TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END

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RAJEEV KHANDELWAL as RAJVEER SINGH SIDDHU

PRIYANKA BASSI as NAINA ARYA

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Posted: 17 years ago
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"Naina..nahi..Naina..samhaal khudko...are..nahi ...nahi..are meri maa..car dhire chala..are main mar gai...are are......"


awaz hai Beejee ki...Beeje ka naam 'Beejee ' hi hai..sab jante hai..actual name Kulvant kaur.


Naina ki rishte me daadimaa hain Beejee...


Naina ka nasha hai sab kuchh tez ho...der karna uski na aadat hai ..nahi uski fitrat hai...

tez..tez...aur tez...


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aise me car ne jake takkar maari ek aur car ko......

Beejee ko koi chot to nahi aai..na hi Naina ko...



jis ki car ko Naina ki car ne takkar maari ..woh car se bahar aya.....


"hello...kaun hai..car chalani nahi aati to road par leke kyon nikalti hoon?"


"mujhe isse dhire car chalana pasand nahi..anyways kyaa kar sakte hai? garage ka bill bhej dijiyega..yeh mera card hai...sorry...."


Naina chali gai...usi raftar se....beejee ko lekar..



sadak k baki log aur Rajveer...........khade k khade reh gaye...


Rajveer sochne laga kyaa sarfiri hai ..baapre..agar busy road pe aisi raftar hai to highway par to iski car udti hogi....

card par naam dekha.."Naina Arya,P-12,A Block,Sector 15,Chandigarh."



Rajveer ne card apne paas rakh lia..sachmuch usko bill bhejne k lia.

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Rajveer Singh Siddhu,Siddhu Emporium k Maalik Omveer Singh Siddhu ka beta.

Raj chala office ki aur.

Raj ka bada bura waqt chal raha hai is waqt....


ek ladki ne uske bare me bina kuchh jane samjhe usko reject kar dia hai shaadi k lia...us ladki k ghar Raj k rishte ki baat hui thi.

Raj ne us ladki ko naa hi dekha hai....na hi uske bare me kuchh janta hai Raj.


Omveer Siddhu kaafi upset hai is baat ko lekar....beta lakho me ek aur ladki ne bina jane hi reject kar dia isi lia.


Girish Arya ..khud bahut sajjan admi hai..par unki beti itni khadus hogi...Siddhu saab ne nahi socha tha.



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ghar akar beejee bahut pareshan hui....ek to ladke ko reject kia Naina ne.. upar se aaj uski car bhi thok di usne...bhagwan jane kab is ladki ko akal ayegi....jis raftar se car chalati hai..kaash dimag iske adhe raftar se chalati.. itna achha rishta thukra dia Naina ne.


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4 din baad..ek courier aya Naina k naam par.


kisi Rajveer Singh Siddhu ka hai...garage ka bill...message bheja hai k paise draft ya cheque se bihjwa de Naina.pata bhi dia hai apna.



Naina chidh gai....kyaa admi hai..5000 ki head light ka 8000 bata raha hai... zaroor garage k maalik k saath fixing kar k bheja hai.



khair..Naina paise lekar Raj k ghar pahuch gai....

cash lekar...


Raj ki maa thi ghar pe...Nilima Siddhu...


Nilima--kyaa baat hai..kaun chahie?

Naina--Rajveer Siddhu hai?

Nilima--nahi office me hai..

Naina--aap?

Nilima--main uski maa..

Naina--oohh..matajee...baat yeh hai k maine unki car thok di thi..damage ka bill hai Rs.8000/_..wahi paise dene aai hoon..unko de dijiyega.

Nilima--achhi baat hai...




Naina chali gai...


ghar ake Raj ne paise dekhe...8500 the...Naina ne ek parcha bhi dia hai....

likha hai,"5000 ki head light ko 8000 ka bata rahe hai..khair..8500 hai..baki 500 tip."




Naina ne "Ishque" film dekhi hai...usko bahut pasand hai yeh movie...



Rajveer apne daant se daant ghisne laga..gusse k mare
Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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helloo

maine aapka yeh ff padha hai aur sach yeh bahot accha hai 😊 😊 ,i really love this fic thank u so much k aapane ise yaha bhi UD kiya.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 ff yaar continue soon. Interesting story line
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....thanks di for updating this outstanding ff here....again thanks di
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u very much for starting here, love uuuuuuuuuuuuu,
amar ei fic ta khub bhalo laghe.
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comment to aage korechi, he he
awsome dear
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx a lotttttttttttttttttttttttt 😊
for posting here
superrrrrrrrrrr
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for startin dis fic......its awesome...........aapki romantic fic padhne ka avsar hame mil raha hai......yaar yeh kuch jyaada hi badi hindi lingo ho gayi.....😉

bas aage jaldi updt karna....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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tip k 500 rupai lekar Rajveer dinraat ghumne laga..k kahi woh nakchadhi ladki mil jaye..uska sar fodh k usko yeh paise de dega..k dava kharid lena...

par hairani ki baat yeh hai k ladki milli hi nahi..kaibar us raaste se guzra Raj..par Naina dikhi hi nahi...


Raj ek din gaya halwai ki dukan me mithai kharidne.....


Naina bhi ai thi...Naina laddoo kharidne aai thi..Raj bhi..par Raj ne Rabri kharida..

aur Rabri ki haandi bahana maar k Naina k kapdo par de mara...


Naina chillane lagi..."you idiot..dikhta nahi tumko..itni badi haandi mere upar udhel di.."

Raj--kyaa karoon usse zada tez main fek nahi sakta ..aapko chot lag jati..anyways yeh lijiye rupai....laundry ka bill bhar lijiye ga...


Naina--500 rupai nahi hota bill..


Raj --jitna ho utna laundrywale ko dijiyega..baki ka aap k lia..tip..


Rajveer chala gaya....


Naina ,"main tumko dekh lungi..you fool."


Raj ne pichhe mudh k jawab dia..."main photo bhej dunga apna..yaa fir mere ghar aa jana ..jee bhar k dekhne k lia..meri shakal hi kuchh aisi hai..bar bar dekhne ko man karta hai."




Raj hans raha tha....



Naina laddoo ka packet aur kapdo me rabri leke ghar wapas aai..


beejee--are Naina..rabri khane ka man tha to khud khati..kapdo ko kyon khilaya?

Naina--beejee ..mera sar khana bandh karo..ek lafange ne mujh par rabri de mara ...wahi lafanga jiski car thok di thi maine..sale ne aisa badla lia..ainda mere samne ayega to uski ankhe noch lungi...



beeje--beta gussa nahi karte..tune bhi to 500 rupai tip dia tha usko..


Naina--jee ..aaj usne mujhe woh paise lauta die..bola laundry a bill bhar k jitna bach jaye main rakh loon...tip..



beejee hansne lagi....Naina ne inkar kar dia aise rishte k lia...jodi barabar ki thi...

Naina--aapko bahut maza aa raha hai na...hassien..



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lekin office me laut kar..Raj ko kuchh bura lagne laga.....

usne bhi to ghalat kaam kia tha..5000 ka bill usne 8000 banaya..Naina sach hi bol rahi thi...Naina ne uski car ko takkar maari..par sharafat se usne apna card dia.

500 ka tip dia....par ghar par akar..jo bhi kia ghar k andar..

par Raj ne jo kia..ek halwai ki dukan me kia..bahut logo k samne Naina ka tamasha banaya.

yeh ghalat kia usne.....

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Naina ko ek shadi me jana tha...uski ek saheli ki shadi thi.

barati me Raj bhi tha..


party me Naina ko dekh kar Raj gaya usse maafi mangne k lia..

Naina usko take k bhao nahi puchha...


Raj--us halwai ki dukan pe maine kia..uske lia sorry.

Naina--thik hai...abhi mujhe bahut kaam hai.

Raj--sirf to pose maar k ghoom rahi hain aap..kyaa kaam hai aapko?

Naina--aap bhi pose marie na..kisne mana kia aapko..yaa fir aapki shakal itni buri hai k camera k samne jate darr lagta hai apko?


Raj--meri shakal bahut achhi hai..

Naina--ghalatfaimi hai aapki.

Raj--meri maa kahti hai k main bahut handsome hoon..

Naina--apni mummy k paas jaiye na..mera time kyon barbad kar rahe hai?


Raj--kamaal hai ..main sorry bol raha hoon..aur aap meri khilli udaye ja rahi hain aap?

Naina --isi layak hain aap....


beejee bhi aai thi shadi me..

beejee ne in dono ko dekha..

beejee aai..

beejee--are itni hi pasand hai Naina..to beta shadi kyon nahi kar lete isse?

Naina--beejee..aap sach me sathia gai hai.

beejee--are sach hai..isi Raj ka hi to rishta aya tha tere lia Naina..tune bina dekhe hi reject kar dia isko..

Raj--ooo..to woh aap hi thi..tabhi main sochu kaun pagal hogi jisne mujhe reject kia..

Naina ko pagal kaha Raj ne..Naina is baar sach me chidh gai..

Naina--tu pagal..tera sara khandan pagal..tu to bandar jaisa dikhta hai..bhootni ke....


Naina maramari par utar aai..

beejee--Naina ..kyaa kar rahi hai...are logo k samne tamasha mat kar...chhod..kyaa kar rahi hai..

Naina--beejee...halwai k dukan me usne tamasha kia tha....are dunia ka akhri ladka yeh ho..to bhi shadi nahi karungi isse..

Raj--are tum kya nahi karogi...main khud tumse shadi nahi karunga..

Naina--thank you so much..abhi khamokha line mat marna mere upar..

Raj--mere itne bure din nahi aaye k main tum par line marunga..

Naina--really to ab tak kyaa kar rahe the..mere hi age pichhe ghoom to rahe the aap.

Raj--ghalti ho gai..ainda nahi aunga....

Raj chala gaya waha se

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Naina ka graduation complete ho chuka hai..

Girish Arya matlab jab Naina k dad ne puchha..," beti..ab kyaa karna chahti ho?"

Naina--daddy...padhai aur shadi...in dono k chhod k jo bhi kahenge karungi...


Girish--padhai nahi karni..age Masters k lia nahi jana hai?

Naina--main pak chuki hoon padhai kar k..waise bhi padhai kar k naukri hi karni hai..par main aapki ek lauti beti...paiso kya kamee hai mujhe?age padh kar kyaa karungi?

Girish--to fir shadi kar lo.

Naina--dad..main sirf 21 ki hoon..abhi to mere doodh k daant nahi geere... balika badhu nahi banna mujhe.

Girish--shadi karne ka sab se achha waqt waqt to yeh umar hi hai...

Naina--dad..college me professor log paka te the mujhe..abhi koi lalloo mujhe pakayega..taras khaiye mujh par.

Girish--are..kisi lalloo se thodhe hi shadi hogi teri?

Naina--kyaa pata?

Girish--to kisi NGO ko join kar le na..logo se mil..yaa fir bachcho k nursery me padha...choose kar..yaa to M.A. ki padhai kar..yaa to shadi..yaa fir koi kaam kar..you have to choose.


Naina--matlab..ghar baith k aish karne ka koi option nahi rakha aapne?

Girish--khaali dimag shaitan ka adda hota hai..aur pata hai tum din bhar shaitani karti rehti ho..so..tumko aisa karne to dia nahi ja sakta.. isilia.. choose.

Naina--ok..main M.A. ki padhai karungi..par mujhe drama group bhi join karna hai...natak karna hai..kar sakti hoon?

Girish--ok..par padhai thik se karni hogi..

Naina--thik hai..kal hi M.A. ka form laungi...

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hahahaha..damn good...dubara padh rahi hun phir bhi maan nahin bhar raha hai...outstanding di...thanks again for updating this ff here

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