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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 11

As more and more guests started to arrive, the excitement increased. Every time I got up to help Aunty, she made me sit back down and said, "Beta, tume yaad hain na, ki tumare papa ne kya kaha tha? Tum thodi der baith jao." Finally when my parents arrived, there was no one to hold me back. I was feeling so much better and was ready to dance. As all of the guests had arrived, the sangeet ceremony started. Piya and Ranveer were the hosts for the night. They announced the first performance, which is of course mine and Piya's.

Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak

Aa jaa ud ke saraat

Pairon se bedi zaraa khol

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje

Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje

Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak

Aa jaa ud ke saraat

Pairon se bedi zaraa khol

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje

Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje

Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

Re khat-khat, haan khat-khat

Baaje dastak wo naa ab tak aaya

Re tab se, haan tab se

Haan dekhi raahein

Ki ab tu khol baahein aaja

Umad-ghumad ghoome,

re machle re mora mann

Goonje re baalam ke bol

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje

Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje

Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

My eyes didn't move from her during her entire dance. She was so graceful. I was just lost in her dance. The happiness on her face was a pleasure to see.

As I finished in my final pose, I sought out Raghu's eyes in the crowd. My eyes met his and he had a smile on his face. I could tell that he liked the dance and for some reason, that made me happy. I got off the stage and went to stand with Raghu, Riya and Arjun. "Toh Arjun, kaise laga tume? Acha kiya na maine?" I asked. "Haan moti. Tu toh hamesha acha nachti hain," he said. "Don't call me moti! Maine tumse kitni baar kaha hain," I said. "Antara, relax," he said. "Riya, tume kaise laga?" I asked. "You were amazing Antara. Tum ne dance karna kaha se sikha?" she asked. "Naach toh jaise Antara ke khoon mein hain," Arjun said. "Bachpan se seekh rahi hoon," I said. "Bhai, aap ko Antara ka dance kaise laga?" Riya asked. I was eager to know how he liked it. I wondered why his opinion mattered so much for me. "Acha tha," he said. I automatically smiled and was on cloud nine. He liked it.

There were a few more performances after Antara's. Finally, it was time for the group performance. I was nervous as we got on stage. I knew that Antara was a really good dancer but I wasn't. Next to her, I don't know how I would look. We went stage and got ready to perform.

This was the first time I was nervous before going on the stage. I was never nervous. Dance was my passion. I guess I was nervous because I was dancing with Raghu. So what? I thought. He's just another guy. Just go out there and give your best performance, I thought to myself. The curtains opened and the lights turned on and the song started. Arjun and Riya were irst to go on the stage.

Bano Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori

Chhup Chhup Ke Sharmaaye Dekhe Chori Chori

Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori

Chup Chupke Sharmaye Dekhe Chori Chori

Ye Mane Ya Na Mane Main To Ispe Mar Gaya

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

It was the second part of the song and it was Piya and Ranveer's turn to perform.

Babul Ki Galiyaan Na Chadkhe Jaana

Paagal Deewana Isko Samjhaana

Babul Ki Galiyaan Na Chadkhe Jaana

Paagal Deewana Isko Samjhaana

Dekho Ji Dekho Yeh To Mere Peeche Pad Gaya

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Now it was time for me and Raghu to go back on the stage. It was our part together. Just the two of us. I closed my eyes and said my quick prayer to God like I always did.

I could see her close her eyes and say her prayer to God. Before I could loose myself, I quickly snapped out of my trance and got ready to go on the stage again.

Mangne Se Kabhi Haath Milta Nahin

Jodiyan Banti Hain Pehle Se Sabki

Jodiyan Banti Hain Pehle Se Sabki

Oh Leke Baaraat Ghar Tere Aaonga Main

Meri Nahin Yeh Marzi Hai Rab Ki

Aree Ja Re Ja Yun Jhooti Moothi Baatein Na Bana

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori

Chup Chupke Sharmaaye Dekhe Chori Chori

Babul Ki Galiyaan Na Chadhke Jaana

Paagal Deewana Isko Samjhaana

Ye Mane Ya Na Mane Main To Ispe Mar Gaya

Everyone else came back on the stage and we were all dancing together.

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah Hai Hai Re Allah

The song ended and I was lost in Raghu's eyes. We were just standing there and looking at each other. I had the same feeling that I was having these days. Of this entire dance happening before. I had another flashback, but this time it was clearer. I was there wearing a blue anarkali and Raghu was wearing a red sherwani. When had this happened? I decided that I would talk to Raghu after the ceremony. I had to find out what was happening, and I had to find out soon.

I was lost again in her eyes. I had another flashback. A bit more clearer. There was the two of us standing the same way that we were now. I told myself that I had to talk to Antara soon and find out what was happening.


A/N: Hope you guys like it 😊 Please like and comment, and also, if you would like a pm, please comment 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing...loved it.😃 😃 ipls continue and i request to finish till Monday...after that i will not be here..😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear ts awesome..dance on same song..'ye ladka hai allah'..too lovely..i must say that u r actually putting all the events and moments which rantara had done..so systematically..i loved it!soon they will talk about this!
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Smaggy

amazing...loved it.😃 😃 ipls continue and i request to finish till Monday...after that i will not be here..😭 😭


glad you liked it
but I don't think that i will be able to finish it by monday šŸ˜”
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Hey dear ts awesome..dance on same song..'ye ladka hai allah'..too lovely..i must say that u r actually putting all the events and moments which rantara had done..so systematically..i loved it!soon they will talk about this!
thanks


glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amfi123

loved it please continue


glad you liked it
will update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it.
Plzzz do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FatemaMazahir17

I loved it.
Plzzz do update soon.



glad you liked it 😊
will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome yaar superb update...
Thanks a lot... :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really u killed me i saw in my head our Rantara dancing on this music
So beautiful and sad too😭

Continue please

Thanks for the Pm

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