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CHAPTER 2 - Who's Maan?

Time; 11:00 pm

Venue: Capitol club, New Delhi, Chanakyapuri.

The crowd is hopping and the club is full of people dancing away. Everybody seems to be waiting for a certain person to enter.

Random girl 1: Chal babe, lets go now.

Random girl 2: what , wait we can't go now, Did you hear, Maan is coming for the part.

R G1: Maan? who's dat?

RG 2: Only, The Maan singh Khurana...Gaurav Khurana's son!! Hello

RG 1: Err, ok you dont need to be so indignant. We'll wait. chillax.

There was a sudden hush and the crowd unconsciously parted. A group of people had just entered the club. Two guys and two girls, along with their entourage. The taller of the two, seemed younger while the other guy was about half a head shorter. He looked older than the other, but the resemblance was evident between the two.The taller boy motioned to his brother and led the girl to the bar,while the other couple took a seat. This was Maan Singh Khurana and his current girlfriend. The DJ motioned to him and played a song for him. Maan turned in his seat and smiled at the DJ. He was a regular here. every night he came there with his girlfriend and entourage. the party didn't begin till he had entered the club. His brother was Vikram Singh Khurana, the charmer the heartthrob, the guy who wore his heart on his sleeve.

Both the brothers were multi-talented, but everyone knew Maan as the most eligible bachelor. Having just returned from abroad with his fancy degree, he was the talk of the town. Even though he was back after 2 yrs, he had fallen into his usual part habits and returned to his usual joints.

The music changed to a dance number and the crowd pleaded for a performance from Maan. He smilingly asked his partner for her hand and led her to the dance floor.

They salsa-ed effortlessly and swayed to a enthusiastic crowd with the spotlight on them. Once they'd stopped, Maan shouted for the crowd to join them on the floor. Vicky pulled his girl along with him and danced too.

Had anybody observed, it was evident that Vicky was the better dancer of the to, but it was Maan who garnered all the attention because of his charm. Still, Vicky loved his brother too much to not give him the centre stage.

In the middle of it all, Maan got a call and left to answer it. He signaled to Vicky that they had to leave.

He turned to his partner

Maan: Do you want to wait or shall we drop you home?

Girl: babe, tum chale jaaooge toh waise bhi maza aayega nahi so I might as well go home.

Maan smiled and held her elbow n guided her to the door followed by Vicky and his girl. After they left, the party seemed flat. Everybody seemed to have lost the mood.

KHURANA MANSION:

Hey Dad, kuch kaam tha itne jaldi bula diya.

Gaurav Khurana: Son, it's past 2 am. thats late, not jaldi. Anyway, I called cuz I have to go to Kolkata tomorrow. I'm hoping you'll be able to join me. Vicky to aane se raha.

Vicky: yeah Dad you know me so well. waise bhi yeh sab business ke cheezein mujhe samjh nahi aati.

Dad: thats ok Vicky, but you wont be able to dance all your life. you'll need some other job to fall back on

Maan: Dad for now let him do what he wants to. He's only 21yrs old. I'm there na, for him to fall back on.

Vicky:(smiling gratefully): thanks bro. See dad, bro's absolutely right. Chalo I'm off. safe journey you two.

Maan: koi urgent meeting hain kya?

Dad; yeah And this time I want your opinion on this deal. After all, one day you've gotta run this ship.

Come on now get some sleep. the flights at 7 am.

Maan: gud night dad.


Guys: in the flashback I'll be posting Maan's and geet's life till they meet, so it'll mostly be about Geet, but then also Maan's life till he meets her. thanks for the comments. Plz do post more.
cheers
Amruta


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Chapter 3: Nikhil's task

The principal of the college had a fest every year. The students put up talent shows for the college and the public in general. It was a more of an annual day where the students could showcase their talents and then there could be a prize distribution. Most of the students ditched the show as it was just a waste of time. He college didn't lack any talent - but nobody was willing to display any of it. The principal Dr. Mehra was worried as the NAAC committee would be attending the function this year and he wanted a good turnout.

If students were unwilling to attend their own college programmes then it reflected badly on the college...this further led to a bad grade on the national scale and Dr. Mehra loved the A++ sign in front of his college's name.

He wanted to desperately to put up a good show with his star talents. He knew that his college was filled with the students who were brilliant. But, his frustration and tension was hampering his thinking process and he was just unable to come up with a solution as to how to get the students to participate.

''Sinha sir, iss baar ke show housefull hona chahiye aur uss main humaare hi bachche hone chahiye!''

Dr. Mehra was pacing in his cabin and talking to Mr. Sinha seated before him. Mr. Sinha was the senior most teacher of the college. Students were terrified of Sinha Sir and he was the only one after the principal , who was feared.

''Dr.Mehra , itne saalon se try kar rahe hain. Yeh bachche kuch sunte hi nahi hain. Aur hum unke marks cut bhi toh nahi kar sakte.''

Koi toh raasta hona chahiye-

The peon had entered.

''Sir ek naya student bahar ruka hain. Scholarship ke form par signatures chahiye usse'''

''andar bhej do''

NIkhil entered.

Good morning Sir. He turned to Mr. Sinha...''Good morning sir''

Mr. Sinha twisted in his chair and saw NIkhil,'' Arre NIkhil, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.''

''Sir, form par signature aur stamp chahiye tha, sir. ''

''So son, are u participating in the annual function? You've made quite a few friends in the past one month. Are u going to perform. I've heard you dance and teach it too.''

''Well, sir, if students are expected to perform , then I'll certainly do so. How many people participate?

Dr. Mehra looked up and said,'' Not many NIkhil, but i like your enthusiasm. Despite being one of the famous colleges in India, somehow the students refuse to participate in the programmes for college. It's like the show is jinxed.''

Mr. Sinha turned to NIkhil, '' Son, do you think you can give any ideas as to how more students will come for the show?''

''Err, sir...me?''

''Yes of course...why not? Your part of the newer generation. Surely you'll know where we're going wrong. We've got to fix this somehow or our college is going to lose it's A++ grade with the accreditation committee.''

''Umm...Sorry sir I'm a bit clueless...Being new here I don't really understand how the college works.''

''try...what do you get off the top of your head?'

Dr. Mehra spoke up...''ok lets do one thing. You need this form to be submitted in 2 weeks time, don't you? I'll give you a week's time to discreetly ask around college and come up with some ideas. In one week, you meet me with some solution, and I'll try and speed up the process for your scholarship with my contacts.''

There was nothing NIkhil, could say. He had to agree. He left the campus

One week??

How can one week be enough? One month had been eventful enough. On his 1st day in college he'd messed up with the most happening and powerful crowd in college. Thanks to that he hadn't been able to mingle or mix with the students well. The only one who he hung out with was loner Ayush and that too cause he had the same subjects.

If it was just the matter of his performance, he would have done it happily and performed to the best of his ability. But getting ideas of involving people in a place where one was boycotted was not very promising! He walked to the parking lot and pulled out his bike and sped home.

Next day he was sitting in the psychology lecture waiting for the teacher. A few girls behind , were gossiping. The names that kept cropping up in their conversation were the usual popular ones ' Geet, Sid and Mayank. It was common knowledge that they were the 3 musketeers of college and everyone sought to copy them. The college followed them blindly, no matter what they did.

NIkhil, smirked...he didn't like the trio. As much as he tried , he couldn't avoid them. Even if they weren't around, everyone spoke of them. He had begun to get irritated by them. They were the ones who knowingly or unknowingly created all that peer pressure. Snippets of conversation kept coming from a group of three girls sitting behind them. Another girl sat quietly reading a book

''Sid ka shirt dekha...yar woh toh sirf trendsetter hain. No one carries those shirts off the way he does. My neighbour came to college the other day and saw one of Sid' shirts and he also bought one. Itna bada bewakoof lag rahah than na,''

''Yaar Mujhe toh Mayank pasand hain. Woh kitna dreamy hain yaar.''

''What's s dreamy bout him maan. He's lost most of the tym ya. Woh toh khud dream karta hain. ''(giggles)

''Dekh, Rekha, Mayank kya cheez hain , yeh tere comprehension range ke bahar hain, so don't even try to understand him, geddit.''

''Ok u two stop fighting ya.''said the third girl.'' What I don't get is ...what are two dishy guys like them doing with a thing like Geet. She's so arrogant and it's not like she's even girly. I mean she can easily beat most of the guys in sport-

''Not Mayank and Sid'', said the second girl.

''Thats only cuz she never play against them and neither do they let her!''

---ok, ok...but she's never worn a girly top let alone a dress. She drives that horrible jeep and she always wears such boyish vests and watches. Even her shoes...or boots...it's like she's gonna go hiking any minute, ya.''

''True, ya...life is so sucky ya. How is it that the nicest chaps get the horrible girls.?''

The fourth girl looked up from her book and quietly spoke, ''Maybe because they are in need of niceness the most. We don't get what's going on with them cuz we just view from outside. How can you judge that she's horrible?'' Saying that she turned back to the book leaving the girls stunned and speechless.

Nikhil turned and looked to see who had said that. The girl, realized that she was being stared at and looked at him. She smiled warmly and said, '' Hi, I'm Raina. You are?

'NIkhil.''

''Hi, are you new here?''

Nikhil replied, ''Yeah. I've only joined this year.'

'How're you liking it?'

'It's ok, haven't seen much as yet.'

But I did mess up with Geet n buddies on the 1st day...hehe. Nice for starters heh?''

''OMG , you didn't'', gasped Raina

''Yeah, well they were ragging that poor chap. He'd have wet his pants any minute. They're nothing but bullies, all of them.''

''Whoa, 1st day in a new college and you meddled with the 'It' things of college, huh'', she said smilingly.

''Why do I get the feeling that you're not as 'Three Musketeer crazy'' as these girls out here? I'm right am I not.?''

She smiled and said,''3 musketeers crazy-probably not...but crazy..definitely!''

''Hehe..right on'', laughed Nikhil.

The teacher entered the class so they ended the conversation there.

In the break Nikhil saw Raina again...eating alone in the cafeteria. He went up to her and joined her. They chattered non-stop. Suddenly the cafeteria became noisy - Geet and Gang enter along with their entourage. They seemed oblivious to the crowd around, just grabbed a table n seated themselves. A few of the boys and girls placed orders for the lot.

Geet turned and grabbed a seat next to Sid and they started playing a game on their phones. Geet looked about after some time and saw Raina. Raina and her eyes met. Nikhil all this while was watching their silent interaction.

Raina gave a tiny smile to Geet who nodded discreetly in return.

She turned her head to the food in front of her, while Raina turned back to the guys.

Nikhil :''Do u know her?''

Raina: ''Yeah, we're school mates''

N: Ok, so you're friends?''

R:''No really...just acquaintances!''

'Ummm ok.'

The bell rang and they returned for classes.

Nikhil was still clueless as to how to get students to participate in the annual day.

He'd managed to make friends with one girl, but he had no clue about her. He just prayed he'd come to some conclusion fast. He'd only got 5 days left.

Day 3:

History lecture:

Nikhil and Raina were sitting together, completing a crossword. The happening trio entered, Sid bragging about something as usual. Again Nikhil saw the silent acknowledgement between Raina and Geet. He didn't say much..but he did wonder what it was between the two girls. He knew that they weren't friends , but Raina didn't hold her in awe either , neither did Geet ignore her like she did for the rest of the college crowd, that had tagged behind her for the lecture.

What did register was that Geet did notice who Raina was sitting with. Her eyes narrowed the teensiest bit but didn't bother much after that. Sid and Mayank did notice Nikhil and were about to pick a quarrel when Geet stopped them and told them not to create a scene in Sadu Sinha's class.

Mr. Sinha took the class in his usual manner and commented how full the class seemed today. Everybody seemed to have attended just for the heck of it cuz only a few seemed to be paying attention.

As soon as he left the class the trio left and with them the rest of the class.

''I thought we have another class today?'' Nikhil asked raina.

''We do, but if these 3 aren't in class then the other students won't bother attending either'' smiled Raina.

''Why are you smiling? Isn't this a classic example of peer pressure? '' asked Nikhil a little annoyed.

''Sure it is, but there's only so much one can do to stop or prevent it. Plus I've never seen Geet or her friends do anything bad in college.''

''Yeah,'' scoffed Nikhil, ''Sure in college they haven't. But every night at least one of them is drunk and I've seen them leave the pubs late around 2 or 3 am.''

'Well, Mr. Goody two shoes , how do you know that?'' Asked Raina mischievously.

''Oi, I live close to the happening area...don't blame me for living close to the happening place,'' he replied defensively.

''Ok , ok!''

''So do you know Geet closely? I've never seen her acknowledge any girl the way she acknowledges you. Old friendship?''

N:So, you've just been school mates huh?

R:Yeah. Even Mayank and Sid are from the same school. These 3 have been friends since then.

N:They were inseparable even then?

R:Yeah I suppose.

N: what is your opinion of Geet? Was she always as arrogant?'' Something about her attracted him. He didn't know what?

R: what makes you think she's arrogant.

N: well, you know a person by the company they keep.

R: She's not that arrogant. She's actually quite mischievous. She just doesn't give a damn much.

It's only Sid who's arrogant and that too he's not like that with Geet. Neither is Mayank. They have this facade only for the world around them. I think they share a much deeper friendship.

N: you sound almost fond of them.

R: to be honest I don't mind Geet or Mayank. It's Sid who annoys me and gets under my skin.

But they do pamper Geet a lot and she'll do anything for them too. Even her grand mom is very close to them.

N: hmm.

Raina: u knw s school, every year, they used to perform for teacher's day. Geet would perform a solo dance, and Mayank and Sid would perform together. She had a very vibrant personality. Her mum's death change-...

N: wait a minute. Did u just say that Geet dances?

R:yeah. Very well. But I haven't seen her perform for quite a while. I wonder if she does perform anymore. She's changed a lot since I first knew her...but then who doesn't.

An idea was slowly forming in NIkhil's mind. He didn't really know how to get it to work , but he was desperate and time was running out. It was time to act and do something before he got himself into trouble.

The teacher entered and class began. But Nikhil's attention was diverted. He kept coming up with ideas how to fulfil his game plan. AS soon as the bell rang, he told Raina he was meeting the principal and ran off.

He entered the Prici's office panting.

''Sir I've got an idea,'' he panted

Dr. Mehra smiled and said,'' good to hear Nikhil''

He relayed his idea and though Dr. Mehra was a little dubious about the plan, he too was desperate enough too. He knew Geet well and Mayank too, the only trouble he expected was from Sid.

However he thanked Nikhil.


SO what do you think happens next?Any guesses?

Chapter 4 - https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1663833&TPN=3

Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i have a feeling Geet will perform against Vicky n Maan b d judge
but luved d updates
do continue soon
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Originally posted by: maanujaanu

i have a feeling Geet will perform against Vicky n Maan b d judge

but luved d updates
do continue soon



errrm, keep guessing.
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CHAPTER 4 - A task is not fulfilled until it's done in perfection.

Nikhil finds how difficult his task is set out to be.


The next day:

Nikhil had begun practising for his performance. The princi given him a special room to practise in. Suddenly, the door burst open and Geet barged in. She looked angry...no that would've been the wrong word...she looked mad with fury.

''How-Dare-You? Who the hell are you to tell Dr. Mehra to get me to participate in the annual function?''

''Me?? How on earth can I dictate terms to the principal?''

''Don't you dare pretend. There is no way I'm going to work with a smart ass like you. ''

''Darling, kaam toh tumhe karna hi padega.''

''She looked at him furiously, and then suddenly smiled.'' You know to tell the truth , I would have loved to ...but I can't dance at all.''

He turned towards her and said in mock surprise...''Oh really? Then you surely have a namesake. ''

She turned to look at him in confusion.

He continued.''...cuz I've heard of this girl from Delhi, who was a star performer of her school and always did solo acts''

Her face turned a bright red and she looked even more infuriated if possible. ''How the Hell Do you know?''

''He looked at her and smirked and said;'' I have my sources.''

''There'll be hell to pay, Chopra. I'll give you one day to fix this an convince DR. Mehra. The entire college quakes in their pants if I get angry and you don't want that. Don't you ever forget that Geet Handa only does what Geet Handa likes.''

Nikhil walked up to her and looked her in the eye..his nose almost touching hers. He looked at her with curiosity and said,''You don't scare me, girl. Though, Ihave to admit that you do intrigue me, but scary..." he thought a little...,"No - you don't scare me."

Saying this he walked away leaving an astounded Geet behind!

Principal's office:

''No!!''

''Why not?'', said the princi.

'Sir main nahi perform karungi.''

'Tum akele kahan perform kar rahi hoon'

'Sir iss khotte ke saath toh kabhi bhi nahi'

'Geet ' language.'

'Sorry sir, but Not with Nikhil. I can't dance anyway.'

'Geet don't try to turn this over...I know you can dance'., he said sternly.

'OK, sir, but I haven't danced in 5 years.' She made her voice very soft and sweet, 'sir I don't want to be responsible for spoiling the show'

"Oh you don't need to worry bout that. Nikhil here, teaches dance. He'll coach you and you will perform with him."

'Sorry, I can't perform with him.''

"No sorrys or ifs or buts!! When I said you have to perform, it's done. Don't make me have a word with your father''

Geet just glared at Nikhil and stalked off in anger.

Nikhil walked after her. ''tomorrow after morning lectures at 11:30. See you then.''

''Over my dead body'', she shouted after him.

He walked into Sid and Mayank. They cornered him into the wall. If you mess with Get you'll have to face us. Geddit?? Keep your distance from her'', Mayank threatened talking in his face

''Samajh le bachchu, tange todke haath main pakda doonga.Jaldi katak le.''

Nik held up his hand and said,''I think sir ne tum logon ko bhi bulaya hain.''

He turned to Mayank,''Get out of my face. Don't force me get you out of it.''

Sid laughed loudly and at that Nik pushed Mayank at an arm's length abruptly and walked off.

They were about to walk after him when the peon told them to meet the princi.

THAT AFTERNOON

''Lag gayi yaar. Hume bhi participate karne ko kahan hain. Main ko dance nahi karne wala. Mayank tera achcha hain yaar. Sirf MC toh banna hain tujhe."

''Oi, saale bukwas mat kar.'' Looking red in the face

Geet pealed into laughter and explained, ''yaar MC ka matlab Master of Ceremony - bas hi toh ban-na hain.''

''Oh- ok. Toh tu kya karne waali hain? Uss loser ke saath dance karegi?''

''Yaar Dr. Mehra ne bohot senti maari yaar. Ditch karne ka scene hi nahi hain yaar.Plus dad se baat karenge. Tujhe pata hain na phir kya hoga!''

''Haan, tu tension mat le. We got your back.''

''Chal lets go. Woh saddu rukka hoga.''

They walked into the room.Nik and Raina were already there.

Sid groaned,''Yaar yeh yahan kya kar rahi hain?

Raina looked at him and looked angrily at Nik.

''What kind of joke is this. Do I have to perform with this moron? I'm outta here.''

Sid: Haan haan nikal yahan se. Dance toh waise bhi nahi aata tujhe. Chale aate hain phateechar mere saath perform karne.''

Raina: oye, tere jaise langoor ke saath naachna pasand bhi kaun karega?

Sid: jaa bey.

Nikhil:relax guys. Kaam karna hain toh saath main karna hoga.

Raina(calmly): fine..toh nahi karna. See you in class Nik.

Sid: bhaag gayi na dum daba ke. Heh!(laughing gloatingly)

Raina: Jo log koi argument ko chod ke chale jaate hain woh aur takatwar hote hain...par yeh toh tujhe nahi pata hoga.

Sid: tu ...aur mujhse strong. Kuch bhi.

Raina: Achcha, toh lets see who can do the most cartwheels.

Sid: Bring it on!! That'll teach you not to take pangas with Sid ever again.I'll show you how it's done.

He walked to the end of the room and started doing cartwheels. He stopped when he had reached 5.

'Beat that', he panted.

Raina walked till the end of the room. Stretched and warmed up her muscles and started cartwheeling. 5-6-7-8...she cartwheeled till she reached the end of the room and gave a triumphant bow to Sid.

''Yeah, I think I beat that lousy performance. Nik, proof enough that I can't dance with him?''

Nik raised his hand, sorry Rainz, Princi's orders...you have to pair with him.

Nik and Geet had a fast hip hop dance routine, while Sid and Rainz had a contemporary one.

None of them pretended that they were enjoying it, but they had to get over with it and so had to work together no matter what. Mayank always sat and watched, working on his speech.

The news spread fast that the college's hottest group's taking part in the function. That ensured that everybody was falling over themselves to get in to help out. The main dances were given to Nik and Geet and Sid and Raina, but other acts were still open and they were quickly taken up.

Dr. Mehra was pleases beyond measure and he happily gave the signed scholarship form to Nik. The pther students worked well with Nik cuz he was trustworthy and fun loving. His calm manner ensured that everyone did their job well and happily. This new found popularity of Nik was not unnoticed by Geet and group. Geet herself, found that she wasn't angry with Nik..infact no one could be angry with him cause he refused to get into an argument. He always smart talked his way out of it. She found herself in awe of him...but her rebellious streak never let her ego get out of hand and show his respect.

There were posters that were being created. Mayank was supervising the painting and the designing of the stage, the hall and all the decorations. Everybody obeyed him completely cuz they knew he was the best. Dr.Mehra was over the moon and didn't even argue that the students practised and stayed in college till late evening!

Sid and Raina on the other hand were extremes. Nikhil understood from their interaction that Raenz ( as he called her) and Sid had a long standing enmity. They never seemed to dance for more than 5 minutes simply cuz they either never showed up at the same time, or Sid was surrounded by his gang of admirers, or the times they did start practicing, they just started arguing. They seemed to get under each other's skin.

Geet on the other hand was outstandingly brilliant at one moment and absolutely indifferent the next. She came as she liked and did as she pleased. Nothing that Nik or the teachers or Raina said, made any difference to her.

Many a times, she showed up with a hangover thereby rendering her incapable of performing her best. Nik knew that she was the best dancer out of all the college students. It was a God given talent...but he indifference was going to cause trouble.

One day she showed up saying that she had some place she needed to be and so she'd not be practicing late.

Nik reached home and slept only to be woken up at 1 am. He walked out on his balcony to see Geet and friends creating a ruckus on the street. A few were shouting and Geet was revving up her jeep's engine to egg them on. Nik knew this behaviour of Geet, but he still was disappointed. He didn't know why, but he was.

The next day Geet was a no-show. When he called her up she didn't answer and showed up 4 hrs late for practice. Sid and Raenz had a day off so t was only Geet and his practice.

Nik: have you seen the time?

Geet: I'm here now, aren't I?

N: why the hell are you so late.

G: had some important work to do last night.

N: oh really? Like what?

G: yeah I had to do some research work for my Dad.

N: like research on booze? And late night disturbance?

G: what the...?

N: Wow , you can just lie through your teeth cant you? You're not even ashamed of yourself.

G: Ok so I went clubbing. Why ask when you knew.

N: I just wanted to see if you had the decency to tell me the truth and be minutely ashamed of the fact that you stood me up when I've been waiting here for you for the past 4 hours.

G:(cheekily) geez girlfriend ! wow you sound like those tithlies that flutter around Sid. Why're you being such a girl, man. Relax!

N: So you don't get the gravity of the situation do you?

G: Look I had told you that I do what I like...you can't force me to have your way, always. Geddit?

N: you know what...I can't believe I had actually started counting on you to make this show a success. I just wasted my respect on someone who's miles away from deserving it.

He walked off in a angrily leaving his words behind, echoing in Geet's head.


Chapter 5 - Unlucky in love

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1663833&TPN=4

Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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Res. will read after two or three weeks ! 😊
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Great update dear.. i dono why but im falling in love with yr FF.. pls update soon.. different story and theme... loving nikhil, mayank, geet, raina and siddhant so far.. maan, more of him pls..fav is NIKHIL... continue soon...
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Originally posted by: zaara25

Great update dear.. i dono why but im falling in love with yr FF.. pls update soon.. different story and theme... loving nikhil, mayank, geet, raina and siddhant so far.. maan, more of him pls..fav is NIKHIL... continue soon...


Hey Zaara

ur response makes me wanna wrk harder. thanks a load.
next update on Maan.

cheers
Amruta
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Originally posted by: mechantefille


Hey Zaara

ur response makes me wanna wrk harder. thanks a load.
next update on Maan.

cheers
Amruta

yay you are back!!!
Im sooo happy you going to update...you can see me here more often.. i love giving some loong comments for analysis.. don mind.. and dear a request pls type the convos in english.. i cant catch some words.. i dono much hindi..😭 just bits and pieces.. and love ya fr updating on maan... continue yr NIK-GEET track.. am i the only one loving that track🤪 haha.. ill be waiting!!!😃
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Originally posted by: zaara25

yay you are back!!!
Im sooo happy you going to update...you can see me here more often.. i love giving some loong comments for analysis.. don mind.. and dear a request pls type the convos in english.. i cant catch some words.. i dono much hindi..😭 just bits and pieces.. and love ya fr updating on maan... continue yr NIK-GEET track.. am i the only one loving that track🤪 haha.. ill be waiting!!!😃



Yes Yes Yes...do give your analyses, the more the better......
Will keep ur request in mind. but I might not be able to do much...so lemme kno what you dont get...i'll translate.
ciao.

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