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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

congo on new thread

amazing update
hope everything will be fine soon

thnks aloot dear
gladu liked it
its all becuase of u all i completed 2nd thread

Originally posted by: shafyyy

nice update...

i thimk mayank would be able to.. prove himself.. innocent...

thnks dear
yup he will
soon
thnks aloot dear
thnks aloot dear

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Congrats on ur new thread...!


Awesome update...!

Plss dont end it so soon... I luv dis FF..! :D

thnks aloot dear
gladu liked it
lol..im nt ending this ff to soon but yeas its need to move towards it climax
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

Congrats on the new Thread...😳🤗

this is one of my Favorite FF...😳
i started reading this FF late...pr jab parhna Churo kiya...tu parthi hi gayiii...😳😆
Mayur Journey Throughout this FF was So Beautiful...just Luvd reading it...❤️
n u r a gr8 Writer ⭐️👏
n i don't mind k agar ye 30 above bhi jati hain...updates tu...😳😆

cuming to This part...it was Luvlyyy...glad mayu shared his problem with nupur...n Very Very Glad that she was able to solve it...Luvd there understanding relationship...😳
i hope...mayu cums out of this problem soon...😃

Gr8 Job Fiza...👍🏼
Continue Soon..God Bless 😳

Annu😃


thnks for such wonderfull words, n sumerzing ur veiws on this ff
thnks for admiring there relatioship
thnks aloot
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kirti123

congrats for the new thread

hope mayanks problem gets solved
really beautiful part😊

thnks aloot dear
hope they will sort out

Originally posted by: daniella05

lovely update

continue soon

thnks aloot dear
.

Originally posted by: arjunratirocks

yet another beautiful part just love it 😊 hope ki mayank ki problem jaldi thik ho jaye and keep updating

thnks aloot for ur lovly words
hopefully hojay gi
will update ssoon

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

congrats for thread 2...

superb update
loved nupur, how she handle him n made him understand dat everything will be alrite.lovely
cont soon

thnsk a loot for ur wishes
gladu like this part..n there relation ship
wil cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: -moona-

i am happy u r showing this phase too, and Nupur is there for her huddy as true life partner, truely loved this part..!

i hope they will solve this problem soon.

thnks mona fro liking it
yup i wanna show this n im glad tht all of ur loving the tinch of realism in it..
thnks alot
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Woow Congorts sis for the new thread 🥳🤗 the update was Mind-blowing i felt bed for mayank loved nupur she's awesome wife mayank really blessed to have Nupur in his life thanks for the pm

thnksu soo much sam
all ur wishes
thnks for liking the update
yes he is n i so want that hubbies to agree on tht...
thnks fro liking
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Congo for d new thread

Lovely update

I simply loved it

thnks alott der
glad u liked the update

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Congrats on new thread...
Amazing update...Nupur is a sweetheart...Beautifully written..
Cont soon...

thnksu soo much aruu
all ur wishes
thnks for liking the updat eto glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

heart-melting chapter fiza...it seriously warmed my my heart...!! can u plzzz not end it in next 4 chapters plzzz? this ff has a long way to go...n certainly its climax doesnt come so soon...!! plzzz consider this much yaar...!! 🤗

thnku so much dear for ur such nice word...wasy hi ur coments at GMKYH are scary😆
i'll nt end it now ..very soon but yes it will be ended innear future but it will go beyond 30 chpts
thnks alot for liking it tht much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Thnku for ur all wishes on my new thread..

Oki fine im not stoping this FF on 30 chpters, I though u all must have got bored reading it whn its reaching almost an year..

N one thing I haven't done in this ff ..u need to answer

The one thing u like

One thing u donot like

One think u wanna add…

Lov ya

Fiza

Rplyd to u all

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Chapter: 27

Till late he was engrossed in making out points to be mentioned in documents to be given to MD from his side..though she asked him to get back to bed, but he said he need to do so, n she also know he has to. Things are not that so simple as they are appearing..n he knew it very well…

In morning he left very early as he wants to meet MD at his house, before office..

…..

Shilpa: nupur apny dress aur baqi sab cheesy tu pochaj di hain na

Nupur: ji ami abhi tu day ker aay hain hum aur Samrat…

Shilpa: ap ny apni shopping nhi kerni hai nupur…kuch bhi nhi liya apna..yeah kiya baat hoi..

Nupur: ami ap tu janti hai itny bahri dress hum pehnty nhi hai…abhi apkay aur ami k taraf k itna kapray hain…aur asay hi rekhy hain..tu hum wohi pehn lay gay…

Shilpa: han yeah tu hai…magar phir bhi valimay k liyan tu ek sari lay lay…bulkay shadi k liyan kuch lay lo…

MF: bulkily thik baat hai..humaray ghar ki bari beti hain ap…aur hum ny tu apko kuch dilaya nhi …

Nupur: nhi baba hum lay lain ga…

MF: ji nhi apki ami dilay gi…aj hi jay…aur koi argument nhi…yeah ap k haq hai…

Shilpa: han yeah bhi thik hai…chalein hum bhi lay lay ga aur ap bhi….

…..

Nupur: addab …ap agay…she reached home, and mayank came out of washroom..

Mayank: ji hum agay…ap logo ki shoping kahtam kyun nhi horahi hai….gunjan ko kiya kiya chahy

Nupur: aj tu hum apni shoping k lyan gay thy

Mayank: aray wah…really…..aur kiya layi…

Nupur: ek adad sari….yeah dekhy…

It was beautiful, heavly embellished sari…

Mayank: waoo…its beautiful…gr8…he said touching it and looking at it….with a smile

Nupur: hum chay laity hain…ap rukhein..

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: ji…he was busy on his laptop, n was swiping his tea too

Nupur: apny pocha kyun nhi is waqt hum apkay pasay ura ker agay…

He smiled n raised his head from laptop..

Mayank: kyun k humain pata hai ..ap asa kuch nhi kerskati…aur wasy bhi…saving bhi apkay pass, salary bhi apka pass…tu apko pata hai kitna kharach kerna hai…haina….tu mein tu ap se naraz hjana k bary aram se agar mjhy pasay chaiy tu aur nhi milay…he said mischievously..

Nupur: ap ko itn behroos(trust) kyun hai

Mayank: nhi hona chaiy…yeah behroosa ap ny khud jeeta hai….he said looking at her grinningly…ask her as if to remember sumthing….

Nupur: apko yeah jumla abhi bhi yaad hai…she said blushing …

Mayank: loog wasy zayda tar apni wedding night nhi bholty…aur phir meri biwi ny tu pehli bar mujh se kuch kaha tha…woh bhi….he leaned towards her

Nupur: acha bus.she pushed him back blushingly ..n .he chukled…yeah sari baba ny dilai hai..she said a bit hesitantly

Mayank: a frown appears on his face…kyun

Nupur: woh man hi nhi rahy thy…unhony kaha k shadi mein k dress woh bany gay…

Mayank: hmm…baba ko kuch pata tu nhi na..

Nupur: nhi hum ny tu kuch nhi kaha.kafi khosih bhi ki par woh many hi nhi

Maayank: chalo its ok…unhony shadi k wajha se kiya hoga…

Nupur: ji …...aray aj subha kiya hua

Mayank: aj humary boss k aur poray floor k pc change kerdiya gay hain after lunch jab hum sab waps aa tu sab k chnge thy….hum ny MD se jab subha baat kit u..unhony humary baat suni…

Kcuh flaws hain nupur…as jo letter insurance company se aya hai , letter k unhony mjhy maal ki insurance dayti hai…us per receiving per humary electronic signature hai…

Jo cheque hum ny sanction kiya tha us ki wajaha dayna k ek letter hota hai, aur woh jab tak na ho tu koi cash nhi nikal sakta…woh tu hai hi nhi…phir cash kasay nikala…

So MD ko kuch samjh aya k is mein flaws hain…but ab yeah computers search hongay…aur tab tak meri salary as it is freez rahy gi..PS k hard drives gai hain , sab check hoga

Nupur: chalein shukar…ap k pass points tu hain, bus dua kerain aur sab per nazar rekhy…insahallah sab thik hoga…magr jo boss ja rah thy

Mayank: boos ny un ki chuti cancel kerdi…yeah kaha ker k jab tak mayank per sab kuch proof kerday tay, tab tak u cant leave..us k bad arms se jana…

Nupur: hmm…chalein..donot worry sab thik hoga, kal se function hai..tu pls sab k sath rahny…sab apan hain mayank..un se alag kyun rahy hain hum …

Mayank: ji..ap fikar na kerain hum sath rahy gay….jantay hain woh sab apny hain, islayn daar hai k woh preshani dekh na layin..

The wedding ceremony started, with all the fun and masti, plus with at a side the mayank n nupur , specially mayank had problems at his back of mind.

The furniture and things came, but came gunjan' mom, n cousin to set all things as per there way, plus making last min changes as the don't like curtains, n Samrat said he will change them

Nupur: is waqt curtains kaha se loo gay..time lagata hai Samrat…

Samrat: I'll handle it..

Nupur: better u doo…she was annoyed as already there were so many thngs on her head and gunjan was acting highly unreasonable…

Finally the day of weding came, and nupur was relief as her responsibility of handling this wedding was getting over. She was getting ready in front of mirror, and mayank was standing behind her, buttoning up his kurta..

Nupur: jaldi kerain mayank..

Mayank: kaha se kero…ek tu itna bara zulim k ek mirror, uper se us mein meri biwi ki reflection, uff ab app batay kasay concentrate kero..he said as a matter of fact, suppressing his smile…

Nupur: mayankkk…apko mazak soch raha hai hum late horahy hain

Mayanak: mein buhat serious hon biwi, ap agar asay taiyar hongi tu kasam se apko kamray se kiya ya se bhi hilny nhi day gay…

Nupur: mayank…hum ja rah hay hain..she lowered her eyes n was going whn he griped her n huged from back..n kissed her shoulder….mayank….pls..dair …ho rahi hai…

He kissed side of her forehead…n thn her ear lobe…she was holding him tight feeling his closeness, lost from the world..…

Mayank: ab chalein ..ya yahin rahna hai…

She opened her eyes, n saw him grining in mirror…she smiled shyly n free herself..n rashed out side followed by her smiling husband..

Samrat:bhai…yaar yeah sherwani kyun pehantay hai( why to wear this
)….is ko band kasy kertay hain….bakra lag raha hoon

Mayank: tu janab ap shadi kerny jarahy hain, tu bakra tu lagay gai na, beta abhi tu lag rahy hoo…bad mein ban jao gay …woh bhi qurbani ka

Nupur: acha tu ap kiya hain..she said putting her hands on her waist

Shilpa: han meri bahu ko kiya kaha tum ny

Mayank: hain ..aj ap bahu ki side per….wah wah…Samrat ab lagata hai hum ko ek club bana paray ga…

Samrat: bulkil hum kuch kerna hoga

Nupur: filhal tu ap sorma lagay…aur mera naik nikalein…

Samrat: mein tu nhi doo ga

Nupur: tu thik hai…ap yahin rahy gay…gunjan ko kaun lay ga…

Samrat: uff yeah tu blackmailing hai…thik hai ..yeah layin…

They were going out whn maynk was with Samrat…he look once agin himself in mirror..

N mayank chukled

Mayank: so smarat Ahmed nervous hain..hm….kyun kiya hua…asa kiya hai

Samrat: bhai..ap bhi ..pls donot tease…mein already kafi nervous hoon…

Mayank: he giggle…relax..yeah ek nai shoroaat hain…acha socho gay tu acha hi hoga…

Samat: why man has to take the first step…

Mayank: cause is man mein sabar nhi hai…he laughed n pull him towards the car..

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The wedding was completed n gujna was now MS Gunjan Samarat Ahmed, in car

Gunjan: bhabi pls yeah sehra utr dain meray sir mein dard horaha hai..

Mayank looked back at her from rare mirror, surprirse a bride speaking so confidently..n that so demanding

Nupur: gunjan, yeah acha nhi hota, bus ghar qareeb hai, thori dair aur bardsht keralin ap, phir ami foran utar dain gi, magar ghar se pehly nhi utaraty ..

Gunjna: bhabi yeah kiya baat hoi, pls smarat mera sir..buhat dard ker raha hai…mejh se aur bardsht nhi horaha hai

It has been only 10 min she was wearing it and now Samrat said yes she saying right so he removed it, n gunjan put her head on head rest at back..sighing..

Gunjan: thnk God..uff I hate all this

Mayank was smiling n was pasing teasing glance at nupur..n nupur was afraid wht will shilpa do now…n shake her head n rested it back, n mayank giggled to wch he revcied a galre from nupur…

Gujan: bhiaya pls AC taz kerdain..buhat garmi hai…

They reached home, n nupur opend the door n help her came out, with a look shilpa was shocked to see her without sehra…

SA: yeah gunjan k sehra kaha gaya…utara kyun ..ap janti nhi hai yeah gahr se pehly nhi utarta..

Nupur: ami aay na andar chalty hain, phir baat kertay hain…

The moo dekhai was done, nupur took gunjan to her room, n made her sat.

Nupur: tumhain kuch chiay tu nhi..

Gunjna: bhabi chai…mil sakti hai pls…

Nupur: bulkil..abhi milti hai..aur han dekho ami thori strict hain, pls thoray din un ki baat mano gi tu khud hi woh tumhain apki marzi kerny dayn gi…apko un k bahroosay ko jitna hai..is ghar mein jaga bani hai, koi bhi baat ho ab hum se kaha sakti hai..thik hai…tum rook hum chai bech watay hai..

Gunjan: ji…thanks…uff its so tiring…

Nupur: I know its is…abhi Samrat ajay sab gayab hojay ga

Gunjan: uski ya meri…

Nupur was a bit surprise but thn both laughed together..

Nupur: best of luck ..hum atay hain

Nupur send tea to her, n came in her room back, mayank had already change so he was swirfing chnnels

Mayank: ap kiya un ko tips dayny rukh gai thi….he asked her teasingly

Nupur: mayank aj ap ko buhat maza araha hai sab k mazak urany mein …woh gunjan ko chai chaiy thi tu woh day rahy thy unko

Mayank: kiya…yaar wasy kafi maza k character nhi hai gunjan..ap ny batay tha magr asa hoga , nupur is k tareqay thik nhi hain….

She came after changing…

And sat beside mayank on bed, he pulled her near him n she rested her head on his chest

Nupur: apko bhi gunjan achi nhi lagi….

Mayank: baat achy lagny kin hi hai nupur, bacpana nhi hai un mein han magar zaroorat se zayda manmani(boldness) hai , dekho bride talking woh bhi is tarah se, I mean mein orthodox nhi ban raha but woh itny mazay se mjh se baat ker rahi thi ap se bool rahi thi..us ko zara bhi lehaz nhi tha..chalo woh bhi chorain, phir is tarah se ap se chai mang na..woh buhat zayda bold hain..aur ami k yeah baat khabi nhi bardasht hogi ap janty hain..

Ami k aj tu apny sambhal liya sehray wali baat per, magar ab ap mohtaat(careful) rahin gi

Nupur: kis se..she raised her head..

N he smiled n move his fingers in her hairs…

Mayank: khud se

Nupur: hain.matlab

Mayank: unko itna favour kerna apko ami se door kerady ga, ap maadat kerain unki magar bilwajah un k favor nhi kernay..dosra, ghar ki zeemdari ab sirf apki nhi ..so control kerain ap plss…apki jo addad hai na sab ki madad kerny ki us ko control..smahji..

Nupur: sach bolo…..nhi..

He burst out in laughter…n kissed her cheek

Mayank: uff..apk na kuch nhi hosakta…..wasy samrat kahma ka nervous tha..jo kerna hai gunjan khud hi keraly ki

Nupur: mayank had hai…ap bhi na…wasy I agree…she too giggle

Mayank: matlab ao kis baray mein baat ker rahi thi…he asked playfully…with a ur in trouble wifey look

Nupur: life set kerny k …..with a I know u now my hubby

Mayank: wah ..nice….wasy nupur..apko apni weding night yaad hai…he said misheviouly…

Nupur: nhi..hiding more herself in him

Mayank: gr8..mein bhi yeahi chahta tha..mjhy bhi nhi…

She looked at him shocked

Nupur: KIYA…

Mayank: mein tu nai yaadaien ban any k soch raha tha…wht say…

He said smilingly leaning towards her n captured her lips, to move towards a blissd night…

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What a bride Gunjan is... I could imagine the mess she is going to create hope Nupur stays out of it as Mayank asked her too... Mayank's mom will understand Nupur's value after she'll start to manage with Gunjan... this was really necessary... There is a vast difference between the too daughter in-laws...
Hope Mayank's problems gets solved without any damage... Loved the way they trust and support each other...
Lovely chapter dear 😊
Edited by aysha1989 - 13 years ago

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