Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya,st 17 on pg 146 updt on 23/10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone, here I am again to bother u all with again a new story. OK I wasn't about to write anything new but got an idea hearing the song, Raabta. And couldn't stop myself from writing it.

It will be a ts, an ishraruh story. Same as yhm just background will be little different.

U all can think it as my token of thanks for all of u, for loving all my stories so much, that I am getting 200+ likes in almost all stories. So a big thanks to all of u.



Here is the prologue, enjoy.

GUZARTA SAA LAMHA EK DAAMAN BHAR GAYA


Raman was busy in studying the case history of the patient when a compounder came running and said-dr bhalla, there is an emergency. A girl has slit her wrist.

Raman took his doctor's coat and ran out only to see a girl on stretcher, blood was ozzing out of her wrist nonstop. While her parents were crying continuously.

He went closer and her parent hold his feet to save their daughter.

Appa-noone is treating her saying its police case, please treat her warna mar jayegi woh. I will call the police and do the needful but please for now, save my daughter. She is my only daughter.

Raman nodded and went to her. He checked her eyes and then nerve.

Raman -huge blood loss, take her to OT. Saying so he was going when amma said crying-please save my ishu, she is my only daughter.

Raman -i will try to save her but u guys took so long to bring her, I can't assure anything.

Amma-we went to many clinics but all denied to treat her with police interference, glad u got ready to treat her. Please bacha lijiye usse, this is her third attempt to kill herself. Please save my kanna.

Raman -i will try my best, u guys just keep faith on the almighty. Saying so he went inside while amma appa cried bitterly for their daughter, ishita iyer.



Meharbaani Jaate Jaate Mujh Pe Kar Gaya
Guzarta Sa Lamha Ek Daaman Bhar Gaya
Tere Nazara Mila, Roshan Sitaara Mila
Takdeer Ki Kashtiyon Ko, Kinara Mila

Sadiyon Se Tarse Hai Jaisi Zindagi Ke Liye
Teri Sauhbat Mein Duaayein Hain Ussi Ke Liye
Tere Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara
Maanu Mujhko Banaya Tere Hi Jaise Kisi Ke Liye
Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye
Tere Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara
Maanu Mujhko Banaya Tere Hi Jaise Kisi Ke Liye
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Tu Humsafar Hai, Phir Kya Fikar Hai
Jeene Ki Wajah Hi Yahi Hai Marna Issi Ke Liye
Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye

That's all for now, do comment and like.

Ps-160+ likes for shot 1.
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ishitharaman thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new ts di nice prologue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept.
Lovely title.
Ishita is trying to kill herself again and again, why?? Waiting to know... Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations di🥳nice prologue di Continuee soon plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for the new story
Interesting prologue
Ishita trying to kill herself thrice...
Raman is a doctor...
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congratulations for new story
nice prologue
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for new story di
Interesting prologue...
Why ishita is trying to kill herself?
Curious to read further
Do continue soon di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds interesting love all ur stories. waiting for the update.
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nyc TS prologue
pics uh added.. hayee dey luk so lovely together.. wish its in real .. more i c dere pics love increases more

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