Chandan ka palna - Page 75

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

Also when alka got talking about her work and duty ... it was so relatable. After the holiday mood, Shaadi mood, one gets bk to facing the grind of daily life, and the work life balance . This is the stream of flow weaved that lends such natural credibility to proceeding in Nisha's stories...

Absolutely loving this 👏

Also love the fact that Suman is inclusive. She not only understands Alka job situation but also mentions that they will do the Moh dikaayi when she is available. Love it !!!

They are together

Jas

Giving pace' - nice title! Bidai scene was emotional. You always take us readers back to our own life situations through your story settings. So relatable when Gupta tried to suppress his tears.
But thought Harit would atleast make an attempt to hold Avantika s hand or say something but nope. Let's wait.

Lumens light & Latin maps - your attention to detail is truly amazing. You brought forth the Judge sahab's Haveli, the reception given to the bride and groom, Harit's room(s) vividly through your writing. Kudos! 👏

Thanks as always!

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Hey Kalps

His room is not monochrome because he wants to shut his eyes and sleep. Its a very tastefully curated collection of things that express his personality.

Its sexy and minimalist much like him

He loves his room.

To her it seems dull, sure..

Also the whole family knows why she married him. Instead of Kekta Kapoor like gimmicks and putting him on the couch, or having them be on the bed and ravish each other some night in uncontrollable arousal

I thought we will give her time to understand and appreciate her surroundings first

They will fall in love

NOT by sleeping in the same bed

Oh nice Nisha to see Harit this way. See when I read it I thought yes mimamalist and I did think of her Lilac room but this classy collection is a sexy reflection of his personality is what I am getting to understand from you. Niiiceee!

I see where this is going as far as the sleeping arrangement is concerned . I actually thought of the ID couple here sharing the same room and thought may be!! Ok it's glances from under the lashes I guess. this maha paduthaling is where the torture sweet is.

Coming to think of it, mouna ragam movie had the couple beautifully set up rooms across with floor beds where they could glance or exchange a word or two when the absolutely had to. I loved that as well.

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Jas

Lilac doesnt have to "fit in"

Pehle lilac ko NOTICE to karey banda

Now you don't bash him 😆 . Hey he did notice lilac during their engagement and he couldn't take his eyes off. We are holding on to these glimpses wonly 😳 😊

How is the 3 room setup Nisha? One flow into another or u walk into one and the other two opens from the first one? Curious mind wants to know if these two can stay in their rooms without seeing each other ?

Originally posted by: SWAN123

Tearing Teeku darling.. and unmoved Harit? It might take a Long time for him to fall for her but he surely can offer some comfort to a tearing girl. If she is missing her family she is.. why would living alone in Delhi matter. Harit doesn't know women now does he?
Imagine the dad leaving his Daughter wondering if the guy will actually understand her feelings and reach out to his newly wedded Wife. Naturally his heart sinks.

An all male abode.. Harit is so pliant with his parents. I wonder he was always like this or if he has changed in response to his parents pain - brought by the brother leaving home and then his untimely death.
Poignant - does he know how much Teeku's life has changed because she was there to pick up threads in Chandu's life. Waiting for the web to unfold!

Lovely writing Nisha. 👏

Oh how I Wish he had but I'm wondering if he did that vibe from her going a little stiff in that 20 mins car ride???

Originally posted by: jaschick

How is the 3 room setup Nisha? One flow into another or u walk into one and the other two opens from the first one? Curious mind wants to know if these two can stay in their rooms without seeing each other ?

😆 😆

Originally posted by: jaschick

Also love the fact that Suman is inclusive. She not only understands Alka job situation but also mentions that they will do the Moh dikaayi when she is available. Love it !!!

Lovely set of ladies. There are these ladies children in play . Teeku has chandan and these children also to balance.