MG Dancing Frm the Ashes 2 Chp 56 pg 39

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A simple tale of Geet and Maan and the lives of the people around them. Am not into fancy introductions anymore.
Thanks all you guys who've stuck with me this long and waited patiently for my updates. Love you all
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Season 1
Prologue

Flashback

Chapter 1 Punge Le lo - Page 2

Chapter 2 - Who's Maan? - Page 2

Chapter 3 - Nikhil's task - Page 2

Chapter 4 - A task is not fulfilled until ... - Page 3

Chapter 5 - Unlucky in Love - page 4

Chapter6 - Oh, the guilt - page 5

Chapter 7 -The Unlikely Bonding - page 6

Chapter 8 - Reality Bites - page 7

Chapter 9 -Honour n False pride - page 8

Chapter 10 - A Slice of Humility - page 10

Chapter 11 - The Hurts We Hide - page 11

Chapter 12 - All's fair in love and lust - page 13

Chapter 13 -Lollipop, Lollipop, Can I be that lollipop??-page 14

Chapter 14 -Brothers and Sister - page 15

Chapter 15 - Commencing Anew - Page 16

Chapter 16 - Of BFs and BFFs - Page 17

Chapter 17 - Fire Burning, Fire Burning - Page 20

Chapter18 - In My Heart Of Hearts - Page 22

Chapter 19 - Intoxication - Page 22

Chapter 20 - Interlude - page 24

Chapter 21 - The Making Of Maan - page 26

Chapter 22 - The Making of Maan II - Page 28

Chapter 23 - The Unthinkable - Page 30

Chapter 24 - And So Goodnight!! - Page 32

Disclaimer - PAGE 36
Season 2
Character List and Summary - page 37

Chapter 25 - The Bet - Page 37

Chapter 26 - The Eyes Have It - page 41

Chapter 27 - And That's How It's Done! - Page 45

Chapter 28 - Who's Afraid Of Geet Handa - Page 48

Chapter 29 - What Makes Us Tick? - Page 52

Chapter 30 - What Just Happened - Page 54

Chapter 31 -Flash Mob - Page 58

From Geet to Nik

Chapter 32 - The Error of my Ways - Page 64

Chapter 33 -Jiyein Kyun - Page 67

Chapter 34 Here We Go, Then - Page 74

Chapter 35 Unexpected - Page 80

Chapter 36 A Birthday and a Gift - Page 85

Chapter 37 The twist in the ... what?? Page 94

Chapter 38 Colour Me Green - page 100

Chapter 39 Hope... - Page 110

Chapter 40 Anger is only skin deep - page 117

Chapter 41 Situations - Page 118

Chapter 42 Bang! - Page 123

Chapter 43 Stories To Tell - Page 134

Chapter 44 I'll Be... - Page 139

Chapter 45 Observations - Page 146

Chapter 46 Blinded Clarity - Page 1

Chapter 47 The Wrong One - Page 3

Chapter 48 Whenever you need me... -Page 7

Chapter 49 One Step At a Time - Page 12

Chapter 50 The Labours - Page 14

Chapter 51 Who knew? - Page 19

Chapter 52 The Important Things of Life! - Page 19

Chapter 53Unfamiliar Territory - Page 23

Chapter 54 Chapter 54 - This thing called Love - Page 28

Chapter 55 Back to them roots... - Page 34

Chapter 56 Territories - Page 39
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Geet Handa:

Daughter of the famous Mohinder Handa

Smart, tomboyish, rebellious but intelligent. Knew how to get her work done. College ki Shaan and the heartthrob of the college. A spoilt rich brat. She's had a neglected childhood. Mom, Rano died when she was young and was raised by Nani. Dad frequently busy with work'no time for daughter.Was closest to her mom. Has a lot of friends. They love her for what they see in her'..often surrounded by bad company. They party out every night and have no sense of direction to their lives - just out spending money and boozing. Geet n gang were college ke much loved lafange! Everyone's cautious of Geet'not because she got mad'but becoz she got even.He sense of style is a tank top n cargoes paired with utility boots.

Prized possession: Her sporty utility jeep.

However, when she loves someone, she'll do anything for them and keeps them close.

Friends: Mayank and Siddhant, and now Maan.

Maan Singh Khurana

Rich elder grandson of Savitri Devi. And son of Gaurav Khurana.

An all rounder and a party boy, page 3 boy. A ladies man, but he always seems indifferent to the world around him. A regular at the Capitol and everyone expects him there frequently. He does stay away from girls whenever possible. Once bitten twice shy! A fantastic dancer quite the heartthrob of the Delhi high society crowd. He's the best when it comes to all European and latin American dances. He has the Midas touch. Anything he does of gets involved in has to come out well.He's his father's right hand and Daadi' confidante

Nikhil Chopra

Middle class boy., street smart, fun loving. Very calm patient well put together boy. No parents but loves life.His closest relative is an uncle who's in the Army. Is into extreme sports'.one bad quality of his is ' he's very stubborn. Down to earth and very helpful towards others. He's a dancer and will do whatever it takes to fulfill his dream. However, back up plans are sensible n he's pursuing a BA to keep his uncle from taking him along on his transfers.

He is geet's 1st love...but is it meant to be...??

Siddhant Arora

Rich spoilt brat. Handsome and hot'the heartthrob of the college. Arrogant but the only persons he'll listen to are Geet and Mayank/Mayank. No real purpose in life and is a bully to some extent! He thinks the world revolves around him, but is a big softy.

Friends: Geet and Mayank.

Mayank Shroff

The dreamer..the artistic one'..spoilt to but not as rich. Wants to be an artist, but is pursuing the Arts degree just to get his Dad off his back. Once that's done, he'll follow his dream.He's creative and not as snobbish as Sid.

Friends:Geet and Sid.

Raina

The class topper. Psych major. Loves reading. wanted to be a counselor.Dabbles in contemporary dance.She ends up with Sid. Is a stark contrast to his aggressive nature. Knows that he n geet are just friends, but hates his bullying nature and his arrogant attitude! Becomes friends with Nikhil n Ayush. Was Sid, Mayank's and Geet's school mate.

She is the one who lets Nikhil know that Geet was a dancer, till her mum passed away.


Vikram Singh Khurana

The younger brother of Maan. A dancer by choice. It's all he cares about. Quite a flirt. Warm hearted and not quite a practical as Maan. Loves his brother and listens to him the most. Has a big gang of friends, most of who have similar interests.

Anvesha Khurana

The middle sibling. The laadli behen of the Khurana brothers and is close to both of them. Intelligent and tactful. Is very close to Dadi and is her Dad's pet. Pretty and Jovial. Keeps away frm the party circuit to some extent.

Nida:

One of the sweetest most lovable persons in Vicky's dance troupe.She's mute and has to resort to sign language. She majors in contemporary dance, thought she's good at most others. Her waterloo is Hip-Hop and has to train hard for it.

Zakhir:

Nida's boyfriend. He's the one who translates most of what she says. They are inseparable.

Farhan-

The loner. The dedicated dancer. He spoke less and acted more. Nothing and nobody can take his eyes off his goal'and that is of becoming one of the best dancers of India.

Meera Shergill.

Maan's secretary at Khurana constructions. She's calm and quiet and very hardworking. No nonsense air about her. She and Maan get along very well. Maan has recently promoted her.

Isra

Naive, quiet and absolutely lovable. Had a crush on Farhan, but is over it now. Is Lyla's sister and has Geet and Nida as confidantes.

Lyla

The studio's black sheep. Is hated by all because of her snooty behaviour and sly character; however everyone puts up with her cuz she's one of the best dancers.

Ayush:

Raina n Nikhil's friends. Sid becomes jealous over his friendship with Raina.

All Pictures of characters (at least the way I imagined them), on this link

Characters

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Chapter 46 - Blinded clarity.

Maan walked into the terrace to see Geet mid-krump, stomping to the beats of the song, blaring out of the music system behind him. He waited and watched her push, jump, stomp and lunge aggressively. He could see the effect the exercise was having on her. 2 minutes into the song, the frown disappeared from her forehead. A minute later she was singing along, adding her own stunts to the choreography. He lowered the music and walked forward, handing her a towel.

Seeing him seemed to remind her of the tensions surrounding her and she frowned again.

They stood in silence as she sipped water.

"They haven't backed down'', she said after she had got her breath back.

"I know. They tried to get me to convince you."

She looked at him in disbelief, and then looked away shaking her head.

" I should've expected it. But you know Maan, I'll go ahead with it. No...listen" she said when he opened his mouth to protest; "but if I'm doing this, then the guy has no clue what is in store for him."

"How is that sane, Geet? I hardly see this as the guy's fault. You shouldn't put him through a tough situation, if the only crime he's done is agreeing to meet you. "

She frowned at his words, neither agreeing nor contradicting his words.

He waited her out, and she slowly nodded.

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Meera stood washing the dishes. Dinner had been quiet with neither mother nor daughter saying much. The former trying to introduce conversation, while the latter eluding it; the result being a foregone conclusion. It was inevitable nonetheless.

"So Mr. Khurana is quite a young chap'', her mother said, tentatively.

"Yes''

"He's quite handsome too", she prodded.

Meera kept her face impassive as Vicky's face flashed in front of her eyes.

"Is he?"

"Don't you find him handsome?", Mrs. Shergill pushed.

Meera shrugged noncommittally , to save herself from giving an answer. She stacked the plates on the rack and moved to wipe the table.

"He's quite a charmer. Is he like that in the office?'', her mother asked following her.

"I don't see him much in the office; I barely interact with people much. And anyway, it's his older brother, Maan Khurana who is my boss."

"But he praised you for your skills; that doesn't sound like you barely interacted. And if his brother is your boss, what was he doing here?", her voice gathering speed like pinpricks, just as Meera had known it would.

Meera clamped down the anger building in her, and increased her vigour in the cleaning, begging for endorphins to release. She took a deep breath and replied, ''Well if the boss is praising me, then it's good news. At least it means that my works is being appreciated."

"Yes, appreciation that makes him come to your home to get his work done", her mother replied , contemptuously.

The last remark made her see red and she finally turned to face her mother, her anger spilling out and her voice getting louder by the syllable.

"What are you trying to say, mom? For a change, save me the trouble and ask me exactly what you want to know. What are you trying to insinuate?"

"If you haven't done anything, then there is no need to shout is there? Does it make you look less guilty? And, that's a nice way of addressing your mother."

She turned around and stalked off to the guestroom, while Meera stared at, tears of frustration spilling on her cheeks.

She had expected an argument, just like this. Only, she hadn't expected it this early.

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Nida waited as Isra walked up to her, wiping the moisture off her forehead.

"Was that Farhan , you were chatting with?", she signed to Isra.

Isra looked up, nodding slightly. She was exhausted, and it was only mid afternoon. The main batch came in the evenings. She walked to the locker and pulled out her stash of juice and handed one to Nida.

As she leaned against the chair, she saw Nida sign again.

"You don't seem that awkward with him anymore."

"I'm not", she replied, a soft smile lighting her face. "it was just a crush. Silly...".

"So, he's not the dream guy, anymore, huh? Just an ordinary chap?"

Isra thought back to the conversation she had had with Farhan. Even while they had been conversing, she had been amazed that she was actually in conversation with him. That he had spoken so long to her.

"He's not ordinary. I still admire him for the person he is. In fact, I barely knew anything about him before. "

"What do you mean?"

"...you know, things like how hard he works. I had no idea that he was the last person to leave every day. And he and Geet practice the choreography every night after the studios are shut. I've never seen anyone as dedicated as him, Nida. And I'm glad my crush evaporated, or I'd never have had my eyes open enough to see it."

precap:

The next instant the only thing he was aware of , was being physically lifted off the ground by Maan, and thrown across the floor.

Maan leaned into his face and hissed angrily.

"You dare manhandle her once more, and I'll make sure you're unable to handle even a piece of paper for the rest of your life."

Yep , I know I know - short update, but I had to write it while it was still in my head. I know I'm no gr8 shakes at writing, but this story is just something I had to do. So I just wanna say thanks for sticking with me this long.

Muah. 🤗

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congrats on yr new thread...awesome update
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Congrats on the new thread...n welcome back...(to the world of writing...😆)

loved the update...

maan is right...wonder what geet has planned...

is isra really over farhan...?? or is farhan falling for her???

precap is too good...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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congrats for your new thread.
Nice update.
Waiting for more.
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Congrats on your new thread...
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bookmarking... will catch on to the update soon :D
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Congrats for the new thread! Loved the update; can't wait to read more!

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