Chandan ka palna - Page 8

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thanks Kalps

I think this story has the makings of a cheesy love story

We lack cheese in life so I am happy😛😉

I LOVE CHEESE 😆

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

Point point!!!! 😳

I was also thinking the same ...
This guy is all her favourites only she don't want to marry a wakil 😉

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thanks Kalps

I think this story has the makings of a cheesy love story

We lack cheese in life so I am happy😛😉

Cheese always makes me smile and my pics looks great 😊

"U decide what u want Bani. Child? Meeta not to be pampered? Teeku to marry, or Teeku to return to Bareilly Dhruv walked off pissed

These lines were so good ! It so rings true !! So apt for the situation!!Looks very derisive when I say this but some of us women do want everything in life from men , I feel , at times so much ki we attach riders even to moments of joy and there stems the relative unsatisfaction of needs in life 😆

Looks like she wants a second one but not at this moment ... why because she would be compared competing with her co sis!!! 😆

In relation update was all about the pull and push of joint family but look there is so much variety to life this way without the monotonous nature of a nuclear set up. This Roorkee House has so much jaan in it.

Thanks Kalps

Nice !!!! I have to draw a family tree now.

Custody battle, family politics, Vakil vs financial advisor - interesting to see the plot u unfold, Nisha!

Waiting for the sappy cheesy romance, SaaS-bahu conflicts, young innocent love!

"Once there was a tree, she loved a little boy"

~ Shel Silverstein

She called her mother and father one after the other, father could not talk according to her Bani Bhabhi

She wasn't affected much by her crying, well could be because she had called her father many times crying about something or the other since Srishti had passed away

Bani's theory was "Avantika is playing her Dad to allow her to adopt and or raise Chandan

"Kya hua beta Himani was in shock, the mother knew this crying was different

"MA CHANDAN KO LE GAYE she sobbed

"Kaun beta?

"I dropped him off at school and they came and picked him up

"Teeku YOU KNOW they are a family of lawyers. The Dad is a sessions court judge in Bareilly

"TO?

"YOU have to follow due process beta

"I have done every freaking thing!!

"Hafte pehle kya notice aaya?

"Wohi, the same verbiage the same nothing

"It wasn't the same nothing because bacha chala gaya

"Maa... Dad se baat karwayen aap she shrieked

"Bhabhi kya boleen?

"As usual her tone indicated I am a drama queen

"Ruko rakho phone, aur unke lawyer se baat karein aap

"Ma koi phone nahi utha raha, the principal is insisting it was the child's family. I don't knowww she sobbed uncontrollably.

"Shh shhh ruko, let me call beta

She sat in the last row of seats in the waiting room near the principal's office, teachers and staff gawked as they walked by

Her face was puffy her gaze disoriented as she replayed every action from that morning in her brain

She scrolled through her phone to find his pictures from last night, the antics in bed, the somersault, the hanging upside down

Those pink cheeks...

She checked her contact list over and over again

She found a number she had previously missed

It was a Harshal V, she called that number

"Umm... hello she spoke in gruff voice

"Hello he said on the other end, a bit confused

She cleared her throat blew out her nose and spoke again

"Are you related to Chandan? she asked

There was a longish pause

"Umm.. haan hum Hemant ke bade bhai hain he said almost reluctantly

"SO YOU KNOW where Chandu is? she begged

"Umm he swallowed

"Please please pleez don't hang up I want to see my kid she begged

"Hum aapko baad mein call karen?

"PLEASE no, please batayen, Chandu hain wahan?

"Nahi... no I am sorry yahan to nahi hain who Harshal was stunned

"I am sorry but mujhe to kaha hai, Manavstahli ke principal ne aapke yahan se koi le gaya hai she began to cry again, afraid whatever happened to him

"Huh? "Lekin hum to yahi Bareilly mein hain, Babuji bhi yahin hain he said

"He is a judge na? she asked

"Jee?

"Please meri baat karwayenge, shaayad unhoney kisi ko bhejkar yaha se bacha gaayab karwaya hai

"What are u saying? he argued

He suddenly sounded like someone he had heard before, she didn't know where she had heard that beautiful rich fluency

"I know its someone from your Dad's firm

"Dad is not in a firm, he is a Sessions Judge at Bareilly Distt court

"Well someone in your family

I am sorry I have to go to the chamber now I have a hearing coming up his tone was compassionate

"is everyone a lawyer in that house? she shrieked

"Umm.. yeah?!! he said kindly

"Oh GODDD she hung up

Her mother called again

It was her Dad

"Kidhar ho aap, Dhruv ko bhejte hain hum

"Dad please Chandu ko kaise karke bhi laayen

"Kahan se laayen, humne aapse do saal mein kam se kam do sau baar kaha hai woh bacha vaqeel ke ghar ka hai

"Daddd I listened to everything you said

"I told you beta Roorkee mein jo hamare... apne... who... aapke Madhusudan Mamaji hain, unke behnoi waha Bareilly mein unkey aha paralegal hain

"Dad uska kya ab? she was sad

"Beta I told you to read everything carefully. Bacha hamara hai nahi, aur aapne usko kho diya her Dad was not happy

Himani was talking on the other side

"Pichhle hafte hum aapko kahe rahe, Bani ko kahe hum 4 baar, aapse batane ko isne koi summons ki baat ki

"To hum raat ko ghar nahi aa paate kya? Aap hamey kahin kyon nahi raat ko, summon aaya raha aur aapki laadli ne ignore kar diya?

Shyam Sundar Gupta stressed over his daughter's fragile state

"everything read and sounded the same

"Are u serious teeku? U are an educated girl you have been dealing with this custody battle for two years, and NOW you chose to ignore a court order?

"I am sorry Dad I REALLY AM. PLEEEZ Chandan ko le aayen

"KAHAN SE LE AAYEN BETA? he yelled

"daddd I Will DIE if I don't see him "Srishti never ever wanted anything from anyone. This was the very last thing she said to me. "Chandu tumhara hai theek hai na? she wailed running out of the school

"Beta, araam se gaadi chalayen aap her father ordered

She sat in her car and shut her eyes, scrolled through her phone again

Pictures from last night, Chandu slept with his fat fist laying on the Falling Up by Shel Silverstein book

Himani's gift to him in Roorkee last week

"I am the only parent he has and knows. How dare they take him away from me she said passionately, her eyes sparkled with a conviction she checked maps for the Delhi Bareilly route and turned the key and pressed on the gas as her tears dried up

She's so broken 😭
Feels like her own son has been taken or kidnapped
She truly is a gem of a person
Yes it takes a lot to love and care a child like your own and that too of a friend
Coz you always have boundaries and restrictions if relation is not involved
Great Nisha
Waiting... 👏

It is the tree's Self chosen journey of placing he boy in her life above everyone including her one self. When what you hold dear is taken away from you , partly because of your oversight, nowhere to seek solace, left with no place to hide your own feelings of anger, regret , hurt and the biggest of them all parental love, then what's left to do is pull up your straps and confront the mighty head on.

The tree isn't done just as yet, the battle for survival begins. Desperate time calls for desperate measures. Bareilly here I come says Tiku.

Once there was a tree, she loved the little boy , the tree as we know of her so far would go to any extent, to protect the boy and make him hers again.

Absolutely brilliant title for this update. This is again easily your top best Nisha. Loved reading this. This is what we would have missed if you hadn't come back to write for us. Thank you.
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