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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww...Maan is so frustrated with life right now...I wonder how he came to run the studio where he saw Geet...I'm dying to know of their present status...but looks like I have to wait for some more time...bring them together soon plss...Maan has struggled so much till now let him enjoy again...

Sorry Amrutha,been busy these past few days,so couldn't comment on earlier updates,hope u don't mind...😃...update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Aww...Maan is so frustrated with life right now...I wonder how he came to run the studio where he saw Geet...I'm dying to know of their present status...but looks like I have to wait for some more time...bring them together soon plss...Maan has struggled so much till now let him enjoy again...

Sorry Amrutha,been busy these past few days,so couldn't comment on earlier updates,hope u don't mind...😃...update soon...



Hey Esha...Dont apologize...I haven't PMed anybody...was gonna update the season finale soon , but I rarely get time for it!...will PM the others together for it.

Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii amruta...

the update was simply awesome
wow loved the convo between maan n dadi...
its was so meaningful and haveing so much of depth...
well i am so happy ...so finally got an encounter between maan and geet...though its a fleeting one...nevertheless...hope this marks the beginning of a series of enchanting encounters between them...
very much excited to kno what happens next...
keep writing

finally i am done with my exams...i am a freebird for a while😆

love u and ur ff

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii amruta...

the update was simply awesome
wow loved the convo between maan n dadi...
its was so meaningful and haveing so much of depth...
well i am so happy ...so finally got an encounter between maan and geet...though its a fleeting one...nevertheless...hope this marks the beginning of a series of enchanting encounters between them...
very much excited to kno what happens next...
keep writing

finally i am done with my exams...i am a freebird for a while😆

love u and ur ff

reva


AMEN to that...a series of encounters...Cheers to that!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille


Dee...I'm so glad to see u here. How're u doing girlfriend.???

I know..reading it all ina go is so much more fun!!...WIsh I could write it in a go.Have been working in the season finale for ages...but I can't seem to find the time!! DAmn!!

Thanks for the appreacition...the next part will be up soon-ish!!


I'm waiting 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii...dear...!!! Where r u...? Missing u n your updts...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amruta nice updates... love the way dadima laid out his monotonus life before him...
Loved the way the crescendo is building up in him... He is going to crash... I think he is going to do something drastic pretty soon as it seems he himself is too tired of his own loneliness...
It is really very interesting and hard to wait for next update but I will wait for you to unfold the mystery...
As you have said I am getting few answers of my questions but would love to see how you display the next part as it is very interesting.
Absolutely love the way your story is unfolding little by little..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: evasumi

Amruta nice updates... love the way dadima laid out his monotonus life before him...

It was much needed - tujhe kya lagt ahian - woh sudharega??
Loved the way the crescendo is building up in him... He is going to crash... I think he is going to do something drastic pretty soon as it seems he himself is too tired of his own loneliness...
😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
It is really very interesting and hard to wait for next update but I will wait for you to unfold the mystery...
As you have said I am getting few answers of my questions but would love to see how you display the next part as it is very interesting.
Absolutely love the way your story is unfolding little by little..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 23 - The Unthinkable...

On the other hand, life had taken a different route for Geet. From the uber scary and demanding Geet , she had become a more relaxed person, enjoying her life. Naanima and Mohinder had seen the change in her. She came home earlier, she didn't drink as much and walked in to her own bed, instead of being carried to it. She danced more and more and very often came home fatigued because of her rehearsals.

Sid and Raina had left for college. She missed her buddies but that void was filled in by Nik. It was rare that they didn't spend time in each other's company! Only when he went out for his adventure sports or to meet his uncle did Nik stay away from Geet ' or he often crashed at her home, spending time with Mohinder and Naani. They too welcomed him with open arms. They knew he was a positive, stabilizing effect on Geet. Life had taken such a drastic turn for her, post his advent.

She had become more responsible, often going to Mohinder's office., getting tips for Vicky and helping him. This had become a frequent routine as Nik had become an adventure junkie off late, to the extent of competing in dirt bike races and joining sky diving clubs. She helped with the accounts and had become quite friendly with the staff.

Mohinder was proud of her!!

Nik's influence on her had a steadying effect. But despite it all, she never took her eyes off her goal. When it came to dance, she dreamed with her eyes open. Mohinder often attended her performances when she performed in Vicky's troupe. She and Nik were the star performers, equal to Vicky in their quality of performances. When Geet and Nik danced, it felt like they were made to pair with each other. They felt at ease in each other's arms. She laughed over the fact that they had actually been at logger heads earlier...who knew love would find its way? So she cherished his presence in her life more, each day. He had given her more than she could imagine. She tried her level best to be naughty with him, but Nik never went beyond a limit; he respected Mohinder a lot.

Nik, on his part made sure, they diversified and learnt as much as they taught. He constantly researched and interacted with dancers across the country to re-invent the dance styles. Business was not doing too well, but they managed to keep afloat. They needed a stroke of genius to get matters under control.

Life had been good to one and all. Geet laughed and pranced about touching lives, making friends. She kept in touch with Mayank, Sid and Raina and tried as far as possible to be there for them whenever she could.

Nik and her relationship reached another level, when Mohinder declared to her that he was happy to have Nik in the family and had accepted him in the form of Geet's life partner. Life was settling down, as each of them, chose different paths of life, but being held together by their passion at the same time.

They never looked beyond each other, always looking out for the other. It was like they operated at the same wavelength. If Geet was the spitfire, then Nik was the calm one. If she was the spice, he was the sugar. If Geet liked a thing, Nik knew exactly why she liked it and what attracted her to it. He could think like he was in her shoes ' he knew her inside out!! If Nik took a passion for something, Geet went out of her way to share it with him or encourage him in it. She would make sure, he de-stressed in whatever way pleased him, accompanying him only if it matched her tastes.

So when Nik took part in the dirt bike competition, Geet hoped and prayed and encouraged him for it. He was exceedingly good at it. All the odds were with him, he was bound to come out the best of them all. Vicky and Geet put their heads together to put their minds together to throw him a surprise party on the day of the championship race!

Nik's championship was highly advertised amongst the dance circle, and since he had made a lot of friends, everyone was rooting for him. There was a huge turnout at his party. Sid and Raina ( unknown to him) flew down to be with them. Sid was going to watch the race, but meet Nik only after the race. Mayank was going to attend, but he hadn't been able to book flight for that day, and would arrive only a day later.

Geet prepared the studio and decked up in her girly best for him. The studio was fast filling up with people as Nik's race began. She was scared for him, as she knew the stunts were not very easy, but he had done them loads of times, showing Geet how easy they were for him. He was under the assumption that Vicky n Geet had some important meetings to take for the studio, and so were missing the race. But he didn't mind even for a minute. The studio came first even for him. With great difficulty only did they manage to convince him to not pull out of the race.

The room was decorated with twinkling lights and flowing curtains. Vicky had specially asked the chefs in his house to make the food. The disco ball was taken out of the storeroom and connected for the grand entry of the victor. Raina and Vicky had joined hands in helping Geet to make the night a special one.

Geet had decided her special gift for Nik ' one that involved her taking him to the back room, found long ago by Sid, and involving him in activities that he wouldn't be able to resist. She blushed now, thinking about her naughty plan.

The day finally arrived, the preparations done. Nik, encouraged and prepped up for it. Sid had constantly teased and joked with Geet about Nik and their couple status.

''SO what how exactly are u going to make him feel better just in case he loses, Geet? Koi back-up plan soch rakha hain kya?? Ya phir tu uncleji ki baat maanti hain ' and no smooching and shagging allowed.'' Sid guffawed at a embarrassed Geet. She whacked his arm and made a quick getaway.

She was nervous and excited for him. Nik felt better knowing the entire troupe was backing him. It was not a big race, but the fact they were there for him, touched him.

Around 5 in the evening Geet made sure the food was ready and the music was to be played. Sid was going to call her from the race and tell her who won so that she could prepare the party accordingly. If he lost, they'd just have a normal party and if he did, they'd put up their additional banners for it...congratulating him.

Geet paced excitedly, sure that the winner would be Nik...all the others were waiting in the room, for Sid to call so that they could leap into action.

It was quiet all around, no one even moved. The air was cut by the piercing ringtone of Geet's phone. She looked at everyone with shining eyes, a smile brightening her face.

''It's Sid'', she said.

She listened to what he was saying, but her smiled faded to be replaced by an irritated frown.

''It's not funny anymore, ok Sid,'' she yelled into the phone, throwing it on a nearby chair in anger. Her frazzled nerves had made her reach the end of her patience.

''What happened babe??'', Vicky asked anxiously.

''Yeh Sid bhi naa...when will he stop being such a kid. He knows we're all waiting so eagerly for the news naa...'' she complained.

Vicky, shook his hands in urgency ,'But what did he say to you??''

''Some lame joke about Nik meeting with an accident, man. Someone tell him it's not fu'''

''Geet!!!'' Vicky yelled incredulously, cutting her sentence short. He ran to the chair and picked up her phone and redialled Sid.

He listened for two minutes, his face going darker minute by minute.

''Ok we'll be there. Call uncle also.''

Vicky grabbed Geet by her hand and dragged her out of the studio, running all the way to the car. Raina followed them , scared by Vicky's expressions.

Vicky pushed her in the car, and frantically started the car.

Geet stared at him, shaken by his behaviour.

''Vicky, what's with all the drama? What's going on?'', she asked, still irritated.

He turned to her and spoke as calmly as he could.

''Babe, Nik's bike overturned during the last leg of the race. He's at the hospital with Sid.''

Her mind went blank, as she stopped feeling.

Raina, placed an arm on her shoulder, in lieu of support. ''Geet, it's ok, I'm sure it's not that bad.''

Geet kept quiet. She turned unconsciously to look at Raina.

It scared Raina to see that expression ' ''Geet, don't look like that. Don't Look Like That!!'' Her face had gone white and her eyes seemed to be looking nowhere in particular. Slowly the colour returned as her mind went into denial. It was impossible that he was hurt. No that couldn't be. She would remain calm, she told herself. It can't be that bad!

They reached the hospital to find Mohinder and Sid pacing the floor. Vicky and Raina ran to them, Geet following slowly. It was all too unreal, and she was unable to take the news in. Her mind was in denial, that anything could happen to Nik. She stood a little away, pieces of their conversation reaching her. ''operation'', ''bike overturned'', ''blood loss'', kept reaching her. She was still not able to accept it and so she went on her own to search for Nik. She'd ask him herself. Why the unnecessary worry, she said to herself.

She walked to the rooms closest to them. It was empty. The next one had an old man in it. She walked to the third. She saw a boy with a bloodied bandage on his face, a life support machine behind him, pipes attached to a bandaged chest and a blood drip attached to his wrist. She wondered pitifully, what had caused such extensive injuries. The boy sensed her peeping in through the window on the door. He turned his head to look at her and smiled weakly. She looked at him perplexed, because it was a smile she knew all too well ' a smile that was just a weak shadow of the original. As realization hit her, her heart stopped and she felt herself being engulfed by darkness, unable to take it...losing all sense of being. She had fainted!

Chapter 24 - And so...Goodnight

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Guys...you can keep guessing, but I suppose the outcome is clear to one and all...still lets see how it all unfolds...didn't want to have it all suspicious...will explain myself soon-ish and for that I will put up a NOTE in a day or two...explaining myself. Season Finale comes next!! Plz don't hate me. 😊

thanks for the Love

Amruta

Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ah...such a sad update...is Nik going to die in ur story...???I don't know what to say about that part...I only wanted Maan n Geet to be together but not wanted anyone to be hurt...but as I recall Geet being in pain in present...its what I can conclude...so yeah well nice update...n continue soon...eager to know what's going to happen now...

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