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Posted: 7 years ago
Yeh hui na Baat!!! Oh sooper!! Very neat 👏

Wait will read up one more time
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Posted: 7 years ago
I was so waiting for Behenji and Bhaisaab's convo to happen. It did and Sita Ram Gupta makes the first move. Wow.

Point to be noted;

Hamare Hard as Rock is also temperamental. Aur Bhi badiya. We need this .

Gupta family tree is large. Jazzy you need to add to bigger character sketch template for ready reference. 😆

There are brothers, sister in laws, cosisters , mother in law , father in law and plenty of children. Chalo Hum Saath Saath hain 😊

Bani's tongue wags and the protective mother takes a neat class of the tongue that wagged. No round about business. Straight addressal of matter to the person concerned. Like it this way instead of pillow talk strategy of filling the mens ears.

There are enough vessels in both families and if there are enough vessels, they are bound to clatter ...

Yes... make some noise... make some noise. 👍🏼
Edited by Errantnomad - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
While this is all good for reading spare a thought to that kid crying his heart out for his Teeku Masi. There's nothing really left in him as well without her.

Himani might still be able to convince Teeku on Sita ram vaidya's proposal... but Harit Gupta ...who is going to bell this big cat' who roars in Gupta household. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
So it started already..
Just loving it
But I am not getting one thing if the elder seniors are in so much of love with their son then what happened between them
As teeku was saying that they did not treat them well
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalgupta2004

So it started already..
Just loving it
But I am not getting one thing if the elder seniors are in so much of love with their son then what happened between them
As teeku was saying that they did not treat them well



Sonal it's often said na ki, people are neither good or bad, it's the circumstances that makes them be that. Human nature's morals are easy prey to fragility and volatility. We don't know what exactly transpired between the deceased couple and the parents... let's see how it pans out. Nothing teaches you better than a loss or failure is true .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting ...judge saab seems to be always willing to come forth with ideas. Super !

What's the angry young man and the lawyer hating young lady gonna think about this proposal ???
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Nisha
I am new to this forum but I read all your stories..very beautifully written
All the characters are as if they are somewhere in real world (my most favourite being r&b and II)
I love the way you narrate them can't wait to read harit and teekus reaction on the marriage proposal.
Your stories are my energy boosters these days as I need more energy these days with my 18month baby
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

I was so waiting for Behenji and Bhaisaab's convo to happen. It did and Sita Ram Gupta makes the first move. Wow.

Point to be noted;

Hamare Hard as Rock is also temperamental. Aur Bhi badiya. We need this .

Gupta family tree is large. Jazzy you need to add to bigger character sketch template for ready reference. 😆

There are brothers, sister in laws, cosisters , mother in law , father in law and plenty of children. Chalo Hum Saath Saath hain 😊

Bani's tongue wags and the protective mother takes a neat class of the tongue that wagged. No round about business. Straight addressal of matter to the person concerned. Like it this way instead of pillow talk strategy of filling the mens ears.

There are enough vessels in both families and if there are enough vessels, they are bound to clatter ...

Yes... make some noise... make some noise. 👍🏼


Yup list updated :) :)
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Rishta Jamega

Himani had to sit down for a minute. She wasn't expecting a alliance proposal when she had called to plead with Mr Vaidya about the child. This was a stunning development of which her husband was totally not aware of

She wasn't sure how to break the news to him

"Humne Teeku ki shaadi ka socha nahi she said with nervous caution

Vaidya sighed defeatedly

"Who Dilli rehtin hain, Dilli mein job kartin hain, arey unhoney kayi rishte mana kar diye Himani blurted

"To baat chal rahi hai? Vaidya argued

Himani bit her lower lip and shook her head at her faux pas

"Umm.. unko Chandan se milna hai aur hamey Chandan se lagaatar milwaane ki see koshish Himani calmed down a bit, though breathing a bit heavy

"Itni jaldi aap mana na karen, ya to baat tay honey waali ho kahin aur to hamey maaf karen, nahi to zaroor sochen is baat ko Sita Ram persuaded

"Umm.. baat to tay nahi hai, hamari chhoti bahu Meeta apne mayke se rishta laayin hain Teeku Roorkee jaane ko raazi nahi

"achhaa haan haan Roorkee ke hain na aap log SitaRam's face broke into a smile

"Jee jee Himani smiled a bit

"Hamare chacha rehte the, IIT housing mein Sita Ram perked up

"Arey who to ghar ke bohot nazdeek hai, hum log Shakti Vihar rehte hain

"Haan hum jaante hain Civil Lines, Adarsh Nagar se zyaada door thode hai

"Jee bilqul

"Karkhana hai Guptaje ka?

"Jee.. bhaisaab do hain...chhote chhote Himani tried to be humble

"Jo bhi, work is worship behenji

"Jee

"bache kitne hain aapke, Teeku ne kaha, Hemant sabse chhote hain... the? she lowered her voice

"Nahee nahee... Harit hain chhote, do aur hain, Rishabh aur Harshal Vaidya smiled contentedly

"Harshal ki wife doctor hain Carla Swain Mission mein.Aur Rish

Before he could tell about Rishabh Himani interrupted him

"Carla Swain mein, wahan hamari foofa ki jeeji CMO reh chuki hain

More details were exchanged

"Chhotu kya kar rahe hain? Himani asked after 20 or so minutes

"Ice cream ka boley hongey shaayad, ice cream aayi to, par chhua nahi unhoney. Unke boli sun ne ko taras gaye hum, hasee ko bhi Vaidya teared up "hamey laga Hemant ki awaz sunayi padegi hamey

Himani was choking up too.

"Sochen hamari baat ko Vaidya insisted as they hung up

"Jee namashkar Himani nodded tentatively

She spoke with Shyam that night

"Aapne phone kyon kiya unko? Shyan was not happy

"Somebody has to reach out and ask right?

"We agreed there was no use of that

"Did he open up and read through all his law books?

"sunen to Shyam aap naraaz kyon ho rahe hain?

"Kahiye Shyam grunted

"Teeku ke rishte ki baat kee unhoney

"TEEKU ke rishte ki? Baat Chanbdan ki hai, Teeku isme kahan se aayin?

"Hamey bhi yahi laga, par unhoney kaha, unke bete aur Teeku ka rishta... Apeel ki unhoney, hum chilla kaise sakte the?

"TEEKU KA RISHTA? "Who bhi Bareilly? Shyan was shocked

"Hmm... humne kaha who Dilli reh chuke hain aur ladka city ka ho to behtar hai

"Kaha Himani, Bareilly chhota gaon hain... unka mann Roorkee nahi lagta hafte baad Shyam shook his head disapprovingly

"Gaon nahi hai Bareilly, aap jaante hain, hamare phoopha ki jiji ko...Shubhangi Bansal jeejee

"Haan who baat theek hai, who doctor hain

"Unhoney kaha unki bahu Shubhangi jeeji ko jaanti hain Himani was thrilled

"Hamari Teeku? Bareilly mein? Shyam cringed "Nahi... nahi he rubbed his eyes

"To theek hai, abhi baat tay thodi hui hai, mana kar deejiye ek do din ke samay mein Himani said distractedly

"Hmm.. aapko kya lagta hai? he asked his wife kindly

"Dhruv, Vibhu se ek baar baat kar leejiye she urged

"HUM mana kar rahe hain, dono to humse bhi young hain, kidhar maanenge? he laughed

"Dekhen to

"Chalo..uhh.. umm he nodded

The sons were baffled such a thing was even being considered

They talked for days about it

Vaidya called again on day 4, day 24 after the school "kidnap

"Guptajee aapki missus ne baat ki aapse?

"Who to roz karti hain Gupta chuckled

Vaidya laughed throatily

"Nahi Guptajee... aapki beti ke rishte ki baat?

"Jee kaha... hamare bete soch mein pad gaye

"Hmm... Beti theek hai? Vaidya was a shrewd man

Gupta's face fell again

"Nahi... nahi... ma wahin hain abhi

"Hamye to yeh baat sahi lagi Vaidya insisted

"Kya karte hain, bete? Gupta sat up thoughtfully

"Kings College se Transnational Legal Studies mein ML kiye hain. Contract, Torts wagairah mein specialization hai unka Vaidya said

"Apki tarah vaqeel hain? Gupta's heart sank

"Humse behtar Vaidya said proudly

Gupta didn't know how to end the call. The can of worms had been opened now. Teeku will NEVER agree, he knew that.

"Bitiya aapki?

"Roorkee mein Commerce kareen hain, aur Symbiosis Pune se MBA Gupta said

"Aapke business ko sambhalengi ek din, badhiya Vaidya was generous

"Abhi kisi Asian Bank mein Commercial Lending ka kaam karti hain, unko business ka koi shauq nahi Gupta said deflated

"Pacific Trust mein Gupta followed up

"Very good... She is a smart young girl. Very sensitive and polite Vaidya said

Gupta sat up again

"Aap mil chuken hain?

"Haan... who us din... Chandan... his voice trailed off

"bahut passionate hai. Apnon ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai Gupta spoke with conviction

"Phir to rishta jamega Vaidya came back to his one trick pony

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wooow .. it's happening so fast ! Sr. Vaidya is so good at this ! A little more and Shyamsunderji will be all set. C'mon Mr Gupta - let's not drag it !

Thank u thank u Nisha !!!
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago

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