Walking With YOU..CHAPTER:35 3/1,pg41 - Page 7

awesum👏

amazing luvedd it

yayyy...u r not ending it...😆

n it was a BEAUTIFUL Update fiza...😳i so adore Mayur relationship...😍

they just left me awww...😍
love the Understanding...Caring nature they have...n the respectful Growing Love For each other...❤️
everything was just so LOVABLE 😳😍
i so luv this FF for this dat u show Mayur in each n Every stage ...starting 4rm there love before marriage...to the Love n Life after marriage...there bonding...there adjustment after marriage...respect for each other...there caring nature...the LOVE... ❤️
plz don't end this FF...TRUST me no one is Bored..even reading it for almost a whole year...😳😍

oyeee hoyeee...Gunjan ji kuch garabar karein gi...i knw...dekhaty hain kya Dhamaka hota hai ab...😆


Just continue soon Fiza...😃
God Bless😳
Annu😃

Aww mayur small moment ws cute..And finally mayank's mom is taking nupur's side..aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai...But acha laga dekh kar...
Aur acha hai aab shaadi bhi ho gayi...dekhenge how mayank's mom handle gunjan...
Lovely update...
Cont soon...

ps: i love nupur's character most in this ff...burai to kuch nahi hai and want more mayur moments...

Awww i loved my adorable mayur Fiza
they r just too good- made 4 each other
but Gunjan??? hmm kuch tou probhone wale hai..
fab update
loved it so much
keep it up

excellent update...4 the 1st time seeing some change in mayu's mom...!! hope she changes 4 better...!! and wht to tell about mayur bond...they r always extreme compatible due to immense understanding,which proved out to b the same in this chapter also...cant wait 4 the next part sis...!! do continue with this ff 4 long...plzzz.. u wil keep it na??

Hello guys

This time im back with a much more quicker one as next wk is eid may or maynot I 'll be able to update though I'll try my level bst..

The last part of this Update is for GOPI..who asked for sumthing..so there it is, actually thanks to her tht she reminded me of adding such emotion too..thnks dear

Thnku guys for liking previous update

Life going busy busy ..thts y nt rplying to u

Yes I know gunjan is a bit diffrtn yet such people are there…

Shilpa…will soon realize wht she has done n wht she cant do now…

Thnks for liing mayur moments

Lov ya all

Fiza

Chapter : 28

The morning was welcomed, n was waiting to welcum many new relations to began

Mayank who was lying still with his head resting in his hand abit away from her have clear picture of her, though he was awake, but was lost in thinking about his future, n the future he has planned to give the person lying peacefully in his embrace, he knew she hasn't said a think like , wht will happen about our future, how we r gonna survive if he was nt able to prove himself right. If she would have panic he would had lost strength to fight, kissing her forehead he found her more snuggling into him, n he willingly pulled her close.

Yes he was scared, scared of 2morow, scared of not fullfiling her dreams, not fulfilling there dreams. Fear that all these problems shud not influence the peace there relation hold . He had promised way back that he will give her evry happiness, but now . though they r materialsitc things yet thy r necessities they need in life.

He put her head back on pillow n pulled her close to him, as he knew and love the feeling of her being close to him not only physically but the feeling he found in his soul.

Nupur: she opened her eyes as she found sum1 caresing her skin slightly with his finger, GOOD MORNING..

Mayank: good morning, asalmualikum…...thak gai hain na ap, haina…he said caressing her cheeks

Nupur: thora sa…maagr aj tu sirf jana hai baqi tu ap sambhal lo ga….wasay time kiya hoa hai…

Mayank: 10 baj rahy hain…

Nupur: ya khuda, apny uthaya kyun nhi, ab chorhin hum aur ap bhi jaldi se taiayr hoon ..aj gunjan k pehla din hai sab kuch acha hona chaiy, us k na lagay k woh ksis anjan ghar mein hai

Mayank: baqi sab k tu nhi pata per ap asa hony nhi day gi..hum janty hain ..jay jadli se taiyarr ho jay…

…….

nupur: asalmualkium ami…soory hum late hogay

SA: koi baat nhi hum bhi abhi uthain hai…kuch zayada hi thak hogai thi..aur shayad itna intezar bhi nhi tha nai bahu k dekh ny k jitna apko tha..

Nupur: dekhay ga woh hum sab k dil jit lay gi

SA: khuda keray asa hi hoon, warna humain nhi lagta…kahir chalein nashta taiyar kerlain

It was almost 11:30, whn mayank came in dining room

Mayank: bhi humain bhook lagi hai, humain tu nashta day do yaar…hum per kyun zulim hai

Nupur: sorry hum ny socha tha k humdono tu samrat gujan k sath karein, magar woh loog tu shayad so rahain hain..

Mayank: nupur wasy ap ja ker zara utha dayin, warna..

SA: nupur nhi jay gi …hum jay gay…koi had hai yeah suraj sir per agaya hai aur yeah so rahi hain

Mayank n nupur looked at each other , n baba who was siting on dining table giigled

MF: baht jai ap dono, tufaan anay wala hai,

Mayank: right, jung hony wali hai nupur kuch kah lain ap zaroorat paray gi….shabash nasta kero..

Mayank n MF laughed n nupur though was worried but smiled

Nupur: Alllah reham…

..

She knock on the door, n gunjan opened it,

SA: aagr ap ny waqt nhi dekha hai tu hum bata dain apko

Gunjan: nhi ami humain pata hai, abhi tu sirf 11:30 hoay hain,

SA: sirf…is ghar mein loog subha 8 baajy uth jatay hain, tu addein badl layn, aur neechy ajay sab apki wajha se bhokay hain..

Gunjna: ji hum atay hain…n she closed the door…

SA: kya tahzeeb hai, darwaz moo per band humara jany ko intezar bhi nhi kiya..

….

Gunjan: asalamulikum every1..

MF: walikium aslam beta, welcum home..he put his hand on her head.

N she moved towards mayank…

For the first time he felt like a elder brother n he placed his hand on her head smilingly, n nupur n Samrat giggle and recvied a glare from him..

Nupur: bahto gunjan nashta kero..

The breakfast was going on with peace, a bit of teasing from mayank n nupur and smarat was way witty to answer them along with gunjan..

SA: parsoo farida anty ny dawat rekhi hai

Nupur: han un ko tu itni jadli thi k unhony nikkah k waqt hi hum se kaha k dawat hai parsoo Samrat ki …

Gunjan: but parsoo kasay ..parsoo tu hum ja chuaky hoongay

SA: kaha ja chukay hongay.

Gunjan: honeymoon per…

Mayank who was having tea, stop mid way, n looked smilingly at nupur and mayank's father look at her and than to shilpa

SA: ap ny kisi se pocha is baray mein

Gunjan: is mein pochny wali kiya baat hai yeah tu obvious hai..aur dad ny tu 2 wks pehly booking kerai thi..

SA: magar yaha sab dawatein hai, Samrat ap ny kiya soch ker yeah program rekha tha..

Samrat: ami mein ny tu gunjan ko surprise daynay k socha tha, but kal is ny mjhy yeah surprise diya..he said caressing her hand misheviouly…

Mayank who was observing evrythng but more he was observing his wife expression who was finding way to hide herself n was turning red in embarcment…

SA: ap dono nhi ja rahy

Samrat; maagr kyun…ab yeah maat kahy pls k bhai nhi gaya tu hum bhi

Sumthing strck shilpa n she came with it

SA: jee han, pehly mayank n nupur jay gay, phir ap…ap dono jany ki taiyari kerain

Mayank was dumbfold and nupur was shocked too. They both know it isn't possible, one there finical problem and plus his job problem.he cant left the city , tu contry was far away to be left, plus he cant afford any vacation right now..thy cant waste there savings knowing wht can 2morow hold..

Mayank was lost , lost of thnking whn things were fine , they didn't and now whn they are allowed they cant..nupur looked at mayank believing he will answer but thn the look on his face told she has to

Nupur: ami hum kasay…abhi tu mayank buhat busy hain

Her voice bring him back

Mayank: ji ami, hum abhi kam se kam 4 months tak chute tu kiya , city se bahar bhi nhi jasakty …indono ko jany dain, humara jab hoga tu….tu chalein jay gay…he added the last words abit low, knowing his life is going in mess..

He found the smiliar hand on his shoulder, to assure its no problem

MF: wasy shilpa ki baat hai thik..ap dono k tu hum ny hi rukha tha, tu ab ap dono k jana chaiy tha

Mayank: but baba is waqt possible nhi

Gunjan: see…tu phir kiya problem hai, dekhain na baba bhai aur babhai nhi gay tu aj tak nhi ja pay, hum bhi nhi jay gay kiya, as tu nhi hosakta na, aur dad ny itni pyar se arrange kiya hai..she looked at Samrat

Samrat: donot worry ..hum chalein ga..

SA: jo dil chay kerain..ap ami marzi k malaik hain..

She left..along with MF

Gunjan: so we r going na dear.

Samrat: yup even this a question….

Gunjan: yeah ami hongi mjhy lay ny aai hongi..she rashed n Samrat left from there to, mayank folded newspaper n placed it aside…n start looking at nupur misheviouly

Mayank: ap kyun sharma rahin hai hum thori ja rahy hai honeymoon per…

Nupur: app bhi na…..hum kyun sharmay gay..

Mayank: nupur….ap " honeymoon" kah ker dekho…he was tapping his fingers on table with one hand cuping his face, n was looking at her in full on teasing way

Nupur: KIYA..

Mayank: common…itna asan sa kam hai..bolein na..shbash….gunjan baba k samny khud bool sakit hai k us ko jana hai honeymoon(impressing ) per…tu ap apny shooor se nhi bool sakti…

He laughed she blushed n glared

Nupur: mayankkk..

Mayank: nupurrr

Nupur: baaat bolein ny ki nhi hai mayank, kiya acha lagta hai..itni bay baqi(boldly) se baro k samny is tarah se baat kerna ya yun hath pakrana, kuch cheesy un ko nhi pasand tu control nhi kersaky kiya

Mayank: he laughed…nhi lagta nhi hai Samrat aur gunjan can do it…acha hai indono ko jadli se hoenymoon per jany do…warna yahin …

Nupur: mayank ap bhi na..she smiled ..plus it was relief to see him a less stressed

Mayank: hum bhi na kiya…itni desperate larki mein ny aj tak nhi dekhi

Nupur: acha ap ny is tarah se kitni larkiyoon ko dekha hai han…

Mayank: wah wah..gunjan ko kadam kitny achy hai..meri biwi mjhy sawal ker rhai hai, woh larkiyoon k baray uff…

Nupur: han tu …

Mayank: wasy mein us tarah se sirf ek hi larki ko janta hoon..wasy kafi strange hai but university life mein humari tu koi ek female frnd bhi nhi thi

Nupur: uff ..kitna bara alimiya( sad, disaster) hai na yeah…

Mayank: bus..is mamaly mein ap se pechy raah gaya..wasy dadu ny male frnds allow kasay kerdiaya

Nupur: dadu ko tu sirf imran k baray mein bata tha, baqi tu kisi k baray mein ami ko bhi nhi pata tha, aur imran tu family frns bhi tha…unhi k dost k pootha

Mayank: kcuh ajeeb hi hai woh..he said a bit anoyed

Nupur: lo itna tu sweet hai woh ajeeb kiya hai..

Mayank: apko woh kaha se sweet lag raha hai..hn..itni irritating hai, kitna free hota hai..

Nupur was suppressing her smile..

Nupur: wasy ek waqt tha dadu chahty thy k hum aur woh shadi kerlain..

He raised his eyebrows in shock

Maayank: us champak laa se apki shadi hoti ..

Nupur: kay mayank itna tu woh handsome hai, us ko tu modeling ki bhi offer aai thi..

Mayank: acha tu kerlayni thi na us se, kitni famous hojatu ap..

With tht she burst in to laughter n came behind him n stoped him to go from there , as he was leaving the room highly irrated..

Mayank: ab ap has kyun rahi hain

Nupur: she hugged him from back,..n he was too surprise, as the were still in diinig room

Ap kyun jealous ho rahy hain un se

Mayank: ek sec, mein koi jealous nhi hota us se, and secondly woh ap k UN kab se hoagay han

Nupur: mayankk…she kissed her cheek n now he was dam shocked…kya baat hai aj meray huby itnay possessive…im liking it

Mayank: woh hum hain, hum se pehly aur humaray sath ap se sirf humari hain smjhi, ap khud ki bhi nhi hain, sirf humari hain..

He said this empathizing on each word.looking intently in her eyes..his each word was cuming so much from iside him...and she smiled in assurance

Nupur: ap ko pata hai k hum sirf ap k hain, hum tu mazak ker rahy thy..

SA: nupur..

With this voice she realize she was in dining room n SA can cum anytime she tried to free herself from him but he hold her tight

Nupur: mayank chorain ami arahin pls..

Mayank: nhi nhi..us champak lal k liyn mera khoon chalny k liyan sirf ek cheek peck..no nt at all

Nupur: mayank ami ajy gi …bad jo kahin gay ap pls abhi chorain na…

Mayank: jo mjhy chaiy woh tu mein lo ga agar ap nhi day gi tu …he moved his head a bit back n softly kissed her quickly, sprang apart he went near the wash basin to pretend he was washing hands

Nupur was in a shock right there as all this happen in seconds…n here shilpa enter

SA: nupur hum zara bhara ja rahy han ap ghar dekh li jiya ga

She didn't rised her head n pretend to clean the table..

Nupur: ji …ji ami…

SA: kya hua sab thik hai..

Nupur: ji ami..ap jay

SA: she smiled knowing suthng is there…thik hai Allah hafiz….

She left and mayank who was enjoying his wife's fumbles and blushes…came forward n whispered in her ears…

Mayank: room mein milay ap humain…baqi ki jo kuch chaiy humain bataty hain..saying so he kissed her ear n left a crimson smiling nupur…

Pardon errors, I have nt read it again, neither chkd it, soory …I hope GOpi u liked it

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fizu jana-------------tujhe main kya kahu - u r just superb.. yaar anotherbeautiful update. mayur moment wasso cute and nice. i can understand mayanks cond. now he is notalone. he has the responsibility o nups. and thatswhy he was worried abt their future.. poor amyur- i hope ki wo jaldi begnah sabet ho jaye..

By GOD- ye gunajn- lol lol -thoda besharam hai- lekin koi baat nehi.. aisa hona jaruri hai. today i found S>A a bit polite to Mayur ... and i loved it...
hey hey mayur romance in dining room was awesome..lol lo lol it was damn cute
wonderful update
keep itup