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Well, ever since the news of the leap came out, I thought that they were going to reincarnate Rantara but it looks like that's not happening. This it what i thought that it would be like...


Chapter 1


"Raghu, mujhe nahi lagta ki ab bhagne ka koi faida hai. Voh log humare bahut kareeb hain aur tumari jeep bhi kharab ho gayi." said Antara while panting. They had been running for the past two hours and it was so dark. They had reached an isolated road next to a large body of water. "Par Miss. Kaul, hume bhagne hoga. Agar un gundo ne hume dhoond liya to phir hum kabhi saath nahi ho payenge." replied Raghu. "Raghu, mujhe un ke haathon nahi marna." said Antara. "Kya? Kisne kaha ki hum marne wale hain? Main tujhe kuch nahi hone donga. Tere se vaada kiya hain, aur apun apne vaddon ko torne walon mein se nahi hai."
Raghu said. "Raghu meri baat samjhne ki koshish
karo. Kab tak bhagte rahenge hum? Ek na ek din toh woh hume dhoond lenge na?
Phir kya karoge tum? Mayi ne tumare peeche police bheji hain Raghu. Voh tume
itni assani se thodi na jaane denge." Said Antara, trying to make Raghu
understand. "Toh kya hua? Apun teri baat abhi tak
samjh nahi paya. Kyun faltu mein mera bheja fira rahi hain?" replied
Raghu. "Raghu please. Main sirf itna khena chati
hoon ki shayad iss sab mein bhagwaan ki hi marzi ho. hum dono jitni bhi baar ek
doosre ke paas aate hain, kuch na kuch ho jata hain aur hum dono ek doosre se
door ho jaate hain. shayad iss janam mein humara saath hona hi nahi lika." Antara
looked at Raghu with pleading eyes. "Miss. Kaul...
yeh kaise baatein kar rahi hain tu... hum dono ek duje ke liye hi bane hain"
Raghu was getting confused by Antara's words with every passing second. "Janti hoon. Par is janam mein nahi. Agar aaj hum un logo
ke hatho mare, to phir burai ki jeet hogi aur humare pyaar ki haar." She
tried to make him understand. "Hum aur kar bhi kya
karsakte hain?" said Raghu. Antara pointed towards the bridge and said "Woh bridge dekh re ho?" "Tu...saach mein yeh karna chati hain?" asked Raghu.
"Humare paas aur koi option to hain nahi." She said. There were tears in her eyes. Raghu wiped them away as quickly as possible. "Miss Kaul..." he said. "Please Raghu" he nodded and took her hand. Raghu and Antara walked towards the bridge. Antara stopped him and said "Isse phele main tumse ek vaada karna chati hoon." "Kaisa vaada?" "Yehi, ki iss janam ke baad, Antara hamesha Raghu ki hogi. Sirf Raghu ki. Kabhi bhi kise aur ki nahi hogi. Antara par sirf aur sirf Raghu ka haq hain. Aur kisika nahi." She said. "Aur Raghu sirf Antara ka hoga. Main kabhi bhi tujhe apne aap se door nahi hone doonga. Tu jaanti hain na, ki apun yeh sirf iss liye kar raha hain kyunki tu chati hain. Apun ne kasam kahi hain, ki apun teri haar ek ek khwaish ko pura karega. Yeh bhi sahi." Said Raghu with tears in his eyes. He didn't want to live without Antara, but at this point, they didn't have any other choice than this. Raghu helped Antara up on to the bridge and gave her one last hug and a kiss on her head. "I love you
Miss Kaul." "I love you too Raghu."


"Voh dekhiye sir. Yeh dono to vohi do log hain na?" said the inspector. "Haan, par woh bridge par kya kar rahen hain?" replied the senior officer. "Pata nahi sir. Chaliye, dekhte hain". The police officers walked towards them.


"Raghu, voh..." Antara said. "Jaanta hoon. Tujhe mujh par bharosa hain na?" Raghu asked. "Khud se bhi zaayada." She replied. "Toh phir... 1 ... 2... 3!" And the two of them jumped from the bridge.


"Sir! Un dono ne toh chal mar li!" "Jaldi se un dono ko baar nikalo."


It took the police an hour to find them, and when they did, they found them hand in hand, unwilling to separate even after death. After checking for any pulse, they were declared dead.



After this Daya Mayi was found guilty of having ordered & planning the death of Dr. Kaul and was sentenced to a lifetime of imprisonment. Satya had gone to London with Kaka Kaki and they spent the rest of their life there. Rukhsana & Machmach had gotten married a few years after their death.


You must think that this was the end of Raghu & Antara's story...It wasn't. It was just one of phases that they passed to become the do dil...ek jaan that they are. This was just the beginning ... There is more to come.

I don't know if I should continue it... If you guys like it, please comment and let me know, only then will I continue it😊

PMs: If you would like a pm, please comment below, thanks 😊

Also, all updates can be found on my blog http://dodilekjaanff.blogspot.ca





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index
Chapter 1 - Above
Chapter 2 - Pg3
Chapter 3 - Pg6
Chapter 4 -Pg9
Chapter 5 - Pg12
Chapter 6 - pg15
Chapter 7 - Pg 17
Chapter 8 - Pg 19
Chapter 9 - Pg22
Chapter 10 - Pg24
Chapter 11 - Pg26
Chapter 12 - Pg29
Chapter 13 - Pg30
Chapter 14 - Pg33
Chapter 15 - pg35
Chapter 16 - pg38
Chapter 17 - Pg41
Chapter 18 - Pg43
Chapter 19 - Pg46
Chapter 20 - Pg49
Chapter 21 - Pg51
Chapter 22 - Pg53
Chapter 23 - Pg56
Chapter 24 - Pg61
Chapter 25 - Pg67
Chapter 26 - Pg69
Chapter 27 - Pg74
Chapter 28 - Pg80
Chapter 29 - Pg82
Chapter 30 - Pg85
Chapter 31 - Pg90
Chapter 32 - Pg96
Chapter 33 - Pg100
Chapter 34 - Pg106
Chapter 35 - Pg112
Chapter 36A - Pg119
Chapter 36B- Pg127
Character Sketch

Raghuveer Singh: 22 years old and the eldest son of Mach Mach and Rukhsana. He's charming and a flirt and loves his family a lot.

Antara Kaul: 21-years old. Spoiled by her parents, Ragini and Alok Kaul. The younger sister of Arjun Kaul. Wants to be a doctor like her dad and wants to go to Mumbai to study further.

Ishaan Kaul : 33 years old. He is getting engaged to Payal and wants to get Raghu & Antara together

Payal Singhania: 28 Piya's older sister and Ishaan's fiancee.

Ranveer Sharma: 23-years old. Antara college friend, also studying with Antara for medical. He is dating Piya.

Piya Singhania : 21-years old, Antara's best friend and is dating Ranveer.

Arjun Kaul :23-years old. The protective, older brother of Antara.

Riya Naik : 21-years old, Raghu's younger sister, and eventually becomes good friends with Antara and Arjun.

Rukhsana Singh: Mach Mach's wife and Raghu's mom. She wants Raghu to be with Antara and does her best to get them together.

Mach Mach Singh: Rukhsana's husband and Raghu's dad. He also wants Raghu and Antara to be together.

Priya Singhania: Payal & Piya's mom and very sweet lady.

Raghav Singhania : Payal & Piya's Dad

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow i loved it soo much they dnt wanna leave each other after death aww
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start... just loved the first part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PLz continue...i love the concept..Plz PM me too..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow i loved it soo much they dnt wanna leave each other after death aww

pls cont asap


thank you 😊
i'll update later for sure 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

interesting start... just loved the first part..


thank you 😊

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Originally posted by: HELLO999

PLz continue...i love the concept..Plz PM me too..!


thank you 😊
will continue for and pm you as well 😃
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Originally posted by: .Shivam.

Plz do continue!
Amazing start!


thank you 😊
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Sure . Continue please 😊 Interesting

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