bhi with smell of roti ….

Mayank: kiya…tu donot let her go in kitchen na

Adi: muskil hai yaar…ami…sigh….bs islyan …aj buhat weakness se hogai us ko….

Mayank: tum anty se baat kyun nhi kertay….

Adi: kerta hoon …per koi faida nhi hota….soch raha hoon kuch dono k lyan zabradsti is ko ami k ghar chor aaao

Jati bhi tu nhi hai..ek month wah rah laygi tu better hai

Mayank: kyun…tumhary baghir dil nhi lagta ….he said teasingly

Adi: woh bhi plus my job ..mein raat ko aksar dair se hi ata hoon…tu khana dayna meray kam kerna..us sab ki fikar rahti hain inko…..aur hai bhi baat yeah chali jati hai tu..mjhy kuch samhj nhi ata

Mayank: wasy sach hai…tu khana ap humaray sath kaha liya kero yaar

Adi: ji nhi dost ap hotay thy ab meri behan k sasural hai….no..never

Mayank: kya yaar

There attention was diverted to women talk…

Nupur: api im so happy for u….

Adi: aur humary liya

Nupur: han han …meir behan k kyal rekhy

Mayank: bulkily …humari api ko koi taqleef nhi honi chaiya

AM: acha tu diya ko saural mein itni taqleeef hoti hai k tum ny apny shoro se bhi shikyat kerdi….

Mayank: aray nhi anty..mein tu mazak ker raha tha…apko tu mein kab se janta hoon…asay kasay soch sakta hoon

AM: bs ab dekho kiya hota hai….diya ki ama ki tu do do betiyan hain…aur in ki chachi ki bhi…

Adi: aur meri bhi beti hi honi chiay bs….diya hum ny kah diya hai..

Mayank: adi tum se mjhy is mjhy yeah umeed nhi thi…api k bus mein hai kiya yeah

Adi: whtever it is…mjhy beti chaiy bus…..no arguments

AM: arya acha bolo..beta..

Adi: no beta..mjhy sirf ek pyari se beti chaiy….

Nupur: thik hai done bhaiya…..acha anty hum chaltay hain….ap se milny aai thi mayank bhi kafi thak gay hain…..

In car

Mayank: mjhy adi se is jahilana(illiterate ) soch ki tawaq( umeed) nhi thi…

Nupur: matlab…

Maayank: beti ya beta….Allah ny ulad( child) di hai yeah hi kafi nhi hai kiya…

Nupur: she chukled

Mayank: ap hass rahi hai…api ko kitna bora laga hoga

Nupur: ap ny shyad anty ki baat ghoor se nhi suni hai….woh beta chti hain ..unhony ek tana tu day hi diya tha yeah kah ker k humary khadan mein tu sari lerkiyan hain….tu diya kiya un ko larka day gi

Mayank: KYA….

Nupur: islyan adi bhaiya ny pehlay hi yeah kah diya k mjhy beti chiay…by chance agar larki hogai tu anty api ko kcuh nhi kah saky gi…thora tu kahin gi…

Mayank: OMG…she is a pain….had hai…itni aqaal nhi hai ..insaan per nhi tu Allah k kahy per hi bahrossa kerlain…jab Allah ny kaha hai k ulaad ( child) shoor k naseeb se hoti hai tu ….hum abhi bhi wahin hai aj tak….

Nupur: han hai tu…per acha hai ap ko beta hoo….sukkon rahy ga un ko…she said with a shivering voice

Mayank: nupurrr…ap bhi…duwa kerai k api aur un k bachy thik rahy ….achi kismet lay ker aay

Nupur: amen…but phir bhi ap janty nhi hai api k darja(level) kitna uper hojay ga e betay say….api ki saas buhat tang kerti hain

Mayank: I know can see tht….shukar adi support kerta hai…aur ap duwa ker kero un k lyan bs….

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Reaching home they were siting on the swing in balcony…

Mayank: nupurr

Nupur: ji….

Mayank: ap ko kiya chaiy

Nupur: kcuh nhi

Mayank: kya….matlab ap…

Nupur: kiya hua….

Mayank: humain pata hai abhi kafi jaldi per…agay khabi tu hum sochy gay na is baray mein

Nupur: kis baray mein…she asked innocently

N he slap his head ..

Mayank: lu…ap ko yeah hi nhi pata hum kiya baaat ker rahy hain…..she was looking so curiously at him…….nupur hum bacho k baray mein baat ker rahy hain…

With tht, her expression changed to surprise n thn she was blushing hard….

Mayank: uff ek tu apk shrmana….

N he recived a slap on his arm playfully…

N hugged him from side…n he hugged him too

Mayank: han tu ab tu apn moo bhi chupa liya….ab tu batana baray ga

She chukled knowing true she has hided her faced as sumwhere she wants to talk to him on this, when diya mention they shud…she too felt tht its high time she cant talk all this..mayank hi tu hai..thn why so relectance…

Nupur: kuch bhi….

Mayank: kuch bhi se kiya morad hai…

Nupur: abhi kisi ny hum se kaha tha k ulaad hona hi kafi hai…

Mayank: uff…ek tu ap bhi yaar…saabra( to be happy in wht get) aur sahkra (thankful to wht evr get) hoo

Nupur: kiya..she giggled yeah sabar aur shukar tu suna tha….

Mayank: yeah female version hai us ka…..nhi aj mjhy yeah sun na hai k apny kiya socha tha…

Nupur: mayankkk…

Mayank: no mayank wayank….tell me n I wanna know…

Nupur: ek beti aur ek beta tu pakka…

Mayank: matlab…ek beti aur ek betay k bad bhi kuch soch rekha hai ap ny..he tighten his grip…kiya baat hai …yahin precisely ap k cricket team k plan tha…aur us per itna shramna…

Nupur: mayankk…hum ny yeah thori kaha….apbhi na….

Mayank: ap ko do se zayada chaiya yeah tu kaha

Nupur: han…she said shyly smiling

Mayank: oki..point noted…kafi kam kerna pary gay…matlab

Nupur: mayankkk…..

Aur apny…..

Mayank: mein ny actually khabi shadi k bary mein at 27 nhi socha tha….jab ami ny kaha tu socha…phir apko dekha tu…kafi zayada socha

She chukled….

Phir ap se baat ki tu phir sirf yeahi socha…huh…they both giggled….ap k sath sab kuch itna complete laga k is baray mein socah hi nhi…but us din adihiraj se baat kit u laga ..k yeah part bhi tu hai life ka…hum ny is bary mein kyun nhi socha….

So mein ny tab socha….i donot know k mjhy kiya chaiy …mera khabi interaction nhi raha bacho k sath …..but I like them…they r too inncocnt..thy gave u a feeling tht thy need ur protection n u….n I like tht

Uff kitna sar socha..e laughed n

He said smilingly n she was looking at him to

Nupur: ap apni baat kitni asani se kah daytay hai na

Mayank: hm cause mjhy pata hai ap hunagma nhi machy gai…ap ny ghoor nhi kiya mein ny pricsly kaha k mjhy kuch khas pata nhi k I wont them or not…but I wont to explore

Nupur: mjhy acha lagta jab ap honest;y mjh se sab kuch kahtay hain

Mayank: thnks for provided me tht space…per ek baat tu raha gai

Nupur: kiya…

Mayank: n till whn u want to plan family…

She smiled n he hugged her to hide her…

Mayank: ha nab thik hai ab bataoo

Nupur: mayank ap mer mazak ura rahy hain……mjhy baat nhi kerni

Mayank: nhi nhi biwi jan….baaat tu kerni paray gi…..batao na kab tak…

Nupur: jab ek saal hojay shadi ko…..

Mayank: perfect ..is se pehly tu hum bhi nhi chahty

Nupur: aur agar us se pehly kcuh….she asked a bit shy a bit scared

Mayank: tu Allah ki marzi…..magar yeah intresting hai k tum ny 4 5 bacho k bary mein socha hai…phew….

He laughed

Mayannkkk

Mayank: kiya mayank….wht abt practicing it

She looked at him with utmost surpise, n thn hided her face in him….

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In morning SA was not to much talking to nupur, n tht was sumhow worry her, when she came back home last night she went to change in room, n thn mayank didn't let her cum down, n she knew there was sum pending work in kitchen n tht was cleared til morning ….

She tried talking but it was not giving any help,

In evening she was siting in lounge, waiting for mayank…..she thought she shud ask SA wht has actullly happened

Nupur: ami koi baat hoi hai…ap hum se naraz hain kiya

SA: hum kaun hotay hain nazraz hony waly….han…

Nupur: nhi woh kal hum…

SA: apko apni zeemdari k zara bhi ehassa hai…abhi bhi lagta hai ap usi bachpan mein hai….kal hum ny ap se kuch kaha tha shayad…k kitchen mein methi rekhi hai andar rekh dain aur darwaz becahy k band kerdain…..

Magar apt u apni chitokolo mein gum thi na…tu hum se yeah kahny ki kiya zaroorat thi k hum chor dain ap kerlay gi..

Nupur: ami woh hum…sorry humain yaad nhi raha hum mayank k kam

SA: mayank k kaun se kam hotay hai, bechara raat ko thak ker ata hai ..agar ek do kam keridya tu kaun sa pahr utha liya..

Ap ko pata bhi hai ko woh methai fathiha( kind of pardsad) ki thi..billi ny mo mora us per….astakhfar….

Agr apny ghar roz roz jany k itni hi shoq hai tum phir is ghar ki zeemadari chor day na

It was getting hard for nupur to control her sobs,, nobody has evr talked to her like tht..

Samrat: kya hoagya hai ami apko..

Nupur: Samrat pls….she asked him to stop

SA: ap apny kamray mein jay bech mein na boloain samhjy ap….

Sahi khati thi diya ke saas, ap dono mein zara bhi zemdari nhi, aur hogi bhi kasay apki ma any aj tak khabi zemadri nhi li, shoohar tu tha nhi aur ghar bhi nhi dkehna…tu akhir woh kiya seekhti

Nupur: ami pls….ap ko jo khan hai mjhy khay ami ko kyun beech mein la rahi hain

SA: ohoo tu a bap zaban bhi jalay gi, humari izaat k tu kayal hi nhi..yeah hi tu tarbiyat hoi hai apki , ajeeb kahndan hai..maa ny yeah bhi nhi sekhaya …khud bhi asay hi hongi

Nupur: ami pls bs…ami k baray mein kuch nhi...she said sternly a bit raised of tone to

Mayank: nupur…..he shouted as he entered the house..n his eyes depicing too much of anger….

Yeah kaun sa tareeka hai ami se baat kernay ka…..

Need answer pls can any1 of u suggest a Pakistani romantic song, I have two in my mind but I want if any1 can pls…

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not today annie sorry..will do it 2morw...today im on sumthing new..u will get pm in few mins...

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