ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146

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sonaluvgurti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

very nice update,i really liked it...Plz continue

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Zaara

@zaaratq

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

im sad for the first time imnot the first to commnet..😭never mind.. im sorry ammu..

Guys, these few upcoming chapters are the chapters where Geet and Maan will evolve and how their lives will change. they are important in the making of who they are. So please do bear with me. -- i don mind dear, continue.. but hope there are some meet and miss sequences between them..

Also, you comments have encouraged me. So what do you say, shall I put the FF on the main Geet page?? -- GO AHEAD!!👏

Maan had taken after him in his temper -- maan temper, geet tremble😆😆but seriously, i cant stand maan anger..

He just needed to be honed. --exactly ammu, he needs to be honed..

Maan was the quietest of her grandsons.-- but we still love him

He never emoted much, but just kept his feelings to himself. She , however understood him well. -- yes no one can understand him..

Precap: same one; Geet??working hard?? -- awesome update keep writing.. loved maan's story.. And dadi ma' dialogues with him.. I still cant guess on how maaneet will end up together.. But i know their milan would be great.. update fast dear.. geet working hard??😲quick update more dear...⭐️

Zaara

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Guys, I would like to hear about my original comment before my update.

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Loving the Dadi-Maan dialogues at the end, the very last thing she said was so powerful. It really sticks with you!

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Dear Amruta,

Fabulous content especially an unusual setting around which the whole story revolves and presumably the Geet - Maan story would evolve - Contemporary/Western Classic Dances and a Dance studio👍🏼. I think this story hits big time and I will utter whoops of joy😳😆.

The story with all its 9 chapters have a perfect flow even though the character of Maan and Geet are set in entirely 2 different areas of their dispersed lives, not intertwined yet, but the side characters are adding and enriching the main theme to soon coincide. Various characters are closely connecting to each other and merging into a unique "festival of emotions and individual personal lives". Fabulous story line and its my very personal love - Dancing. I can hear music and rhythm just sways from within me and therefore I love the setting for the moment.

The entry of the 2 main characters in the 1st chapter kind of remind me of 'Dil to Pagal Hai'...and it does not matter - when the going gets tough, the tough get going, and you sure have captured our fullest senses and sensibilities to make us trail all through to the 9th chapter, with your signature charm and humour.👏 The slow journey of Maan and Geet towards their magnetic personalities - one to each other - is good to the last drop of significant moments in each of their lives as it helps us to understand their unique position within the storyline and capture our hearts to the pulse of the story.

Continue Amru, with your own style and verve and add a bit of humor to tease Maan😆.

We all love it when he turns macho immediately before the cock crows twice😉.

Good FF hon. Waiting for the inevitable but perhaps turbulent meet ?. A jatka! in their crossover ?! Love it. Go ahead and post on main Forum.

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Allu my allu...it was worth the wait for you to read it,, just ot hear and read those magical words of yourz. Love u...Muah!!

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mera itna mood kharab tha...u just made everything right. muaaah!

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Zaara

@zaaratq

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: mechantefille
Allu my allu...it was worth the wait for you to read it,, just ot hear and read those magical words of yourz. Love u...Muah!!
🤗🤗🤗🤗

mera itna mood kharab tha...u just made everything right. muaaah!

darling🤗🤗

any chance of updating?? u were missing on our bumper thread...

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Amruta, Hon,

Sky's the limit - expansive enough to draw your strength for the story and continue till... we start dancing from the ashes... till we scream - Amru "MORE, MORE, MORE"...😉😳

Luv to know you got a bit of tranquil sprinkler for your moody day blues...ha ha ha😆

❤️🤗 ALUU to ❤️AMRU.