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Posted: 13 years ago

I was so happy when i saw ur name being the recent one in ur FF, I was like Yay she updated...but nahinnn

All u wrote is 'What r u thinking'?

Kya yaar...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rachhh - you want me to update?
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Chapter 43

''I'm in trouble'', he whined

''What have you done'', his brother asked in alarm''

''I think I've fallen for an employee.'

''Meera?'', smirked his brother.

''She's been ignoring me. Apparently, it's not proper office behaviour'', he said air quoting sarcastically.

''I knew I had a good reason to hire her.'' Maan nodded approvingly.

''You're not helping!''

''What's the problem, man. Just turn on your charm full blast; I've never seen it fail.''

''Tried and tested'', he replied, in a bored voice. ''It doesn't work on her.She wants me to woo her. ''

''She said that?'', Maan asked disbelievingly.

''She hinted as much. And I don't think it's going to go anywhere until I leave KC ' it's good tomorow's the last day.''
Maan nodded distractedly. He still hadn't told Geet that he'd be leaving. He had no clue had she's react.
As if on cue, the door pushed open and Geet walked in. She had walked into the studio, just then' her jeans still on, and her jacket unbuttoned.
Her steps stopped short on seeing Vicky there and in her typical blunt manner she spoke what first came to her mind.
''Vicky? What are you doing here?''
Before Maan could interject, Vicky replied. ''Babe, I'm coming back to you. Our separation is over - now no one can keep us apart''. He waggled his eyebrows, flirtishly and made a mock bow.
But, geet hadn't paid any attention to that. She glared at Maan, he anger rising every minute, before she stalked out.
Maan yelled out to her and followed her outside, only to see her start the jeep. He ran as fast as he could and jumped in, before she could drive away.
"Geet - listen , I was going to tell you, ok''
She didn't listen and just drove on, the speed increasing by the minute. Everytime he spoke, she accelerated. So Maan, kept shut, waiting for her to respond. She didn't.
She finally drove to stop infront of a building. Her gaze was lost on something unseen and she kept it away from him. He waited quietly, watching the day progress from morning to noon.

Maan never let his gaze move from her face. The fact that people stopped and stared was of no consequence to him. A fear came over him ' he hadn't had that feeling for a long time. She seemed lost ' but at the same time, he knew she was aware that he was around her ' that she was thinking about him.

He didn't know how long his heart banged against his ribcage, but he did nothing to alleviate it ; he only waited; looking at her sorting the thoughts, that seemed to be running through her. It was hours before she stopped staring into space. The day had faded and the wind was cooler.

She frowned suddenly, and touched her cheek. It was wet - a tear. She stared at it , when he heard him call out her name gently.

Before she knew it, he was holding her close to him, comforting her. She held herself together, when she felt him hug her close. It took her only a split second, before she gave in to her tears and hugged him back.

''I c-c-can come and see you in your office, can't I?'', she hiccuped.

''Any given time of the day'', he whispered softly, stroking the back of her head.

Chapter 43 - Stories to tell.

Maan sat in his cabin. He felt out of place. It was almost as if his body was in a different time and space. He had become attuned to the dull thumping and vibrations of the floor. The office seemed dank without the cheerful colours on the walls. The abstract art on the walls seemed bleak. But, life had to go on.

It did!

The first week that he had been at work he had worked through all the files that Vicky had made. The feather in his hat had been the big projects Vicky had secured. No doubt, his charm ranged towards hard core business men too. He smiled to himself as he ran through the pages; the work was neat and detailed. He felt proud. Had he been that thorough with his work at the Studio?? Thoughts of the studio invariably led to Geet...and his hand itched to make a call. It rang just then, another meeting that had to be scheduled. He sighed and answered it. Life had to go on.

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The last file had been signed and he was about to pack up for the day, when the door to his cabin flung open and banged on the wall. He looked up, shock and anger bursting through his veins, until he saw the irate figure standing in front of him. He very hair seemed to be crackling and her eyes glared at him, till he couldn't look back at her.

''Geet''...he said, suitably cowed.

''7 days...'', she whispered in anger. ''SEVEN DAYS!! What is it that you do in this god awful office, that you forget that life exists outside of it? Or was it your ego that prevented you from giving a Single BLASTED PHONECALL!!!'' He voice had risen to a shriek and he stared at her, looking at her panting, trying to get her breath back. Words refused to register in his mind.

''Are you only going to stare or are you get your ass up and go out for a drive with me?''

He scrambled to get up out of his seat and walked to the open the door for her.

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The last time he had been out with her in her jeep was, when she had heard about him returning to KC. She had been upset then. This time around, she was annoyed ' burning with fury. He tried to explain ' but nothing happened. Finally she stopped outside a restaurant and stalked in ' leaving him to follow.

The moment he took a seat across her, she gave him a dazzling smile. He returned one shakily. In an effort to calm himself and figure out her behaviour, he reached for the menu.

''What? Now you're not even gonna look at me?''

He looked up to see a hint of annoyance in her eyes again. What was on with her today? He looked her in the eye.

'How have you been?'', he asked.

'Like HELL!!'', she said throwing up her hands dramatically. Ok this is much better ' I know this Geet.

'Lyla is driving all of us up the wall. I seriously am gonna turn feline on her and scratch her eyes out.'

'Why? What has she done this time around?'

'What has she not done? She's hell bent on wrecking the practices. When she's guiding the kids she want all the attention ' and if she get it from one kids, then the others who aren't paying her any respects can got o hell. Vicky's had it with her.'

'Sounds like you need Maan Singh Khurana back in the Studio', Maan said, smugly. She threw the tissues from their holder, on to him.

'Who told you to leave, git?', a smile finally playing on her face, as she began recounting her latest adventures in match making with Isra and Farhan.

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Meera. The very name reeked of devotion. How then would the people who named her, be anything but. But to live a life that was dictated by the laws of religion ' following them blindly to the extent of not adjusting or analysing Life around her, was beyond Meera.

She sat in her lone chair as it swing in a corner ' her book fallen on the ground; forgotten.

It had been 2 months since she had spoken to her family. She knew that they were the last people who could be expected to stay in touch with people, but when the transgression was on her part, it was unpardonable. Still, nothing prodded her to make that phone call. She knew it would only make her regret it.

The door bell rang, jerking her from her thoughts. She frowned. Ajay was with his father. Who, then, could it be?

She walked slowly to open the door, only to find Vicky standing there, staring at her uncertainly.

She stared right back at him, words deserting her as she saw the look in his eyes.

''Meera'', he whispered, not moving an inch from the doorstep. ''I think, I'm in love with you!'

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The cafeteria seemed full, despite the fact that there were not more than 10 people in it. Geet was conspicuous by her absence and Nida for a change was seated alone, pouring over her laptop. It had been a long day and it was tiring. She desperately needed some caffeine in her, her body flagging. She made it to the counter and ordered an espresso.

''You must be Isra!', a pleasant voice behind her commented. She turned around to see Faria looking at her. Immediately her eyes took in her clothes, her hair and all the aspects of her face, until they alighted on her eyes and found that she was under a similar inspection. She flushed and replied, 'Yes, and you are?', even though she knew exactly who she was.

''Hi'', Faria replied, extending her hand, 'I'm Faria, Farhan's sister; but you can call me Fari'.

Isra nodded, not knowing what to say. But she didn't need to.

'So are you the one Farhan caught on the verge of The Smooch?'. She made the act sound like the event of the century. But it was the unfair description that got her to blurt out, 'In my defence, I was trying to avoid it as much as possible. His ear should still have the evidence. At least my piece of work is in an area that one can see evidence of. She blushed immediately, as she said it. Nobody knew that she had seen Faria make Prashant squeal in pain. She looked up to find Faria observing her.

'News travels fast around here', Faria murmured, a twinkle in her eye.

Isra smiled back. 'I was the only witness, and I enjoyed every bit of it.'

'Likewise', Faria replied, winking.

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She stared at him, the breath whooshing out of her. He looked lost and hopeful at the same time. And he stared, afraid that he'd fall if he stopped looking at her. But she snatched the floor from under him anyway.

'What is love, Vicky?', a frown marring her eyes.

She finally stepped aside and let him enter. The room was dull and the curtains were drawn. There was a musty smell in it and it looked like it hadn't been lived in for a while. But she had been there ' she had returned home every day after work. He knew. He knew; because he had followed her cab home every day; the only glimpse he'd had of her, all day. He looked back at her, to see her watching him and his every reaction.

It was then that he realized that she looked sad. Had something happened? He panicked.

'Meera? Are you ok?', he moved forward, a hand cupping the side of her face. He felt her face settle in his hand, like she was trying to absorb strength from him. Before he could stop himself, he pulled her into a hug. She came willingly and let him hug her.

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Geet pranced in the house. It felt like she had finally got some semblance of a normal life. The past few days had been frustrating to the point of contemplating suicide. She was thankful she loved her work. And Vicky was back after all. Why did he have such a lost and love struck expression on his face all the time though? She'd have to find that one out.

The weather was turning pleasant and she walked out to the open terrace ' the wind streaming through her hair, twisting it more. She remembered all the times she and Nik had sat there in each other's arms, just content with being with each other. She felt a sudden longing for him and tears sprang into her eye, just with the thought. He was with her all the time. She missed him. Missed him more, than she let on, to the people around her. They always wanted to help and comment and say words that had no meaning left in them. Maan was the only one, who somehow knew what to do. For that she was thankful.

The breeze wafted voices towards her. It was a while before she realized that they belonged to her father and Nanima. She hadn't wanted to listen, but snatches of their conversation reached her and caught her attention.

'...seems happy...moved on...''. Unconsciously she moved closer to the edge to listen to them. '...time for her... married...28 yrs o...''.

Geet froze.




Heya people,

Am so sorry bout the delay - was on holiday and then was submerged in work. I'm really dying to know what you think of these turn of events.

Love

Amruta

Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Darling it was a lovely update.

Things seem to be moving forward for most of the couples in a forward direction. Some are quicker than others. Emotions are also being felt and words are being spoken rather than being suppressed within.

Reminds me of Mohabbatein dialogue...

Hawaein badal rahi hai!😉

Thoughts of marriage for Geet...😲

Pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Rach
dekh - tera hukum saraankhon par.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update Ammu!! 🤗

I am in middle of packing, stitching, shopping and being the bai of the house, so won't be able to sit and comment at leisure.

But I absolutely loved the update!!😃

The exuberance of Maaneet and the solemnity of Vicky-Meera were a wonderful treat to read. (Do we have a copule name for these two? How about Vickeera or Meecky? Or Vira?😆)

Hope you get to update soon, coz I anticipate a new milestone in Geet's (and in a way Maan's) life.

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 43

awesome job dear. totally loved it. its nice to see your update after long time. thanks for the pm. do continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
After ages...Lol

So many things have changed...
So many couples...now i'm confused...he he...

Loved Geet - Maan bonding...superb...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update..
Eventhough many people r around her,she s feeling lonely!!
sum position for a particular person in our mind cannot b replaced!if v wish too..

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