MG Dancing Frm the Ashes 2 Chp 56 pg 39

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Wow maan's reaction was superb... Wat was adhiraj thinking he came threat geet in her own house ... Waise toh geet was capable to handle him...

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

congarts on ur new thread...

awesome part

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Amru, welcome back darling, read the last two parts and absolutely loved this one. Can't believe Maan punched that idiot and threw him out. Now that action of his should speak volumes to Geet.

This is getting interesting, can't wait to read further. Please update soon.

Love

Dee

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

oohhh ooohhh i just LOVED IT...WOOOWWW

I JUST LOVED MAAN'S ATTITUDE...MY SHERRR

awesome...

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Adi shuld thank God that Maan didnt killed him

He was gng overboard

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Congrats darling!

Still catching up with the story...loving it so far😃

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Bombshell Amru !!

I had gone on a vacation and I come back to see your PM's and you know what, I reject all others and read your updates first !

You still think I have forgotten the story? Thanks for turning up active again, girl...

Loving the turn the story is taking - both with Vicky Meera and Maaneet.

Specially loved the last update on Geet's first suitor ! Would have landed a few punches myself ! I know she's quite capable of handling herself but was pleasantly surprised when maan took it on himself to do it... :)

One thing, while I totally love the interactive way of storytelling, I would love it more if you give some glances into the minds of each character and what they feel for the ones around them...that helps us know them better than to infer from just their convos. For example, its difficult to assume from Maaneet's convo if they have just friendship between them - bcoz with it comes the trust,possessiveness and knowing of mind they have..or is it a little more than that. Meera's mind is still a haze to me..Just my two pence, girl...hope you dont mind !