Chandan ka palna

Chandan ka palna

Gel & Tiku.😳

"Well it's the third time you have blown Dad off when he has tried to start the topic beta Himani Gupta sighed wearily.

"We have been through this so many many times Mata Avantika growled

She tied her long luscious hair in a messy knot on top of her head

"Come home this weekend, we can talk and Dad and you can agree on something

"Hum jaante hain Bauji aur aapka plan kya hai. Kaise karke bhi aap mujhse Chandan ki baat karenge, aur kaise karke bhi usko uske Nana ke ghar chhodkar aane ki zid

"Can I have some gel? Chandan stood in her bathroom doorway with an outstretched hand

"SERIOUSLY?

"You are FIVE. Tumhe 1^st standard mein jaana hai ya hero banne

"I am in 1^st he showed a finger "And then 2^nd... 4 7 and 9^th he showed completely different numbers

"That's right... sahi jaa rahe ho aap

"Nani se baat karogey? she put the phone in his ear

His mother cooed to the child...

"See made a BIGGG mess... he tattled on her to her mother

"Agle baar cake khaana ho to Kanpur jaakar Nani se banwana, ande na khayengi na banana dengi tumhe she smacked the boy fondly

"Tiku beta

"Maaa I AM NOT fat I don't have curly hair I don't screech like your hottie Tiku Talsania

Himani laughed

"He is not my hottie she said primly

"Hamein phir TIKU kyon kaha aapne?

"Aachha baba sorry... Can you come this weekend?

"Not to meet another a boy

"Chalo theek hai hum bauji ko keh denge

"Bhayya ko bhi... DONO KO AUR BHABHIYON KO BHI she said sternly.

She had two older brothers

Dhruv and Vibhu Gupta, who spent their days chasing after bigger and better business deals for the Sharada Group

They had three modest factories, textiles, cotton yarn manufacture in Roorkee, a Surgical devices manufacturing plant in Panki and a fledgling viscose rayon plant that wasn't doing much

Avantika lived and worked in Delhi.

"Aur koi shart? Ghar par arbi nahi banegi, Bhabhi lehsoon nahi banayengi, aur kya reh gaya?

"Hum tayar nahi hongey. Aur aap Srishti ke parents ki baat nahi karenge

Her mother sighed

"Ma... 7:17 ho gaya, hum late, aur yeh gelled gentleman bhi late she giggled

Chandan had gel dripping from his hair

She took a towel soaked it and wiped his hair off making a face

He stood solemnly, he looked exactly like her friend Srishti

"Bauji ko bohot pareshaan kar rahi ho tum "Kitne chakkar kaatenge who vakeel ke

"Ma... aap kitna jhoot bol leti hain? HE HAS A POSSE OF LAWYERS

"Haan theek hai who ghar ke kaam ke liye hai beta... we have a business, they have to deal with the government, pay taxes... par har dam... Chandan ki hearing, Chandan ki status report, waha se notice!! she cringed

"Koi aur notice aaya unke vaqeel se? she froze as she was locking up, she lifted the child as she quickly walked down the stairs of her building in Sarvapriya Vihar.

Her father had bought a second floor apartment of a private house awithout telling her, and ordered her to move into it if she wanted to have a "career in Delhi

"Hmm... aap aa jao beta... Yoon nahi chal paayega, I cannot see you taking care of the child for the next 20 years choosing him over your happiness

"How can you say that Ma, she was my best friend Avantika panted as she unlocked her Honda Civic

"Water bottle mein paani nahi laaye? she demanded

"I put bug inside yastoday he told her slowly handing her the thermos like bottle

She screamed letting both the phone and the bottle drop on the gear

"CHANDANNN she warned

"Tikuuu her mother cooed

"Ma hum sham ko baat karte hain she hung up aggravated

She bend down to retrieved the half open bottle afraid something was going to crawl out, the boy sat with BOTH his legs up on the seat too afraid

"Maza aaraha hai aapko? she demanded

"Two bugs daala he said showing three fingers

A man was tapping on her window, she jumped on her seat startled

He stood too close, she lowered her window, he pulled a letter out of her messenger bag and asked for signature

Handed it to her and left

She tore it open there was another white envelope inside the yellow one

There was no sender address

Only her family knew where she lived in Delhi

They wanted to keep it that way because she had begged her father for the secrecy

It was a lawyer's notice... her hands trembled as she read the legalese

It was about Chandan Vaidya... the first and last name were repeated many times across the document as if to heighten her anger

She re read it, and realized it had a name... Harit Vaidya.. in two places... her deceased best friend Srishti's husband Hemant's brother... Harit

The color completely wiped off her face, she could feel herself sagging, trying not to faint.

Interesting start

Hey

Congratulations for the new story...

Harit and avanthika with a chandan...
Waiting for more...😊

Hey. Best wishes for this one. Yet to catch up . Will read and respond thru the day. Let's have fun with this one as well folks.

Good day and Evening all.

CHANDAN KA PALNA

1:-Gel and Tiku. (Page no 1)

2:-Bed and Baby (page no 2)

3:-Pottey ki Peshi (page no 7)

4:-Shadow and the Soul (page no 8)

5:-In Relation... (page no 8)

6:-"Once there was a tree, she loved a little boy"
~ Shel Silverstein (page no 11)

7:- Still Climbing (page no 12)

8:- Feet and Arms (page no 13)

9:-Hard as a Rock (page no 14)

10:-Loosing Pieces (page no 15)

11:-Adult Intervention (page no 16)

12:-Harit and Teeku (page no 17)

13:-Rishta Jamega (page no 18)

14:-Bas... Chandan (page no 19)

15:-Jyeshta Chandan (page no 21)

16:-Jasmine Oil and Bagh Print (page no 22)

17:-Must be a Lawyer (page no 24)

18:- Frog...Who Shall Never be Kissed (page no 26)

19:-Bruno Mars and Sixer (page no 27)

20:-Teeku ka Teeka (page no 31)

21:-Dori and Doori (page no 32)

22:-Brit in Bareilly (page no 34)

23:-Lace up Shoes and Lilac (page no 37)

24:-Involuntary Intimacies (page no 38)

25:-Green Lantern (page no 42)

26:-Bride in Waiting (page no 44)

27:-Phata Poster Nikala Hero (page no 45)

28:-Naked...Salon and Birth Control (page no 46)

29:-Paint Of Love (page no 47)

30:-Mr Grey and Doorknob (page no 48)

31:-Haldi Shorts (page no 49)

32:-The Day and The Guy (page no 54)

33:-Saving Vaidya...(page no 60)

34:-Kewal Ek Din Ka Honeymoon ? (page no 61)

35:-Black's and Grey's (page no 61)

36:-Falling for Him...(page no 62)

37:-Magna Carta (page no 64)

38:-Spicy or Scared (page no 69)

39:-Velour Loungers and Quiet E Mailers (page no 72)

40:-Homesick and Harit (page no 75)

41:- Dork In A Wrap (page no 80)

42:- Chased By A Cop (page no 83)

43:-Nonsexual and Platonic (page no 85)

44:- Himani's Hammering (page no 86)

45:-Be With Him (page no 91)

46:-MA...SI (page no 92)

47:-Giving "Pace (page no 94)

48:- Lumens Lights and Latin Maps (page no 95)

49:- Faith and Facts (page no 99)

50:-Here but Not...(page no 101)

51:-Unshaven Gay... um Guy (page no 104)

52:-Rose by Another Name (page no 107(

53:-Many Gowns and one Saree (page no 110)

54:-Bandholz & Beer (page no 112)

55:-Personal Injury Lawyer (page no 120)

56:-Prescription Followed by Medical Exam (page no 124)

57:-Avantika (page no 126)

58:-That Barter (page no 133)

59:- Curling and Knotted Up (page no 135)

60:-Repossession (page no 141)

61:-Haradar (page no 143)

62:-One Secret Each (page no 149)

Congratulations Nisha on another new story !

Will miss Sosy and now Wave dearly. But things have to move on, I guess ... waiting for you to unveil the plot.

Okay we have a Diwali bonus in the form of CKP. 😊 The female protoganist is already standing distinct, tall , brave after reading the first update

For me, whenever Nisha starts a new one, I seem to draw my own conclusion to other stories and give it a mangalam wrap. Sosy is complete in my head fully concluded by the author herself for me. ID like Vani said ...open ending is there if one cares to give it a closure . As for waves, a lot has been explored with the character sketch of Ashvin and that is satisfying on its own . I have not gone back to any story so far to reread. May be I will go bk to reread only if and when Nisha calls it a wrap and stops having fun in IF more . The most important thing is we gather, Yap and have clean fun giving company to the fun the author is having.

Waiting for more.

Do a Kolkata one for us sometime in the future Nisha. It's one place that fascinates me a lot and it also feels like that because I've never been to kolkata. But I feel their place, language, people, their intellect, simplicity and street food... there's a lot of culture there. Meanwhile I'm going to have fun with CKP.