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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

SITAM

Sitam,means torture,injustice,anything unfair.

It is very difficult to decide that who did wrong to whom.

Sitam is about the unfair things in our life..

Rajveer andKranti..once they met and the wrong things began to take place.

Life gave them a chance again,to sort out that what went so wrong that so much bitterness took place in their heart and soul.

Main Lead:-

Gavie Chahal as Rajveer Grewal

Prabhleen Sandhu as Kranti Kaur

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

So..it was the introduction..if you people give me green signal..I can start this fic.😉

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List of my fictions..

YEH ZINDAGI-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110553 (MRD Fic)(Running)

My other fictions in other forums..

PIGHALTA AASMAAN--

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=961265 (JB Fic)(Completed)

ZAKHAM-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1003110 (JB Fic)(Running)

DOBARA-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1018439 (JB Fic)(Running)

NAJAAYEZ-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1081409 (JB Fic)( Running)

SS:Bapu aur Munna-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1073558 (JB SS)(Completed)

SS:Kauya Le Gaya Kaan-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1100324 (JB SS)

(Completed)

Talaash..The Search Begins Now--

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=929607 (Raj NainaFic)(Completed)

Teri Chaahat Me--

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=932725 (Raj NainaFic)(Completed)

Shaadi hui..Aur fir..--

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=941129 (Raj NainaFic)(Running)

Mere Jeevan Saathi--

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=946254 (Raj NainaFic)(Running)

The Prince & His Kohinoor--

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1002126 (LRL Fic)(Running)

SS:SAFAR-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1051283 (RN SS)(Completed)

SS:The Great Indian Arranged Marriage-- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1066684 (RN SS)(Completed)

You can have a look..

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Sari

@Seebz

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey it is wonder ful ........please continue it sounds amazing I'll b waiting for da part......hope fully u post it soon

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Melissa

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey sure even i was thinking to wrtie one acha hua ki aapne hi naryal pgod diya

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 1

THE ROMEO

1997,9th August...8 am.

"Hey Raj..uth yaar...kyaa kar rah hai?College ki chhuttian khatam ho gai..arre..uth na.."

"5 minute yaar..sone de..."

"arre uth..achha sun..aaj Community hall me Kranti ka speech sunne jaa raha hoon.. main.."

This certain name and the the news related to the name gave a big shock to Raj.

Kranti..Kranti Kaur.

Raj thought something for a moment.

"hello..kyaa hua?"

Raj--is ladki ne Samaj ko sudhaarne ka theka le rakha hai kya?

"tujhe kyaa?"

Raj--mera kuchh nahi..yaar..ladki hai..aram se Graduation kare..fir Maa-Baap k pasand k ladke se shaadi kare..yaa naukri kare..aram se jeea..aur logo ko chain se rahne de..par nahi..dhoondh dhoondh k kitabe kharidti hai..aur theory jhaad jhaad k sab ka dimaag kharab karti hai..

"yeh apne ghar k andar bola..thik hai..Campus me jaa kar mat bolna mere baap..tere saath main bhi kharche me aa jaaunga..Kranti k bahut saare admirers hain..dho k rakh denge sab...aur haa..maine yeha tak suna hai..k is baar College k General Secretary k Election me Kranti bhi khadi ho rahi hai.."

Raj--achha hai..uske lia bahut achha hai...yaar..Maa- Baap ne kharcha kar k..bheja hai Delhi..padhne k lia..padhai kare..par nahi,Devijee ko faltu k jhamele me jana hai..shaukh se jaaye..waise main soch raha tha..k uske Baap ko chitthi likh kar sab bata doon..unki Beti k karname..?

"oo mere baap..kaise kaise bure khayaal aate hain tujhko?aisi baatein mat sochna..arre ..gadbad ladki kare..aur Maa-Baap ko kyon bhugatna pade..chhod..abhi chal.."

Raj--ok..ek shart par..mujhe us sadi hui ladki ki sadi hui shakal nahi dekhni ..aur naa hi uski sadi hui speech sunni hai..

"ok..tu baahar khade rehna..mujhe sunni hai.."

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11 am,

Hindu College..

Raj is entering in the College..

A gang of boys were gossiping with each other..suddenly they saw Raj..with his new bike..

Raj is looking like a hunk..in fact ,he is a hunk.

He is the dream of maximum girls of this College..

Cool ,casual,careless HUNK Rajveer Grewal.

Only Son of Ranjeet Grewal,Owner of Grewal Empire.

Raj par bahut zyada bojh hai..Baap-Dada k jaidad ki..aur woh yeh bojh bahut achhe se halka karta hai..paisa paani ki tarha baha kar..

Raj ka yeh saal akhri saal hai College me..uska yehi maanna hai..k abhi aish kar lo..varna College se degree milegi aur agle din Dad bitha denge Office me.

Karol Bagh me ghar hai unka..Raj..uski Maa aur uske Baojee..aur baki 6 naukar hain ghar me.

Zindagi k bare me Raj ki apni hi ek soch hai.

woh chaahta hai uske aas paas humesha sab kuchh thik rahe..zindagi aram se beet jaaye..paisa ho..aisho aram ho..bas zindagi chalti rahe.

Duniya bhar k bare me sochne ka koi faida nahi hai..log apna bhala bura khud hi samajhte hain.

Baki logo k lia..apna waqt barbad kar k ..jo log bhaag daur karte hai..apna gala faadhte hai..woh bewakoof hi hote hain.

Arre..jab yeh leader log nahi the..tab kya yeh duniya nahi chalti thi..chalti thi...bahut achhe se chalti thi..jab se yeh aaye hain..sirf jhamela hi jhamela..kahi goli chal rahi hai.. kahi bomb foot raha hai.Chhodo yaar...in sab se kyaa lena dena?

Apni kismat sab upar se likhva k aate hain..isme koi kuchh nahi kar sakta..hone do jo hona hai..

Zindagi jeeo..apne aap me mast raho..khao peeo..yeh Capitalism,Communism..iske andar apne zindagi ko mat uljhaao.

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Community Hall se....Kranti nikal rahi hai...

Raj apne dosto k saath baitha hai..apne apne bike par..

Raj Cigar pee raha hai...

"Hey,Raj..teri Rani......aa haa..bilkul Khadi Bhandaar se nikal kar aa rahi hai...dekhte hi lagta hai Mandir ki ghantian bajni shuru hongi abhi abhi.."

Raj--sab naatak hai..yeh College k kuchh students samajhte nahi..aur uske pichhe bhaagte hain...

"kuchh bhi..kuchh baat hai isme..arre iska muh gusse se laal kyon hai..??"

Raj--nayi baat bol..

"yaar,tu usse pyaar karta hai...aur tujhe mudh kar bhi nahi dekhti..tujhe bura nahi lagta?"

Raj--College k baad..shaadi hi karni hai isne...tab rishta bhejunga uske Ma-Baap k paas... main zara ata hoon...

"jaa bhai..baat kar le...shaayad aaj tujhse baat kar le.."

Kranti tez kadmo se College k main gate ki taraf jaa rahi hai..

usko achanak aisa laga..k koi apni bike ko race de raha hai..uske paas..

Kranti ne dekha..Raj...

Raj--kaha jaa rahi ho?main pahucha doon?

Kranti ne dekha..Raj ko ...Black trouser aur Black Jacket me...

Kranti--nahi shukriya..

Raj--mujhe dekhte hi khunnas me kyon aa jaati ho?main koi ghunda hoon kya?

Kranti--haa..

Kranti fir se chalne lagi...

Raj--Ghunda jaisa kyaa kia hai maine?

Kranti--mujhe fizul ki baatein nahi karni..

Raj--OK..main bhi kuchh serious baatein hi karta hoon...ek hafte baad..meri Maa aayengi ,College me..tum milogi na unse?

Kranti--kis lia?

Raj--bas aise hi..Maa tumse mil kar bahut khush hongi..

Kranti--mujhe jana hai..

Raj ne bike uske saamne khada kar dia...rasta rok kar..

Raj--arre..chali jana..kuchh der baad..abhi bolo..milogi na unse?

Kranti--main kyon milungi?

Raj--Maa ko tumhare bare me bataya hai maine...tumse milna chaahti hain...

Kranti--kyaa bataya hai?

Raj--yehi ..k tum bahut achhi ho...

Kranti--mujhe nahi milna..

Raj--achha..mere dost kahte hain..k..mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Kranti ka chehra gusse se laal ho raha hai...

Raj--sach kahte hain..Maa bhi yehi kehti hain..k ....mujhe..tumse..

Kranti--dimaag toh nahi kharab ho gaya aapka?

Raj--kyon?dimaag kyon firega?haa..tumse pyaar karta hoon..isi lia?haa..ho sakta hai..

Kranti--is tarha mera rasta rokne ka kyaa matlab?

Raj--baat karni hai..isi lia,tum toh kabhi nahi aati mujhse baat karne k lia,din raat.. tumhari serious baaton k bare me mujhe sunna padta hai,doosre logo se,main khud sunna chaahta hoon...isi lia..main bhi toh sunoo..k tum aisa kyaa kehti ho..k saare students tumhare aage pichhe bhaagte hain?

Kranti--mujhe koi baat nahi karni...

Raj--mujhe karni hai...aao..pichhe baitho..kahi ghoomne chalte hain..

Kranti--Mr. Grewal..aap had paar kar rahe hain..

Raj--tum humesha itni hi chidhi hui rehti ho..k kabhi tumhara mood achha bhi hota hai..?

Kranti--kyaa?

Raj--pichhe baitho..baat karni hai..

Kranti College k baahar chali aai...

Raj uske pichhe pichhe aya...

Raj--arre..Kranti..suno toh..

Kranti--mujhe kuchh nahi sunna...Auto...

Auto aake ruki..Kranti Auto me baith kar chali gai..

Raj College me waapas aa gaya..

"kyaa hua?thenga dikha k chali gai?"

Raj--haa..chali gai..yaar..is ladki ka dimaag fir gaya hai..

"kyon usko pareshaan karta hai?"

Raj--main kaha usko pareshaan karta hoon..wahi toh mujhe din raat..

"kyaa?"

Raj--raat ko mere khwaabon me aakar mujhe satati hai..din me..College me mujhse baat nahi karti..

"arre..mere Romeo..teri Juliet ..woh nahi hai...kabhi nahi banegi...woh tere type ki nahi hai.."

Raj--apni type ki bana lunga usko...ek baar shaadi kar loon uske saath..

"tu toh shaadi tak pahuch gaya..Beta..bachcho k naam socha hai..yaa hum log soche..?"

Raj--main mazak nahi kar raha hoon...dekhna..isi se shaadi karunga main.

Kranti chali aai..apne ghar..jaha par woh paying Guest ban k rehti hai..Dariagunj me rehti hai woh..

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