ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 15

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wow..ur ff is getting interesting with each passing update
simply splendid...
good going gurl
keep writing

reva

nice update keep it up its amazing

Raina, stared at him with her mouth open, processing the information that had been passed on to her. Finally, she just leapt into his waiting arms and hugged him, tears falling from her eyes.

Chapter 19 - Intoxication!

Geet and Nik, though shocked, were grinning along with him and whooping giving each other hugs.

Sid and Raina were finally a couple...Nik and Geet were the only ones left...the thought crossed everyone's mind, but nobody broached the topic.

Nik's flat was falling short for the Geet's latest addiction... dancing on skates.

She complained about the lack of space, but no one was able to come up with the proper space for them to practice. Geet on a creative sprint came up with better moves each day, and the only thing that stopped her was a lack of space.

Nik voiced this to Vicky, who readily lent him his unfinished studio room. It was one of the older Khurana construction's vacant structures. Geet, delighted with the news, insisted on practicing the new routine with him, immediately.

The four reached the studio, to find it almost ready, excepting the last coat of paint. It was long and breezy like a hall, with pillars and huge mirrors on the ends. The light was dim and there were long windows high on the walls. Vicky, had gone classic and got spotlights installed, that illuminated the studio, mysteriously, casting soft shadows on the wall, the constant breeze giving it an ethereal feel.

They started skating, practising the steps on count...feeling more free to experiment with the ample space. It was just them, their voices echoing slightly. Sunlight streamed through one window making them glow every time they skated past that area. Raina fiddled with the deck at the end of the studio, trying to connect her IPod to it. Sid, left to explore the adjoining rooms. Raina finally managed to play music. Her mind went back to the dance steps that Nik and Geet were practising. It jogged her memory about a song...she surfed through her playlist, telling them she was playing a song on the deck.

Just then her phone rang - it was Sid, he had found something in the back rooms...she left looking for him. Geet and Nik didn't even realize she was missing, until the song began.

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(Please let the song load and buffer before you start reading the next part...I hope you enjoy the song the way I visualized it. )

As if on cue they started the routine, finding each of their steps synchronizing with the rhythm of the guitar, automatically.

They fell in with the melody of the song, the lyrics getting to them, swirling around them, creating waves, the tension locking their eyes with each other, moving in harmony - mirroring each other.

Geet swayed, looking deep into Nik's eyes. She saw in them what she was feeling at that moment. She was losing herself in them, unable to break contact...but then again, she didn't want to. A smiled spread to her lips, lightening up her face. The smile was returned by Nik as they danced confidently , each certain about the other's feelings. He held her hand and swirled her as she turned smoothly on the skates. She did a split and went low in the ground, holding her hand in the air, as he glided towards her pulling her up in a swift move. They moved in harmony, each knowing how to move, so as to help each other complete the step with ease...Geet turned in as Nik pulled her outstretched hand. She breathed in his fragrance as she stood close to him for a split-second. She turned back outside. The fresh air away from his scent was unwelcome. She suddenly left his hand and skated away taking off her skates.

Nik looked at her uncertainly, his amazement increasing when she stepped on to his skate-bound feet, putting her arms around his neck, never taking her eyes off his.

Nik's throat contracted on seeing the intense expression in her eyes, the bold confidence in them, when she looked at him. His hands moved possessively around her waist, all thought of the original steps forgotten as they skated lazily just gazing into each other's eyes. Geet, floating high above her physical height, moved her hand into his hair, singing along with the song, not caring if she was in tune.

They had been longing to be in each other's arms for days - the deserted studio and the music finally bringing them together. A soft smile lit their faces as they glided across the hall, making steps, relishing the feel of the other's arms. He twisted in the skates, moving, loving her glide and move with him.

The tension reached a pinnacle as Geet's smiled faded ; her expression eclipsing all other thoughts in Nik's mind. They pulled themselves closer to the other, clinging on to dear life, intoxicated by each other's essence, all conscious thought of skating gone - just gliding on inertia. Their souls recognized each other, melding into the other, celebrating their long awaited union. Nik's hand moved into her open hair, stroking the nape of her neck. Her eyes fluttered, never leaving his; he felt the tremor run through her. His eyes strayed to her parted lips, as she moved forwards unconsciously. It felt like an eternity before their lips met in the softest most tender kiss. Nik pulled apart and looked at Geet, her eyes still shut, soaking in the moment. He could help but take her lips in another kiss, a little longer this time, as she clung to him helplessly. She opened her eyes to see the fierce joy in his eyes, the adoration in them taking her to newer heights.

When she couldn't control the insane happiness swelling in her, threatening to burst, she jumped off his feet, spinning round and round across the floor her arms spread out; blushing. Nik too smiled, and skated around her, looking his fill at her lithe beauty; watching her tenderly, a shy smile softening his face. She turned around to look at him, glowing, the breeze making her hair fly around her neck. They stared at each other in wonder. The intensity of his expression took her breath away.

Geet held out her hands as she watched him skate towards her, purposefully , and lift her off her feet, holding her to him, his face buried in her hair. The song echoing distantly in the background, like a benediction to the first love.

hope u enjoyed it...I want comments people...it took me ages to write n I still feel I haven't done justice to the scene in my head.

Hugs to you all

Chapter 20 Interlude

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u r just fab amazing nice ..i like it

Amruta love both the updates.. beautifully done... the show a huge success as was suppose to be... and the eagerness of sid and raina and mounting desire and feelings between nick and geet.. well balanced and beautifully described... thank you

Wow! That was amazing!!! Keep it up! Loved it! :)