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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
lovely part, and mayur scenes were so so cute and romantic.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
amazingly written
hope their pbl vanish soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
nice part fiza...haha...it was nice to see mayank sooo jealous...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awwwhhh...❤️ that was such a brilliant and beautiful part ..❤️ i loved that jealous mayu...and last part was the best...! beautiful !! pls cont soon...and really sry for not commenting regular but i adore ur writing !! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
wow nice part
mayur scenes were lovely😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesum...👏👏👏👏
aapko pata hai today only i was thinking kitna time ho gya no update 4m ur side bt see its like u heard my wish n when i came i saw ur update😆😆
well that gunjan is ahhh she don't hv any manners wat to talk n infront of whon huhhh...
n my mayur r toh awesumesttt
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
thanks for taking my request fiza...lovely updt..I am also loving this possessive mayank like nupur.. once again thanks for this updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
wonderfully written fiza...thoroughly enjoyed mayur romance bit...the understanding,and maturity level r their front in this ff...and slowly mayank's mom also changing a bit which is highly commendable...!! continue soon sis 😳🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Just a filler

Thnks for lovly comments..

Eid Mubarak to u all

Chapter : 29

Samrat and gunjan left for honeymoon and came back after 4 days. After that they were thn being called on different dinners.

Mayank: kya hoa kaha kho gi ap..

Nupur: aj api se baat hoi..buhat weakness aai hoi hai unko

Mayank: kyun..yeah tu achi baat nhi..

Nupur: mayank sary ghar ki zeemdari hai un per, is halat mein..humari tu samhj nhi arha asa kasay chaly ga, khuda na keray kuch

Mayank: mhh, asi baatein nhi kertay, ami k yaha kyun nhi chali jati woh, ap adi se baat kerain, bulky hum kertay hain

Nupur: nhi nhi..bhiya ko bora na lagy…

Mayank: hum baato baato mein bolay gay..nhi lagy ga..

Nupur: pata nhi un ki saas jany dain bhi tu na….

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Adi: walikum aslma, aj itny dino bad humari yaad kasay gai

Mayank: bus kiya bato yaar yeah shadi ny uljha rekha tha

Adi: ap apni shadi mein tu itnay uljhy nhi thy, is shadi mein kiya hoa

Mayank: woh apni thin a…aur sunao api kasi hain

Adi: bulil thik nhi hain…khana peena kuch hai nhi, pori duniya k kam apny sir per hai, phir weakness nhi hogi tu kiya hoga, humain tu pata bhi nhi tha, poray 2 wks se vitamins bhi skip ker rekhi thi…

Mayank: lo had hogi asay kasya chaly ga…wasy yeah apki zeemdari hai, un ko khaly.ya ami ke traf chor aay

Adi: yaar bus ab yeahi kero ga, wasy bhi hum 1 n half month k liyan bahar jarahy hain, tu un ko ami k chor day ga, phir tu un k 8 month shoro hojay ga, tu ami bi zara reham kerday gi…

Mayank: chalo good, chekar lagi kisi waqt phir, miltay hain Allah hafiz

Nupur: kya kaha bhai ny…

Mayank: woh khud kal api ko ami k pass chorny ja rahy hain..she smiled widely…magar is k harghiz yeah matlab nhi hai k apkay miya ji bhi apko stay kerny k liyan chorny ja rahy hai…she pouted….asi shakl na banay …hum per thora tu reham kerain

Nupur: acha ek din k liyan bus..

Mayank: ap char din k liyan jay

Nupur: sach

Mayank: much…hum subha office jaty hoay chor day ga, wapsi per lay lay ga….smajhi…

Nupur: hmm..thik hai…fair deal…

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It has been a month to Samrat gunjans wedding and so the month for mayank's boss to claim mayank guilty, he needs to proff it now else it will be against him.

Though the MD has said the pc and information will be receive very soon but this soon wasn't cuming, and it was causing immense tension for mayank..today the height occurred that he was fearing and he came back home to tired of his thoughts

Nupur: kya baat hai mayank itnay pareshan kyun hain ap…

She said beside mayank on sofa in there room, as she saw mayank cuming in the room and throwing himself closing his eyes,

Mayank: mjhy suspend kerdiya hai..

Nupur: KYA

Mayank: han, mjhy kuch samhj nhi araha hai, boss k kahna hai k asa islayn kiya hai k meray boss ko surety hojay k, MD ko pora bahroosa k mein culprit t hoon, takay un ko pakrny mein asni ho

Nupur: tu phir ap kyun pareshan horahi , yeah tu achi baat hai

Mayank: yeah achi baat nhi hai, officially is baat ke kiya guarantee hai, k jo MD kah rahin hain woh sach hai, officially tu im suspended.

Nupur: asa na sochy , asa kuch nhi hoga

Mayank: humain such samjh nhi arah hai…baba hain ghar per

Nupur: ji study mein hain..ap un se baat kerain gay

Mayank: han nupur , woh baray hain hum se zayda duniya dekhi hai, ab baat buhat agay nikal gai hai un ko batna paray ga…

Nupur: ap fresh hojay hum apki chay baba k pass hi pocha daytay hain

Mayank: nhi hum forna baat keray gay..hum atay hain….

He left n she sigh

Nupur: Ya khuda khair kerna yeah pareshani tu bahrti hi jarahi hai….

……..

Samrat' room

Samrat: hey sweet heart I am back..

Gunjna: welcum back hubby….she kissed his cheek

Samrat: so kiya kya aj din bahar

Gunjan: bhabi se khub sari baatein, ami k data aur baba k pyar sab kuch kiya…

Samrat: ami ny phir data.

Gunjan: aray chorona, woh tu roz k hai, mein kuch bhi kerlo un ko acha hi nhi lagta, aj mein ny sabzi bani thi, us mein mirach thori zayda hogai tu hoagie shoor, k baba ko ulcer hai aur itni mirachy…ab mjhy kiya pata mein tu nai hoon

Samrat: uffu…ami bhi na, tum bhabi se poch liya kero

Gunjan: ab mein kya her baat bhabi se pocho, she said a bit irrated and Samrat looked at her as he didn't like it….

I mean, bhabi bechari tu khud un ki baatein sunti rahti hain, kitna bolti hain ami, her waqt haq chalti hai un per, aur woh bechari tu kuch nhi kahti, ab asay mein bhi un k uper apni bhi cheeza daldo tu…

She completely took it in to diffent direction. though she certainly doesn't like her husband always asking hr to do like nupur

Samrat: han yeah bhi, un kkayal rekha kero, woh asay hi hain, ami ny tu kitna tang kiya hai un ko phir bhi aj tak khabi kuch nhi kaha ami ko..

Gunjna: kahna tu door ki baat hai agay bechay ghoomti hai, Samrat unhin asa nhi kerna chiay, un ki bhi koi self respect hai k nhi..

Samrat: kya yaar biwi mein itna thak ker aya hoon aur ap hain k ghar k bekar sa khabrnaama(news) suna rahi hain, humari tu baat kerin…he said mischievously leaning to hr..

….

At study:

MF: shabash ap ny hum se is baat k zikar kerna bhi munasib nhi samhja..kafi khushi hoi jan ker

Mayank: baba jan asi baat nhi hai, ghar mein shadi thi hum pareshan nhi kern chahty thy magr ab tu baat kafi gay nikal gi hai

MF: mayank apk pass apny MD per bahroosa rekhny k elawa koi rassta nhi hai, woh tu wasy bhi apko suspend kerdain gay. Dekhin ek tu koi official letter nhi diya unhony apko, so ap officially abhi us company k hisa hain. Yeah waqt ap apana case mazboot kerny mein dain, ap k pass jitney points hain humain batay, hum un ko official legal shape daytay hain, taky agr khuda na keray zaroorat ho tu hum kuch tu kareen

Mayank: ji….magar apko lagta hai in sab se kuch hoga..

MF; ap asa kyun soch rahy hain, is ki zaroorat nhi parahy gi……kya nupur janti hain yeah sab….

He noded in yes..

MF: pareshan hogi woh bhi, tu apny honeymoon per jany ko islyan mana kiya tha, aur nupur ny shadi per kcuh na lynay k fasal bhi

Mayank: baba..bus woh hum pareshan nhi kerna chay thy..pls ap abhi bhi ami ko na

MF: nhi koi zaroorat nhi hai ami ko batany ki, aur ap abhi waqti toor per business mein thora dayhaan dain,

Mayank: ji…

MF: beta asay pareshan nhi hotay, zindagi mein utar charoo tu atay rahtay hain, sab thik hojay ga..

Mayank: hmm…

MF: suspend kitny dino k liyan kya hia…kuch kaha hai

Mayank: ji 1 wk k liyan ..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
beautiful. I hope everything will be fine

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