Walking With YOU..CHAPTER:35 3/1,pg41 - Page 2

Epilogue:

Marriage are made in heaven yet celebrated on earth..i hate this line when evr its written in any wedding card..lol..but somehow true yet with a change, maybe partners are selected in heavens but marriage is made by the partners selected by heaven above right here.

This ff is just a way to define and to make all the girls familiar with the kind of thing a girl has to face in there in laws.

Walking with you starts as journey of two person being selected by destiny for each other, and the believed that destiny has decided the best. Being the boy taking the first step to make a relation and the girl accepting it. The first point I wanted to show was

When ur working to make a relation, apart from lovey dowey talks , its better to try to know each other with questions like." Wht u thought of ur life"'" wht your parents mean"..these all are sum question that can make u understand a person better. His priorities, his expectations and his flexibilities to life. Answering the question be honest and read between the lines so that u donot get shocked knowing the other after marriage. Knowing a person for sum hours and living 24/7 is two poles apart things. Its not only the case of arrange marriage, same goes with love too'

Married life just not consist of love, affection, romance. There many other practicality wch are around u and u need to handle it patiently. Nupur though being in arrange marriage made it in a full love marriage, gunjan being in love marriage miss using the thought ruined it completely..no matter what at end of the day a mother cums before a wife and its quite fair too'so messing with mother in laws can be trouble sum

A person never is quite because she can't argue or say with a more high voice, yet its better for the sake of the peace of home, and ur relation..plus u gain respect and trust of ur husband and ur in laws like this'.give them time to know u and trust u'.

I wish I can make boys read it to, as the only thing they lack is to say what they actually feel for there wifes..they never felt like saying wht they felt..though some how there gesture told u they cant even mange a day without u'.

A part that u all never objected, that I added deliberately, was this FF doesn't have a verbal confession..Neither mayank nor nupur once in this ff said " I love you" or ever used the word mohabbat .. yet u all can feel it so much. It's not necessary ur husband or u say that to him , it's the feel u have in you..confessions at verbal level isn't always necessary..n most of the time wont happen, but does v really need that..

LAST CHAPTER:

Returning back to home they found things pretty normal. When asked by nupur to gunjan, she shyly said Samrat is now pretty much with her to.

A day she said soory n sobbed her heart out, he loves her too much and cant stay away too, feeling her being punished he too himself felt at punished too

Gunjan: pls Samrat…humain maaaf ker dain..hum se apki yeah khamsohi bardsht nhi hoti pls Samrat…pls Samrat….humain aur saaza na dain hum nhi bardsht ker pay gay

Samrat: apki yeah saza humary liyan assan hai kiya, jitni apko takleef daytay hain khud ko bhi hoti hai,

Gunjan: hum sach mein sab samhj gay hain , apki kasm jhoot nhi bol rahy ,,pls,..samrat…hum tum se door nhi rah sakty

she wept and droped on floor, still crying, he moved forward and hugged her, she closed her eyes to feel him so closed after so long, she pulled him closed and kissed his cheek whispering a thnks…..

that also actually made the house environment back to a family place..n slowly u too realize who peaceful it felt to have such harmony at home

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Muhammad , Muhammad ,,rukho pls beta rukahin…idhar aay ap, a five year boy was running in the house and a woman was running behind him with a bowl of food, he went to climb up the sofa jumping from one to another running away

SA: ya khuda larkay ap gir jay gay…neechay utra

Muhmmad: dadi jan kuch nhi hota, yeah dekhin, hum is se bhi bari jump lga sakty hain

Nupur: Muhammad, she gasped at him , as he jumped from three steps down n rushed to hide behind gunjan..

Aram se chachi ko dekh ker…ya khuda

Gunjan pakar rekho is ko, subha se kuch nhi kahya hai, aur poray ghar mein hungama macha rahin hain

Gunjna: kyun bhi champ, kya baat hai

M: chachi, look at the food, so non taste mjh yeah nhi kahan

Gunjan: phir kya kaho gay..hum abhi baty hain

M: chocolate muffins…yumi

Gunjan: thik hai…chalo abhi banaty hain…

M: yupi thik hai hum bhi banay gay…..

Nupur: koi zaroorat nhi hai gunjan is hatlat mein is ki farimayishy pori kerny ki, ap aram kerain, wasy aj ap ko ghar k kam kerna tha, aram kerian ab….ab hum dekhain lain gay

Gunjan: aray hum thik hai bhabi ..is ny bhi tu kuch nhi kahaya hain

Nupur: ap choray hum bantay hain

Gunjan: bhabi..thak gain hain ap…subha se yeah 4 cheez hai jo try ker rahin hain ap…

M: uffu..ap dono pls jaldi sochain k kiya kerna hai..mjhy bhook lagi hai

Mayank: uff meray betay ko bhook lagi hai

M: baba jani…he rushed to him n he picked him n kissed him…humain bhoook lagi hai, aur ami chachi ko muffins nhi bany day rahin

Mayank: apko pata hai na chachi ki tabiyat thik nhi hai aur ap un k kayal nhi rakh rahy un se kam ker rahy hain..yeah tu buhat bori baat hai

M: nhi nhi woh thik hai, subha tu dadi ny kaha.."gunjan koi kamal nhi kerain ap, sab kertay hain aur 20 20 logo k kahan bhi bantya hai, itni dramy na kerain..aur jay kitchen mein kuch bany"…he complete mimicking shilpa….see tu im not troubling chachi she is my friend

And all of them looked at him, and suppressed there laughter, while samrat burst in to laugh.

S: wah champ aur kiya bola dadi na…aur bhi suno….

G: Samrat..bacho ko maat begaro…bori baat Muhammad asa nhi kahty …

M: okay sorry…per muffins

Mayank: chalein hum bakery se lay ker atay hain….

Gunjan: bhai ap sab mil ker na…humain kuch nhi kerny daytay….

Mayank: aray bhi ap humara promotion ker rahin hai tu hum itna tu ker sakty hain

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Mayank: kya hua janab..dekh rahin hain beta kiya agay shoohor ko bhool gain ap

Nupur: mayank Muhammad yahin hai abhi..chorain…

He had pulled her close, sliding his hand on her waist…and with her complain he pulled her more close

Mayank: yeah dialogue ab ap k 5 saal porana hogay hai….dekhain..ab tu mjhy apany betay se jealousy horahi hai bhi…achi nhi chorain ga bus

Nupur: mayank woh sab samhjta hai…pls na abhi ajay ga..pls na…

Mayank: no pls na..he pulled her close…so much that she wasn't now able to look at him..

Nupur: m..a.yan..k…..

Muhammad: babaaa….he came ruing opening the door and thay sprang aprt, luckly he didn't saw them so close…

The were starlet …

Mohammad: baba..yeah dekhain I made his…zooo…yeah asay fly kerta hai

Mayank: let me see…he took him in his arms..and start looking at the plane he made from his lagoo…mayank was enjoying his technical explanations, true nupur is right he is an pretty good observer, at time he feel he isn't that much aware of his son, yet he tried to make it as much as possible..being out for works almost whole day he at time is missing his son growing up..yet wht ever time he get he spend with him..and than they being husband n wife are missing their share of quality time …. Yet this phase of life had made them more close, experience new things together…

Mohammad: mama common we will have a group hug..

Mayank: kya..

Muhammad: yes chacho told me..woh chachi ko zoor se squeeze kertain hain phir mjhy..phir hum teeno..he say is we came close…n stay like a family like this .comon na

Nupur and mayank looked at each other, with nupur with a blush, and mayank with a smirk

Mayank: layin ap humain kah rahi hain…dekhain apka deewar..kya kya sekha raha hai… Explanation bhi dayta hai…suno…aur kiya bola beta chacho ny..

Mohammad: common ami pls naaa…

Mayank: common na mom…

Nupur: mayankkk ap bhi…

Mohammad: yeah mom itni red kyun horhin hai…abhi tu hum ny un ko squeeze bhi nhi kiya…chachi tu usk baad hoti hai…..ami its cheating

Mayank: beta yeah ur ami special hai….yeah tu her waqt hoti hain…

Nupur: mayank ap bhi…aur ap chotay mayank ji itni maar lago gi na ap ko..abhi pata chalta hai…

M: he chukled baba ami is gonna beat u…he laughed

Mayank: beta har ghar ki kahani hai…….chalo champ..we will do it..

Mohammad: yes baba

The both move towards and pulled her in a hug, with giigles and chuckles..the both ahmeds place a kiss on her cheeks..and she glared her hubby with a blushed …

At night lying on the bed, she was stroking her sons hairs, while her hubby was hugging her back. She looked at her either side, with contentment and bliss feeling. She planted a kiss on her son cheek, and moved her head a bit back and kissed mayanks forhead.

Mayank: he pulled her close turning her to his side..beta so gaya kiya jo, shoor per pyar araha hai..

Nupur: han soo gaya..

Mayank: hmm..sath hai na humaray ab nhi daary ga…

Nupur: pata nhi kyun dar raha tha….she said with a pout

Mayank: bahanay hain ap k sath sony kay…wasy us se zayda tu ap daar gain thi….

Nupur: mayank.kk

Mayank: kya mayank…Muhammad se zayda zoor se tum cheekhi thi…he chukeld with low voice..and pulled her close..and she straighten and found him leaning close to her

Nupur: mayank ..beta yahin hai…

Mayank: so gaya hai..ignoring her any protest he kissed her..and broke away not to have sum air rather because…

Muhammad: ami dekho naa…he said sumthing in sleep and they moved apart in shock…

Nupur suppressed her giggled..

Mayank: kal se yaeah apny kamray mein saoy ga..is per parh ker poka kero…

Nupur: mayank..bacha hai… she pouted

Mayank: really…lagta hai sirf apk hai….aray jani..mazak ker rahao hoo mein..mera beta bhi hai mjhy bhi fikar hai uski..per kya kero ap bhi tu aj kal kam kam milti hain humain…

Nupur: wasy ap bhi…..

Mayank: chalo kahin bhar chalty hain..sirf teen din k liyan..

Nupur: ji nhi…

Mayank: aray kuch nhi hoga..muhammad gunjan ya diya api k pass baray arm se rahy ga…

Nupur: no way hum apny betay ko chor k kahin nhi jarahi hoon…

Mayank: acha tu betay ko sath lay ker to chalein na…wasy hi kafi akelay hogay hain yeah…apko nhi lagta he need company….

Nupur: acha really….soch lay phir tu hum apko bulkily hi nhi milay ga…

Mayank: aray kasi baatein ker rahin hain ap….ap bhag ker tu dekhain …tu done we r going….

Nupur: mayank abhi kasay

Mayank: nupur ap man jay warna apko chup kerany k aur bhi tareqay hain….

Nupur: yeah galat….

Her words were left incomplete as he used his way to make her say yes..moving away..he grin at her blushing face…

From the other side Muhammad moved closed and huged her from the one side and sungled in her….and with the other side he smirk and mayank cuddle to him

Kiising both of her the most loved people in her life, she slept with contentment

With all that happened from strt to end, through out there journey, together they made this journey ..blissd and content

Note:

Phew finally from past 15 days I am trying to write it n still I am not at all satisfied with the ending line….

This the longest ff I ever have written, a completely non planned ff turned into such a huge long and loved ff, I never thought so. The though came up when I was writng Wajood and just clicked me that it can be a very pretty beautiful arrange marriage concept too.

Thanku so much for making it my one the longest and ur most favorite ff, waitng for ur epilogues as I know u all write more beautiful rather than me when it comes to epilogue.

Thanks a lot all loving it so much…

And waiting for ur comments , pls silent readers pls comment , I will be appreciating ur elaborated coments…

Apki ray humary liyan buhat qeemati hai..shukriya shahmilay safar rehny k liyan….

Lov

Fiza

Hopefully cya at GAR MJH KO YAQEEN HOTA

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Thnku for ur all wishes on my new thread..

Oki fine im not stoping this FF on 30 chpters, I though u all must have got bored reading it whn its reaching almost an year..

N one thing I haven't done in this ff ..u need to answer

The one thing u like

One thing u donot like

One think u wanna add…

Lov ya

Fiza

Rplyd to u all

Hello guys…

update as u all where waiting for mahabharat..here it cums..

Mayank's problem will be handle in next part…as woh buhat bara ho raha tha…

Rplyd to u all

Thnks for loving n liking the previous update

Lov ya

Fiza

I felt this update is too dramatic..dialogues read ker ker k tu mjhy hi kuch horaha tha..lol..mera nhi zakmi hath k kasoor hai..kuch zayda he dramatic hain...sorry for late update..u all know why was that…

Haven't rply to any..but here is a huge update…

And with a pinch of romance…meray beachary reader u haven't complained even yesterday I looked back and it has been like 5 chapter I haven't made u feel relived…so sorry

Thanku so much for ur love n appreciation, means aloot to me..thanku

GMYH..PROMISE ON SATURDAY INSHALLAH…

Love fiza

Hello guys

This time im back with a much more quicker one as next wk is eid may or maynot I 'll be able to update though I'll try my level bst..

The last part of this Update is for GOPI..who asked for sumthing..so there it is, actually thanks to her tht she reminded me of adding such emotion too..thnks dear

Thnku guys for liking previous update

Life going busy busy ..thts y nt rplying to u

Yes I know gunjan is a bit diffrtn yet such people are there…

Shilpa…will soon realize wht she has done n wht she cant do now…

Thnks for liing mayur moments

Lov ya all

Fiza

PLS READ

Hey Guys

Ya I know I know I an dam late ..yet I have reasons n I have u do understand…

A request before reading the update pls listen to the song, cause this update will not be felt the way I want ut to if this songs melody isn't in ur ears…

On suja's request that its based on a Muslim sumwht Pakistani traditions so I must add a Pakistani song …I have added it…

Its one of my all time favt..by Vital sign..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o4gUZgAaqc4&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

I hope u like this update

Rplyd to u all..

Eagerly waiting for ur coments..

Lov ya